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Freeder Garbernath [Primera Espada][u/c]

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 05, 2014 7:56 pm


Espada Application


Link to Profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=24350681#365217871

How long have you been in the guild? A year or two

How active are you in the guild? I can be very active

Why do you want to hold the rank of Espada? So basically your personal reasons for wanting the position. Be honest please. : Mainly because I would like to

Why do you think you will do well as a Espada? Your strengths in having this position as well as how you will contribute to the guild in this position: Well one thing would being able to do more posts really, as for contributing it would just going with the story to fill in a position.

Your Sample:

It was a cool night in the white deserts of Los noches, only life were two arrancars. One was the current number one espada, and across the desert only a few yards away stood Freeder the two hundred and fifty-ninth arrancar, both let their spiritual pressure flow out crushing surrounding hollows who might intrude on their battle.
The primera espada spoke once he felt the last hollow die " Well calling me out here surely it wasn't to have a picnic. Now what do you want." The Espadas comment was mostly a mix of arrogance and mockery toward Freeder, though Freeder did not respond at least not with his word, Freeder just gave the espada a grim scowl, before pulling out his zampakuto and took a fighting stance ready to strike. The espada sighed shaking his head " Ehhhh guess some people never change. Well might as well do this right then." The espada paused for a moment reaching his left hand toward a Zampakuto on his right side, grabbing the hilt he slowly pulled out a flawless blade which gleamed under the moons mesmerizing light. " I am the Primera espada Hakumen meet you death quick." Hakumen held his blade loosely in his hand this seemed to be his battle stance.



















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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2014 4:03 am


well first off, your profile states that you are the Fraccion of the Cero Espada, secondly I found your sample to be very confusing, many grammar errors, and outright rushed and unfinished, for now I'm going to say:

Denied. Make some fixes, quote me, and I will have another look

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 06, 2014 11:27 am


Aero Diskence
well first off, your profile states that you are the Fraccion of the Cero Espada, secondly I found your sample to be very confusing, many grammar errors, and outright rushed and unfinished, for now I'm going to say:

Denied. Make some fixes, quote me, and I will have another look
yep pretty much not to good on phones sorry.
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