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chiickadee

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 2:52 pm


User ImageName: Audrey Louise

Nickname: Affectionately called "Audrey Lou" by her extended family.

Age: 17

Birthday: February 14th

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: Amethyst

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Strawberry Parfait

Hated Food: Those ugly little fruit cups.

School: Crystal Academy, on scholarship for Singing!

Hobbies:

Singing: First and foremost, Audrey's most esteemed hobby is her singing talent. She mostly does theatrical singing. To start at the beginning, she was enrolled in a children's theatre when she was young, and continued as she grew up. She found that singing was her best talent in theatre; while she wasn't the best actor or dancer, singing was what really came through for her. Nowadays she occasionally works with professional theatre companies- no big roles or spotlights, just the occasional "child" role because she's so petite and can fit the archetype needed.

Celebrity Magazines: Audrey really can't help herself when it comes to celebrity gossip. She knows it's shallow and vain, but it's just too fun! She's always stopping at the store to pick up the latest editions of Seventeen, Glamour, Lucky and Ok! It gives her solace to always be up to date on what her favorite celebrities are doing. Maybe some of the vanity has wiped off on her, but she tries to keep a level mind about the "celebrity world" and the "real world."

Flower Pressing: Audrey has a confession to make. She is totally a leaf ripper. When she's waiting for the bus or walking to the store, she totally grabs leafs, buds, twigs, and stems and slowly rips them apart. She always think its interesting to see all the membranes and connective parts up close. Mostly it's a fidgeting habit; in the same way that people check their cell phone while waiting, Audrey plays with plants. She has a little book that she carries everywhere to press the more interesting plants, and likes showing people her little book.

Virtues:

Inclusive: Due to the fact that Audrey has an ENORMOUS extended family, all located in Destiny City, she's very willing to listen to all walks of life. Her family has always supported her in all aspects, so Audrey tries to mirror that mindset. She doesn't judge that which is different from her, but instead tries to understand and become cohesive with it. Audrey is gay, so growing up learning to accept her sexuality made her that much more aware of how icky it feels to be treated with prejudice. That doesn't mean there aren't some things she disagrees with (since of course, nobody can like EVERYBODY in the world), but she tries to make sure everyone is in the same boat and nobody is being left behind.

Optimist: Coupling her inclusive nature, Audrey is wholly optimistic about most situations. She's a glass-half-full kind of person, who attempts to see the good in things before acting upon impulse. It makes her a bit of a goodie-two shoes in an almost irksome way sometimes, something that some could find annoying. Audrey is just very hopeful about what the world and tomorrow can bring.

Natural: Whatever she's doing, Audrey is always herself. She doesn't readily change herself for insecurities, and words flow from her mouth easily. Part of this was because she had to grow up accepting her sexuality; it was difficult for her to understand that some people weren't going to like her for who she was. Due to this, she adapted by always being herself. Instead of cowering and changing who she was, she decided to be proud of it, always. You won't readily find her bending to another's whims. She likes who she is and isn't afraid to show it.

Flaws:

Credulous: Due to her nonjudgmental disposition, Audrey is often quick to trust the wrong types of people. She always gives people the benefit of the doubt, meaning she is easily used by nefarious types. She always tries to see the good in things, and this can often result in giving people too much slack for their wrongdoings.

Dazed: Having a large family meant that growing up there were ALWAYS people around her. She's an extrovert, meaning she recharges by being around people, but she also is introverted in the sense that after a while, too much stimulation is too much. Unfortunately, this means she zones out a lot, often sticking to her daydreams and speaking loftily. She was "overstimulated" in a way; too many people caused her to recede a bit more into her mind. She's a bit too much Luna Lovegood and not enough Hermione.

Clingy: When Audrey really loves something or someone, it becomes part of her family. She accepts you as you are, wholly and completely. This also means that she has a really hard time when people let go of her. She's very clingy in that once she considers you a friend, you are never going to stop being her friend. It happens with personal issues too; if she believes you're in trouble, she'll sometimes push boundaries in "helping." She repeatedly has accidentally ended friendships because she clung a little too hard to the idea of the friendship, rather than the person themselves.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Wide, candy red eyes.

Hair: Blonde hair that comes to a set of curls. Laurelite is a great example of the feeling I was going for.

Face: A petite face that's heart shaped. Looks a bit younger than her age.

Clothes: Crystal academy uniform~
For outside of school, see reference!
PostPosted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 2:53 pm


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Senshi: Sailor Sheba, senshi of Leadership!
xxxxx- For whatever reason, the english wikipedia seems to not host the page on Sheba anymore? You can find info on the Sheba minor planet here though, and it's on wikipedia's official list for minor planets...
xxxxx- Sheba is named for the Queen of Sheba, queen of Persia. She led a very rich nature, lush with wealth. The Queen of Sheba acted as a diplomat to Jerusalem, wherein she charmed King Solomon, who promised her anything she desired. Some say they had a relationship, though most historians agree this is largely myth. When Solomon offered her gifts, she refused and returned to her country. You can read more about her here.

Challenge: In the name of Sheba, follow my lead!

Symbol: A fleur-de-lis.

Fuku Colour: White!
Main Color: Black
Secondary Color: Gold and Red

Fuku: Tadah! <- more detail there than on the image to the left

Collar -- Plain black collar! One gold stripe!
Bow -- She has two little black bow tufts below her brooch + big butt bow~
Bodice -- Just the basic style of fuku~
Sleeves -- See reference
Brooch -- A golden crown with a red gem in the center. Here's some inspiration!
Bottoms -- Very very short ruffly edges to her fuku- a good example is Miss Europa. Black in color!
Tiara -- Traditional tiara, gold with a red jewel in the center!
Choker -- Just a simple red choker!
Shoes -- BOOOTSSsss. See reference, because I'm bad at describing booties. She also has white tights with a crown pattern along the top.
Gloves -- White gentleman's gloves.
Accessories -- Uhhh BIG GIANT RINGLEADER COAT. See reference because its a bit too complicated to describe xD

To ... give some shape to her attacks, I was working around the idea that a leader is someone who gives themselves for the sake of others. They are there to serve those they are leading, and protect them from harm that could come, while also empowering them to fight evils in their own way. Her normal and super attacks are based around the idea of a shield and protection, while her eternal attack is based around the idea of empowerment.




User ImageAttacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: Sheba Golden Diversion
Descripion: Sheba holds her arms out to her sides, and then thrusts them forward, as though conducting an orchestra, guiding and moving her opponent's attacks elsewhere.
Effects: This attack allows her to "lead" an opponent's attack away from her body. To clarify, it essentials acts the same way a shield would, except instead of a shield, she "leads" the attack in another direction. So in example, a negaverser's swing of their sword might miss. A corrupted senshi's lazer beam conveniently ricochet's in a different direction. This will obviously change between opponents, and will never be used in a case that legitimately controls the opponent. It is merely a shield, a counter to attacks that come towards her.
Range: Only works on one person per attack.
Backlash: She can only use the attack on character's of EQUAL POWER LEVEL. This means if she uses it on a super/eternal equivalent level, it will fail completely.
Duration: It can only be used once per battle, on one attack.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Sheba Lovely Diversion
Descripion: Sheba holds her arms out to her sides, and then thrusts them forward, as though conducting an orchestra, guiding and moving her opponent's attacks
Effects: This attack allows her to "lead" an opponent's attack away from her body, and use it as a counterattack. So if a negaverser swings their sword at her, they feel the pain of that attack. If a corrupted senshi fires a lazer beam, it is reflected to hit the corrupted senshi. It is not an equivalent exchange; if the corrupted senshi summons a wave of water, Sheba's counterattack will feel like an inconvenient raincloud. This is definitely up to the other player to decide, and will never be used without permission.
Range: Only works on one person per attack.
Backlash: She can only use the attack on character's of EQUAL OR LOWER POWER LEVEL. This means if she uses it on an eternal equivalent power level, it will fail. Additionally, it makes her feel incredibly drained, and she has a hard time focusing aftewards.
Duration: It can only be used once per battle, on one attack.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Sheba Leading Distraction
Descripion: Sheba calls out to those around her, while a drumroll winds up. She gestures to senshi closest to her, calling them into her dominion. This eventually results in a bell made of energy ringing behind her. The sound of the bell can be heard by any senshi close to her, and has a healing, melodious sound.
Effects: Senshi close to her will feel more empowered. This attack heals VERY minor wounds (so tiny cuts and scrapes, but not broken bones and fractures). More importantly, it energizes senshi who are feeling worn down, giving them the strength to carry on. The idea behind this attack is that Sheba (the leader) takes on the brunt of her followers' damage, as any true leader should.
Range: Only works on 1-2 senshi near her. She has to really focus on who she's empowering; it isn't an AoE attack. She selects her target and then focuses her energy to them. Getting one senshi is relatively easy, but getting two can be difficult and sometimes results in failure.
Backlash: Whatever energy she gives to another senshi, she loses herself. By healing and empowering another senshi, she herself grows more weary and more vulnerable to enemy attacks. If she gives too much, it can even result in her powering down.
Duration: The healing is relatively permanent. The empowerment only lasts about 30-40 seconds, and wanes as time goes on. The drain on Sheba is permanent, and she has no way to regain the energy she's lost.

chiickadee

Princess Hoarder


matisha

Business Vampire

PostPosted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 4:16 am


[ Just to let you know I have an accepted Sailor Hera quest as well and just wanted to let you know! (not saying you have to change it of course, all names are up for grabs before being a real character!!!! ) just in case we both wanted to come up with plan B's! Also I am loving the art, it is gorgeous!! <3 ]
PostPosted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 1:40 pm


Matisha
[ Just to let you know I have an accepted Sailor Hera quest as well and just wanted to let you know! (not saying you have to change it of course, all names are up for grabs before being a real character!!!! ) just in case we both wanted to come up with plan B's! Also I am loving the art, it is gorgeous!! <3 ]


Oh no! Im sorry i didnt know ;n;

But unfortunately i am going to attempt to keep it, because hera has special ties to audrey's sister quest, sailor rasalas. The story goes that hera put the constellation leo into the sky, so its kind of perfect for our spheres/relationship. I can definitely see why hera is important for the senshi of peacocks though! So no hard feelings if you get the name either! I hope its the same for you.

And thanks for letting me know ahead of time! I appreciate it <333

chiickadee

Princess Hoarder


matisha

Business Vampire

PostPosted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 2:47 am


chimarii


Oh no! Im sorry i didnt know ;n;

But unfortunately i am going to attempt to keep it, because hera has special ties to audrey's sister quest, sailor rasalas. The story goes that hera put the constellation leo into the sky, so its kind of perfect for our spheres/relationship. I can definitely see why hera is important for the senshi of peacocks though! So no hard feelings if you get the name either! I hope its the same for you.

And thanks for letting me know ahead of time! I appreciate it <333


Of course sweetie!!! I'll get researching just in case *smooches you and runs off*
PostPosted: Wed Feb 26, 2014 9:07 pm


Hello, Chimarii!

First, I have to say that your concept art is just gorgeous! It is a beautiful design! The civilian profile seems pretty good to me, though the first thing I have to mention is that the name Hera has officially been taken at this point, so before I can stamp her she will need a different name )=

Her attacks are interesting, as well, and I like your information on how the concept of a good leader inspired you in them. I think it is a really interesting take on the sphere, but I think the idea of a leader directing or guiding others is very obviously shown in her super and basic attacks! So, I can very clearly see the ties of 'leading' in them, though it is not as apparent in her eternal attack. I think that abilities presented in it look good, so the only thing I think needs to be done before the eternal can be approved is to explain how that ties into her leadership sphere. I know you mention that the idea is themed around empowerment, but for a stamp it will need a sentence somewhere in the text of the attack that would make it easily identifiable as belonging to the sphere of leadership. But, if you can provide that and can think of a new name for her, I will be back with a stamp!

Orangeish Sherbert

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chiickadee

Princess Hoarder

PostPosted: Wed Feb 26, 2014 10:47 pm


Orangeish Sherbert


Oh that's sad to hear! No worries though.
If you don't mind I'm going to spend a bit of time looking for another name. :'D <3

As for the eternal attack, I've changed the wording to be more concise. I hope it's better written now!
PostPosted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 6:54 am


Good luck with another name, I hope you find one you like soon!

The eternal attack looks good to me, so when you find another name please quote me and I will be back to stamp!

Orangeish Sherbert

Rebel Millionaire


chiickadee

Princess Hoarder

PostPosted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 5:56 pm


Orangeish Sherbert


The name has been changed to Sheba! I hope that's not taken <3

(ignore the image in the second post, i just havent edited it out)
PostPosted: Thu Feb 27, 2014 6:07 pm


Sheba is free! Thank you so much for your patience, here is your stamp!

Best of luck getting her!

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Orangeish Sherbert

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