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 Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:27 am
As 2014 just started, I have taken it upon myself. To become the next "rookie of the year" As some may not care, this is a big deal for up and comers such as myself and who won last year, which was Salem. In 2014, you will see me being on almost all the time. Like I usually am, at the top of my game. Improving on what I am given and morph myself into what can be called the rookie of the year. Like some say, titles do not matter exactly in a persons career. But it is the cherry on top of my tasteful roleplay. But, this thread was just basically me ramming on how I vow to do my best for each fed I am currently with. Whether it be WWF:G or BBW. But, I have a question for some of you. Who haven't already answered this question. "What do you think about my roleplay? If you looked at it, and how can I improve?" I am being told I am doing fine, but I want someone to correct anything I have that may be a flaw. As I take roleplay maybe a bit serious. But, it is because it is one of my favorite hobbies/activities.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:36 am
I haven't seen much of your work but looking forward to seeing what you can do.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:42 am
Harli_Nightmare I haven't seen much of your work but looking forward to seeing what you can do. Thanks Harli, and what are you doing up at this "early hour"?
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 3:17 am
TheManWhoLostHisSmile Harli_Nightmare I haven't seen much of your work but looking forward to seeing what you can do. Thanks Harli, and what are you doing up at this "early hour"? I'm in Australia, bro. It's 9:16pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 3:18 am
Harli_Nightmare TheManWhoLostHisSmile Harli_Nightmare I haven't seen much of your work but looking forward to seeing what you can do. Thanks Harli, and what are you doing up at this "early hour"? I'm in Australia, bro. It's 9:16pm Ah.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 5:37 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 7:36 am
A bold statement.
Any chance you could post some links to your matches/promos? Might help us help you.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 9:52 am
You have a better chance of breaking out in EWA
Despite being GM of FG, I don't see much of you.
So....
Fix that.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 11:14 am
This is the issue. All I see from you man is "I am the best in this company!" and then your matches never seem to get too far. I haven't seen you in any storylines, so perhaps plan something with someone down the line. I dunno what your focus is besides being the next top rookie, but perhaps it should be character development. At the present, your character seems like the typical rookie: "Give me a title shot, I deserve it!" Don't focus on getting titles, because those aren't what get people noticed (in my opinion). What gets people notice are epic storylines and great promos. This is all just my opinion though.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 11:30 am
Yo, just make money and do your thing if you feelin it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 12:10 pm
SwagSummerofSummersofLove Yo, just make money and do your thing if you feelin it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 12:41 pm
Salem Croft SwagSummerofSummersofLove Yo, just make money and do your thing if you feelin it. #MoneyAndHustleInGFed
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 1:39 pm
i like what I've seen of you so far in DHW. My one critique, and it's minor, your punctuation makes it difficult to read your work. you use periods where you need commas or conjunctions. Your writing itself is good once one gets past that or figures out what you mean to say, but I would say work on that. It's not the biggest thing in the world, as Jed's still around and gods know his grammar is horrible. But it would be the only area i can critique.
other than that, like Matt and Chrono said, we don't see much of you. Promos and storylines get you noticed. I like where you're heading in my guild. i like that you set a goal and are going for it. Now you just have to show us more of your character. Other than thinking he's the best in any given federation, what can you show us about him? Does he have a short temper? Is he hot headed and reckless? is he calm and collected? Is he kind of dark?
You can get the gist from those questions. So personally, as you work in DHW at least, I'll be looking to see more of who your character is and how he works, how he interacts with others, besides arson and angel
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:21 pm
Also word of advice, you pull that 'Best' gimmick in EWA, you won't get very far.
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Posted: Thu Jan 02, 2014 2:23 pm
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