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[CRIT] Holly Longwood

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Djnn

PostPosted: Thu May 22, 2014 12:44 am


Name: Holly Longwood
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Height: 5'6
Facial expression: Smiling
Hair: Blonde
Eye color: Honey (Golden Brown)
Skin color: Lightly Tanned
Military outfit: Standard or Mix 'n match
• Standard (includes all pieces, button up shirt)
• Mix 'n match (say what you want on/off)
• Shirt selection (see Tailor Shop for options)

Personality:
Holly is an optimist. She is very excitable, and loves to have fun. She is also an extremely jealous person, and can get a bit controlling at times. Her jealous also comes with her loyalty. She loyal to all she cares about, but gets jealous if they spend time with others with out her.


History:
Holly always had a hard time in school, not because she wasn't sharp, but because she had a hard time focusing, finding it hard to do. She preferred to keep her hands and mind busy which often got her into trouble. She was known as a trouble maker to some, and a brilliant mind to others.

Growing up with an older brother she learned to have a hard out shell making her slightly tom-boyish. She preferred running around stick fighting with the boys rather than sitting around playing with dolls. This only led to more trouble as she would run around with the boys and find more trouble only to charm her way out of it. When her older brother realized this he started letting her run around with him and his friends, more importantly, Erik. The three of them were always running around, playing pranks, stealing small rolls or potatoes, and using Holly to charm their way out of trouble if they were ever caught.

As soon as Holly met Erik she had a crush and she felt hard. But he never returned the affection. She and Erik were the same age and the two's bond grew stronger, feeding the jealous that had not shown before. If Erik spent time away from her she would be jealous and find a way to put herself at her side. Erik was oblivious to Holly's attempts of affection. Derrik was more than aware and he found the situation to be hilarious, and he often set the two of them up to be "alone" so he could watch the hilarity ensure.

When Derrik got older he decided he wanted to be a scout. Wanting to see outside the walls. He excelled in all the ways a scout would need to. And shortly after Derrik made his decision, Erik followed. Holly tried to talk him out of it, but he refused to back down. Holly had noticed Derrik and Erik spent more and more time together and surprisingly this didnt trigger her jealousy. But she also knew that their kinship would prevent her from ever keep Erik from joining himself. So the only thing left to... was for her to follow the 2 to train as a scout.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 8:14 pm


Djnn


Interesting little lady here. If possible I'd include some more hobbies of hers if you can think of any. A few little things:

- Why did her father venture outside of the walls?
- Where is she and her family from?
- I'm also a little curious how she can be full of charisma and gain others attention easily, but still socially awkward at the same time. Perhaps expand on that?

musicaloner7
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Djnn

PostPosted: Wed Jun 11, 2014 3:38 am


I have this character a complete rework. Would love to hear some input =D
PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2014 4:40 pm


Hi, Djnn.

I think the history you have on Holly is very good, I like the backstory you've built up. Could you expand on her personality a little? For example:

Holly gets jealous, but why? I see you've put that if her friends spend time with someone else and don't include her, but are there other reasons? How does her jealousy present to people around her? Does she act snippy, or sour, or hurt?

She's controlling, but how? What does she do that makes her controlling? How does she react when she's put in a position where her control means nothing?

What could break her optimism? What might make her angry? Does she make friends easily, or is it difficult for her because of her jealousy and control issues?

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