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kuropeco

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:42 pm


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USERNAME: _waterUwaiting4_
CHARACTERS INVOLVED: llyr + notty + fishghoul + sealghoul + elysia + puppy*
BRIEF SUMMARY OF FEARFICTION: upon the great ship the big Puddles sails the beautiful seas - but then they get attacked :C
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*aka Llryendil, Merope, Amphitrite, Sibyl + Erebus
PostPosted: Sat Feb 22, 2014 9:56 pm


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kuropeco

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 22, 2014 10:14 pm


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once upon a time

in a far away land

there was a boat.

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THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES. And it was a good ship, a really good ship, with lots of good people on it and lots of friends. Llyr was the head of the Ship because he is the writer of this story, but his best friend notty was also head of the ship because he was the bestest friend ever and he has pretty blue hair and fins /ooooop[]

there was also a pretty ghoul named fishghoul who had a big pretty tail and another girl named seal who lpppppp[]]]] likes to smile alot and who turns into a pretty animal and then a cute dog who wags his tail and plays in the water and likes to swim a lot and captain Llyr had brought along his herpalotl ely because she is his favorite but shhh don't tell the others because they'll get jealous and want to come along too

THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES /;;ppo sailed along the open seas in search of treasure because treasure is fun treasure is like the best thing ever and it has lots of sparkly things and shiny things and everyone likes shiny things and so everyone just wanted treasure so they stayed aboard the GREAT SHIP PUDDLESssssssssssssss.// so that they could find the treasure

and while they were on board THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES they became the best of friends especially notty and llyr because notty just thought llyr was the coolest person ever and llyr thought he smelled nicely of water because water is the best smell and fishghoul liked to swim in the water beside THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES and catch fish in the ocean and seal liked to swim beside her and they became the bestest of friends because seal was so happy and nice.

except one dayy11111l5llll they got attacked by bandits!!11 who wanted to steal their treasure and everyone was really scared because they wanted to keep their treasure but they didnt want the bandits to kill them so the great captain llyr and his trusted herpalotl ely defended the ship with their powers and threw the bandits overboard and then THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES was safe again

except the bandits climbed back on the ship and this time they took notty and seal and puppy hostage and they tried to take them back onto their bandit ship and llyr was really upset and he yelled STOP YOU BANDITS at them and they wouldn't listennnn...../// so llyr and fishghoul decided to fight back against the bandits and llyr threw ely at them and ely ate the head off of one of the bandits and then he fell overboard and then puppy saved seal by biting another bandit and then notty smacked the other bandit with his hand and then all of the bandits fell overboard into the ocean and swam away except for the bandit with no head because he had no head so he couldnt swim away he just sort of sank to bottom of the ocean which was sad but he was a bandit so it wasn't that sad

and then it was just llyr and notty and fishghoul and seal and puppy and.32000000-- ely all together again and they were all the bestest of friends forever and ever and they sailed THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES to get all the treasure ever in the world the end

PostPosted: Sun Feb 23, 2014 4:21 pm


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USERNAME: Moon_Moon
REVIEW HERE: The random use of capitals leaves a bit to be desired, as do the use of 'symbols'. I am not sure if common is your first language or if you are new to technology but overall an amusing read. The attachment is a nice touch.


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 23, 2014 7:14 pm


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USERNAME: ForDaLoveOfFluff4
REVIEW HERE: @ ~ @ The random numbers?...I don't ..get it..
Um, but it was funny! And I ttly liked the ships name! ... Like the commentator above I enjoyed the attachment too! : - )
PostPosted: Wed Feb 26, 2014 11:58 pm


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USERNAME: AllHelBrokeLoose
REVIEW HERE: I like all the action and decapitation and treasure hunting, but is there any shipping happening on THE GREAT SHIP PUDDLES? It would awesome if there was. Yanno, aside from friendSHIP.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 11:21 pm


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USERNAME: Singing_Mermaid
REVIEW HERE:Ship adventures sound fun! I wish I could go on a ship adventure with the people! Especially the Fishghoul! She sounds fun! CCCC:
PostPosted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 9:02 am


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USERNAME: passyouby123
REVIEW HERE: ... was this written by a scareling?


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 9:04 am


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USERNAME: flappybird333
REVIEW HERE: I like the treasure map, and treasure!! Creeple who steal are meanie heads, but friendship is always the best. Friendship forever!!! o v o
PostPosted: Fri Feb 28, 2014 9:04 am


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USERNAME: 2ghoul4skool
REVIEW HERE: Needs more ROMANCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE


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