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PostPosted: Thu Aug 28, 2014 7:38 pm


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Name: Stryke Nvrmor (Also goes by Ryk)

Stryke: To be precise. To make strategical strikes. Pronounced Stry-kuh (soft vowel)

Nvrmor: "Quoth the raven." There's no particular reason for this combination, it just happened to suit him!

Blood Colour: yellowblood spectrum - #c1b41d

Gender: Male

Symbol: A Hourglass (doesn't have to be exactly like this if you have a better design in mind)

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Stryke is a practical troll, and mostly concerned with the actual application or use of something instead of the theory and ideas behind it. He applies himself in full to his studies and is level headed and efficient, but gives into speculative trains of thought on occasion. Stryke’s logic usually falls more into the deductive reasoning category; linking premises with conclusions. He follows the necessary truths of life. His sense of right and wrong is jaded; nothing is black or white for him. Knowledge, result, and definitive action are things he covets. Stryke views things like exercising, making small chat and petty arguments a complete waste of his time. He feels there are always better things to be doing in a given night, and is lazy when it comes to physical fitness. In Stryke's eyes wasting precious time is deplorable, and it quickly grates on his nerves.

He tends to use vague abstract concepts when speaking about or describing difficult tasks and situations. This is due to the fact he has trouble speaking out loud under pressure. In addition having the spotlight on him makes his stammering worse. Stryke doesn't like to talk out loud in large group situations due to doubting his presentation abilities. However, when he is extremely passionate and caught up in what he is talking about, he temporarily forgets his embarrassment. Stryke is most likely to be verbose during in-depth conversations and dialogues pertaining to his personal interests. He also tends to allude to things without directly stating what they are. Speaking in riddles is also something he's good at doing. Although his cryptic wording usually is meant to be helpful, it’s usually troublesome. Ryk likes to see others think, and make connections of their own accord.

Stryke is not one to stand up for himself in the face of physical confrontation or violence. He prefers to work behind the scenes, using his intellect to advance along projects and tasks. He prefers to focus all his efforts on one thing at a time rather than multitask. When he is threatened or backed into a corner Stryke relies on his wit first and foremost. He will make sassy, witty remarks that could lead to his getting into serious trouble depending on the troll. Stryke also uses his words as his shield from the world; they protect him or so he thinks. He isn't the type to haul off and hit, or shove someone when he's angry unless backed into a corner. He doesn't have a word filter, and calls things like he sees it.

In addition to anger and physical manifestations thereof, Stryke represses his other emotions as well; he believes that outward displays, especially those of sorrow, make him appear weak. He also fears being belittled, and hates being talked down to. Stryke would rather wear an emotional mask than be humiliated. He is emotionally guarded and slow to trust others. His secrets are his to keep, and none else but his closest friends have a chance at hearing them. Exchanging personal information is a topic he'd rather avoid. He prefers to listen to others above all else, and doesn’t like sharing personal information about himself.

Ryk does a lot of internal stewing over life, and is his own worst critic. The young troll fears he will amount to nothing in his life. For all his calculations and methodical practices, he cannot account for everything. Only time will tell if his attitude towards most new situations will bring him out of his shell. He is reclusive and simply doesn't like the company of most trolls.

Kindness, while a simple gesture, has a way of leaving a lasting impression with him. This is especially noted from those that respect Stryke’s space boundaries and don’t force themselves onto him unless allowed. Stryke is a firm believer in the concept time will heal all wounds, and is known to be forgiving even when he shouldn’t. While he is selective in choosing those he calls friends once chosen they have his complete trust and faith for better or worse.

Another important thing to note about Stryke is that he really enjoys playing the role of a model host. This extension goes to any potential guests he may have. This includes picking up after them, feeding them, and making sure they are content and happy during their stay even if it is an inconvenience or burden to himself.

As far as the hemospectrum goes, Stryke adheres to it as a fact of life by falling in place to his superiors. He approaches dangerous situations like high bloods cautiously by default. He knows when he is out matched, and will readily bend to the will of those of a higher caste than himself. Stryke does not try to assume leadership when those of a higher caste are present, and is ultimately a follower. Stryke knows how dangerous it is to sympathize with the rebel cause, and while he feels it unwise to oppose the system in place, he believes the movement is inherently good.

Stryke does not like being touched. He is introverted, and would rather share someone’s space without touching them. It is not a pathological drive; it simply is a learned behavior. His lusus does not like to cuddle or be close and Stryke follows this trend. They both reserve physical contact only for when it’s absolutely necessary. Even while close, Stryke usually keeps just out of arm’s reach when possible. This is only challenged when Stryke is reading; he likes to have a shoulder to lean on and does not mind the physical contact so long as he isn’t being harassed.

On the matter of keeping himself entertained and pre-occupied, Stryke loves to do large amounts of reading. He especially enjoys fiction, murder mysteries, and history books. Romance novels embarrass him and are rarely, if ever are touched. The troll's version of the Lord of the Rings is his absolute favorite, as is The Hobbit. He re-reads his copies of them frequently as daytime bed stories. However Stryke truly will read anything he can get his hands on, trusting it isn’t lewd in nature.

The occasional elongated grouping of three ‘S’ sounds Ryk makes is most noticeable when he is angry or stressed. Hissing noises are not uncommon from him, and is used mostly in expressing extreme disdain or annoyance. His verbal grammar is structurally sound but tends to have slight slurs to it. His writing is without misspellings, always in lowercase, and is mostly grammatically correct.

Strengths:

+ Patient: Stryke is capable of enduring great amounts of pressure, stress and conflict. He is stalwart and steady, even in the most difficult of situations that would even try the most patient of saints. Stryke is also great with his forbearance's under most circumstances. His ability at bearing provocation, annoyances, misfortune, delay and even hardships are done without complaint or anger. He does not mind waiting for events and trolls even without a resolution in site. Ryk is evenly tempered, and slow to anger. He is very tolerant and understanding, and works tirelessly to accomplish whatever he's set his mind to.

+ Organized: Being on time, and prompt is important. Both are crucial and valued in the highest regards by Stryke. He is very good with planning and arranging things along with helping carry out activities. Prompt and immediate care is provided and he keeps useful information readily on hand. If something needs to be cleaned, or arranged into a more cohesive manner, he’ll gladly take up the challenge. He keeps his thoughts written in a journal he carries around, and makes notes about other trolls he’s met along the way. Keeping things neat and orderly come naturally to him.

+/- Attentive: Attention to detail never seems to escape him. He is watchful and takes a lot of mental notes. He pays close attention to what’s going on around him, and is concerned with the needs of others. He'll go out of his way to do some one a favor if it means the job will get done. Stryke is slow to trust others; his concern is limited to those he’s close with. If someone needs something he’ll be one of the first to notice. With his obsessive attention to detail he is diligent in his adventures and goals. Stryke is very particular about how things are done, and in what order. His attention to detail means he fusses and picks over things that aren't done right by his standards. Small details like a loose thread on another troll (or himself) does not go unnoticed, and will result in his wanting to fix it, or make corrections. Nothing can be off center or out of place for long. Nothing. These reactions are instantaneous, and usually off the wall in nature.


Flaws:

- Possessive: Stryke is a little possessive over his friends, but even moreso over his possessions. Being a lower caste, he hasn't had much in life, and values his things. He stubbornly holds onto what’s his even if that means getting angry and loud. This is commonly experienced as a result of desire, and insecurity on his part. He is determined to protect his self-interests, including his usual routines and daily habits. While he doesn't like confrontation, what belongs to him is clearly his. Sharing is only permissible when sometroll has asked for it, but the likely answer will still be no even if it makes him appear selfish. What is his will stay his, even if that means pushing a point in order to maintain it.

- Detached: Stryke is an emotionally closed off, guarded individual. He is aloof, objective, and reluctant to disclose himself to others. While he'll listen to anytroll who is in need, he is not good at returning the gesture. Personal information is his to keep, and divulge as he sees fit. Deepening relationships proves challenging as he shuts down on topics when he doesn't feel comfortable. Fear of making himself look foolish or like he’s not accomplished enough in life fuel this anxiety ridden fire. He’s embarrassed about his secrets, even when they aren't a big deal to others. Stryke intends to keep them to himself by saving face and hiding them. Personal limits on how close a particular friendship are frequently set. This only changes when loyalty and worth are proven. This stance is extremely disruptive in the connection process with others, as he avoids talking about himself directly at the cost of being downright rude and dismissive when prodded for more details.

- Resigned: Life is what it is. Stryke is submissive and accepting of things that might be unpleasant, or that one cannot do anything about. He is easily caught up in ideals, and like-minded goals of others. He is bitter about his blood caste perceived powerlessness, and his being near the bottom of the food chain in terms of hierarchy. While he wants nothing more than to be stubborn about whats right and wrong, he’d rather be alive than culled and forgotten. Stryke feels its only logical he’d side with those more powerful than himself. In his yielding and relinquishing power, it means he passes off control or care to others readily. He accepts the inevitable as it also steels himself for the worst possible outcome.

Weapon: A pair of twin 2d6 standard daggers shaped like hour and minute hands.

Appearance: Stryke's stature is smaller than the average trolls, in that he simply is just plain short even for his age. He is both petite, and of a rather slim of build. Stryke horn’s look something like this (never mind the hair). They curve upwards and out, and are extremely sharp at their points. They resemble bronze dragons horns (see bronze dragon flight in world of warcraft) He has a pair of pointed eye-teeth that poke out of his mouth. His hair is long, if not outright overgrown. It is rather on the shaggy side, with bangs that hang freely. (see the reference image above) He keeps his hair in a loose ponytail, and rarely removes the yellow tie. He wears a grey and black long sleeve polo-like sweater that has three buttons all of which are done. His hourglass symbol is readily on the front of his shirt, in his given blood color. Stryke also tends to wear long dark grey/black jeans, and black and white slip on checkered shoes as a kid.

Home: Stryke was originally a resident of Old Hemisect City. He was recently caught in the tides of war. His home was near the beach, in the Bungalow district. A once abandoned hive, the troll and Skink-Dad ended up taking on the place, and made some adjustments. It is filled with his mini library collection he’s managed to amass. Stryke always ensures his lusus is fed, and cared for including the heating rock SkinDad uses. He equally will fan his Lusus' ego in hopes of obtaining more novels to add to his collection. The pair likes to sit down for reading time and Stryke will occasionally lean back against the lusus instead of using a chair. Everything is neatly arranged in his Hive. Everything has its place, and a neat list is kept to catalog his inventory. All titles are sorted according to alphabetical and numerical filing. SkinkDad has heated rocks for sleeping on in the evening and regulating body temperatures. The building was a standard grade block, with two levels, the upper being used as a reading and study room primarily.

Note: Following the resolution of OHC event, Stryke is currently hiveless and will have to find a new place to live. He has since applied for a voucher to acquire a new hive and will be staying in Chittentown. The new hive is tiny compared to his last one. It is run down, and namely lacks his prized book collection. It has a new recuperacoon, and heated rocks for his lusus to sleep on at the very least. Luckily it is close to the local library, but Ryk views it simply a place to retreat from the heat. He finds the new climate uncomfortable, and is bothered by all the dirt, dust and sand.

Lusus: Stryke's lusus is a large Skink-like creature. He is a massive four legged lizard that is referred to as a “HissBeast”. He is most commonly known as Skinkdad, by Ryk, or simply Dad. He is firm, watchful, and harsh in his piercing stare. SkinkDad has always been quick to guilt and scold his ward into getting whats needed done. He expects things to be done and completed before a new task can begin. Stryke learned from the reptilian lusus many of these traits and regards his dad with the utmost respect. SkinkDad does not like to be poked and prodded at and will lash out if hassled beyond its comfort zone. He is a fairly large lusus and could be compared to the size of male Komodo dragon. He is about 259cm in length and weighs approximately 92.2kg. Long and sleek with a whip like tail, he has a nasty set of claws and fangs. SkinkDad is not without compassion, despite being reserved and set in his ways. SkinkDad always seems to know when Stryke needs to be calmed, or is emotionally frazzled. A lot of Stryke's calm, watchful and patient mannerisms come from his studying of the white and grey-scaled beast.

For SkinkDad, it was the troll’s scent that attracted him to the yellowblood. That and their shared blood color sealed the deal after the tiny troll had finished his trials. The fact the little fellow had hissed at him had also helped to win over the lusus's heart. He is an overbearing lusus and expects the absolute best out of Stryke. This comes with its draw backs, as Stryke feels he must constantly live up to his guardians expectations. SkinkDad doesn't want to see his troll-son half a** something or make partial commitments. His lusus wants to see Stryke grow up strong, and smart, for that matter. SkinkDad has never been the type to frequently check on his ward with any regularity. He's more likely to creep up on Stryke when he least expects it. He encourages Ryk to play life on the safe side, and not to engage in risky business. His calm, stern influence does not generally extend to other strange trolls. While he wouldn't out right attack or harm someone unknown, if he felt like his charge was in danger that would change in a heartbeat.

As reptiles often live long lives the HissBeast brought his new troll ward to a place within the Old Hemisect district, as he was well acquainted with the lay of the land. Following the destruction of the last Hive they stayed in together, the lizard-lusus is pleased by the desert terrain they now call home. He doesn't get what Stryke's fuss over the weather is all about. While he's use to Stryke doing most of his foraging, SkinkDad always ensures there is enough to drink and eat around the hive for the pair. The lusus is mostly carnivorous, but also can eat other fruit and vegetable like substances. SkinkDad has a special fondness for insects and frogs, which Stryke ensures he has regularly. Small rodents are also not out of the question.


"being a pesssimist is great. i’m always either right or pleasantly sssurprised."
PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2014 3:24 pm


Hey Leon! Glad to see you enjoyed your meta troll enough to quest for him and I enjoyed reading his profile. There are just a few things I wanted to go over.

I'm getting a little bit of a mixed signal when it comes to Stryke's communication. You mention that he is practical and crafty with his words, yet when speaking on difficult subjects, he is vague and abstract, despite possibly knowing what he is talking about. Is it that he has a hard time speaking out loud, but is good with the written word? Is there any particular reason why his writing is near perfect, but when speaking he seems to lose that (I'm mostly just curious about this one, since it could be a neat little quirk to his personality)?

When it comes to his relationships with others, you mention that his strength lies in his dedication to his team. Since he doesn't make friends with just anyone, what would someone have to do to prove themselves to him or become his close friend? Why would he work so hard for someone else, does it have to do with a personal relationship between them or is it simply because they share a goal? I'd like to understand at what level he would choose to dedicate himself to someone else.

In the same vein, you mention he is concerned with others' needs and accommodating. If he is so slow to trust, does his concerned nature extend to everyone or just his friends? If everyone, why?

If Ryk is resigned to the way the world is, why does he go against tradition and how? Does he actually make any outward attempts at change or does he simply stew internally?

Finally, you mention that his jealousy can lead him to violence when defending what is perceived as his. However, he is the rational type who prefers to avoid confrontation. I'd possibly reconsider this jump to violence unless it happens a significant amount of the time. Perhaps he could just get angry and loud instead. Or, if you'd prefer to keep that aspect, I'd consider at what level he would resort to physical altercation, whether he would react that way even towards a highblood, and how quick or not he would be in backing down from a jealousy-induced fight.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 05, 2014 7:17 pm


Hiya Sae! Yes I did rather enjoy playing as my little shorty McGee. The meta was amazing and I really am looking forward to playing more with everyone.

Stryke does have a hard time with public speaking and gets uncomfortable when the spot lights on him. He uses his round about manner of speaking to deflect from this. He also tends to allude to things, without directly stating them. He likes to see others think, and make connections on their own accord. Writing has always kept his thoughts organized, and easier to glance over then trying to draft something on the spot. Its why he prefers to complete a project or task, and have a moment to go over his results and formulate a game plan before beginning a new. He’s not completely inflexible, as he is constantly trying to learn and improve himself. Writing is a quick stress reliever, and gives him something to look at visually to focus on .

I flushed out this little quirk a bit and added it to his personality section. It's a good point to focus on, and I tried to convey that more clearly.

Sharing a common goal is good basis for why he’d work for some one. Stryke is the type to work harder for someone he knows on a personal level however. He is slow to trust others; his concern is limited to those he’s close with. Dedication to others comes when they’ve proven themselves worthy, i.e they’ve served a purpose beyond being a waste of space. Trying to care for the needs of the mass, is what landed him on the opposite side of what’s traditional despite his reservations. He went against tradition initially with the belief he could somehow make a difference for all the world of Alternia. His logic usually falls more into the deductive reasoning category by linking premises with conclusions. As he'd been forced from his home, and in over his head he believed what he was doing was the necessary truth.

His first real attempt at making outward change, met in his being promptly put back in his place as a lowblood. It will take some time before he tries to be so bold and forth coming again. Internal stewing is defiantly a thing for him as he is his own worst critic. Stryke doesn’t have the emotional energy to be concerned with every living troll, and keeps it focused to those he’s befriended. Usually those who persist in communication, or have proven handy in some fashion or another are likely to be ones he stays in contact with. Kindness while a simple gesture has a way of leaving a lasting impression (especially those that respect Stryke space boundaries, and don’t force themselves onto him).

The violence can easily be scaled back to just getting angry and loud and would suit him better I agree! Stryke was never the first to lash out type and stayed consistently on that path as the meta unraveled. I’ve edited out that he gets out right violent, as he is the type to fold under conflict rather than stand up. That doesn’t stop him from getting mouthy and snarky when he’s been wronged, for all the good it’ll do. Around higherblood casts he does tend to curve his attitude to avoid being targeted or worse.

I’ll add a few more things in and submit him for re-review thanks again for the input Sae it helped!


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Also plan on going back and combining some stuff, and fixing a few awkward sentences before reposting. Clarified a few things i realized i missed. I addressed how he interacts with others, as well as the fact why he's reclusive. I also fixed some sentence structures green pointed out and tried to keep all the information relevant together vs jumped around. Green pointed a few things out to me and I tried to incorporate that as well :3
PostPosted: Sat Sep 27, 2014 3:59 pm


[ Stryke is looking really good! I only have a couple areas I’m interested to know more about.

Specifically in the area of Stryke’s flaws, I’d like to hear more about how Stryke’s obsessiveness poses a problem to him. Right now, it sounds quite a bit like his attentiveness strength. His eye for detail being a double-edged sword is great, and I’d like to hear more about it, especially considering how Stryke is normally so resigned. Is his reaction to being bothered immediate and visceral, or does he try to ignore it for as long as he can? When he sees something that’s “not right” how vocal is he about it? When someone else is in the wrong, does he tell them upright, or is he passive-aggressive about it? How far will he push himself in the pursuit of perfection?

As for Stryke’s resignation flaw, how does he view his readiness to cede power to others? Is he bitter about his perceived powerlessness, or does he rationalize his decision as “the logical choice?” Is his resignation something that Stryke is aware of, or is it a subconscious trait?

And lastly, I’d like to hear more about Skinkdad! What is his relationship with Stryke like? There’s a mention of Stryke trying to brownnose his lusus—does this mean Skinkdad is a strict parent? Is there ever a personality clash between the two of them, or do they have fairly similar values and priorities? How does Skinkdad react to trolls that aren’t Stryke?

Mm’kay! All my other questions were covered by Sae and your most recent update!
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 30, 2014 9:22 pm


Sure let’s see if I can get you some more details about him!

I didn’t really think about it, but now that you point it out his attention to detail is a double edged sword! His reaction to things being out of place or off center are instantaneous, and usually result in his making a comment, or some off the wall remark. For example, if a pictures off center, he’ll want to walk over and straighten it on principle. Otherwise it bothers him, and causes him to focus on the out of place object (or troll for that matter given a situation where he feels some detail is out of place).

I think with this crit in mind, im going to combine his Obsessive/Attentive traits as a +/- because they so closely go hand in hand. I’m going to add Detached to his list, and elaborate negatively on how that hinders him~ Stryke is pretty closed off, and is guarded in all honesty. He is aloof, objective and reluctant to disclose himself to others. Iit hinders him in deepening relationships. He’ll shut down topics when he doesn’t feel comfortable, and often will hit a personal limit on how close a particular friendship can get. It is disruptive to the connection process with others as he avoids talking about himself at the cost of being downright rude. He doesn’t want it getting out he supported rebel forces even if for a short time and lives in fear of being found for what he’s done.

As for his resignation flaw, he’s afraid of being picked on for simply being who he is and folds pretty readily when confronted or pressed too hard to peer pressure. He is bitter about his blood caste perceived powerlessness, and his being near bottom of the food chain in that regards. Stryke wants to be stubborn about what’s “right” in the world, but trolls like that usually end up dead and forgotten by his account. Its only logical he’d side with those more powerful than himself, and works out in the end if he can come out ahead.

Also I will extend on his relationship with SkinkDad no problem! He does brown nose to his Dad, because his lusii expects the best out of him. He is rather strict, but is at least a good caretaker overall. I might reword this, but his Lusus has always been an overbearing guardian. No half assing jobs or partial commitments. His lusus wants his boy to grow up strong, and smart for that matter. He encourages him to play life on the safe side and not do risky business. SkinkDad is watchful, and doesn’t care for strange trolls. He won’t out right attack/harm a stranger unless he feels his charge is under direct threat/harm. I’ll elaborate on the form.

Thanks again for the crit Cylem it got me thinking :>

let me know if I can fix/improve on anything else!

edit; 1/8/15; I removed Clever, and added Patient. I feel it strongly suits his archtype, and more closely follows how he behaves and interacts with others. I can elaborate on this if needed beyond the blurb ive added and minor tweaks to his bio if something sticks out as wrong/not flowing!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 2:57 pm


Hey Leon! Time for a crit.

One of the things I’m noticing with your application is that Stryke’s personality is making sense, but the app itself could use a bit better organization. For instance, right off the bat you have
“Stryke is a practical troll, and mostly concerned with the actual application or use of something instead of the theory and ideas behind it. He is a firm believer in the concept that time will mend all wounds. Stryke applies himself in full to his studies and is level headed, efficient, but gives into speculative trains of thoughts on occasion. “

The first and third sentences are both related to his efficiency and how he enjoys logic but sometimes goes into abstract theories, but the second sentence seems out of place. I would suggest doing a bit of copy-pasting and figuring out what traits you can group together for easy reading, which will make making those connections easier. That’s pretty nitpicky though!

For how he speaks I’m getting that he is verbose, alludes to things cryptically and with riddles, and let others come to their own conclusions. That is really interesting! (I’m sure many trolls would just about have it with his manner of speaking). I do wonder about this trait: “When agitated or annoyed, he tends to rely on sassy remarks and wit to keep himself going.”

I’m not sure exactly what the context is for this statement. Does he pump himself up by being snappy in order to find confidence to speak to others, or…? I guess you’ll need to give me an example of when he relies on sass to “keep himself going”, because currently I can see him snapping with wit as a result of frustration but not as a coping mechanism. Though that is intriguing!

You mention he likes murder mysteries, but not fiction. Does this mean he only likes real-world murder mysteries, or is it an exception to the rule?

I’m a little confused by Stryke’s “jealous” trait. You describe his possessiveness, which reads to me as “greedy”, not jealous. Also, “His fits of jealousy when he perceives something to have been done wrongly are off putting.” Does not describe jealous behavior (coveting the possessions or achievements of others), and doesn’t really describe greedy behavior either! Figure out what you mean here and solidify this flaw! I think “possessive” is a good trait to explore for this: it may imply that he has a set routine that he enjoys and if someone does something wrong they may be upsetting HIS way of doing it. Just a suggestion!

That’s what I got!

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 11, 2015 3:23 am


Ah, I see what you mean about the layout. I'll drag his bio over into word and try and shift some stuff around so its more cohesive!

I also forgot to add the fact he really likes playing the role of host to any potential guests he may have. That includes picking up after them, feeding them and making sure they are content and happy during their stay even if it is an inconvenience on himself.

Honestly Ive always seen his throwing insults or snapping back at some one with wit as a defense/coping mechanism for him. His words are his shield, they protect him, or so he thinks anyway. He isn't the type to haul off and hit, or shove some one when he's angry unless backed into a corner. I'll reword this a little bit, and flush this out.

In a nut shell; when he is threatened or backed into a corner he relies on his wit first, and will make sassy remarks that could lead to his getting in serious trouble depending on the troll. When he's annoyed, he doesnt have a word filter, and calls it like he sees it.

I'm not actually sure why I said he doesn't like fiction, that should have been in the love/like bit. his favorite series is the troll version of the hobbit/LOTR (the kids practically a hobbit himself lol) so im sort of just squinting at my life choices and assuming I forgot to edit that bit into his personality when I first was trying to port him over to Hivestuck. I'll fix that~! And make note of his extreme discomfort around romance/mooshy stuff. It just flat out embarrasses him to the point of avoidance.

Possessive does sound a lot more like the idea I was going for, I'll reword that flaw and clean it up. He is very routine-like and has set times when he does activities through out the day, and some one doing something against that would cause direst yes! Ive reworked that bit~

I think that's everything! Thanks for the Crit Sypon it was mucho helpful :> I'll go weave in the needed changes.

edited 1/13/2015; Got everything incorporated and reworked!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 10:20 am


hi friend!

i'm a little confused why 'exercising' is seen as a waste of time to him since it's very practical and definitely never a waste in terms of taking care of yourself
exercise > mental & physical health and strength > success in endeavours



it's a teensy and everything else looks good! feel free to quote me directly with the reply and we can work out acceptance from there biggrin

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 16, 2015 3:04 pm


ohai there ami :3 !

Stryke in a nut shell on the topic of exercise; while its practical to take care of oneself, he is just plain and simply lazy and doesn't want to do it! He would rather spend his time doing other things is all~

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