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Name: Evren Porter

Nickname: Ren

Age: 16

Birthday: January 3rd

Sign: Capricorn

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: B-

Fav. Food: Apples, Rice, Tea and of course sweets

Hated Food: Not any that she can think of but she doesn’t care for the taste of coffee

School: Transferring to Meadowview High School

Hobbies:

Sewing-- Evren enjoys making clothing in fact all of her bizarre ensembles that she wears for casual clothes are made herself. From all the types of lolita clothing, to traditional clothes like kimonos she makes and wears them all like they aren't out of place. Though, honestly she is mostly making little hats and outfits for cats and dogs. Evren doesn't really make new clothes for herself unless she feels that she needs them.

Journaling--Not so much a hobby but something she feels is something that is absolutely necessary for her to do. Evren has memory problems and can’t remember really much anything before she came to live with her current family. She always carries a notebook with her, she not only writes about people she meets but sketches their faces in as well. This is mostly due to how she feels like she had a blood relative but can’t remember what they look like.

Pet Walking--Evren helps out at her family’s veterinary clinic making sure all the animals are groomed but she also runs her pet walking from the clinic. It’s mostly because she and the animals end up a bit attached to each other.

Virtues:

Friendly--Evren is kind to everyone to the point where some people find it unsettling. She is always smiling and even kind to people she just meets. The only downside to this overly friendly girl is that she is quick to invade a person’s space and declare them her new friend.

Caring-- Evren will do anything she can for a friend in need... this also applies to her animal friends. While she herself may not pick up on people's emotions once she learns that you are upset she definitely won't leave you alone.

Smarter than she seems-- While a bit spacey and forgetful she's actually pretty smart when it comes to understanding school stuff... but then again it always seems to be the smart ones who don't seem to understand other people easily.

Flaws:

Oblivious – Can’t read the atmosphere or take a hint is an understatement with this girl. Evren is completely out of tune with other people’s emotions. It’s so bad that she can’t seem to pick up on if someone is mad or sad until they explode.

Spacey—Evren is a bit spacey and even a bit of an airhead at times. It makes her seem a bit unreliable. Sometimes its so bad that when she spaces out so much when she walks somewhere she ends up somewhere completely different.

Overbearing-- Sometimes Evren can go completely overboard in tasks she sets out to complete. After all not everyone can handle the constant invasion of personal space. This might stem from that she needs to feel useful in someway or that she doesn't comprehend some people just need time to mope.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Reference Pic:Evren

Eyes: She has large oval shaped eyes that are orange.

Hair: Colour, style, accessories. Her hair is a crimson color from the top of her head to her ears past that it becomes and orange amber color. Her hair is wavy and only reaches her shoulders so she doesn't really put it up but she does wear a single butterfly barrette that is gold with orange accents.

Face: She has light skin and an heart shape face.

FashionWell aside from the track outfit she uses to walk the animals with her casual outfits range from frilly lolita to all kinds of kimonos and stuff... though her most common outfit she wears is actually a combination of the two in wa lolita.

Hi, Stump Fairy! I think this is a cute quest! I think her virtues look good, but some of her traits are a little too specific and might need to have a little more information so I can get a better idea of what type of character she is! For example, Animal lover could also fit under hobbies because it talks a lot about something she does rather than who she is. What about her being an animal lover is admirable or would make people like her? Is there another personality trait behind her that makes her an animal lover? Is she sensitive or caring or protective? All of those are traits that I think could easily tie in to being virtues, which affect a wide variety of situations and can be used every day rather than just for one specific thing!

For her flaws, Oblivious definitely works! The other two flaws I have some questions about, but I think we might be able to make them work! With her cuddlebug flaw, this reads to me as overbearing or invasive. When writing flaws I think it is important to remember that you have to think about what that flaw says about them as a person and look at it and ask what about that trait would make people unhappy! Flaws are supposed to be things that make a person less appealing, and should be able to be used in a wide variety of situations. Cuddlebug is a flaw that would only extend to animals who don’t like cuddling, so it is a little too specific! But, if you wanted to change the flaw to something like overbearing, you could then include how she can sometimes go overboard and gets in people's personal space or business, especially when small animals are involved! Please note that you do not have to change the profile to say that, it is just an example!

It is the same thing with No sense of direction! This is more of a fact about her rather than a personality flaw, but saying that she is spacey could definitely be a flaw! If you changed the flaw to Spacey you could then say that it affects her sense of direction, but also makes her seem kind of airheaded! Being airheaded is a good flaw because it might make you seem unreliable or goofy!

Sorry if that is confusing! If you have questions about these, you can ask me and I will try to help as soon as I can!

For her powered side, it looks like you are doing this pretty well, so don't worry! Portals are a really neat sphere!

For her sailor scout attack, I think this is a neat idea and sounds good! If you wanted to simplify things, I think it would be okay if you wanted to change the attack to say that she could create three portals, each which has a duration of fifteen seconds, and if an enemy's attack is directed at it, then the portal can immediately reflect it back at them? If the attack passes through the portal, it could shoot back out the other side right back at them! Just an idea, you don't have to do it! If you wanted, you can keep her attacks the way they are!

For her super attack, this is a neat idea but I think this might be too close to the Negaverse ability to teleport, and the super attack also must be an upgraded version of her first stage attack. So, her super attack should just be whatever you choose to do for her basic attack with an upgrade, be it a longer duration, or more uses at the stage, or even the ability to summon two portals at once!

For her eternal attack, I am sorry but I am not sure if this could work! This magic could be really strong and could be confusing to keep up with, but I think there are a lot of possible alternatives that could do similar damage! For example, she could open portals around a target and energy orbs could fly out and attack them, maybe? It would allow her to do damage while still keeping with her theme…but I am not sure! Please let me know if that is something you would like to talk about and I will be back to help out! Otherwise we can brainstorm for a different eternal attack!

The civilian side looks good!

For the powered side, stuffed animals might not work just because they have nothing to do with the sphere, sorry ):

For ideas, it might be possible to create a barrier of portals around the user, so if any enemy tried to run at them, they would wind up running through the portal, which might just send them out the other side? If you imagine a clock face, if someone ran towards Ananke while the magic was in effect, if they came at him from the 12 o'clock position, they would hit the portal wall and pop back out at the 6 o'clock position (you could say that the portal appears maybe with a 6 foot radius around Ananke, so he has basically a shield that would repel opponents by always teleporting them away from him for the duration of the magic?). This would also mean that any attack that the enemy used would enter the portal and come out the other side!

Is that the type of attack you had in mind, or would you prefer something else?

I think this idea might work, but it is a little different than what I was suggesting! I was thinking more like she can create a shield around herself or her allies in the form of portals, where there is no way to pass the portals because if you get to the shield barrier you wind up running into it and the portal leads to the exact other side of the shield! But, your idea might also work, but I have a few questions about it! For example, does she get to choose where the second portal is? (I know it said it has to be within a direct line of sight, but usually a distance is good—maybe she can only open a portal within fifteen feet of a person and can open another portal for them to fall through within fifteen feet?). I like that you include that it has to be within the line of vision though, since I think that will help make sure the attack is not OP! My other question is just to make sure that she is not able to say, open a portal in front of someone on the ground and open a second portal in the air, or if they are on a roof, open the second portal so that they are over the roof and fall off? I think if you said also that she couldn’t open a portal anywhere that would place them in immediate harm (like, in front of a car, or falling off the roof!) then I think this could work!

I think that looks a lot better! I think the attacks you have written cover the sphere without being overpowered or unfair, so I am fine dropping you a stamp! Good luck winning her!