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 Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:49 am
cause i sometimes do art and s**t and getting good critiques is helpful so this thread is for posting art/graphics/etc, maybe for the AURB and getting CONSTRUCTIVE critiques on them so you can get better biggrin 
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 3:54 am
Oh neat! I'll definitely be using this when I have some things to show redface
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:02 am
RabbleRosie Oh neat! I'll definitely be using this when I have some things to show redface yeah ^^ im half doing this to give my friends a break from looking at my art every hour or two OTL
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:09 am
Eren Jaegerbomb RabbleRosie Oh neat! I'll definitely be using this when I have some things to show redface yeah ^^ im half doing this to give my friends a break from looking at my art every hour or two OTL I'd love to see your art, and anybody else's tbh. I'm not really good at critique but I'd try redface
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:15 am
I'd love to see your art, and anybody else's tbh. I'm not really good at critique but I'd try redface this is what im working on atm OTL so much to fix but i have a week till its due im okay at critiquing art, but i can sometimes be a bit blunt and it offends people OTL
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 4:23 am
Eren Jaegerbomb I'd love to see your art, and anybody else's tbh. I'm not really good at critique but I'd try redface this is what im working on atm OTL so much to fix but i have a week till its due im okay at critiquing art, but i can sometimes be a bit blunt and it offends people OTL There's not a whole lot that's big to fix tbh! I'd maybe change what the mouth is doing a little and add like a sliver of the light shirt color somewhere on the right side but I dunno I'm not really good with perspective or anything so maybe not. I wish I had some really serious art like that to show but I haven't really done anything even mildly realistic since high school art class.
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:03 am
RabbleRosie There's not a whole lot that's big to fix tbh! I'd maybe change what the mouth is doing a little and add like a sliver of the light shirt color somewhere on the right side but I dunno I'm not really good with perspective or anything so maybe not. I wish I had some really serious art like that to show but I haven't really done anything even mildly realistic since high school art class. sadly there is plenty, i gotta add whispy bits to the hair, make them look less like thin dreadlocks, and start the shirt xD i havent done it yet. the light is coming from the top right hand side if that helps? i keep imagining her with no arm and just a giant hand connected to her shoulder, foreshortening ******** s**t up man i'm doing an animation degree in college so im doing a lot of artwork.
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 5:18 am
Eren Jaegerbomb RabbleRosie There's not a whole lot that's big to fix tbh! I'd maybe change what the mouth is doing a little and add like a sliver of the light shirt color somewhere on the right side but I dunno I'm not really good with perspective or anything so maybe not. I wish I had some really serious art like that to show but I haven't really done anything even mildly realistic since high school art class. sadly there is plenty, i gotta add whispy bits to the hair, make them look less like thin dreadlocks, and start the shirt xD i havent done it yet. the light is coming from the top right hand side if that helps? i keep imagining her with no arm and just a giant hand connected to her shoulder, foreshortening ******** s**t up man i'm doing an animation degree in college so im doing a lot of artwork. Niiiice, my friend wants to go into animation real bad. I dunno how natural light should look on a human face because I haven't seen the sun in so long [[sweats]]. Also I kind of thought those were dreadlocks yeah but dreadlocks are cool surprised It is really good for not being done yet though! I'm trying to do more stuff traditionally starting this week cause it's actually getting really hard to even write with a pencil and paper. Maybe if I can do literally anything worth looking at I can scan it and show you. 'v'
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:08 am
So...I guess I can try and be brave and throw up some examples of the kind of art I am able to offer. I really need someone who knows how to color art also if anyone wants a side job or to partner up later for some art fundraising...or critiques/pricing would also be welcomed! * varied types of styles can be seen here.
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 7:17 am
iNk_mAy So...I guess I can try and be brave and throw up some examples of the kind of art I am able to offer. I really need someone who knows how to color art also if anyone wants a side job or to partner up later for some art fundraising...or critiques/pricing would also be welcomed! * varied types of styles can be seen here.Those look amazing! biggrin But, Number 2's mouth and Number 4's hands are sorta...awkward. heart
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 7:27 am
Face seems more pleasantly shocked than... " eek I'm gonna fall and die." Perhaps furrow the brow? Wait, make that'd make her look more disturbed than shocked... confused mrgreen
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 10:28 am
I would widen the eyes more and maybe add some scratch marks on the plank for a dramatic effect so it looked like she was trying not to fall. Other than that it looks nice. Hope you get a good grade. heart
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 10:59 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:32 pm
Sorry, this is off topic in the thread, but that comic in your signature is fantastic! emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 2:54 pm
Eren Jaegerbomb this is what im working on atm OTL so much to fix but i have a week till its due im okay at critiquing art, but i can sometimes be a bit blunt and it offends people OTL The left eyebrow maybe should come in a bit more toward the nose? Just seems off to me? But damn...that's freakin awesome! EDIT:: Blown away by all the awesomeness in this thread...good lordy!
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