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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:02 am


Name: Zindel Tagino.
(Zindel - Zindelo, a traditional Romani name.
Tagino - Gitano moved around, meaning nomadic dancer in Spanish.)

Blood colour: Redblood! ✖✖✖✖ - #a92020

Gender: Male.

Symbol: watch out-- User Image

Personality: Zindel is generally an easy-going troll. Having learned from a young age just how disgusting their troll society was, he grew to adapt himself easily, and pushes away others, learning not to get attached to anyone as trolls are born one day and die next. To list a few reasons as to why he hates their society so much-- it is filled with a lot of hardship and labor simply because of a color. Lowbloods are constantly seen as lesser and trampled on like insects. Just living is a risk-- the mentality of kill or be killed is something they all follow by heart. Gl'bgolyb is a constant threat, especially after the recent disaster with the last queen... Street-smart and pragmatic, Zindel looks for the easiest (and less costly) solution to a problem. He always chooses the most straightforward and practical route, choosing for the road taken by most instead of the path to the side. He knows when some punk is trying to weasel money out of him, and he knows the streets of New Hemisect like the back of his hand. He is neither impatient nor patient, instead, willing to wait for others depending on the situation. However, if he needs to go, he will without warning.

He is frugal and knowing, taking great care with his money, only spending it on things he needs. Often times he doesn't spend it at all-- With his deft fingers and quick movement, Zindel can easily swipe a trolls belongings and play it off by pleading and saying that he was just a lowly redblood-- how could he possibly ever hope to reach a coveted level such at theirs...? He was just a kid, he'd say dramatically... a harmless wiggler with no way to protect himself. Sometimes, when he doesn't manage to get any money, he lays himself down and begs other trolls for food or money, putting up the perfect act. Another thing Zindel does to gain money is dance. No, not ballet! (Though he will if you pay him enough.) He dances in a way his fellow street pals taught him-- with a lot of dramatic foot movements and flair. (coughs a little) They would play their instruments, and he'd preform for the others. Sometimes, he'd play the instruments himself— namely, the guitar, the flute, and some makeshift hand drums. He loves to play, and would like to learn better, but with his limited amount of beetles, he would rather spend it on food than enjoyment.

If he knows a troll that is in the same situation as he is, he will give them some of what he has, thinking— "us street crawlers need to stick together!" He has something of a Robin Hood complex gained from hearing ancestor stories about the guy the among his OHC allies— he follows the ancestors morals slightly. He steals from the rich and gives what he can to the poor. He doesn't like any type of highbloods, and would rather avoid them then see them as something other than moneybags. If he met one, he'd keep them at arms distance, then steal from them and completely disappear from their life.

Zindel hates the rebels. Mostly because he thinks their movement is stupid. Not only would their society end up in complete chaos and a huge mess— if lowbloods received more privileges and the caste system was abolished, then he wouldn't be able to live his normal, carefree lifestyle! He'd have to get down and do something. And he hated working... Working was for the drones. He would rather stay a street rat for the rest of his life than do something for their dystopian society. That's not to say that he likes the caste system. He hates it. But he wouldn't do anything about it...

If Zindel got into enough trouble to catch the attention of the military, he would run. At the end of the day, no matter what, Zindel is a coward, choosing to run away from a situation rather than face it head on. He risks himself with stealing for the excitement and need, but really, would run with his tail between his legs if seen, or try and fool them by acting like he was a pathetic lowblood, completely unable to take anything from them. No pain, no working, no trouble. That's his motto.

Strengths: giving: Zindel is the type of troll who feels incredible guilt when he sees someone in need. Even though he sees many trolls every day, just like him, he could never get used to it. So instead, to make up for it, he gives what he has when he can. He eats enough to satisfy his hunger? He gives the rest to a nearby street ally. Hears someone asking for beetles? He hands over any extra he may have. It gives him a sense of accomplishment. He is mostly giving towards lowbloods, as he believes highbloods have enough. He is a bit trusting to those who have the same blood color, but usually he only gives to those who he sees go through hardship. They may be shifty, but in his mind, he thinks that trolls must do what they can to survive, just like he does.

adaptable: If he ever finds himself in a new situation, Zindel can easily mold himself to fit it. He can push his feelings back and act however others want him to for the right amount of coin, and will try his best to appease them. Zindel can put on a believable act to fit any scenario, and if he ever finds himself in a troublesome situation, he can find a way to adapt himself to it.

easy-going: Zindel is a troll who doesn't let much get under his skin. He takes things as they come and accepts them, following his own pace. He doesn't pressure others to finish things and tries to keep everyone around him calm, similar to a peace-maker. If Zindel sees that a situation begins to get physical or volatile, he will not hesitate to turn around the way he came. If the situation seems manageable, he will try to contain it.

Flaws: shameless: When it comes to getting himself out of a situation or getting money, Zindel will use any means necessary. He if he has to kneel on the floor and kiss a highbloods boots to get out of something with no other option, he will. If he has to do something ridiculous, he will. If he is forced to go against his allies... Depending on the pay out or on the allies in question, he will. He will be whatever you want him to, for the right amount of money... Or if you scare him enough.

coward: There are many dangerous situations in Alternia, which means, one needs to find some way to defend themselves. To Zindel, that way was running away. His first thought in a battle is to escape it, first thought in an argument is to find a way to avoid it, or just leave althogether. He pushes the blame away from himself and cannot interact with others after a fight as he is scared something will happen to him. He hates confronting others, and one of his greatest fears is being captured... Or worse.

untrusting: Everyone is a stranger to Zindel. Even those close to him— he is always suspicious, always analyzing to see if someone will harm him. This makes it hard for Zindel to trust others, and even harder to have a relationship with someone. Usually he creates relationships that are purely out of convenience. He focuses on keeping what relationships he may have at arms distance. He figures— if he isn't close to anyone, no one will hurt him, right? He would rather be alone than be broken up over someone. As he's a lowblood from the streets, he is used to being seen as lesser by other trolls as well as being ignored.

Weapon: Jagged dagger. He won it in a brawl against some kid in old OHC.

Appearance: Curly black hair: x x x

Zindel has curly black hair that reaches his jawline, wild and messy from his days sleeping in dirty places. Constantly tired, his eyes are narrow and suspicious, watching everyone carefully-- but he holds the smile of a devil, with one sharp tooth slightly poking out on his left lip and a birthmark on his cheek. His horns look similar to this, but slightly curved inwards, similar to a circle. He is almost always covered in dust or dirt.

His clothes are mainly ratty clothes he picks up from the dumpster. He has baggy pants in black with a red patch on it, and a normal black tee-shirt half-tucked into it, with his symbol on it. He has a red sash with some decorations he uses to hold up his pants/in his dances, and walks around barefoot, so his feet are extremely dirty.

Home: New Hemisect City! He lives on the streets now, but in the past he would live in Old Hemisect City. Before the war. He sleeps in a mobile recupricoon he stole from some troll in OHC, in an abandoned hive. He shares this hive with a couple other trolls in his traveling group.

Lusus: Zindel has a bird as his lusus-- more specifically, a wren. Being a small bird, Mumwren is always flying around somewhere nearby, leaving him to his own devices as she figures Zindel is quite the capable troll for such a young age. She does worry about him though, and manages to scrounge up a little bit of food every day. They have an unspoken tradition to sleep with each other when morning comes, but usually they part when night comes around. They have very few arguments, as Mumwren believes Zindel can make the right choices.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 10:08 am


psst - his symbol is awfully close to cylem's new troll! i advise finding a backup symbol, or finding some way to make it more different. (perhaps combining it with another?)

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:19 am


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omg I feel like an idiot, I didn't even realize it omGG gosh someone kill me now
I'll get another symbol GOOSSSHH I'm so sorry!!! thank you!!! sweatdrop
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:21 am


pff it's fine, accidents happen! and you aren't even the first

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 2:17 pm


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still emotion_sweatdrop sighs @ myself
ok, there we go! how is that one? I don't think there are any trolls with signs like that! ^^!
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 2:27 pm


nope, no troll with that! you're good to go

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 3:04 pm


ok, great! emotion_kirakira
and with that, zindel is ooopen for crits!! ^^
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 4:15 pm


I enjoy this trash child and how scummy you're making him out to be. He'll be great to RP with someday and I know I'll love seeing him in action!
I do have some stuff that caught my eye, though.

"Having learned from a young age just how disgusting their troll society was" What makes it disgusting to him, exactly? I'd just like it to be printed out clearly from the get-go.

I see that he's a notable coward, yet also a peace-keeper. Those kind of conflict to me. Peace-keepers tend to stick themselves out in trouble to make sure things stay okay, so what are the limits with that? Does he only make an effort if he thinks he won't get tossed in the frying pan for it?

How is he giving and yet untrusting? How does he trust that anyone he can give money is worth that for real? If he's so suspicious, what about seeing others in a similar situation to his makes his heart melt despite the fact that he exploits others? What makes him believe that others aren't as shifty as he is, or more?

If he lives on the streets, where does he sleep at night? Are there shelters he can hide in when the sun's up? Does he have a recuperacoon of any sort to use, or does he deal with worse nightmares from not having a stable place to sleep?

This is just some stuff I noticed but he's looking pretty solid so far otherwise!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 5:47 pm


Gl!tch~
I enjoy this trash child and how scummy you're making him out to be. He'll be great to RP with someday and I know I'll love seeing him in action!
I do have some stuff that caught my eye, though.

awe yeeee he's a repulsive little b*****d <3

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"Having learned from a young age just how disgusting their troll society was" What makes it disgusting to him, exactly? I'd just like it to be printed out clearly from the get-go.

To list a few, the society is filled with a lot of hardship and labor simply because of a color.. Lowbloods are constantly seen as lesser and trampled on like insects. Just living is a risk-- the mentality of kill or be killed is something they all follow by heart. Gl'bgolyb is a constant threat, especially after the recent disaster with the last queen...

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I see that he's a notable coward, yet also a peace-keeper. Those kind of conflict to me. Peace-keepers tend to stick themselves out in trouble to make sure things stay okay, so what are the limits with that? Does he only make an effort if he thinks he won't get tossed in the frying pan for it?

If Zindel sees that a situation begins to get physical or volatile, he will not hesitate to turn around the way he came. If the situation seems manageable, he will try to contain it.

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How is he giving and yet untrusting? How does he trust that anyone he can give money is worth that for real? If he's so suspicious, what about seeing others in a similar situation to his makes his heart melt despite the fact that he exploits others? What makes him believe that others aren't as shifty as he is, or more?

Really, it depends on the troll. He is mostly giving towards lowbloods, as he believes highbloods have enough. He is a bit trusting to those who have the same blood color, but usually he only gives to those who he sees go through hardship. They may be shifty, but in his mind, he thinks that trolls must do what they can to survive, just like he does.

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If he lives on the streets, where does he sleep at night? Are there shelters he can hide in when the sun's up? Does he have a recuperacoon of any sort to use, or does he deal with worse nightmares from not having a stable place to sleep?

He sleeps on the streets, in between alleys. Right now, he has a specific alley where he sleeps in, but he changes every once in a while. He has a mobile recooperacoon, but he saves it for days where he cannot sleep. Usually he knocks himself out. He prefers being awake, as he does suffer from horrible nightmares.

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This is just some stuff I noticed but he's looking pretty solid so far otherwise!

aw man, great! ^^! you've been a great help hun, thank you BUNCHES <3
if you still find any errors, please tell me!!
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 9:10 pm


everything looks quite solid except for the sleeping arrangements. the slime in a recupricoon's job is to lower a troll's natural aggression levels with it's chemicals. so -if- he slept in one less than an average troll, he would have a challenging time controlling his anger, and be more quick to violence than he would otherwise. however, he reads as a bit of a pacifistic coward! right now this reads as he gets no penalties for not using the recupricoon, which isn't how it works.

also I'm not sure what you mean by 'he knocks himself out', and how he only uses his recupricoon for when he cannot sleep. does that mean he just lies in it awake?

finally, being outdoors during daytime is always a risk, due to undead and the blinding sun, even in major cities. please be aware of this risk, as right now it really isn't written in anywhere as a challenge to his 'carefree' life.

all these are things that need to be addressed or reworked. if you want some help thinking up fixes, quote me and we can brainstorm!

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 10:41 pm


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all these are things that need to be addressed or reworked. if you want some help thinking up fixes, quote me and we can brainstorm!


oh gorsh im so glad he looks good ; v;!!

by knocking himself out I meant that he would only use the recupricoon for emergencies-- like if he cant sleep without it. im definitely willing to change this to something more acceptable!!

would a nomadic group home be better-- him sharing one large abandoned hive with a ton of other trolls? or like, a traveling tent he robbed off one of his old nomad friends in OHC? ill think of other ideas, if these aren't acceptable!
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 10:47 pm


whoops lmao i posted my reply in your post ... redface

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both those would work! i can imagine there are plenty of empty buildings homeless trolls know about.

for the recupricoon it's more of a 'if he uses this less it -will- affect his personality thing'. if you don't want him to have anger issues or moodswings i would advise that he always uses it! ofc he won't turn into a violent lunatic if his personality is naturally more towards the calmer side, but all trolls do naturally gravitate towards aggression as a species! i guess think of recupricoons are a technological aid to help them not be a species made entirely of hulks.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:02 pm


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hehe, don't worry, ive done that too -pats-

awwright, edited in <3!! anything else? 3nodding
PostPosted: Fri Nov 28, 2014 11:41 pm


not that i can spot! however it's 2 am and my brain's half asleep. i'll have another look over tomorrow morning when i am awake, and if everything seems fine, post with a stamp.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 07, 2014 1:43 pm


TIME TO CRASH THIS PARTY. Naw. I have a couple of crits for Zindel. He's looking fine (though as always with a troll influenced by culture, keeping up research is key as you rp him!), but there were just a couple of things I wanted to point out.

With a flaw like "coward" i notice that a lot of the time the wording doesnt make it seem like a flaw - like "this troll will run away or not cause conflict because cowardice" which is... not super negative. If you focused more on his fear of confrontation and how it really gets his giblets then that one wouldnt bother me as much, but currently it's not reading as something that negatively affects him on a regular basis. You also use easy-going to describe how he flees from conflict as a strength, but then turn around and use it as a flaw, so that's an inconsistency.

The other thing i noticed was that you mentioned "his fellow street pals" and "his OHC friends" in his personality section, but then his "untrusting" flaw makes it sound like he doesnt make relationships. It's not a super strong flaw if he regularly has people that confide or share tips with him regularly, especially considering he's a giving kind of guy to those around his bloodcolor. and also "he's just a ratty redblood, no one would want to get close to him anyways" kind of begs the question: what about other redbloods? This isn't really a relevant statement considering how many lowbloods there are who he could interact with - unless he himself believes that because he's a lowblood no one likes him.

Anyway. Elaborate!
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