Welcome to Gaia! ::

♥ In the Name of the Moon! ♥

Back to Guilds

A Sailor Moon based B/C shop! Come join us! 

Tags: Sailor, Moon, Scouts, Breedables, Senshi 

Reply Accepted Quests
[Q] Desmona Arienne Seton // Lt. Hauyne (crit/stamp)

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod

PostPosted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 1:45 pm



Another day in this carnival of souls
Another night settles in as quickly as it goes
The memories of shadows, ink on the page
And I can't seem to find my way home

~Five Finger Death Punch, Far from Home

Name: Desmona Arienne Seton

Nickname: Des, Dessy, Mona - only her brother is permitted to call her this

Age: 16

Birthday: March 26th

Sign: Aries

Gemstone: Fire Agate and Bloodstone are her personal favorites

Ancient: Bloodstone, Amethyst
Traditional: Ruby Stone, Diamond
Modern: Aquamarine Stones, Fire Agate, Anyolite, Aventurine Stones, Bloodstones, Pink Tourmaline, Dravite... aka Brown Tourmaline, Magnetite, Citrine Crystals, Carnelian, Kunzite, Axinite, Bixbite, Super Seven, Crocoite, Stellerite, Sardonyx, Magnesite
(source: Here)

Blood Type: AB negative

Fav. Food: baked macaroni with bacon, sausage and fresh herbs (basil and dill)

Hated Food: anything that has tomato or spinach in it... just blegh. (there is a story behind this...a childhood trauma that she has been trying very very hard to forget)

School: St. Magdalena's Seminary


Hobbies:

Fighting: From the time she was around ten years old, Dessy spent more time running with street gangs than with the foster family of the moment. Running errands and causing minor mischief mostly. She had some morals. Stealing small things or from people who wouldn't be hurt by the loss.

She quickly learned how to fight, to protect herself and those smaller and weaker than her. But as she grew older, and the fights increased in frequency... and she became a better fighter, Dessy realised how much she enjoyed fighting. The adrenaline, rush of victory, even the sting of defeat. It was all good.

Though she would often sneak out for a good street fight while she was in the foster care system, she knows such behaviour could jeopardise her staying with her brother if she got caught doing something like that while in his care, so she is searching for an acceptable alternative that isn't that expensive.

She still goes out with some of her old buddies to an underground fight club, but will only fight in bouts with certain stipulations (hand-to-hand, unarmed combat only, no going for crippling or disabling points to end the bouts, no breaking bones, etc.).Maybe she could find a gym and work as a janitor or something in exchange for lessons. Perhaps there is a fighting type/ martial arts club or program at school, or she could form a sanctioned club.

Whatever the case, she limits her bouts now and always lets Justin know where she is and when.

Reading: Though she never really had a stable home, or stability in her education, but she was always bright and quick to learn. When she learned how to read, and realised that she could go anywhere, do anything, be anybody, through the power of words, she was hooked and could not get enough. So whenever she isn't doing schoolwork, spending time with her brother, or out there honing her body through fighting, she can be found with a book in her hands.

Because of her spotty education and lazy way of speaking, some people think her to be unintelligent... she has no interest in proving them wrong, so she often reads things like Nancy Drew, The Boxcar Children, or The Babysitter's Club when around others, but in the privacy of home, she enjoys the classics- like Phantom of the Opera, any Jane Austin, Wuthering Heights, or the like.

Spending time with Justin: In order to be named his sister's guardian, Justin had to have a home, a stable job, and the necessary money to care for them both. He works two jobs, generally nine hours a day/seven days a week, so being able to spend any with him is a rare gift, one she will take full advantage of. A favorite activity is curl up on the couch together with a bowl of popcorn and watch old movies. For actual outings, they will go out to a cafe and then for a stroll in the park, or small low-key musical performances in small local venues.


Virtues:

Optimistic//Despite her experiences with people, including the best and worst, the caring and the indifferent, she still believes that there is still good in the world. Both people, and experiences. She is mostly upbeat and generally tries to help those around her see the good in the bad. Glass half full versus glass half empty kind of thing. Though she is can be found in moments of doubt, if someone finds her like that, she will quickly plaster a smile on her face and act like nothing is wrong, and everything is good in the world...

Principled// There is a definite line between right and wrong, and she will never cross it. If you tell her a secret, she will never divulge it. If she is asked to take care of something, it is done to the best of her ability. If she finds misplaced items or money or whatever, she will do everything she can to find it's owner. This makes her honest, someone that can be depended on in most situations.

Just don't ask her to do something that is wrong... Unless not doing something would cause her harm or jeopardise her living situation. Self-preservation and the preservation of her family is the most important thing in the world to her. And she will do absolutely anything to protect those two things.


Determined//If she has set her mind to something, come hell or high water, she will do it. Going to catch up with those of her age scholastically? She will stay up for days straight to study. To win an important fight? She'll fight until her body gives out, but still stay standing until her opponent can't fight any longer. Just don't get in her away.

She will do whatever it takes to succeed, or if it is impossible to achieve exactly what it is she wants, she will go on until she achieves the next best thing. There is no room for failure in her eyes, and giving up is, in her eyes the biggest failure one can experience.



Flaws:

Insecure//Possessions don't mean much to her, with a few exceptions ( mostly little trinkets from her brother). Possessions are impermanent and can be taken away at the whim of others. But not friends. Friends, true friends, are there by choice. And they will fight to stay by your side.

She is very clingy to those she is close to. It comes from having lost so much. Nothing is permanent, at least nothing she has seen or known, so she holds tightly to what she has. Almost to the point of smothering those she considers to be friends.


Closed-off//It is difficult to get close to people, when you don't know how long you'll be around or how long anything will last.So she pastes on a smile, and acts the way she thinks others would want or expect, so she can fit in somewhat and isn't necessarily alone.

Superficial is all she can give, with the exception of her brother. She often deflects and does not reveal any meaningful facts about herself, rarely telling anyone anything more deep than her favorite color is that shade of blue-green found on peacocks...

If she warms up to anyone, it happens extremely slowly and seems almost unwittingly on her part. If people around for longer than a few months, she might start revealing little bits about her past and herself...


Short-tempered// It could be the hair or her heritage. The product of her upbringing. Well, whatever the cause, she is very quick to take offense and lashes out both verbally and physically. Her fuse runs short but hot. And she is slow to forgive...



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Due to years of improper nutrition and neglect when it was most important, Dessy is short, standing barely five foot three, and is waifishly thin, though with consistant meals and good care, she is starting to fill out somewhat-closer to lean than starved now.

Eyes: a deep forest green, wide, bright, overly large in her face

Hair: slightly curly, falls to just below her butt, bronzy auburn.

Face: heart-shaped, thin, very prominent cheekbones, with a milky complexion and a smattering of freckles high on her cheekbones

Clothes: mostly second-hand, thrift store style. A bit thread-bare, but for the most part in decent condition. She generally prefers tighter pants with longer loose shirts. She is fond of all kinds of hats and large vintage jewelry pieces.

*Note: she has a tattoo of an alligator on the outside of her left ankle (this), and a heron (this) - it starts at the top of her hipbone and extends to the base of her ribcage on her right side.


All the places I've been and things I've seen
A million stories that made up a million shattered dreams
The faces of people I'll never see again
And I can't seem to find my way home

~Five Finger Death Punch, Far from Home

PostPosted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 1:46 pm


Now the dark begins to rise
Save your breath, it's far from over
Leave the lost and dead behind
Now's your chance to run for cover

~ Breaking Benjamin, I Will Not Bow


Negaverse Alias: Lieutenant Hauyne

Challenge:

Uniform:

Primary color: #2B4F81
Secondary colors: #2E37FE, #0147FA and #05E9FF
Not really sure, perhaps theme/suiting to temperment idea:dystopian/apocalyptic fashion ( x, x, x, x, x )
The elements to be included:
Top --
Bottoms --
Gloves -- See weapon
Belt --
Shoes --
Stipulation: the clothing must not be restrictive and allow for easy movement


Weapon -- She is straight-forward, and her weapon follows that philosophy.
Lieutenant: Leather gloves
Captain: Sap Gloves
General: modified Bagh Nakha



I don't want to change the world
I just wanna leave it colder
Light the fuse and burn it up
Take the path that leads to nowhere

~Breaking Benjamin, I Will Not Bow


dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod


dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod

PostPosted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 1:52 pm



About Hauyne (the mineral)


Hauyne is a mineral with a hardness of 6 out of 10 on the Mohs scale of mineral hardness. These Cubicly structured gems are made of sodium aluminum silicate, their full chemical compound being (Na,Ca)4-8Al6Si6(O,S)24(SO4Cl)1-2.

Hauyne is a blue feldspathoid rock-forming mineral, one of four members of the sodalite mineral group that is a component of lapis lazuli. The other three are lazurite, sodalite, and nosean. It is a complex mineral of sodium, calcium, aluminum silicate, and sulfate.

Hauyne forms very bright and attractive though uncommon transparent blue dodecahedral or pseudo-octahedral crystals of the cubic system. It is found more often in rounded, blue, white, and occasionally green grains. It is hard, brittle, has perfect dodecahedral cleavage, and conchoidal to uneven fracture. It is soluble in acids, leaving a silica gel, and fuses easily to a blue-green glass.

It is transparent to translucent, and has a vitreous to greasy luster. Some of this material has been reported to show an orange-red fluorescence under LWUV (long wave ultraviolet light).

Hauyne occurs in alkaline nepheline or leucite-rich igneous rocks, phonolites, and related undersaturated igneous rocks. It forms in silica-poor lavas.

Samples are found in the lavas of Vesuvius and the volcanoes of Lazio, associated with leucite and melilite in tuffs in the Alban hills and in hauynophyres at Monte Vulture (Basilicata) - all in Italy. It has also been found in volcanic bombs in the Rhineland, in lavas in Morocco, and in andesites in France.

It is also known as hauyinte, hauyne, roeblingite.

(source: Here)
PostPosted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 2:07 pm


All about Dessy

Family:
Lise Elisabeth Callahan-Seton: mother (deceased at age 30)
Bryan Caleb Seton: father (deceased at age 36)

Shortly after the birth of Desmona, Lise and Bryan went out for a date night, leaving eight year old Justin and Desmona with a family friend. The night ended in tragedy when they were crashed into by a semi, whose driver hadn't slept for almost two days, they were pronounced dead on arrival by the paramedics. Since there was no blodd relative to take them, and no family friend willing to, the children were placed in the system. They were bounced from home to home, sometimes together, but more often seperately.

From the time he got out of the system at eighteen, Justin tried everything to get custody of Dessy, it was only very recently that he mangaged it.

Justin Alexei Callahan: half-brother and legal guardian, 24


dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod


dawns_aura

Peaceful Demigod

PostPosted: Sat Feb 14, 2015 4:04 pm


Open for crits
PostPosted: Sun Mar 01, 2015 11:46 am


Hi, Dawns_Aura! Since you requested crits in your thread title, I'm assuming it's okay for me to be here! I'm going to give Dessy and her powered side a quick pass. This is nothing official, I'm not shop staff, so please don't feel like you need to take any of my recommendations - if I say anything here you disagree with, please feel free to tell me that I'm full of s**t. wink

General info

The school is spelled "St. Magdalena's," no hyphen, but otherwise all of this looks good!

Hobbies

Fighting- What you have here is the history of the hobby, but not how Dessy currently participates in it. Since she's in a reformatory school (is she there for fighting?), how does she get her fix? Does she sneak out to run with her old friends? Does she run or participate in a secret fight club at the school? Has she signed up for any formal training, like martial arts lessons or boxing? Do her fights have rules - fists? Knives? Does she prefer armed or unarmed combat? I'm assuming she's not fighting to the death...

Reading- What kinds of books does Dessy prefer? Fiction or non-fiction? What genres, lengths, etc? Does she have any particular favorites? Is she the kind of person to reread a book over and over, or is she always looking for the next great story?

Spending time with Justin- Looks good to me. smile

Virtues

Optimistic- Looks good!

Principled- I'd like to know more about where this "line" is for Dessy - since she's got some very violent pastimes - and how that would interact with her sense of self-preservation. Will she keep a secret, even if it means incurring harm to herself? Will she stand up for someone, even if she doesn't benefit - or is directly inconvenienced by doing so? Do her principles stop where being self-sacrificing begin, or is she willing to go all the way for people?

Determined- Does Dessy always succeed in what she wants? What happens when she doesn't? Does she let it get her down, or does she just resolve to do better next time?

Flaws

Insecure- Does this apply to physical possessions as well? Is Dessy a bit of a hoarder, or does she only care about people and not things?

Closed-off- You might want to consider how this interacts with insecure. How does she make friends when she's unwilling to open up? Does she make friends quickly and try to distract people by asking them a lot of questions about themselves without really giving anything away, or is she super slow to warm up to people and let them into her circle?

Short-tempered- Looks good!

Physical Description

I know it's not on the form, but you might want to add a section for Dessy's body type. How tall is she? Is she thin, curvy, chubby? Are her muscles really obvious and bulky, or is she leaner, or does she have enough body fat to smooth them out?

Powered side

Love these colors! Love these clothing ideas - especially links four and five.

I really dig your choices of weapon, the progression everything here! It makes a lot of sense for the profile you've written.

Closing thoughts

I think this profile is in good shape so far - you just have a few traits that would benefit from you being more in-depth. Good luck on your quest, and feel free to quote me if you have any more questions! biggrin

Silverah

Handsome Shoujo

11,200 Points
  • Magical Girl 50
  • Team Jacob 100
  • Tooth Fairy 100

Sami-Fire

Devoted Senshi

9,325 Points
  • Magical Girl 50
  • Over Easy 100
  • Invisibility 100
PostPosted: Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:32 pm


Hello, Dawns_Aura! I'm here to take a look at your profile and get it ready for stamping.

Hobbies look good, so that can sit for now. Virtues also look good. Flaws look good, too! I was a bit concerned about Desmona having tattoos at her age, but it might be plausible given her history. The Nega side also looks good from here (I take it her Captain/General weapons don't have magical side-effects). So, your profile has a clean bill of health from here! I'll plop down my trial stamp, and then a GM should come around to give you the full stamp eventually.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2015 9:57 am


Hey there Dawns! 8D Your profile looks spiffy to me! Have a STAMP, and good luck in getting her!

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Orangeish Sherbert

Rebel Millionaire

Reply
Accepted Quests

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum