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byrojesus88

PostPosted: Thu Jan 30, 2014 8:17 pm


Basics
 Name: Jasper Jordan
 Age: 15
 Gender: Male
 Eye color: Light blue
 Hair: Dirty blond
 Sexuality: Straight
 Height: 5 ft. 8
 Weight: 150
 Mortal Parent: Alexandra Jordan
 Nickname: JJ
History
Jasper Jordan grew up in a bad neighborhood on the west side of Atlanta with his mother Alexandra all the way up to the age of 15, because at that age is when he went to camp half blood. The kids in the neighbor were ghetto and the schools were dirty. The ghetto kids nicknamed him JJ’.Even though the schools were dirty Jasper managed to stay a B+ student. Jasper still had a bad reputation in school because of his temper. For example every time he seen some one being bulled he would get mad and step in and solve the problem. Usually by fighting the bully. His mom had to work two jobs to support him and her but she didn’t care. She would come home and sleep for two to three hours then go to her other job while Jasper was asleep. It was rare when the two seen each other. Growing up in an only child household didn’t bother jasper. Actually he quite preferred it. Jasper had a lot of friends. He was a comedian in the school he could make anyone laugh. When it comes down to monsters and Greek mythology. Jasper knew about all of the old myths and stuff but never knew it was true. Until a monster attacked him. A Cyclops trapped him in an alley way but he managed to dodged an attack and run out of the alley way. He ran to his mothers work and told her what happen and she just kept nodding her head and cursing. She went in the back and gapped her car keys and told Jasper to get in the car. After an hour of awkward silence riding along his mother started to talk to him about a camp and how Greek gods are real. They arrived at a sigh that he understood to be Camp half blood but didn’t know what a half blood was. He walked under the sign and towards a big blue house after a farewell with his mother. He walked down a hill and up the stairs and knocked on the door it was night so he didn’t know if anyone would answer. A half horse half man which he understood to be a centaur. He introduced himself as Chiron and welcomed him inside and asked him to watch an orientation film. The film had told him that he was a son of an ancient Greek god.

Personality
Jasper is a kind person but if you make him angry is aware because he will win the argument or fight. He is chilled and laded back. If a sport event is going down he knows about it. If you need any advice on sports he’s your guy. He likes to flirt with girls and make them laugh as much as he can. He loves to make people laugh even if it’s him self.
Likes:
Sports, girls, friends, and games
Dislikes:
Bullies, preps, and monsters
Weapon of choice:
Golden sword and Bronze shield
PostPosted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:30 am


OK first off, Campers must be claimed by the time they are 13, so he can't be that he is his first year at camp at age 15.
Second the History is going all over the place, first you go with how he went to camp then life back home and then again to coming to camp.
Third, there are several typos and spelling errors that I see, keep in mind this RP is semi-literate, so you need to fix that.
Please expand the Personality, add more likes and dislikes.
And we need the weapons information, what type of sword and such, also Greeks only use Celestial Bronze weapons.

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