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Revision to Purify Wolframite.

Ladon's new name for his changed identity will be Toren Estel, married to Wyatt Estel.


gaia_diamond Knight Title: Gévaudan, Knight of Saturn

gaia_diamond Challenge:
"Don't make me unleash my wrath."

gaia_diamond Uniform:
Main colors -White uniform with mediumish purple accenting.
Top Hooded top, white, with shoulder tassels like General form. Hood in an assasin's creed design. Accents of bows/ribboning.
Bottoms -- Black pants.
Gloves -- Up to artist.
Belt -- Optional
Shoes -- Victorian heels Shooooeeessss
Shoulders --
Accessories --
He has an eye-patch in black. He also has some light scarring up the left side of his neck up to the bottom lobe of his ear.


gaia_diamond Weapon:
1st stage: Chain
2nd stage: Weighted chain
3rd stage: Metal chain with a metal snarling wolf head.


gaia_diamond Magic:
Level 3:
Hungry Like the Wolf: When the weapon is thrown, the chompper bites the air as it turns into a wide circle. This doesn't cause physical damage as the dog curls into a sweeping arch to grab what he can. When caught in the circle, a black collar appears around his enemy's neck, chaining them to the spot for 55 seconds.

When chained, those leashed feel an overwhelming list for something they cannot reach. The chain keeps them in place, preventing them from attaining what they desire. No matter how hard they pulled or struggled; they can't escape and could range from frustrated to hysterical that they cannot reach what they are lusting/craving/desiring until the chain releases them.

Multiple enemies: Time is split by the number of enemies. This also depends how close together they are for him to catch them in one swing.

gaia_diamond Summon:
Black Wolf. (Named Chom-Chom)
Calling the pack: A wolf summon that can howl, alerting allies in a 1 mile radius to the current location, acting as a beacon.

Hey, MK!

The hobbies look great, so I'm going to focus on the powered side!

Knights are a little specific in what they can have in terms of offensiveness; between their summons, magic and weapon only one of the two can be distinctly offensive. For example, if you have a weapon designed to do a lot of damage, your knight shouldn't have magic that is designed to do a lot of damage, or they shouldn't have a summons who is used to do damage. For Knight weapons and magic, it is sometimes a careful balance, so I just have a few questions before I can approve anything!

For the weapon, this seems fairly offensive and could do a lot of damage, so I wanted to double check with the magic. I don't think it would be fair to have the chomp bite and do damage, but it would be totally fine if it just chomped through the air while he was channeling his magic. Additionally, 75 seconds of channeling seems fair, especially if that time is divided between the number of people he has chained to the spot!

Because Knight magic has to be actively channeled, Geva would need to be holding his weapon to use the effects of his Knight magic; do these chains have anything to do with the chains on his weapon (as in, does it have to go around their neck) or is he just throwing his weapon and channeling the magic and the chains are separate from his weapon?

I am also confused with the line, "Time is split by the number of enemies this affects as they enter a circular area that is thrown down once Geva throws his weapon's blade to the ground.". What circular area is being referenced/what is Geva throwing to the ground? I might be misunderstanding this, so just wanted to clarify!

And—lastly! For his summons, does his wolf have any magical properties or abilities? Does it exist so he can ride on it/etc/as a distraction? What would the wolf do when summoned?

I am sorry for the wall of text! Please give me a quote if you have any questions, comments, or make any changes and I'll get back to you as soon as possible!

Thanks for the clarification! With the change to Ganymede I would like to say a few more words on the magical effect; bloodlust is a very specific type of lust and I think it might stray too far from the general power themes of Ganymede as they are listed in the Knight information thread. Combined with the chains, it isn't fully reading as a Ganymede knight to me, however I realize the chains are important since they were a part of Wolframite's growth. I would be fine with you keeping the weapon as is, but I think a different magic might help this read more as a Knight of Ganymede. I was trying to think of a way to tie things together to propose to you, so I wanted to pitch an idea:

What if, instead of tightening for Bloodlust, the weapon instead filled them with a a dire lust for something just out of reach? The chain would prevent them from leaving the spot and, no matter what they are desiring, they couldn't reach it anyway? It wouldn't matter how hard they pulled or struggled; they couldn't escape and could range from frustrated to hysterical that they cannot reach what they are lusting/craving/desiring?

You aren't obligated to use my idea and I won't be offended if you choose not to! I just think that for a Knight's attack it might be best to focus on a magic that is not such a specific facet.

Also, the summons looks great!

It's all yours!

Thanks so much! Have fun playing!