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AstoriaFallen

Winter Wolf

PostPosted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 10:35 pm


Name: Naressa
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Sexual Preference: Straight
Craft/Hall/Rank: Harpercraft - Apprentice
Physical Description:
Naressa is slim, but don't let that fool you. She's got a grip that would shock anyone that just looked at her. She stands at about 5'7" and weighs 140lbs and is well muscled in a lithe sort of way from helping do just about any job she could get her hands on. Her eyes are a light shade of green and her hair is a lovely shade of chestnut that is often tied back in a braid. Her skin is light, though not fair.
Personality:
She is extremely hard working and believes that everything is earned by dedication and commitment. Her father was beastmaster and her mother was a Healer so she did her best to make them both proud by being the best child they could have, especially being the only child they had. Her mother had gone through some complications with her birth that left her infertile and the lack of siblings made naressa want to make up for what she believed was her fault.
She might seem brutally truthful but she means it in a caring and helpful way. She always hated being lied to as a child and therefore deemed it her mission in life to tell the truth, even if it hurt to hear.
There are times when she speaks before she thinks and that has gotten her into a tight bind every now and again but she works through it. Most of the time it's harmless but sometimes people take it the wrong way until they get to know her.
One big thing about her is the fact that if she thinks she's right, she won't back down until you can either prove she's wrong or just go with it. She rarely second guesses herself and once she's made up her mind on something or about someone it usually sticks. She believes in first impressions, so if you come off the wrong way you might as well kiss any chance of being her friend (or more) goodbye.
When it comes to being in a group of people she has found it difficult to make friends at times, but when it comes down to it she will always tell you the truth and sometimes people can see that, or they get offended and that’s that. She does try to keep her bluntness down a notch because it can be a problem creator and she’s aware of this and is trying to get better at this. She’s a passive aggressive personality type in most cases. She can be very leading and she can sometimes let someone else take the stand. It really depends on what is going on. She likes to be around others, but tends to be a bit alone because not many can stand her honesty, but she is trying to work on this so she can have a wider group of friends, not that she has many right now.
If she knows she’s right she won’t let someone call her a lair and will prove her point at just about any cost within reason. She won’t humiliate anyone, but she will point out the hard facts and make sure she is heard. If there are a negative consequence, which is 90% likely, she will take them as they come. It’s part of the package when it comes to standing up for yourself in such a manner. She may be a bit disgruntled about the outcome, but overall she knows it is an expected result and just tries to find a different way to come about things. Live and learn is one of her mottos.
She wants to be the best she can in what she knows. She apprenticed with her mother and wants to help out as many people and dragons alike with the knowledge she has. More so, she just wants to be accepted for who she is. She knows she’s a bit rough around the edges, but down inside is just a young woman screaming to be loved. She just never really learned how to be social because there weren’t many kids for her to grow up with. She is concerned that she might not be searched and just might not impress when it comes to the hatchings, but she tries to not think about that and wants to just handle the situations as they come at her.

Strengths: Hardworking, Passionate, Trustworthy and Committed
Weaknesses: Naïve, Stubborn, Outspoken and Brutally Honest

History:
The only child to Neylin and Alekan she grew up well off but she resented herself at times because she always heard people talking about how it was her birth that made her mother unable to have more children. She always tried to find ways to compensate for being the only child and was often over working herself doing multiple chores and tasks.
When Naressa was young threadfall hit her hold horribly before the dragon riders were able to arrive and she had watched, devastated, as homes were burned around them and people injured and even killed in the ordeal. To this day she still recalls the events from time to time remembering that there are dangers that befall their peaceful skies and has made a silent promise to herself that she would one day help fight threadfall as a dragon rider, if the chance ever arose.
In her youth years she was extremely sensitive and took everything personally but she finally grew out of it when she hit her early teens and started to realize that when people said things, it wasn't necessarily a bad thing what they were saying. She just always had this impression that she had done something wrong since the day she was born so it took her a long time to grow out of that mind set.
You would think being the only child to them she would have selected one of their professions, but instead she became an apprentice Harper, though she did pick up a few things here and there from her mother and father along the way. She had a love for music and the way it sounded, it had a way of reaching one's soul in even the darkest of times and she had found she had a knack for it. As much as she would have wanted to apprentice to her mother the harper craft called to her more strongly.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 7:33 pm


AstoriaFallen

Hi thair! Just a few things for you.
- Clarification on her name? You have Narissa in the title and Naressa as the name.
- Craft says harper, but in her description you have that she's always found helping with the whers and runnerbeasts. Why? There's the chance her hands could become severely damaged and she wouldn't be able to play anymore.
- She was apprenticed to her mom (A healer) but she somehow became a harper. Can you go into detail why this changed?

magnadearel


AstoriaFallen

Winter Wolf

PostPosted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 8:48 pm


XD yea i'll fix all that. I was using a character I had made already and I guess I forgot to change a few things XD
PostPosted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:19 pm


AstoriaFallen

Quote me when you get the changes made. I'd like to get her approved before the clutch is ready. ^_^

magnadearel


AstoriaFallen

Winter Wolf

PostPosted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:28 pm


magnadearel
PostPosted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:42 pm


AstoriaFallen

The only sticking point I have is the sentence in her physical description.
"She was always found helping the Wher and Runnerbeast handlers most of the time and that kept her actively engaged, giving her the physique she now holds."

It does not make sense for a harper apprentice to be working with herdbeasts or whers (particularly whers). She would be spending most of her time working on harper duties (singing, writing music, learning to play different instruments, making instruments, etcs).

Suggestions:
- You could say in some of her spare time she helps the herdbeasts handlers
- or take that out completely.

magnadearel


AstoriaFallen

Winter Wolf

PostPosted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:52 pm


magnadearel
AstoriaFallen

The only sticking point I have is the sentence in her physical description.
"She was always found helping the Wher and Runnerbeast handlers most of the time and that kept her actively engaged, giving her the physique she now holds."

It does not make sense for a harper apprentice to be working with herdbeasts or whers (particularly whers). She would be spending most of her time working on harper duties (singing, writing music, learning to play different instruments, making instruments, etcs).

Suggestions:
- You could say in some of her spare time she helps the herdbeasts handlers
- or take that out completely.


whoops forgot that part was in her personality XD i'm taking it out lol
PostPosted: Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:55 pm


*Stamps approval on Char's forehead*
=D Good luck Astoria!

magnadearel

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