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 Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 6:29 pm
This is the place for people to pose and get critiques on ideas for a Guardian or Eidolon-Makai. Please use as such.
Please make a new topic for your ideas so others can critique you. Thanks~
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2014 8:36 am
"Premade Eidolon-Makai Essence Ideas"
Kavortaine traveled the universes for a while, collecting Essences while on his journey after his discovery that the Ku can absorb Essences. Now that Kavortaine has settled down in Ethaos, the Essences sit in the fridge, waiting for use. These ideas for Eidolon-Makai Essences are pre-formed ideas that have characters that go with them. Feel free to use these Essences as a starting point for coming up with your own. If you really like one of these ideas, feel free to ask if you can use one.
Mountain Snow: This snow was taken from the highest peak in the Ridge Mountains; Collegiate on the planet Areth, formerly known as Earth. It's a purified Essence because it fell from the celestial realm and glitters without sunlight.
A Haunting Dream: This tainted Essence of a bad dream does not mean its a nightmare. A nightmare constitutes fear whereas this dream was more disturbingly thought-provoking. The dream lingers in the mind as memorable or unsettling and continues to haunt the dreamer as though it was still dream.
*Soul may be a baku or dream eater.
Pnuema-Aethyre ( Cosmic Breath ): This purified Essence is the cosmic spirit of the universe. This Essence was found on the outskirts of the Web Mao system, by the edge of the galaxy and is the expansion of the breath that brings health, joy and well-being to the natural grace of the being.
Sekpoli ( the Breath of Life ): This Essence of purified air is the source of all life. It's a breath that breathes all life into existence. The reason this breath is special is because it breathed mortal life into the Gods of Alopin.
Cedar Branch ( World Tree ): Also known as Yggdrasil, the branch of the Cedar Tree is a special Essence because it was taken from the World Tree in the Gnress Garden. Kavortaine found this Garden within the Chaos of Vladeda in the Lith Sen System before it became a colony of Dar Bor.
Raging Winds: This tainted Essence of storm-force winds brings destruction to the natural environments it blows through. However, it is stuck in a valley as a tornado, which is where Kavortaine found it. The valley has been eroded so much that it sits below the rest of the area that would be near its elevation. This disastrous wind meant no one could inhabit the area and since Kavortaine captured this Essence, life has returned to the valley.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2014 9:06 am
Premade Eidolon-Makai
These Eidolon-Makai will probably be used in raffles or contests of some kind. I would like these specific Eidolon-Makai to remain with the same Essence/Soul/LifeGem combination.
Anubis:WIP
Essence: Coup-de-Grace: This tainted Essence of a kill of mercy was used by the Assassin Dezuro on the ambassador of Ma-Kyra; Nephian Drake. The ambassador had been blinded and scarred by a careless acid technician Dezuro had hired to poison a different person and since Nephian looked to be in so much pain from the acid, Dezuro took pity on him and killed him out of grace. This Essence manifested into a set of acid-torn eyes the color of the setting sun.
Soul: Jackal: Jackals are opportunistic omnivores, predators of small- to medium-sized animals and proficient scavengers. From the Africa / Eurasia area of Earth, the Jackal are usually depicted as magical tricksters or clever sorcerers like foxes or coyotes. It is frequently used as a literary device to illustrate desolation, loneliness and abandonment, with reference to its habit of living in the ruins of former cities and other areas abandoned by humans.
LifeGem: Staurolite: A special property of staurolite is that it often occurs twinned in a characteristic cross-shape, called penetration twinning. In hand samples, macroscopically visible staurolite crystals are of prismatic shape. It appears as coarse, dark gold-brown prisms, or sometimes reddish-brown to black stubby crystals.
Origin: Egyptian
Hi’aka-Iox: WIP
Essence: Ki Energy: This tainted Essence was found with the dead body of the Chi Master Owzen after his assassination. It is still up for debate whether or not the Master was assassinated, but this energy -- that still flowed through his body even after his death -- did not go back to the earth. Instead, it stayed in the body until Kavortaine found it before the ceremonial burning of his corporeal body.
Soul: Phantom: Also seen as an illusion, this phantom is a distortion of the senses. Unlike a hallucination, which is a distortion in the absence of a stimulus, an illusion describes a misinterpretation of a true sensation. For example, hearing voices regardless of the environment would be a hallucination, whereas hearing voices in the sound of running water (or other auditory source) would be an illusion.
Life Gem: Jadeite: Jadeite stones belong to the Jade group of minerals. Jadeite can take various colors and shades, including emerald-green and light green. Jadeite heals any internal disorders, strengthens the body, protects from fatigue, extends lifespan. Jadeite was considered as the predecessor of all gemstones, symbolizing five main virtues: mercy, modesty, courage, valor and wisdom.
Origin: Unknown
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