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Xevra


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 11:06 pm


User ImageCivillian Won: Kuropeco's Customs - March 18, 2017.
Parts of Civilian Profile Imported and Improvised from Old Quest.
Name: Kai Lei Iona.
Gender/Pronouns: Female; She/Her.
Nickname: None.
Age: 20.
Birthday: April 9, 2002.
Sign: Aries.
Gemstone: Diamond.
Blood Type: AB positive.

Favorite Food: Sushi, particularly rolls with salmon and veggies.
Hated Food: Pizza and pastas.

School/Occupation: Graduated St. Mag's. No further schooling. Works for a pizzeria.

Hobbies:
Cooking - Kai may not be the best cook, but she tries her damnedest! She definitely couldn't make a souffle, but she at least seasons her chicken noodle soup now. She's into trying new (simple) recipes, usually with whatever she's got laying around her ill-stocked kitchen, and does it relieve the stress of the day. She doesn't make the most visually appealing meals, but she's always so excited to show off her creations.

Gaming - Give this girl a controller and don't expect her to vacate the seat directly in front of the screen for a good period of time, although at least once every other week, she rage quits and those are terror-ific. As her portal from this world to wherever she chooses, Kai plays video games, particularly on her PlayStation 5. She spends many hours just delving and plundering her favorite maps, whether by high speed vehicle or galloping horse. This girl can get into most games. She's huge into Skyrim, Call of Duty, and DC Universe. She spends an incredible amount of time in the few games she plays. She usually plays alone, but she also loves to play online, with a group, and even have LAN parties, FTW! Her favorite gaming systems are definitely her PlayStation systems, second through the fifth, but she isn't too good for the classics, including SNES, Nintendo 64, and numerous Gameboys. Save the Xbox line.

Music - Music is a huge part of Kai's life. She's constantly listening to Pandora, checking out artists on Youtube, and even coming up with something of her own. She doesn't write her own music, but homemade ditties help her make it through the day if she can't have something playing. Kai loves many kinds of music, but some genres she dislikes include Bluegrass and Country. Kai loves singing her favorite songs. Belting it out helps her to relieve some pent up stress and energy. She hasn't had any voice training or chorus practice, but can carry a tune fairly well.

Smoking - Kai smokes red short 72s. Another release for stress, she tries not to smoke more than three a day but if it's been a rough one, she'll probably need a new pack the following day. She also recreationally smokes cannabis when she can afford it.

Virtues:
Brave - "I laugh in the face of danger!" is what Kai feels toward adversity.
She's not startled or deterred by obstacles in her way.

Humorous - Cutting joke here and there is how Kai keeps her sanity. She enjoys making others around her chuckle with her one liners or references.

Persistent - Kai isn't the kind of individual who lets anything get in her way. She will stop at nothing to get to what she wants.

Supportive - Kai wants to see the group she's with succeed, with her helping to lead them in the right path. She's always the first to get something necessary for a task, even if it was just said in jest. She's a very good person to have on your team.

Flaws:
Impatient - Comparable to Varuca Salt, Kai "wants it now". She gets irritable when she has to wait on anything.

Messy - Kai doesn't like to pick up after herself. She only cleans when her grandmother yells at her about her poor housekeeping.

Pompous - This girl thinks SO MUCH of herself. She's just the greatest thing in existence and can do no wrong. At least in her mind she is. She's definitely in your face with how she can do pretty much anything better than you can.

Sarcastic - Kai speaks in a way most find rude, but it's who she is. She many times responds with something non-sincere.

Physical Description:
Eyes: █████ #C51F27 - "Fire Engine Red" with black mascara and eyeliner.
Hair: █████ #207262 - "Tropical Rain Forest".
Face: Diamond shaped face with skin with red or black lips.
Skin Tone: █████ #C6704A - "Copper Red".
Body Type: 5 foot 1 inch tall.
Clothes: Punk-esque.
Tattoos: Eye on neck.

Senshi: Sailor Hi'iaka, Corrupt Senshi of Sea Hibiscus
Mineral Name: Melilite.
Challenge: "E hele aku!" (Hawaiian: 'Go away!')
Asteroid Group or Family: Haumea Family.
Symbol: Here.

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: █████ #E6A422 - "Marigold"
Secondary Color: █████ #970606 - "Dark Red".
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Fuku: Inspired by hula dancers and/or cc?
Collar - Yellow regular sailor collar with black line along end and/or lei of sea hibiscus.
Bow - None on chest, but short red butt bow.
Bodice - Black strapless bra top with red accent.
Sleeves - None. Some light netting on arms.
Brooch - Large crack in center of chest.
Bottoms - Black skirt with red accent and sea hibiscuses on it, red short butt bow.
Tiara - Large crack in center of forehead, sea hibiscus behind right ear. String across forehead to match netting.
Choker - Black choker. Has eye tattoo on side of neck.
Shoes - None. Some light netting on legs.
Gloves - None.
Accessories - Black wristlets and anklets. Yellow sulfur crystal earrings and crystal.

Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Hi'iaka Bloom!
Execution - Hi'iaka raises her right arm, calls out the name of her attack and pulls an energy sea hibiscus from behind her right ear. She blows its petals toward her enemy.
Effect - The affected enemy is in a more fragile state - feeling dizzy, blurred vision, and finding it hard to accurately combat an opponent. Petals absorbed into the skin cause a burning/itching reaction. Ingesting a petal can cause nausea.
Use Limits - This attack may be used three times per battle and affects whoever it touches.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for fifteen seconds.
Weaknesses - Hi'iaka can hit a target up to ten feet in a straight line in front of her.

Super Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Hi'iaka Lei!
Execution - Hi'iaka raises her right arm, calls out the name of her attack and pulls an energy sea hibiscus from behind her right ear. She blows more petals than before toward her enemy.
Effect - The affected enemy is in a more fragile state - feeling dizzy, blurred vision, and finding it hard to accurately combat an opponent. Petals absorbed into the skin cause a burning/itching reaction, accompanied with a headache. Ingesting a petal causes nausea.
Use Limits - This attack may be used three times per battle and affects whoever it touches.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for twenty seconds.
Weaknesses - Hi'iaka can hit a target up to twelve feet in a straight line in front of her.

Eternal Sailor Attack:
Name - Hi'iaka Hula!
Execution - Hi'iaka lifts both arms and calls the name of her attack. She dances a hula and energy sea hibiscuses form in her hands. Hi'iaka 'blows' the flowers and creates a gentle whirlwind the petals dance themselves within.
Effect - The whirlwind can reach up to a maximum of 10 feet and energy petals in the storm can be absorbed, healing minor wounds and lessening the effects of more devastating injuries to a degree.
Use Limits - This attack may be used one time per battle and affects Hi'iaka's target up to 10 feet away. This may affect a second party if within two feet of Hi'iaka's target.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for thirty seconds.
Weaknesses - Hi'iaka can only affect players within a ten foot radius.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 12:16 pm


Xevra

Congratulations on your new Civi win! I'll look over both the civi and the senshi for you too since you asked smile

On her civi side, I did want to mention that with her age, you only have a week and a half to be able to awaken her as a senshi. As soon as she turns 21, she loses the ability to be a senshi and would have to awaken as a knight! I would recommend dropping her age to 19 right now so you would at least have some time between her now and her 21st birthday to have her awaken!

For her Persistent Virtue, it does not read as if she is persistent but just punctual. Persistent would be more she keeps going towards her goal no matter what gets in her way.

On her Senshi side, I see you wanted her to take a Mineral name. Perlite (which mind you made me smile since I work with plants so use this alot!) isn't a mineral. It is glass that has been expected with the help of volcanic heat! if you want something close though, I recommend looking up Perite and Perlialite.

Okay! Onto her attacks!
One of the big things here is to define what you mean by 'fragile' or weaken state. Are they dizzy? Is their vision effected? Is it harder to throw a punch? In this, it isn't so much they take damage easier but that they are affected by her attack so others could strike.

These also do need a range. The petals could only blow x feet away from her and then they would disappear. We normally recommend 5 to 8 feet for basic and about 10 feet for super if this affects the area around her. If only a straight line, you can have the range longer!

You also say if the petals dissipate. How does that work? Because as I read it, if they hit someone, they should dissipate into that person if they don't do anything else.

Let's start there on the attacks! Poke me if you have questions!

Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi



Xevra


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PostPosted: Mon Mar 27, 2017 4:35 pm


Sirene Naiads
Thanks so much for taking a look at her! smile

I made the change to her age, making her a year younger. Thank you! I totally forgot the age restriction.

I had meant for her persistent value to mean just that, so I made changes to the description.

I was looking at a complete list for minerals when I picked Perlite and even though I read it as volcanic glass, I still picked it. xP I like Perite - thank you!

I tried to fix her attacks, making the "more fragile state" a mix of dizziness, vision effects, and difficulty combating an opponent.

I added ranges to the attacks, basic and super being in a straight line and eternal being an area of effect. I increased the range for the eternal, but I wanted to see if it would be acceptable.

Also, I had planned for the petals to work the way you stated so hopefully the attacks read better now.

Please let me know what else needs to be changed. Thank you again! :3
PostPosted: Sat Apr 01, 2017 11:27 pm


Xevra

Everything looks good on her Civi Side!

On her senshi side, it looks as if there is very little effect difference between all three of your attacks. They all make the target people feel dizzy, blurred visions and harder to hit someone. You are just changing how the attack looks, range, and time. Which is fine! If this is what you want thumbs up!

I just wanted to let you know that between basic and super, you could add in that maybe they see double or feel as if the petals have cut them where the petals hit. An upgrade to the power.

For the eternal, same thing! Maybe where the petals are absorbed, they feel a burning/itching feeling as if having an allergic reaction while getting a headache?

Just thoughts!

Let me know if you want to change anything or not! smile

Sirene Naiads

Romantic Senshi

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