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Name: Elizabeth Rene Belair

Nickname: Liza, Lizzy, Liz

Age: 21

Birthday: Jan 26th

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: Garnet

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Eggs and cheese

Hated Food: Onions

School: Destiny City University

Occupation: After school music teacher for Crystal Academy

Hobbies:
Cello: Liza has been playing the cello since she was a small girl around the age of eight years old. Of course it was too big for her then, but her mother used to play and she absolutely adored the sound. She used to sit next to her mother with her own smaller cello and her mom taught her how to play. When her mother died, Liza continued playing the cello in her honor. She plays it every night before she sleeps.

Yoga: When she's not playing the cello or on her computer, Liza is doing yoga. It helps keep her focused as well as fit. She does a lot more yoga when she's stressed out. Usually she'll do this in her own house, but she does go to classes sporadically depending on how her mindset is. Yoga for her is close to a religious experience.

Horseback riding: She likes to ride horses, and always has since she was a little girl. Her parents rented her a pony that she grew up with, which she named Coal, as he is as black as coal and has a bitter personality towards anyone that's not her. She's bought him with hard work and scrimping and saving. She rides him every chance she gets and goes to visit him at the ranch where he lives.


Virtues:
Fun loving: Up for a good time any time. She's a social butterfly. She doesn't have to bet the center of attention, but she always wants to have fun. Games are a good way to do that, talking, joking around. She's the kind of girl who will jump on her friend's back for a laugh. Of course this doesn't mean she doesn't known when to be serious, she'd just rather not be.

Motherly: Ah, yes, Liza is very motherly in a way. She likes taking care of people. She's the kind to remind you something is hot, tell you to wear a jacket outside if there's a breeze, or go with a friend to a doctor's appointment just to be there so they don't have to be alone. Mothering anyone younger than her just comes naturally.

Positive: Dark clouds always, always have a silver lining, even if it's hard to see. There's no point in thinking negatively. It just brings everyone down. She'll do what she can to make sure she's having a good day, and tends to ignore the bad things that happen to her, or just take everything in stride. Even in the darkest situations, like death, she'll remember the good times and realize that she should be celebrating the person's life.

Flaws:
Bit of a temper: While she tries to maintain her sunny disposition and the fat that everything is good and wonderful in the world, things do bug her. When people are constantly negative and doing nothing to change their outlook on life, she tends to... explode. It's not violently, but it involves foot stomping, speeches about all the things they're not looking at. She goes red in the face during these bursts of anger. After these kinds of outbursts, she apologies profusely, but holds firm to what she says. She'll go back to insisting that it's not as bad as you think it is. It also happens when she's just had a bad day and is stressed about something. It's more of an 'in the moment' deal with her. Again, it's short lived and she apologizes, but she can't seem to control when it happens.

Forgetful: It's not like she means to forget, but things just literally get away from her. It's the small things, where she put her keys, someone's birthday. Sometimes it gets to be so bad she'll walk into a room with the intention of doing something and then completely forget what it was. This is one of the reasons she has alarms set on her cell phone for food, she would forget to eat some days, otherwise.

Bad intuition: They say a woman has a great intuition, but it isn't true for Liza. She has a hard time reading between the lines and telling good people from bad people. Maybe it's because she tries to see the good in everyone, wants to believe that deep down inside everyone is a good person. She's been hurt more than once because of her lack of intuition.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Wide set, slightly hooded, light amber.

Hair: Styled pixie cut.

Face: Heart-shaped face with full lips and a slightly button nose.

Clothes: She likes skirts and layers. Though she's starting to break out into tank tops and skirts when the warmer weather comes.

Hey Saint,

Kao here to get your girly stamped so you can get to playing her. biggrin

Her hobbies look fine as do her virtues, so you're good there.

For her temper flaw, it needs to be something seen more readily. As it is a slow build and not often seen. And it clashes a bit with her positive virtue, they need to be tied somehow to keep them from clashing. Is she prone to blowing up because she constantly trying to look on the bright side and therefore has less small rants and more major explosion as she lefts stuff pile up and isn't letting her steam off the top regularly?

Her impulsive flaw clashes with both her positive virtue and her a few things written in her bad intuition flaw. It just needs some rewording were her snap judgement comes in, or more some specification because currently it reads like she making bad judgments against people, but her positive virtue makes it unlikely she would do that. So um maybe she to quick to think the best of people, accepting a ride from a stranger, maybe allowing people to use her, knowingly or unknowingly? Maybe she the friend always paying for dinner, cabs, movies? A I got it mentality. It's a little hard to explain but hopefully this helps a little.

Bad intuition reads well, but together with impulsive, they seem like they could be put together and labeled poor judgment and maybe adding another flaw?

Her powered side looks fine.

Quote me back when you are ready for another look through, or aim me (Shizu6616).

Looks much better, still a little iffy on the temper flaw, its much better. It still seems like something that wouldn't be seen to often and I guess I'm just trying to judge a time frame/ frequency for it because of her positive virtue, but it definitely no longer clashes. Maybe it because it pertains to pessimistic people at the moment. I think a little broadening will fix this and then you're good to go.

Quote me back, or aim me if you need help!