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BastetAmun

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 7:41 am


Name: Hestia
Stage: Prentice (Path: Prentice  Lancer  Spearman  Rider)
Race: Pureblood Fire Earthling
Gender: Girl
3 Base Traits: Fiery, Proud, Secretive
Personality:

  • Fiery: Hestia has a bit of a wild personality and a short temper. She doesn’t take insults easily and because of this, she is very quick to anger. She doesn’t think things through because of this and tends to forget about coming up with any strategies when it comes to battle. This isn’t just battle that her temper can cause her problems with, it’s hard for her to maintain friendships unless they are very close, because she will snap at people when she is upset or angry.
  • Proud: Like many Oban’s, Hestia is very proud of her culture and her country, even after the failed war that took place. She still believes that Oban’s are the God’s favored, though she does not show this outright because she knows it can be looked down upon know. She channels this into pride for her race and into herself. She does know not to border upon egotistical, as she doesn’t believe that she, as a being, is the greatest thing upon the planet, it is her race. She is also very proud of her family and does not take kindly to them being badmouthed. This leads into her fiery temper as well.
  • Secretive: Growing up during the last half of the war, Hestia learned that you could not just say whatever was on your mind, or what you thought. She keeps her innermost thoughts to herself, not even speaking some of them to her family. She does not trust many people because of this and it makes it very hard for her to get close to anyone.
  • Animal Lover: Animals are the only beings that Hestia bounds with right away. The reason for this is probably because her mother is a beast master and the children always grew up around the different wild animals of the world. She always helped her mother to take care of the animals and she managed to bond with her mother’s Janarim, becoming very close to the animal.


Description:
Hestia’s skin is a lighter brown with a bit more hint of red in it. She has the orange stones upon the tops of her shoulders that move down the sides of her arms and circle like an armband. Her eyes are a blood red color, almond shaped although she normally always has her eyes narrowed.

Her hair is long, down to her back that she wears half up and half down. The sides are braided and they move around to be braided together, laying on top of the hair that is down. Her hair color is a dark reddish brown that appears redder when in the sunlight.

Her facial structure is thin with slightly pronounced cheekbones and thin lips. She has a lean body type and is average height for Oban females her age. She has medium sized breasts, most of her body weight is muscle.

Clothing:
Hestia’s clothing style is very light and flowy. She wears a top that covers just her upper body with a curved neckline. The shoulders have a circular piece of fabric that is cut out, revealing the stones upon her body, the sleeves flow wide where they end at her wrists. Her pants are harem style, riding low upon her waist. She will wear a shawl of types that wraps around her body to protect from the sun. She likes to walk around barefoot, though if she does wear shoes, they are simple sandals.

Accessories:
Hestia has a woven necklace made out of leather that has fang from a janarim.

History:
Hestia is the second eldest child out of five born to Kalama, a female Beast Master and Pyrrhos, a male merchant. She spent most of her young life helping her mother at home with the house and the animals while her father took her elder brother on his various trips. Being the oldest child left at home, Hestia was the one who helped to take care of her three younger siblings. She adores her family but the girl always enjoyed being able to go out on her own and just spend time among her mother’s animals.

Even though Hestia helped to take care of her other siblings, the only one she grew close to was her elder brother. She loved listening to his stories of traveling with their father and then his own stories of his journeys as a treasure hunter. She looks forwards to when she can spend time with her brother, he is the only one that Hestia will reveal some of what she keeps to herself. Her brother is very supportive of his sister and tries his best to deal with her temper.

When the war took place, Hestia was still slightly young, only hearing information about it from her mother and her father. It was after the war that Hestia was finally able to begin working towards the occupation she wishes to take to help support herself and her country. She has taken after her mother in some ways and she wishes to become a Rider and to have a Janarim of her own.


Suhuba
PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:01 am


BastetAmun


Hey there heart Thanks for starting a quest :]
Just a few things at first and possibly more after hearing your answers.

While the world of Tendaji is set in a post-apocalyptic future, the way Tendaji developed has left the world with no real ruins. So there aren't any buildings left with artifacts inside of them. And finding something that would be in wearable condition is nearly impossible, same idea for someone being able to find more than one major artifact like that, and for them to be from the same culture. Tendaji is set hundreds and hundreds (even thousands) of years into the future after present Earth so most things are very much destroyed.

So her having anything Egyptian on her body is sort of too far fetched to fit into Tendaji.

Her personality seems fine, and the rest of her description seems good, but if you could revise your quest to omit the findings of artifacts I'll be able to really see what I can critique.

Suhuba
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BastetAmun

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:26 am


Suhuba


I thought that might be the case, so no worries. I just thought I'd put in in, better get a no, then never have done it and find out you could have.

I removed them and if the history needs more work, I can do that do. ^^ I hope it is better now.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:29 am


BastetAmun
Suhuba


I thought that might be the case, so no worries. I just thought I'd put in in, better get a no, then never have done it and find out you could have.

I removed them and if the history needs more work, I can do that do. ^^ I hope it is better now.


Much better now and I'm glad you understand :}
She can still have the black liner around her eyes if you would prefer, it's just the Ra symbol that was out of place. *just to throw that out there*

Now the only questions I have are: does she still have a good relationship with her brother after the change in her history, or did her hostile nature not allow for him to get very close?

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BastetAmun

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 15, 2015 6:43 pm


Suhuba


I've added that, and added a new accessory that works I hope.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:24 am


BastetAmun
Suhuba


I've added that, and added a new accessory that works I hope.


Sounds good to me :]

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