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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:25 am


Basic information
Custom: Full

Character Name: Sereitia

Race: Orderite

Gender: Female

Clan: N/A

Class: Mage (Healer)


Appearance:

My cuteness
Short light blue hair, with highlights of pale purple, her hair is a little curly at the bottom. Eyes, bight purple. The tattoo on her back is shaped as two feathery wings, which are blue, tipped in pink. She has a gentle soft face. Clothing, something like this Link Her skin is pale purple. Sereitia has traits from her mother and father, her mother has blue wings and skin, while her father is purple. The pink in her tattoo is not easy to notice, at a glance, but her parents believe the coloring comes from her great great grandmother.


Personality:

About me!!
[Adventurous] Sere loves going off on her own, to explore the city when she can get away from her parents.

[Obsessive] Sere is a neat freak, she gets fussy and upset when things are out of place. For example, if she has a pattern lined up and you move one piece, her eye would twitch in aggravation. She also has a minor dislike of blood and would rather keep in in it's proper place.

[Curious] Sere is a very curious sort which can sometimes get her into trouble.

[Sheltered] Sere is lacking greatly in knowledge of the world, as her mother would rather her stay home and live in the Ashen city and become a baker or some other safe job.

[Sweet] She is a sweet person and would rather not hurt others if she doesn't have to.

[Childish] She is lacking in maturity, and is very unwise about the world at large, though she thinks she is old enough to go off on her own, and stubborn about excepting her limitations.

[Dreamer] Sere dreams of a life like one of the stories of her great great grandmother, that her aunt tells her. Adventuring the world battling evil, helping others. She has an overactive imagination, and often makes mountains out of mole hills. Like the day she came across a picture of a Bognotti in a book. She had a dream she was attacked by one, and no one to this day has been able to convince her that in wasn't real.

[Absentminded] Sere daydreams to much, about the battlefield, that she sometimes forgets to finish her homework or work in the shop, she has been grounded many times because of it.

[Over emotional] Often Sere's emotions get the best of her, she has had many crying fits because of this. She spent hours crying the night she had the nightmare about the Bognotti.



Hobbies

Sere enjoys walking in the forest outside the city, where she often enjoys sitting and reading. She also enjoys drawing the creatures of the forest and collecting stones and other small things in the forest.

She has also become fond of creating small things in her mother's workshop, like rings, necklaces and bracelets. Sere has been trying to learn how to enchant things like her mother can.


Fears

[Mara] Sere has heard of the dangerous sentient weapons, and she fears them attacking the city and her being to weak to defend herself against them.

[Bognotti] She had a dream as a young child, that she was attacked by one, and she believes it really happened, it was so real.



Biography/Background:

Family
Sere's mother Averila: description: Long blue curly hair, bright blue skin, blue wings, bright blue eyes: Averilia is a sweet orderite, though she is rather a perfectionist about her work, and a bit over protective of her daughter, causing her to butt heads with her sister, for putting ideas in Sere's head about danger and adventure.

Sere's father Travent: description: Short purple hair, short purple beard, bright purple eyes, bright purple skin, wings purple. Travent, is a fair orderite, though he can be very wrong around the edges.

Sere's aunt Nita: description: Short curly blue hair that is tipped in pink. Her skin is bright blue, her wings are blue tipped in pink. Nita is very in your face, braves and bold, often a bit to much so.


A tale


Averilia and her sister Nita left their father's estate when they were teenagers. Nita was betrothed to married a noble orederite and set to take over the family estate. While her younger sister was set to marry another noble, from another noble family, in order tie the bound between their two families. The sisters both strongly against this arrangement ran away from home. They headed for the Valley of Andrah and took odd jobs. In order to get by, Nita took up the sword as a warrior and Averilia took up the staff as a mage. When they earned enough money they found a small cottage they could rent. Nita continued adventuring as a warrior. Her sister settled down to work as a jeweler craftier creating pieces with magical properties.

Sere's father Travent, a well known blacksmith from Ashen City, met his wife while working on a commission. A Master Orderite requested he forge a special sword that would have intricate metal workings and gems embedded within the hilt. While he had the skill to created the blade, his hands were not apt to create the more delicate features. So he sought the delicate hand of the mage Averila, a jewelry craftswoman from Valley of Andrah. She was still not well known, but her skill was greaat and word was beginning to spread about her. Travent, hearing of her skill in magic and crafting, asked that she aid him.

The piece they created together was a blade with fire magic embedded in the stones in the hilt and blade. The long sword was a work of art, that pleased the master greatly. Over the next few years Averilia and Tav worked on 6 more special projects together, creating special magic weapons for nobles and adventurers. Tav asked for Averilia's hand after the 6th project was completed, and they were married in a simple ceremony.

Sere is their only child to this date and as such she has been fussed over, specially by her mother. Who worries that her father will come and try to claim Sere, for her failure to up hold the family honor. Averilia has not told Tav about her father or her past, fearing he would leave her if he ever knew of her past.

Averila's older sister is a warrior who fights with a long sword, who has often told Sere tales of her great great grandmother who was a master battler, known for her healing skills. Which has laid the ground work for Sere's own dreams of some day adventuring too. Sere was born and raised in the Ashen city, where her parents work. She hopes to one day see rare dangerous dragons. she wonders if they will look different than the pictures she has seen in books.

Both of Sere's parents still work in the Ashen city, her father is a blacksmith who specializes in weapons and her mother is a jeweler who specializes in ring, pendants, and other decorative pieces. They own a joint shop in the city, where Sere helps out, running the front of the shop, taking orders, cleaning up. She is just now starting to learn how to make small things, like daggers and rings.

Sere loves all the tales her aunt has told her, but she does not desire to be just like her aunt. She is her own person and in her heart she wants to help and heal rather than striking others down with a sword. Sere does have some skills with the sword, but she is still rather weak and hesitant with a sword.



Current opinions
Thoughts on the Great Engagement: Sere is thoughtful of he war. She imagines herself fighting in the battles of the past, like her great-great-grandmother who was a healer mage. Her thoughts are far from realistic at this point since much of the war has settled down, except for the Mara attacks. Sere hopes to one day face her fear of the Mara and fight against them, or learn why they are attacking people.

Thoughts on the Magescian Races:

[Oblivionite]Sere doesn't like the Oblivinites. She was told many times, by her aunt, to avoid the soulless creatures. Since Sere looks up to her aunt as her hero, she believes what her aunt tells her. Sere finds their black eyes creepy. Her imagination wanders and she thinks that the more she looks into their eyes the more she falls and will be lost forever.

[Hybrids] She is very curious about the concept of being born of two different races. She has never met a hybrid, but would very much like to and ask them questions.

[Dovaa] The Dovaa make her a little nervous, though she would like to know more about them.

Thoughts on the Dragons and Khehora:

[Dragons] Sere likes the dragons she has seen in the forest outside the city. She wants to one day see a rare dragon like, the Aisko.

[Khehora] Sere has heard a little about them, but needs to know more before she can decided how she feels.

[Mara] Sere is fearful of the mara and has dreams, that one will break into her room and kill her.


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:20 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:51 pm


It will need expanding upon!
Personality: Right now she only has good traits. Nobody is perfect and sweet all the time. Any bad personality bits? Bad habits? Coward? Arrogant?
Her personality will need fleshing out.

Background: Her parent's. Lovely story. But do both of them still work? They'll need to have some income to keep up with raising kids. How many siblings does she have? Where is she amid them? Eldest, youngest, middle?
Was her father well known in the area? Why did he get that commission? Same with mother. What is their social status?

Where do they live? What does Sere do as she grows up? Does she help out her parent's in their jobs?
Any events of note happen to this child? Why, when her parent's are craftsmen, does she wish to be a healer? Did someone influence her? Why does she want to be a battler? Her personality seems to me that she would not want to fight, so what would pull her to the front lines.
Realize that even battlers who go a healer path must hunt dragons and creatures to gain levels. Think on this and see if you can see her hurting and killing things.


Thoughts on others: who does she distrust, oblivs? She must have heard rumors or tales or met dovaa. Please flesh it out and give me a sentence on each race!

Thoughts on Khehora: you only included Dragons. By now, the whole world knows of the Khehoras (mini dragons basically who are intelligent)
{psst, also look over your writing for grammar and spelling!)
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 1:55 pm


robot kitten
It will need expanding upon!
Personality: Right now she only has good traits. Nobody is perfect and sweet all the time. Any bad personality bits? Bad habits? Coward? Arrogant?
Her personality will need fleshing out.

Background: Her parent's. Lovely story. But do both of them still work? They'll need to have some income to keep up with raising kids. How many siblings does she have? Where is she amid them? Eldest, youngest, middle?
Was her father well known in the area? Why did he get that commission? Same with mother. What is their social status?

Where do they live? What does Sere do as she grows up? Does she help out her parent's in their jobs?
Any events of note happen to this child? Why, when her parent's are craftsmen, does she wish to be a healer? Did someone influence her? Why does she want to be a battler? Her personality seems to me that she would not want to fight, so what would pull her to the front lines.
Realize that even battlers who go a healer path must hunt dragons and creatures to gain levels. Think on this and see if you can see her hurting and killing things.


Thoughts on others: who does she distrust? She must have heard rumors or tales or met dovaa. Please flesh it out and give me a sentence on each race!

Thoughts on Khehora: you only included Dragons. By now, the hole world knows of the Khehoras (mini dragons basically who are intelligent)
{psst, also look over your writing for grammar and spelling!)
Thank you for the notes ^_^ I'll keep working on it, I knew it wasn't ready yet

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:11 pm


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I'm not very good at spotting spelling and grammar errors I do have spell check, but if I miss something major help if welcome >.<
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:14 pm


Midnightglow18
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I'm not very good at spotting spelling and grammar errors I do have spell check, but if I miss something major help if welcome >.<

That's what we're here for sometimes XD

I tend to type solos's, prp responses, and big things like quests in Word first just to catch all the grammar (blue lines!) and spelling errors I make :3

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:20 pm


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I'm terrible with errors >.< but usually most people can figure out what I meant rofl

Made a few edits to her back ground, still trying to think of more flaws
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 4:12 pm


Midnightglow18
You mentioned an aunt, I would like to know a little about her since you stated in the feelings on other races that she is a big figure in Sereitia's life.

Also, if you want, since I don't judge these things, you can send me your work so I can grammar nazi check it ^_^""" The only reasons I make typos now is I got hurt and one finger is sort of out of commission... ^^"""

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 4:14 pm


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I'll have to think of more details about her aunt 3nodding and sure grammar help would be great
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 4:17 pm


Midnightglow18
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I'll have to think of more details about her aunt 3nodding and sure grammar help would be great
Well yah it took me like 2-3 weeks to get my quest ironed out, so I feel ya there xD

And just feel free to shoot me a pm with your work or post in my guild's plot forum ^^

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 4:19 pm


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Kool yea trying to think of more details and more flaws >.<
PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 4:34 pm


Humm maybe her aunt, bright blue eyes, bright blue hair, tipped with pink, skin light pink, wings blue. Battler, adventurous, physical fighter, weapon sword.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 3:01 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 3:49 pm


Potential personality flaws that might work with her given character set up:

      Absentminded - If she's a dreamer, maybe she gets preoccupied to a negative extent, forgetting things that might be important, ignoring people accidentally without meaning to, being inattentive during lessons or when someone is talking, oblivious to her surroundings, forgetful in general, etc..

      Aimless - Does she have many goals in life? This also ties into being a dreamer, potentially, she might have a lot of wishful fantasies, but never really settle on a path and be devoid of direction or purpose in her life. (Perhaps her apprentice stage could be spent finding a purpose or a character arch setting her up for future direction.)

      Anxious- Is she possibly uneasy, worried all the time to the point of it becoming an issue, even making her not do things she might otherwise want to becuase she frightens herself out of it? This could be a lot or a little.

      Childish- She could be lacking in a bit of maturity for her age, young beyond her years, unwilling to grow up or not yet ready to take on responsibilities she ought to.

      Dependent- Does she rely on her parents/guardians/friends more than she should? Does she take their care for granted?

      Fickle- She might just really like pretty things, but be prone to changing her mind about what she wants often.

      Gullible- Easily deceived or duped because she's too trusting. This could play in with childish.

      Idealist- As a generally positive person, she could be unrealistically positive and hope/imagine/expect things to turn out for the best even when this might get her or others into trouble.


She could also be:

      - indecisive
      -immature in general
      -judgmental
      -meek
      -naive
      -selfish
      -emotional
      -a user
      -vain
      -weak-willed


So many options out there! This list is not exhaustive, I was just covering some basics to get you thinking. Remember, flaws are great for a character. They help make them interesting, more fun to play and be around, as well as more believable an engaging. They make you think and force you to dig deeper. Good luck! =D

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 3:55 pm


Thank you ^_^
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