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 Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:33 pm
If you got something in your brain you just gotta let out please tell me ^_^
I will put one or two out there eventually but not exactly tonight. just short stories with your own characters the characters from the show and all the such.
try and NOT include anything that contains anything sexual or excessively morbid.
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:30 am
I've got a good one.
Gryphons were once called Hybrids in ancient times, but they have developed enough as a race that it's no longer really true. Calling one a Hybrid today is considered an insult.
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:43 am
Izzie R I've got a good one. Gryphons were once called Hybrids in ancient times, but they have developed enough as a race that it's no longer really true. Calling one a Hybrid today is considered an insult. ..... wow that really is a short story XD
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:53 am
general shino Izzie R I've got a good one. Gryphons were once called Hybrids in ancient times, but they have developed enough as a race that it's no longer really true. Calling one a Hybrid today is considered an insult. ..... wow that really is a short story XD Well, I admit, at the time of posting I mistook 'fan fic' for 'head cannon.' Lack of caffeine isn't all that pleasant. Either way, still has something to do with the show, and likely a future character imma try making. EDIT: I also wouldn't be surprised if Gryphons were to use trigger-based firearms, since they have fingers and an eagerness to use them.
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:01 am
Izzie R general shino Izzie R I've got a good one. Gryphons were once called Hybrids in ancient times, but they have developed enough as a race that it's no longer really true. Calling one a Hybrid today is considered an insult. ..... wow that really is a short story XD Well, I admit, at the time of posting I mistook 'fan fic' for 'head cannon.' Lack of caffeine isn't all that pleasant. Either way, still has something to do with the show, and likely a future character imma try making. EDIT: I also wouldn't be surprised if Gryphons were to use trigger-based firearms, since they have fingers and an eagerness to use them. lol well you an share your headcannon here too if you like. and thought it would not surprise me if the only beings with fingers were the only ones to have advanced weapons like firearms I somehow get the feeling that they dont have guns XD
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 2:00 am
early in the morning, the rooster crowing letting the apple family know its time for chores. up early and as always ready to work, applejack stretched with a yawn. A day just like any other, only the ear splitting howl let her and everyone else know that it wasn't. Up quickly and bursting from the house in the early morning light only the two physically capable apple family members were ready to fend off what could have only been timber wolves after the sheep and pigs.
Just as the sun hit both of the farming ponies stared in disbelief the barn had a hole in it the size of a wagon. wolf tracks from the forest clearing to the barn and back. fences were torn asunder and many sheep were wandering about and at least two were missing.
some distance away a soft click almost inaudible sounded as the door to sugar cube corner opened and a tall shadow slipped inside gripping one sack of flower with a heavy open clawed fingered grip.
Noon now the apple family had just finished repair on the farm and up the road came another four familiar faces.
"AJ!... we heard something happened...."
"yes....it sure did timber wolves...it had to be...they got in rather forcefully...."
"well you're not the only ones..."
"what do you mean?...is everything ok in town?"
a flash of purple hair with a distraught and near whiny voice shrieked out
"Well of COURSE dear....all of ponyville has been having breakins though whoever it is they take only food metal and other small supplies."
one hyper voice popped up
"THEY STOLE THE FLOWER.....HOW ARE WE GOING TO HAVE CUPCAKES?!?!?!? THE CUPCAKES....NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
this ended quickly with a light swat on the nose by rainbow dash.
"what?....I realy wanted cupcakes"
apple jack sighed
"...well we have a mystery on our hands, whoever is doing this owes us all an apology and repairs.."
the ever vigilant voice of reason twilight spoke clearly
"...I dont think so....all the break ins were done very stealthily. nothing was actually destroyed when invaded you might actually just have a timber wolf problem...."
"oh....yeah....well...that is probably so.."
Apple jack smiled a tad bashfully. Then another voice spoke in this time also a bit logic based but not all in the right place.
"well theres no evidence to follow except for her if this IS the same thief then we would missing out on some justice"
the blue flapping wings seemed to beat faster as rainbow dash itched for some action.
"well...its true this could be our only real lead but its just not probable that its the same its all so different. but we dont have any other lead to follow come on girls..."
apple jack nodded turning to her red much larger brother
" big mac...you take care of the rest we are out to find us a culprit."
the larger pony nodded letting out his signature "urryup!" and off the dashed rainbow in front up high scanning for clearings fluttershy in back asking the animals whether they have seen anything, one rather clumbsy in air alicorn flapping about stable but not flawlessly flying over the other three who moved quickly enough. one pushing everything aside and whimpering about the dirt the mud and the greenery,another bouncing steadily, a smile plastered over her face as they continued. the last applejack nearly keeping up with rainbow dash on the ground following the foot prints. together the entire group was properly following the trail until they finally came upon an usual sight. trees scorched AND torn apart completely. heavy scoring and claw marks over light charred bits. just a few more feet and there was a frighting sight to behold. shattered trees plunged straight through three full sized timber wolves piercing straight through.each one was killed with simple violent moves and torn apart further. however, even with all of this the only thing the ponies were staring at was the shrouded figure hunched over a pile of sheep bones and old baking goods. just about everything stolen from ponyville and more was here including things that were not reported stolen
"...EEEEEEK....THATS MY GOOD SILK"
Rarity gasped at a large portion of goods lifted from her shop. she had not even noticed. The figure shifted in the darkness rising to a height that surpassed everyone they had ever seen but a certain Minotaur. even then this being might have been taller.
"....I see....then you are the ones....I am surprised you have come so quickly."
the voice was deep and solid. almost angered. stepping from the shadows Rarity fainted not due to the fearsome size and look of the being but that his whole body had been covered with very dark and menacing colored robes. the person actually made their own clothes embedded with plenty of metal plates. First to rise ready to fight of course was rainbow dash but following her was applejack then Twilght. Pinkie stayed back placing a small pebble on fluttershy's wings and giggling as it bounced about and fell off from her fear stricken state of shivering.
"Who are you and why did you steal from ponyville?"
the figure stared down at her his face covered by metal and cloth.
"because I was starving, injured and dying, also because I was not quite in my right mind...."
Twighlight didnt even get a chance to respond as rainbow dash stamped
"if you were so hungry why didnt you just ask for food instead of a flank whupping"
she blasted forward but screeched to a halt when he was not in front of her. in a blink of an eye he was gone and his voice sounded from behind him
"....there is a reason I hide my face....you see what I ate...my kind Im guessing are not too welcome here......but enough about me.....I am wondering...why on earth Nephyia chose you six......more precisely ...you"
his open powerful clawed hand smoothed over Twilight's nuzzle. he had closed the distance in a mere millisecond. quickly she stepped back in fear as did the others.
"who in tarnation are you?"
"I am who I am....as you six are....no where near who you think you are....or what I should be saying...I am curious....I feel it....but its so damned faint....Nephyia's mark is on you but her power is elsewhere....spread so far over the land.....here...on you it is the strongest...then...to the north...I feel two...one stronger than the other.....and even further north...far far far to the north....there is one....who has felt her wrath.....I feel others....but they have recovered fully..."
"what are you talking about?...spit it out or you will get a .."
a two fingered pinch shut rainbow dash's mouth.
"take me north....to the two who are more powerful than you....they share the same race as you..."
his eyes pierced at twighlight. and for a second she smiled
"let me talk to my friends first...."
he nodded and stood back. quickly she moved back pulling the others in
"does he mean he wants you to take him to princess celestia an luna?"
"I think so...but we have nothing to worry about. we have beaten everyone who threatened the kingdom and think about it. how many guards do we have in canterlot?....Ill have spike send a message ahead letting them know the situation they will have far more than ample time to figure this out...."
"but what if hes dangerous....he already ate my sheep..."
"then think of what will happen to us and ponyville if we DONT take him....either we risk ourselves and he goes to canterlot on his own with no warning or prepare a situation where they will be ready and willing and we WONT be in danger"
"alright.....I guess that will work but Im still not so sure about this guy"
"who is?"
they all stepped back out
"alright...we will take you....but just us three....the others have to keep eyes on things here..."
"no......you all must come.....all who have been touched favorably by Nephyia must be there..."
Twilight looked back at apple jack who just twirled her hoof around her ear giving the "he's coocoo" look and with a sigh Twilight nodded, begining the trip that let many secrets both dark and light kept and unknown into the world once again.
((will continue next time thank chu for reading ^_^ feel free to guess whats going on who hes talking about you know....head cannon for this story))
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:55 am
BLEH still cant sleep...I'll release another bit
The rails clacked and clicked as the sun was setting, all who had been on the train moved far forward save for one small group of ponies and one rather large fully clothed and masked frighteningly intimidating being.
"...I cant believe he raided my fabrics...can you"
"Rarity....we get it....you have been complaining about it for hours...this guy ate apple jack's sheep....hes fully capable of eating two of you....please just let it go.."
"I will not he stole from sugar cube corner he took half the fabrics I was saving for next week's orders and then some...not to mention he is constantly terrifying fluttershy...I mean just look at the poor dear..."
nearly foaming at the mouth fluttershy lay on her back Pinkie laughing and poking her as everyone else stared keeping watch over the big creature. Rainbow dash inching just a little closer
"....what exactly are you anyway?..."
"me?....oh...in a manner of speaking I am the same as you...."
she let out an aggravated sigh
"your not a Pegasus...heck your not even a pony, and you ate the sheep..."
"feeling jealous are you?....I can eat you too if you like?"
rainbow dash gave a fearful "dont hurt me" smile and backed up, the figure reached into his clothes and pulled out two massive bars of gold letting them fall to the ground
"....if you are done whining and griping that should pay for the damages and items I had to obtain through forceful or stealthy ways..."
before anyone could say anything the conductor fearfully poked his head in
".n...nn..next st...stop.......can..canterlot..."
he quickly zoomed back out and the tall figure stood.
"....come now...we dont have all night do we?..."
the train pulled in and the group stepped out in between two massive crowds of armed guards leveling spears and readying other weapons
"....this is the place yes?....I can feel it.....and...oh...look at that....I can feel him here too...how amusing....but we will keep him for later....in the mean time..."
he took one step forward and the new head of the guard growled getting up in the figure's face, the beast of a creature leaned his head back and roared loud enough to put all the armed guards into a flutteryshy position. clammed up and on their backs shivering as he walked past them. Twilight and her friends quickly moved behind him. though he was cut off in the main hall. not by more guards but by those they had come to see.
"Hail touched ones...."
he stood tall staring down at Celestia and Luna standing ready to meet him
"....you did well Twilight but please leave....this is potentially dangerous.."
"worry not lest you lie I will not harm this kingdom or its rulers..."
his dark eyes peered out from the armored clothing. he opened his mouth and one word came out
"Nephyia...."
Celestia stood firm but Luna flinched and he grinned under the fabric
"....I see this might complicate things....tell me....did you kill her?....or did she die from her wounds?...."
Luna stepped back a somewhat frightened look on her face. though it was celestia who spoke
"...we dont know....she came here long before we were born... the reason you feel her power on us is because we used her power. the legend says that when she came here she fought with another and though she won she did not have the strength to continue living...so she purified this world and perished giving one last gift to it.....something called cytgord....."
"stop trying to throw me off.....My hearing is precise....I could hear your heart skip. yes you did not lie...but you did not tell the truth....where is she?.....where is her grave...."
Celestia sighed giving in yet curious
"...why cant you just follow that feeling of power? you found us didnt you?"
"yes however she hides her direct power....and you should know the reason why...."
eyes swirling in confusion Twilight finally snapped out of it.
"what is going on?...seriously....I cannot follow this at all..."
"twilight please take them and lea.."
"NO....they will hear the truth....they will know what you did....who they now are...."
he turned facing them
".....Nephyia has another name....she came from my world....the name you would know her by is....harmony....."
"wait...you mean.."
"yes....she was the aspect of harmony....all of the aspects live where I am from....and every once and a while...we have wars...the good verses the bad aspects....but two aspects specifically clash all the time.....harmony....and War....one side of war loved harmony with all its heart....and did their best to bring about harmonies rule among the aspects....this side of war was the elements honor comradery and preservation. though the other side of war....the elements of abomination violence and vengeance....they sought to end harmony and live forever in the power that came with their aspect.....though...there are hundreds of aspects...the most powerful ones are not quite the nicest....in the war following the latest conflict the most powerful and darkest aspect wounded harmony....and to save her preservation sent her and all five of her elements to a new world. though he was not fast enough and madness sent one of his aspects into this world after her. I am guessing she managed to defeat this element but died from her wounds...when an aspect dies...its elements perish with it until a new vessel is found to act as a body or incarnation of that aspect and those elements....a sort of reincarnation if you will."
he paused looking down at twilight who promptly said
"six....there are six elements....laughter kindness generosity honesty loyalty and magic.....thats all five of them..."
he laughed
"...no...there are five...five elements..."
his hand pointed panning over the others before jutting out at her
"...and one aspect.....Nephyia chose YOU.....to be her heir..."
Twilight's eyes went wide and the others gasped in disbelief surprisingly Celestia did not look at all surprised though Luna continued to look panicked.
".....but that doesnt make it any clearer who are you?...."
he growled moving closer.
"who do you think I am child?.....I am War...."
his claws scraped the ground as he stood tall. his entire being was physically intimidating and very powerful. it was hard to even draw in breath around him.
"I came here to give my farewells to the woman I loved......and to see that she is properly replaced as she would have wanted...we have been without harmony for thousands upon thousands of years....my elements have only just barely held us together as all the others battled to keep the darker aspects and elements at bay. you taking on the mantle of harmony and taking over where Nephyia left off will restore the order."
celestia stamped her foot
"not so fast....."
"oh...thats right....you dont want all of her memories flooding into the new vessel...."
she lower her head as if ready to fight
"....you dont stand a chance...and the truth is better...this world WILL face war again soon...trying to deny and lie about the past does nothing for you....the abominations performed by your family and hidden away in the past of this land cannot be covered forever. you do not rule in tyranny now or ever....you should not fear the truth."
"wait....celestia would not lie.....she would never lie to her people....or me...."
"thats the bad thing about abominations child.....no one wants them to ever see the light of day again...."
"princess celestia.....what is he talking about....tell us....you never lied to us right?"
((dun dun duuuuuuuuuun! what will happen in the next release....what is the untold truth who is to blame what will happen. what is this oncoming threat War mentioned?))
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Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2014 3:28 pm
one heavy scraping sound of claws against the golden halberd rang out as another clawed hand grasped a nearby pillar of marble. with unreal strength the clawed hand tore a chunk out of the pillar and swung downwards only just barely deflected by celestia's magic
"I said no!....there are things in this world best forgotten"
"hiding the truth is the same as lying....a world that does not know and learn from the sins of its past are doomed to repeat them...did you really think that you would be around forever to prevent this?....you still breath...if you are cut you bleed... you may not age but you ARE mortal....and some day the knowledge that you have forbidden WILL have to be known...or the abominations you cover will be relived...."
Luna stood back her wings spread as if shielding Twilight and her friends
"...sister please.... hes right....and losing you now wont do the kingdom any good...."
the blade swung low catching War in the belly. though as the sound of cutting flesh rang out so did the sound of claws on metal. gripping the hold a heavy fist came down smashing the weapon before he yanked it from his belly and tossed it to the side. behind him just over his shoulders was what almost looked like six runes of various colors. one of lush red glowed brightly the more and more the battle raged the broken blade had very little blood on it and even more strange was the wound on War's belly. the cloth had cut but all that could be seen was a silvery something and very dark brown fur. thick fur. lowering her horn and charging, boosting her speed with the flapping of her soft white wings Celestia charged but instantly the clawed hand grasped her horn and with a quick twisting throw she impacted the wall just to the side of war as he threw her. a heavy foot came down on her neck and the jagged broken point of celestia's old weapon aimed down at her. the small red rune over his shoulder glowed brighter as did a dark red rune just below it but a blue rune on the other side outglowed the rest.
".....honor thinks you should be spared....and he speaks louder than both vengeance and violence together....do you submit?...or will you force me to kill you for the betterment of this world...."
the others stared in horror and fright but were a little more calmed as celestia nodded in submission and the weapon was discarded. breathing heavily celestia stood under the watchful calm eyes of War who did not in the least seem tired or strained . Celestia grit her teeth before sighing in anger
"...he was not lying.....our world does not have a happy past...."
twilight's eyes widened even more, confused she looked up at her old teacher
"...but princess...what?...err.....w...what is different....how is it different from what we know now?..."
"not too much....just....a lot of war.....and the existance of the alicorn nation.....where me and my sister's mother and father were born.... as you know....there was three nations.....but as you would not know....what those nations were.....the pagasus kingdom the unicorn kingdom and the alicorn kingdom.....which lived like Gods.....and demanded......the war."
"they all looked at celestia with confusion
"....a war?.....um..over what?...."
"for amusement....the alicorn nation was once pure and whole...the ONLY nation....but as sects would rise small wars broke out for the throne....the losers of each battle....were stripped of their wings...their horns...or both...birthing the new kingdoms....and the slave race...."
applejack's eyes shot open
"wait...what?....slave race?"
"yes...the earth ponies are descended from the most absolutely hated alicorns....stripped of their power their wings their horns and finally...their dignity. feeling of a higher power is what finally brought down the alicorn empire....but not before they created the other races and forced them to fight endlessly simply for the sake of their own twisted pleasures....though one day.....something happened...when the chaos and anger the wrath and evil became undying pain. it became so unbearable simply to be evil that their power began to wane which is when a long time peaceful kingdom was for some odd reason driven to madness. the draconicis attacked in full slaying the alicorns and eachother in mass until they were only just barely defeated. the remaining alicorns were quickly losing their grip of power and fear on those they had created with their evil and hate. so they did something forbidden. a ritual that had only ever created twisted evil things. fusing the power of an alicorn's horn into its entire body and surrendering their souls to the very power that they once wielded they transformed themselves....very few alicorn escaped this fate. being my father and mother....even then they were just fillies. the following centuries were harsh but relatively violence free. me and my sister only came back into the picture when our parents died trying to send us into a new world. we wandered about for years before finally finding ourselves in the new kingdom where the three races had been happily existing for so long they had forgotten the pain and evil forced upon them by our kind..."
she seemed disgusted even having to repeat the history. though war stood firm
"....harmony came to your lands at the peak of your violent ways....her influence made violence and abominable actions not only painful but simply hard to accomplish.....and as such...apparently that small piece of madness also found his way into this world after his defeat....from the sound of it...he found his home in the draconacis.....all the pieces of madness but one are accounted for....dementia mania chaos.....but not discord....he must have found a new host and made his home here....."
"he most certainly has....does he know all of this?"
"it is possible....but without someone to walk you through it all and without already knowing a full history....the memories are difficult to cleave your way through....you wont be able to find the truth just by being an element or aspect...."
he breathed in sharply stretching and popping a few joints
"....your parents died trying to get you two out for the same reason I nearly died trying to get in....Harmony did not want any other aspects getting in until she was replaced fully....any attempts to leave without a pre existing portal or some sort of work around will destroy or try to destroy anything that passes through it."
"....s..so what now?"
the smaller alicorn asked still a little shocked along with the others about the true history of their "harmonious" world.
"...now....we have to make you into the aspect of harmony....we will require her grave site....or her spirit....it should be locked in an impenetrable box....one key for each of her elements...and one for herself...."
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 12:37 am
I've been working on this for a few hours now, a fan fiction on events in this very guild, as such I have asked permission from the owners of the characters to avoid being yelled at, so with out further adu, I present
Meeting at Rainbow falls Chapter one:
the surprise splashing could be heard as the camera angles in. Modsiw, a clever Pegasus, and the oldest member of the cutie mark crusaders, was letting out soft chuckling as he dipped in and out of varies clouds, feeling the softness of the clouds felt nice, but it was time to get back to work. so angling himself at a downward angle, he went into a nose dive, pulling up at the last second to avoid crashing at he looked around. finding a suitable place to land, he sat down, pulling out a pen and a map and got to work.
"Well then." he started off as he began to jot down notes on the map.
"here, here, and here...good." he said to himself, thinking aloud. the waves of liquid colors softly making noise in the background, the mist that dotted the air felt all to nice to breath in.
"but...i...wonder... Should I even bother with these areas?" he asked himself, noting the dangers he had faced earlier that day.
"there were dragons here...Wyverns there.... and that one just..." he said shuttering at the thought.
"fire everywhere, not exactly a good place for the young..." he stated to himself as he continued to jot down notes and such. how ever he was so focused he didn't even hear the sound of hoofs, splashing in the rainbow colored liquid, that was until an unknown voice spoke up.
"Are you talking to yourself?" Shapeless shifter said, letting out a laugh as he pranced up closer to Modsiw, his hooves, along with the fur that ran across the edge of them, vividly covered with every color of the rainbow. "looking for something?" the young stallion, with an olive-tan fur, asked.
the falls was perfect, the sun shining bright, and the light reflecting off the liquid, making the falls look ever better then they were on there own. one could say it was almost, story book...
"OH?" Modsiw yelped, twitching as he heard the earth pony speak. "Well...Sort of, Though no... I'm not looking for anything, per say..." he trailed off as he began to put his pen away. "I've just been out finding places for the Crusaders..." he said, as he began to reach for his map. "there little quests, require a bit of, recon." he said letting out a chuckle as he wrapped up the map, and proceeded to place it in his saddle bag.
"Crusaders?" the stallion said, raising a brow as he smirked, this caused him to have a look of curiosity.
"so, I see the rainbows brought you up here, you addicted to the colors, or the spice?" Modsiw asked curiously, enjoying the sound of the falls.
"Heh, a little of both, though it was the colors that really drew me in." shift stated as he stepped into a small puddle, causing a bit of a splash. "I can never get enough of the colors, honestly."
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 9:01 am
I've been working on this for a few hours now, a fan fiction on events in this very guild, as such I have asked permission from the owners of the characters to avoid being yelled at, so with out further adu, I present
Meeting at Rainbow falls Chapter two:
the Blank flank? Chapter 2
the blank flank?
"The crusaders." Modsiw said, looking at shift with a confused look. "as in the cutie mark crusaders, I help them out from time to time, sense I have personal experience to what there going through, but when I'm not helping them, I'm a teacher." he said, as a frown formed on his face. "though, I think it was a waist of time, considering I didn't find much resources, to help find there special talents." he look sad. he also lightly stomped a hoof, making a small splash, though it wasn't big enough to leave any color on his hoof.
"oh yeah? and what Experiencer is that?" Shift asked, generally wanting to know, and continued to have a big grin on his face. "well, if this is about special talents, that could be anywhere, and i honestly don't think you could find any resources general enough to cover that sort of thing." the earth pony trailed off waving a hoof in the air as he explained. "after all, if, special talents, weren't so specific to each pony, they wouldn't be called 'special' now would they?" he said, as he continued to prance about in the liquid rainbow, not giving any thought that he was getting wet.
midsow let out a content chuckle as he looked back at his flank, which appeared blank at first glance. "take a look for yourself, after all, I've spent years searching for my special talent, helping others find there's along the way." he trailed off as he turned toward rainbow falls. "but, it wasn't till after I fell into a deep depression that I had realized something, that I had it all along, that it Was helping others find there talents, and that's when I could feel the warm light on my flank, though when I looked, it remained blank, so in other words." he said as he sat. "my mark, IS, the absence of a mark." he finally said as he sat back and stared at the massive falls, feeling content with his little story.
(sorry about the shortness on this chapter, more will come tomorrow biggrin )
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 9:02 pm
I've been working on this for a few hours now, a fan fiction on events in this very guild, as such I have asked permission from the owners of the characters to avoid being yelled at, so with out further adu, I present
Meeting at Rainbow falls Chapter three:
the Changeling in ponyville?
"huh...thats odd..." the earth pony remarked, trailing off before continueing. "I might've though it would be a Crusader flag, or something, but thats cool in its own way." he said as he began to reach up with one hoof to scratch. "i saw another pony without a mark the other day, actually, he looked pretty old. And then changelings, i dont think they have them either, do they?" he said as the earth pony began to scratch, getting the liquid color in his black man and forelock. "honestly, I dont think its a big deal to not have a cutie mark, cause it just means you have infinate potential, like a blank canvas for example." shift stated as he placed down his hoof, having gotten the itch.
"wait..." modsiw said in a confused manor. "arent we at war with the Changlings, since they attacked Canterlot?" modsiw asked, haveing a good point, cause wasnt equestria in war with them? "i imagine they arent to happy with our kind right now...." he said. a Changeling, hiding amoung pony kind, now that was unusuall for there kind. just then modsiw gave a long yawn, his wings stretching out as he did so. "you might be right about the blank canvas, but nopony likes waiting for a painting to just, happen..." he said in retort.
"well, Yeah, but i mean... They still dont have cutie marks of their own, just like any other blank flank," the pony answered. "and a canvas never has to be painted on." he said giving a small smile. "a real artist understands the beauty of a blank canvas, because it will always symbolize the beauty that could be, and to define something by giving it a shape and form limits it." he said, turning to modsiw. "you know what i mean? like a spirit forced to take on an earthly shape. its sad really."
(the third and final part, after all, its a short story right XD )
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Posted: Tue Apr 01, 2014 10:37 pm
started a new fan fic
here is were ill post it
http://blueraptir21.deviantart.com/art/The-Elements-of-Balance-Shadow-s-story-444617038
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