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[Quest]Sailor Valeria corrupted of Brains//Mahari Chaudhri

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Sleet Tempest Snape

Noble Vampire

PostPosted: Wed Nov 05, 2014 6:58 pm


User Image Name: Mahari Chaudhri

Nickname: Hari, which doesn't bother her at all. ^_^

Age: 19

Birthday: April 23rd

Sign: Taurus

Gemstone: Diamond for being born in April but Peridot for being a Taurus.

Blood Type: A-

Fav. Food: Kati roll, Biryani, Tandoori chicken, Bhelpuri.

Hated Food: Fast food, which is not the same as street food.

School: Destiny City University, she's going for advertising.

Hobbies:


Babysitting: Does this count? In Mahari's case it very well should. She has a large family, with several older siblings and a few younger ones (she has 11 siblings) and with everyone living together she is always offering to babysit for her elder siblings or her parents, when it's a younger sibling of hers who needs watching. Her family is large, without a doubt, and so everyone has to do something and Mahari is the official/unofficial babysitter and by now her siblings and parents know they can just go to her, though at times she will all but toss a an older sibling and their spouse out to enjoy a night together so she can babysit and/or take her younger niece or nephew out. She likes to be the fun aunt/elder sister who takes the little ones out for ice cream, sit them down for stories, bundle them up to watch movies, or cook for them while discussing school and helping them with homework.


Cooking: Mahari loves to cook! Whether it's a traditional food from India or it's something new from America or somewhere else she enjoys how relaxing it is working in the kitchen to prepare a meal, especially with her mother and one or both of her grandmothers (her whole family really does live together). It's not just something she does because she's motherly or something but it's because food brings her family together where they can all sit together and talk but more than that it's a good way to relax when preparing the meal. Preparing the meal is a time when she doesn't have to worry about anything and can block everything else out as she goes over the directions, or works by memory, and bring together a bunch of ingredients to form something far more than any single ingredient is on it's own.


Shopping: Whether it be shopping for ice cream, clothing, books, or groceries Mahari enjoys shopping and makes it into an adventure of some sort. This is why she never goes shopping alone, even if she has to call a friend to go grocery shopping with her she will, she likes to make shopping a fun and adventurous thing that should be a shared thing. While Mahari loves to shop she also grew up in India going to markets and learned how to haggle and get the best deal she can on whatever it is she was looking to purchase. It is different here, no markets to haggle at, but she still looks for the best deals and sales. She doesn't like to pay full price for things unless she absolutely must, which is a price she pays reluctantly. it isn't that her family is lacking in money, not with so many members all working and contributing in part to the family money and members with very good jobs, but it is simply how things were done back home and how she grew up doing things.



Virtues:


Helpful: Mahari is more than outgoing, she is the sort to want to make friends with everyone. Even when at work she wants to make the customers she deals with happy, watch them leave smiling, and know that she's done everything she can do for them to make their shopping experience the best she can possibly make it. But as far as friends and family go it is Mahari who is the first to jump and offer her help, if it's something she can help with, and with her friends she is always willing to spend time with them even if she has to bring her siblings with her (because she's also on babysitting duty) or her friend(s) have to come over to her home due to her babysitting at the time.


Social: Mahari has a good many friends, or at least she did back home, and they were close friends even if they were new friends. She is the sort to make friends and quickly have them become very close friends who not only come over to her house often but join her family for dinner, go out with her when she's on an outing with her little siblings/nieces/nephews. She likes to integrate things and make her friends extended family members of a sort so often they can be found at her home cooking, helping her help younger family members with homework, watching movies with them, and other such things including shopping in markets, at malls, and other things. Mahari doesn't see why friends shouldn't be family, after all don't they say you can pick your own family? She's done that while keeping her real biological family close to her.



Flaws:

Time management: Mahari does a lot and sometimes it may be too much. She pushes herself in order to prove herself, make good grades, and to help out her family as much as possible in as many ways as possible. but she also holds down a job, not that she needs to, and while she can't take a lot of hours she still finds it hard at times to find the time to do everything including study properly, falling short of studying for things as thoroughly as she'd like to. It's a bit of a problem, or more than a bit, as she needs to learn she can only divide herself so much and there are only so many hours in a day and some of them need to be allocated to sleep so it's even less for her to do things in.

Trusting: Perhaps Mahari shouldn't jump so quickly into trusting people, especially inviting them into her home. Not only inviting them into her home but talking to them, not holding secrets, and letting "friends" close to her family and it's youngest members. Mahari however can't help it and doesn't see this problem, even when it has come back and bitten her in the a**. She's had one former friend, a brother in all but blood, he was a family friend who she invited into the house and when she turned him down (how was she to know he had a crush on her) he blackmailed her which she did not give in to. She would not date him, especially with him threatening to tell her family every little dirty secret he had found out about her and other members of her family. It caused a lot of drama in her family, hurt feelings, and other things but they grew stronger as a family and he was never allowed near any member of the family again - something he understood. Whatever threats may, or may not, have been made are unknown to Mahari though she has heard whispers from her elder siblings especially her elder sisters.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Pink and not too round but not narrowed either.

Hair: Long and pink, often at least some of it is tied up to keep it out of the way.

Face: Heart shaped face with no markings to be seen, she uses enough products (and the right ones) to keep her skin nice and clear. ^_^

Clothes: Already talked to Ver about it but I'm going with a saree.





Senshi: Sailor Valeria, corrupted senshi of brains.

Challenge:

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Black
Secondary Color: Silver and pink with a brain design (on the skirt).

Fuku:

Collar -- N/A
Bow -- N/A
Bodice -- N/A
Sleeves -- N/A
Brooch -- N/A
Bottoms -- N/A
Tiara -- N/A
Choker -- N/A
Shoes -- N/A
Gloves -- N/A
Accessories -- N/A

Take a look at the art. ::Nods::



Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Mind pause.
Here Valeria places her index and middle finger to her right temple and calls her attack. Flicking her fingers toward her enemy a dark pink ball of light is tossed/flicked at the enemy, the person must be within ten feet of her, and upon hitting them inflicts upon them a sort of absent mindedness. They suddenly can't think or form a thought and are left standing, sitting, or laying right where they are until the magic passes. It can, of course, be dodged and a good shake, hit, or anything else inflicted upon the victim of Valeria's attack will shake them from this stupor. The attack, if not broken, will last twenty seconds and can be used three times in battle. She is able to strike someone up to a 10ft range in front of her.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Strike the mind.
Like the last time Valeria places her index and middle finger to her right temple and calls out her attack. This time when she flicks her fingers toward the enemy the energy is a slightly darker pink hue. Hitting the enemy, if it hits the enemy, it will inflict the same absent mindedness from before only this one is harder to shake the victim from. The range this time is 15feet but it can only hit the one target. Also, this attack lasts forty seconds and can be used twice in combat.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Brain assault.
Beginning the same as the prior two attacks, Valeria calls out her attack bringing back the same light. However, this time, it is fainter than before and travels quite quickly. When she flicks it away from her body, it is able to travel up to a 15ft radius in all directions before fading away. This attack, unlike the previous ones, does not affect a single person but is an aoe attacking which will affect every order signature within its range. If one is struck by the light, the person will suddenly be overcome with cluster headaches. The intensity varies based on how close the target is to Valeria. Right on top of her and the headache is unbearable. 15ft away and it is more of an annoyance. It is possible to dodge this and it only lasts for fifteen seconds and can be used once in battle. This attack, like the other two, can be avoided by stepping out of range.


*What is a cluster headache? Cluster headaches are one of the most painful types of headache. A Cluster headache commonly awakens you in the middle of the night with intense pain in or around one eye on one side of your head.
A cluster headache strikes quickly, usually without warning. Common signs and symptoms include:




  • Excruciating pain, generally located in or around one eye, but may radiate to other areas of your face, head, neck and shoulders
  • One-sided pain
  • Restlessness
  • Excessive tearing
  • Redness in your eye on the affected side
  • Stuffy or runny nasal passage in your nostril on the affected side of your face
  • Sweaty, pale skin (pallor) on your face
  • Swelling around your eye on the affected side of your face
  • Drooping eyelid


The pain of a cluster headache is often described as sharp, penetrating or burning. People with this condition say that the pain feels like a hot poker being stuck in the eye or that the eye is being pushed out of its socket.

People with cluster headache appear restless. They may pace or sit through the attack. In contrast to people with migraine, people with cluster headache usually avoid lying down during an attack because this position seems to increase the pain.

Some migraine-like symptoms — including nausea, sensitivity to light and sound, and aura — may occur with a cluster headache, though usually on one side.

*Absentminded: So lost in thought that one does not realize what one is doing, what is happening, etc.; preoccupied to the extent of being unaware of one's immediate surroundings.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 07, 2014 9:43 am


Sleet Tempest Snape


Hey Sleet,

I looked over your girl and she looks pretty good to me. Her hobbies are cute and while I like the shopping and it has unique spin on it. The only note I have for the profile is about her selfless flaw. Its evident in her virtues and hobbies, but not in her flaw so much. It reads more like she has a problem with taking on to much and time management, because it often refers to her having a lack of time.

I have a few things to say about her attacks and her senshi name needs a link too. Her first is a bit too long, we try to keep the first attack to a minute or under. I would say this is easily fixed my making it 20 secs if you want it be used 3 times or using it twice if you want a longer duration. That attack needs a range added to it, I would suggest somewhere in between 5-10ft. For her super she will also need a range. I suggest somewhere between 10-15ft.

I like her eternal attack. I would however suggest since it is so very short in its effect to let the light spead out into an AOE and have it effect everyone in the range or all order member, or what have you. Otherwise it looks good.

Quote me back when you are ready for a second look through.

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Sleet Tempest Snape

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 07, 2014 6:43 pm


Kaori_luv
Sleet Tempest Snape


Hey Sleet,

I looked over your girl and she looks pretty good to me. Her hobbies are cute and while I like the shopping and it has unique spin on it. The only note I have for the profile is about her selfless flaw. Its evident in her virtues and hobbies, but not in her flaw so much. It reads more like she has a problem with taking on to much and time management, because it often refers to her having a lack of time.

I have a few things to say about her attacks and her senshi name needs a link too. Her first is a bit too long, we try to keep the first attack to a minute or under. I would say this is easily fixed my making it 20 secs if you want it be used 3 times or using it twice if you want a longer duration. That attack needs a range added to it, I would suggest somewhere in between 5-10ft. For her super she will also need a range. I suggest somewhere between 10-15ft.

I like her eternal attack. I would however suggest since it is so very short in its effect to let the light spead out into an AOE and have it effect everyone in the range or all order member, or what have you. Otherwise it looks good.

Quote me back when you are ready for a second look through.

Think I'm all good now Kao, ty. ^__^ ::Snuggles::
PostPosted: Fri Nov 07, 2014 9:13 pm


Sleet Tempest Snape


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The changes look good, have fun playing her!

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