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Sakura Faerie x

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:36 pm


This is a revision of a previous quest that was accepted.
Previous Quest thread (Accepted): http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=24507393

(Before note: I changed one of her virtues and two of her flaws, as well as a bit of her physical description. I also added a hobby, and some more information to her other hobbies to make the description more lengthy. For her powered form, each of the attacks were slightly edited and added to (original attack that was approved in parentheses), and a few alterations to her uniform were made)

Name: Katherine Chang

Nickname: Kat, Kathy

Age: 14

Birthday: 4/4

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Diamond

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: Plums (candied, preserved, in tea, anything!)

Hated Food: Avacadoes (just...no)

School: Crystal Academy (scholarship for excelling in the Arts)

Hobbies:
Catching the Perfect Moment--
Photography is one of Katherine's favorite hobbies, as she enjoys capturing life at its greatest moment. Usually never seen without her trusty camera (some exceptions apply), Katherine is constantly taking pictures of friends and strangers, birds and bees, anything that strikes her at a particular moment. She particularity likes taking pictures of flowers, specifically plum blossoms during the winter, when the pinks and reds of the blossoms contrast brightly against the white of the snow.

A Life of Music--
Singing, listening, composing. All different ways to engage in music. Ever since Katherine was young, she had always been singing or humming one tune or another. It is a way for her to pass time, when there is nothing particular to do, or, when there is something to do, to help accompany her in her work; constantly, Katherine's mother is reminding her to "shut up and stop singing, you're giving me a headache", since she sings whenever she is not sleeping, listening to other music (in form of radio or iPod), or eating (with some exceptions for when she is at school or in the public. Then, she shuts up good due to her shyness around others she doesn't know well). Her preferred themes of music include operas and musicals, as well as traditional pieces from the classical and romantic periods.

Sitting down to a Book--
Reading a good book has always been one of Katherine's favorite ways to pass quiet afternoons when the air is too still for her to sing in. She enjoys "experiencing the past, and exploring the future" while staying nested within the comfort of her bedroom. Mystery, romance, Katherine has read them all. She prefers casual "slice-of-life" stories, but can't help reading a good thriller once in a while.

Virtues:
Steadfast to the Truth (Strong Will)--
Katherine has always been told that she has a strong will. Fighting until the end, she will never give up or give in to the enemy. In situations when she there are two (or more) opposing sides, she prefers to stay neutral, although when she chooses a side a side to fight for, she will never give up or give in to the opposing side, standing strong, like a plum blossom withstanding the harsh storms of winter.

Work hard, Live life better (Perseverant)--
Hard work and dedication bring success. That is what Katherine's parents have always told her. Try your best in whatever you do, don't ever give up, is her daily motto to start the day. Katherine gives it her all, when doing something, and aims for the best possible results she can attain. Despite the hurdles life throws at her, Katherine keeps going at it will all she's got.

Look Towards the Sun (Optimistic)--
Optimism is looking at the brighter side of things, at the better in situations. Katherine's natural optimism helps cheer to those around her when they are feeling down, bringing light into their world when they have little. She sees the good in desperate situations, able to bring hope to others. Just by being around her, Katherine can tease a smile out of others when they are upset, finding the bright side in whatever happens to go on.

Integrity that Never Falters (Unwavering Integrity)--
Despite being rather stubborn at times, Katherine is a "goody-goody-two-shoes" at heart, anti-lying and anti-cheating. Her sense of integrity is very strong, and thus is considered one of the few people whom others can trust with their secrets, as never would she ever willingly let others cajole her out of sticking to the good morals she was taught. She stands firm to things that are morally right, and refuses to do things that are wrong and considered unhealthily for her soul.

Flaws:
Hard-headed, Thick-skulled (Stubborn)--
Disagreeable. Indisputable. Makes someone want to slam her head against the wall. That is Katherine down to a few words. She has always insisted on certain things, and doesn't budge. Ever. Her parents have sighed in frustration, teachers hidden twitching eyes behind textbooks, all throughout her life. When convinced of something, she fights until the end for her cause, not backing down, getting her into a lot of trouble, since some of the things she is convinced of is not "supported" by some of her friends, which leads to small fights about subjects within them (for example, Katherine strongly believes that artificial food, such as candy, is utterly disgusting and foul tasting. Her friends disagree).

Words like knives (Blunt)--
Katherine is very blunt. She often doesn't watch her mouth, and so harsh truths are voiced aloud before she thinks them through. She prefers telling the truth straight on instead of sugar coating them, and thus her words often seem more harsh then they actually are. All her life, Katherine has been straightforward with those around her, sometimes criticizing them in a not-so-settle way. A few (read that as a lot) friendships have been broken because of her sharp way of criticizing her associates. Many feelings have been hurt, and few have been made up.

Playing the Blame Game (Blamer)--
Being a pro at a game is usually considered something to brag about. Excelling at the Blame Game, though, isn't anything to be proud of. Katherine holds the title of "Experienced Professional" in said game. She has a bad habit of usually denying negative things that are accused of her, and then blaming someone else, pushing the responsibility onto them (which is why it is called the "Blame Game"). In situations in which Katherine is accused of something, she refuses to admit that that she was the one who had done the wrong, instead blaming someone else; for example, if Katherine was accused of breaking her brothers toy by accidentally stepping on it, she would, instead of accepting the blame and apologizing, blame her brother for putting the toy in the middle of the walkway where anyone could step on it, and that the broken toy was his consequence for not putting the said item in a safer area.

It's Either Perfect or Nothing (Perfectionist)--
According to her parents and everyone around her, Katherine is a perfectionist, seeking to achieve "perfection" in whatever she does. She sets very high expectations for herself and those around her--expectations that are so high, they are near impossible to attain--and will sometimes throw a fit if her expectations are not met, falling (very) short of "perfect". Often, she will refuse to do projects or activities she is certain she will fail in, as the predicted result will not be perfect. Her habit of redoing (and redoing) things over and over again until she is satisfied with the result (or gives up on the cause) often infuriate her parents and friends, as each failed attempt Katherine makes is usually followed with some sort of a negative reaction (such as screaming, cursing, etc).

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes:
Color: Coffee brown (deep, dark, and heartwarming) see image ref below for color
Shape: Round-ish

Hair:
Color: Black (see image ref below)
Type: I made a Character Sheet for her powered form; see for hair type and color

Face:
Face: Heart-Shaped
Freckles: Freckle-less
Skin: Typical "Library" Chinese (the skin tone is lighter than the average Chinese skin, but still is the same color tone as it) see above image

Anything else: Katherine wears a simple hairband every day (see above image for color), which is sometimes accessorized with some tulle flowers or a bow
PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2014 2:38 pm


Senshi: Sailor Mie, Senshi of plum blossoms

Challenge: I'll bloom bright against the storm!

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: See sketch below
Secondary Color: See sketch below

Fuku: I made a character sheet...

Collar -- Sailor collar extends from top (see sketch)
Bow -- See sketch, but make alterations if you wish. I'm horrible at drawing bows.
Bodice -- See sketch
Sleeves -- Long, disconnected to bodice
Brooch -- Flower shaped
Bottoms -- Typical sailor skirt
Tiara -- Classic type
Choker -- No need for choker as sailor outfit is high-collared
Shoes -- Simple Chinese flats (in the secondary colour)
Gloves -- No gloves
Accessories -- Pink Hairband (which also appears on her civilian form), in main color

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks:
(Sailor Scout Attack: Mie Hua Blizzard- Mie makes a circle of petals infront of her, plum blossom petals shoot forward at the enemy, trapping them in the petals, temporarily paralyzingly them for 15 seconds.
-This attack works only on youma and lower/equal leveled enemies. More powerful enemies are unaffected by the paralysis, although the petals will cause at slight distraction to the enemy.
-Usable up to 4 times per battle) <- previous sailor attack

Sailor Scout Attack: Mie Hua Blizzard- Mie makes a circle of petals infront of her, plum blossom petals shoot forward at the enemy, trapping them in the petals, temporarily paralyzingly them for 15 seconds.
-Range: 5 feet in front of Mie
-Usable up to 4 times per battle
Pros: Causes paralysis which prevents the target from moving.
Cons: Works only on youma and lower/equal leveled enemies. More powerful enemies are unaffected by the paralysis, although the petals will cause a slight distraction to the enemy.
Escapable it target dodges and moves out the way of the petals, although doing such would require very fast reflexes.

(Super Sailor Scout Attack: Mie Hua Blizzard Blast- upgraded version of Sailor attack; Mie creates a halo of plum blossom petals around her head, moves hands outwards, petals shoot out in a circle around her at the youma who are surrounding her (hitting all the enemies in a 360 degree circle within a 4 feet radius around her), trapping them all in petals, temporarily paralyzingly them for a few seconds.
-This attack is able to hit many enemies at once, unlike the previous attack where only one youma can be paralyzed at a time.
-The ability to paralyze is extended to more powerful enemies (such as negaverse generals and corrupted Senshi), although they can escape it after 10 or so seconds. Less strong enemies will be paralyzed for around 15 or so seconds
-Usable up to 2 times per battle) <- previous super attack

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Mie Hua Blizzard Blast- upgraded version of Sailor attack; Mie creates a halo of plum blossom petals around her head, moves hands outwards, petals shoot out in a circle around her at the enemies who are surrounding her (hitting all the enemies in a 360 degree circle within a 4 feet radius around her), trapping them all in petals, temporarily paralyzingly them for 15 seconds.
-Range: 4 feet radius around Mie
-Usable up to 2 times per battle
Pros: Can hit many enemies at once, unlike the previous attack where only one target can be paralyzed at a time.
Cons: Works mostly on youma and lower/equal leveled enemies. More powerful enemies are only affected by the paralysis for around 5-10 seconds.
Escapable if the enemy moves out of the four-feet radius before being hit by the petals, although doing such will require very fast reflexes.

(Eternal Sailor Attack: Mie Hua Blooming- a beam of light carrying some petals hits an enemy, target is wrapped up by a large plum blossom bud, bud blooms and petals burst out of the opened flower, leaving the enemy depleted of 30% of strength (the enemy will feel tired and some attacks needing alot of power and concentration cannot be performed for the duration of the rest of the battle)
-Can be used one time per battle) <- previous eternal attack. Revision below:

Eternal Sailor Attack: Mie Hua Blooming- a beam of light carrying some petals hits the floor area below an enemy, target is wrapped up by a large plum blossom bud that grows from under target, bud blooms and petals burst out of the opened flower, leaving the enemy depleted of 30% of magical strength/energy (the targeted person will slightly feel physically weary for 5 or so seconds, and will not be able to perform their most powerful attack for the duration of the rest of the battle).
Range: 10 feet in front of Mie
-Can be used 1 time per battle
Pros: Very affective against magical-type characters, as the target will then not be able to perform their strongest magical attack after being hit.
Cons: Not that affective against physical-type characters, as the target will not be affected physically by the attack, aside from the very brief weariness that wears off rather quickly.

*Note about attacks: Meihua means "Plum blossom" in Chinese. Thus, "Mie Hua" is abit of a play on words.
Also, plum blossoms are known for blooming brighter as the air outside gets colder, whereas most other plants would do the opposite. Colder -> Snow -> Blizzard, so thus the name of her Sailor and Super attacks.
Tbh, I have no idea how in the world I came up with her eternal attack, but lets just leave it at that.

Sakura Faerie x

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 7:46 am


Sakura Faerie x



Hi, doing a quick drive-by to let you know -- you have your character's age listed as 13; this would make her a Chibi Senshi! She must be 14 or older to be a full senshi/on adult lines; I apologize for not noticing this on your previous quest!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 8:20 am


Songstress Kitsune
Sakura Faerie x



Hi, doing a quick drive-by to let you know -- you have your character's age listed as 13; this would make her a Chibi Senshi! She must be 14 or older to be a full senshi/on adult lines; I apologize for not noticing this on your previous quest!


Forgot to change that sweatdrop
I was revising the profile, and noted that when I went through the previous one, but forgot to change it~

Sakura Faerie x

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Dramatic Senshi

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  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50
PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2014 8:48 am


Sakura Faerie x



Alright, thanks! And as a note, you can post this for re-review before acquiring her, and in my experience this is a little easier than revising later~ It would go through the normal stamping process/be treated as a regular quest!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2015 11:15 am


Hi Sakura!!

Just a small bit of crit but not much!!

Flaws:


Un-athletic: The way you have written this flaw sounds more like a health/body issue rather than a personality flaw, if you wanted it could be reworded to her being lazy but then that might effect her other virtues/flaws (especially about the ones regarding her need to be perfect) really I dont think this needs to be an active flaw, you can have it that she doesnt like running as a sub text to her as a person. If you wanted it as a flaw though you would need to add more depth to it and have it being more about being lazy leading her to being unhealthy which leads to her not running and refusing too.

Attacks:
For her 1st stage attack is the range still 4 meters or is it less or more? not really a crit this but just confirmation!

Hope this helps, quote me when you would like me to review your quest again <3


matisha

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Sakura Faerie x

Sparkling Fairy

PostPosted: Sun Jan 04, 2015 1:06 pm


Matisha

Quote!

I changed "Un-Athletic" with "Blamer", and added the range limit to all of the powered attacks~
PostPosted: Mon Jan 05, 2015 10:58 am


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 3:06 pm


Sakura Faerie x

Hi, Sakura!

This profile is almost entirely ready for approval, so I just had one small question! When her profile was stamped previously, her super attack had a limitation of 15 seconds after we discussed paralyzing attacks (since fifteen seconds is the longest someone can be trapped/paralyzed for), so I have to ask if you can drop the attack time from 20 seconds back down to 15! If you are all right with this (or would like to explore other options for paralysis) I can drop a stamp!
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 3:34 pm


Kyuseisha no Hikari
Sakura Faerie x

Hi, Sakura!

This profile is almost entirely ready for approval, so I just had one small question! When her profile was stamped previously, her super attack had a limitation of 15 seconds after we discussed paralyzing attacks (since fifteen seconds is the longest someone can be trapped/paralyzed for), so I have to ask if you can drop the attack time from 20 seconds back down to 15! If you are all right with this (or would like to explore other options for paralysis) I can drop a stamp!

Fixed~

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 5:17 pm


Sakura Faerie x

Fabulous!

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