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PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2015 9:34 pm


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Name: Ezra Cadwell

Nickname: Ez is fine.

Age: 19

Birthday: June 6th

Sign: Gemini

Gemstone: Agate

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Sweets, particularly pastries. He has a huge sweet tooth and it's almost kind of a problem.

Hated Food: Dry, flavorless stuff. Dry cereal is up there too.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:

Song and Dance - Ezra used to be a theater kid in his younger days, and some pieces of it never left him. He's always listening to music and he sings to himself (decently, though not outstandingly) a lot. Sometimes he'll just break out into song or dance when he's with his friends (or even when he's not). He loves music of nearly all genres, but he's been really into pop rock lately. He also knows how to play the piano.

Video Games - Ezra is a gamer, mostly of the Nintendo variety, but there are a few others in there as well. He favors RPGs with good stories and characters, though there are a few exceptions in his library. He takes his 3DS around with him in the hopes that he'll get a Streetpass and doesn't understand why not many people do the same. It's not uncommon for him to try and sneak in some level grinding if he's got a few minutes.

Socializing - Ezra likes to get out there and talk to people. He's the kind of person who will approach a stranger on the street and strike up a conversation with them. It seems like he always has at least one person with him at all times, and even if he's alone in his room, he's probably chatting to someone on the internet. He's also a bit of a party guy, attending parties often and sometimes hooking up with someone.

Virtues:

Affectionate - Ezra slathers his friends in affectionate gestures, whether they be kind words or pats on the back. He's rather touchy-feely in general and pretty much the king huggle-snuggler. Do not be surprised if he suddenly gives you a huge hug out of nowhere. He's very intensely cuddly. He also likes to spoil his friends from time to time, whether it's going out to eat with everyone or helping them get something they want.

Attentive - Ezra pays very good attention to his friends. He'll be the first to notice if they're acting weird, and he'll want to get to the bottom of the issue if he can. He makes himself available as a sounding board for all his friends' problems, and depending on what they want, he'll either offer counsel or just listen.

Humorous - Ezra is a jokester. He uses humor to smooth over situations that could take a turn for the troublesome (before they do), and it seems that he always has some quip at the ready. Of course, he knows better than to try and joke his way out of a very serious situation, but if someone's feeling down and he thinks he can pull it off, he'll use his good humor to cheer them up. He tries to be an entertainer, and most would say that he does quite well at that. If you find something he's said funny and it's lifted your spirits a bit, he considers his job done.

Flaws:

Hedonist - Ezra is first and foremost a pleasure seeker. Whether it's good food, good company, comfortable surroundings, or the occasional passionate hookup, he will seek it out and thoroughly indulge himself. The side effect of his habit is that when he gets bored with something, he's going to ditch it right away and do something he likes, no matter what the consequences. He doesn't do that to people as much as tasks (he has a reputation for being very pleasant the morning after), but the problem still stands. Pleasure is also how he licks his wounds; if he's feeling troubled, he'll indulge himself that much more to soothe himself. He's one of those people who will curl up in bed with a tub of ice cream, something alcoholic (if he can acquire it), and a sappy movie when he's feeling down, then be utterly confused when he wakes up five hours later with the remaining ice cream completely melted and his booze of choice (if acquired) spilled all over the floor. Yeah, he eats his emotions. Messily.

Clingy - You ARE still his friend, right? Right? RIGHT? Ezra has a problem with not letting go, even when someone is clearly no longer in his reach. He is steadfastly determined to keep any friend he makes, and if he sees someone starting to drift away for some reason, he will pursue them. Even if someone were to betray him or otherwise decisively cut themselves off from him, he would desperately try to make them "see the light" and come back. Sometimes, he even smothers the friends he already has when he goes overboard with his usual affections.

Pouty - When he's rejected, Ezra assumes full pouting mode, ruminating over the fact that someone said no to him and how he didn't get to hug them or whatever the issue at hand is. He does take no for an answer, but sometimes he just doesn't take it particularly well. He'll fume and sulk and generally be really annoying about what happened. He'll get really snippy for a while till he gets over himself.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: A light "honey" brown, kind of like #806200. In terms of shape, they're rather wide and expressive.

Hair: Black, shaggy and messy. Take a look at Hibiki's hair for what I'm thinking of; maybe just a bit longer than his.

Face: His face is on the round side; he's got kind of a babyface going on.

Clothes: Ezra prefers comfy clothes a LOT. So... Plain t-shirt (some color that goes well with blue and grey) and jeans (blue), with an unzipped sweatshirt jacket/hoodie (grey).
PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2015 9:39 pm


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Senshi: Sailor Cor Caroli, Senshi of Will

Challenge: Let's survive!

Fuku Colour: White
Main Color: Light blue
Secondary Color: Dark blue (also some more white)

Fuku:

Collar -- Plain sailor collar with a white stripe.
Bow -- Maybe a standard bow on the front? Make it a little less girly somehow? As for the back sash, could it be two back sashes that would trail behind him as he runs?
Bodice -- Plain, T-shirt-like bodice.
Sleeves -- Short sleeves.
Brooch -- Can the brooch be shaped like a starburst? There's the issue of it being too close to Cosmos's star, but we'll see what gets thought of (4-pointed star, maybe?).
Bottoms -- Standard pants.
Tiara -- A standard tiara, silver with a blue gem in the center.
Choker -- If it doesn't make things too crowded, maybe a scarf?
Shoes -- Simple shoes. Kind of like loafers/slip-on sneakers?
Gloves -- Not for now.
Accessories -- Can't think of any.

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Strength of Will!

Cor Caroli extends one hand towards the target and says the attack name. If he puts his hand to his chest, he can target himself. The target will feel a boost to their will to fight, allowing them to shrug off the pain of minor injuries and keep fighting. The buff lasts for 30 seconds and can be used three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Force of Will!

Cor Caroli extends both hands outward and says the attack name. He and up to two allies in a 5-foot radius will receive a large boost to their will to fight, allowing them to fight through even very painful injuries. Cor Caroli can choose which allies receive the buff; where he gestures is a good indication, but the actual choice is determined with a thought. The buff lasts 35 seconds and can be used twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Show Your Free Will!

Cor Caroli crosses his hands over his chest, then extends both hands outward and says the attack name. He and up to three allies within a 6 foot radius receive the ability to halve the impact (damage) and pain of one attack, physical or magical, at will. The targets can activate the "cushion" by thinking about it. They will get a feeling that it's something they can do after the magic takes effect, along with a small boost to motivation to act. When activated, the barrier manifests as a brief flash of light where the person was hit. As before, Cor Caroli can choose which allies receive the buff; where he gestures is a good indication, but the actual choice is determined with a thought. If not used, the buff will expire after 45 seconds. This attack can only be used once per battle.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 10:01 am


Sami-Fire


Hi Sami! You know what time it is!

So far, his civ side looks good, lthough for his Humourous trait, making jokes to get out of trouble does border on a flaw - a lot of people actually can be a bit put off by that, so you might want to consider alternate uses of how he uses humour , like cheering someone sad up or similar. The rest of the virtue is good - you just might want to look at that part of it!

As for Cor Coroli, let's get down to- anyhow, joke cut off aside, his Basic attack looks alright. Sine it's a buff, the only minute alteration I'd made is a 30 second buff, as opposed to 25 to fill in the leadup to Super.

The radius for super seems just a bit large for a Boost of Willpower. A general rule of thumb might be 5 or 6 feet radius circles, with Cor Coroli in the center, and a 30 second buff. For the effect, I see where your going for what it does - and I like it!

Getting into the meat and potatoes of his eernal, I'd range it from 6 to 8 feet with 8 feet as a 'maybe' cap, with a time limit of 45 seconds.

My only concern is the fact it deflects an attack - this can be indicative of a temporary invincibility even fighting something bigger than the allies. I do see where you were drawing this from though - a will to survive - but maybe halving damage like a one-attack defense that makes the ally in range raise their will to survive make shaking the enemy's next attack off easier; or perhaps act like a 'thicker skin' that prevents them from being as severely harmed.

As for allies in the circle - is the a maximum number of allies he can protedt in the Super and Eternal attacks? Usually if he's affecting himself Super rule of thumb seems to be 1-2, and Eternal seems to be 2-3.

Otherwise he's fine. Once you've gotten things addressed let me know so I can look again!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 10:49 am


NovaCracker


Hello Nova, and thanks for the crit~

I adjusted his Humorous virtue to throw in that he knows better than to joke his way out of dead serious situations.

As for his senshi attacks, I adjusted the timings on his attacks. One minor quibble though- I feel his Super attack should last slightly longer than his Basic attack, so I made it 35 instead of 30 (of course, if that's still not okay, I'll knock it down to 30). I changed the scope of the attacks from all within the radius to a number of people within the radius. The Eternal attack has also been changed to a sort of "cushion" that can halve damage once at will; I added a caveat about it not quite working that that way in dice-based battles too, just in case.

Let me know how all this works out!

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 10:57 am


Sami-Fire


Hi again. 8D The only alteration I'd make at this point is pulling the Dice Roll battle note - only because those are usually really rare. That's about it and we'll work on the trial stamp for you!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 12:07 pm


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Sami-Fire


Hi again. 8D The only alteration I'd make at this point is pulling the Dice Roll battle note - only because those are usually really rare. That's about it and we'll work on the trial stamp for you!


All righty, that's out! Let me know if there's anything else~

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 15, 2015 12:24 pm


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All righty, that's out! Let me know if there's anything else~


Alrighty! Looks good to me! A GM will b3 along shortly and good luck getting him!

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 23, 2015 8:36 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari


Hi Kyu! Nova relayed your message on to me, and I made some adjustments. Also, you really need to sleep more often, because there were in fact actually only 3 flaws; one flaw just had two paragraphs. Mashed those into one. Also added a bit about the Eternal attack giving a small boost to motivation to act to tie it in with will better (it's supposed to be will as choice, unlike the basic and super, which are will as strength). Let me know if this is good!

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 7:41 pm


Sami-Fire

Haha, don't pick on me! I didn't get a chance to read the civ side when I pinged Nova, I only glanced at it because I was running out the door! I just wanted to throw that at Nova so she could pass on the message if any changes were needed so you didn't tweak the eternal and then have to go back to make more tweaks before I could drop a stamp! But, he looks good to me, so enjoy playing him!

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