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[Q] Civvy Mildred Hill ((Crits please!))

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TeaTimeJess

Dapper Kitten

PostPosted: Thu Feb 20, 2014 4:05 pm


Name: Mildred Hill

Nickname: Middy

Age: 16

Birthday: February 22nd

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Aquamarine

Blood Type: A+

Fav. Food: Fruit Pies

Hated Food: Quiche

School: Crystal Academy (Scholarship)

Hobbies:

Camping - Mildred absolutely loves the feeling of the outdoors! The wind through her hair, the dust in her feet, the smell after a few days without a shower--it is all in good fun! Her family used to go on long camping trips every summer. It's slowed down a bit now that she's been accepted to Crystal and doesn't have as much time anymore, but every once in a while she'll go on a walk and spend a night under the stars just to feel alive again.

Line Dancing - Aside from camping, there's nothing better than pulling her boots on and going down to the local country bar for some good olde' fashioned line dancing with her friends! Of course, they have to go before it gets too late since they're still much too young to drink! But it hasn't stopped her from trying a bit at home. Don't tell!

Virtues:

Strong-willed -- If Mildred wants something done, she gets it done. There's no tip-toeing around this cowgirl! She'll be blunt and to the point, unwavering in any decision she makes. This is part of how she got into Crystal--dedication and perseverance pays off!

Gentle -- She can also be extremely warm and kind-hearted. She's the type of gal to let you be the shoulder you can cry on and give you a warm smile while wiping away your tears. She always knows what to say to make you feel better and warm your heart up with her loving hugs.

Flaws:

Cocky & Arrogant -- Sometimes her confidence can take a turn too far and Mildred can come off as extremely cocky or arrogant. Because of this she can be abrasive at times, so it's not easy for her to make friends without seeming like a huge b-word.

Selective Hearing -- Mildred doesn't always listen when people are talking to her. She kind of takes only what she wants to hear and dismisses the rest, if she listens at all. This has and probably will continue to give her loads of trouble down the road, not only putting a strain on her relationships with others but also on tasks she may need to complete but wasn't quite listening to the directions.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Wide round hazel eyes, filled with love for life and curiosity.

Hair: Long strawberry blonde hair that she wears in a variety of ways. Usually it is either tied up in a messy ponytail or just down.

Face: Oval face, freckles dot the bridge of her nose spreading over her round rosy cheeks and fading as her face curves around towards her ears. Her ears are averaged sized, and she has a thin upper lip than nearly vanishes when she smiles. Her bottom lip is more supple and pink, and her teeth are small and dainty save for her two front which are mildly over sized in comparison to the rest.

Clothes: (Uniform I suppose?) If you want an alternate outfit, jean shorts and cowgirl boots with a plaid s**t tied at the hip, white undershirt, and sleeves rolled up and buttoned at the elbows. (Very typical, but oh so comfortable!)
PostPosted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 7:11 am


Hello, Mocha! I hope you are enjoying Moonshop!

I was looking through some of the quests that were up and noticed yours! What sort of crit are you looking for? There are two types available, and for future reference, if you post for crit here you can let the staff member looking over your profile know which type! The first type is basic crit, which is to get your character stamped as quickly as possible as long as it meets the minimum requirements of the shop, or the second type is seeking crit to try and improve and flesh out your profile so it will be as strong a contender as possible for things like concept contests!

Which are you looking for? Because, I think your girl fits at least the minimum requirements for a character! She has two virtues and flaws that work well together, and at least two hobbies which look like they could be fun and interesting!

Orangeish Sherbert

Rebel Millionaire


TeaTimeJess

Dapper Kitten

PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2014 9:16 pm


Orangeish Sherbert


Oh thank you very much Sherbert! ^-^

Hmm....I think while I would like basic so I could "play" her, I think maybe the second indepth one would be much better for a good character! So the second type! ^o^
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