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BloodyKateMary89

PostPosted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 6:20 pm


I'm just posting this because my sucky PC won't let me near my journal. Anyways; feedback is appreciated. Any and all.

Silence

When nothing is loud
When everything is afraid
All you hear is
Silence

When somebody dies
And nobody cries
All you hear is depressed
Silence

When cool autumn nights
Turn to cold winter darks
All you hear is muffled
Silence

When snow drifts
And ices your face
All you hear is frozen
Silence

When Night
Vanquishes Day
All you hear is black
Silence

When life
Fades away
All you hear is peaceful
Silence

I have another poem. Just because I don't like making more and more topics for single poems:

Time

An hourglass
A clock
A sundial;
A watch

Slowly, slowly,
begins to creep
towards the time
that nobody seeks.

But all travel slowly
Down it's dark path
There is no way to stop it;
Death is an inevitability.

Time has stood still
for what seems like an eternity
While I wait.
And wait.
And wait.
For the one time that can set me free:

Death

But for now, Time keeps me
here in the now and away from my goal...
I'm waiting in my dark corner
For Time to catch up with me.
PostPosted: Tue Mar 14, 2006 5:48 pm


those are really good. especially the first one biggrin

_Built_to_Offend_666


BloodyKateMary89

PostPosted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 5:59 pm


Thanks. We're making a habit of commenting on each other's works, aren't we?
PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:27 pm


Another poem by me, just for the sake of my life is controlled by a puppetmaster.

Hangin' By A Thread


Dancin' on a cardboard stage
Under lights so bright
But the faces are so shadowed,
I'm wonderin' if it's night...

Through the rain I wander
Through the fog I flee
Through the snow I struggle
Hangin' by a thread
That keeps me attached to me

Hovering just above ground
A puppet on a string;
forced to be a sideshow
Listening to leering and jeering...

Throguh the rain I wander
Through the fog I flee
Through the snow I struggle
Hangin' by a thread,
That keeps me attached to me.

Dropped now to the stage below
My strings're all tangled up;
The show is over,
the crowd is gone
I'm thrown out like a broken cup...

Thruogh the rain I wander
Through the fog I flee
Through the snow I struggle
Hangin' by a thread
that keeps me attached to me.

My puppeteer's my life,
My strings, my happiness.
But now all of it's tangled up...
I am such a mess...

Through the rain I wander
Through the fog I fee
Through the snow I struggle
Hangin' by a thread
that keeps me attached to me.

Hangin' by a thread
that keeps me attached to me...

That keeps me attached to me....

BloodyKateMary89


bloody_pixie

PostPosted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 6:22 pm


i really like your poems. i 3rd one really caught my eye. i loved it...
PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:06 am


Thanks biggrin

BloodyKateMary89


amandax3jeanne

PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 10:14 am


You're so dark! - Family Guy.

but in a good way =]
PostPosted: Fri Mar 31, 2006 2:20 pm


*shudders at mention of Family Guy but smiles*

Thanks. But I absolutely loath Family Guy biggrin

BloodyKateMary89


DehShadow-ness

PostPosted: Sat May 27, 2006 3:00 pm


loved them.. very good. the first one was the best out of the two i think.
PostPosted: Wed May 31, 2006 9:11 am


If only it were possible to hear your poems in a live poetry reading.

*Le Sigh*

Readers tend to give a certain style to even the most simplistic pieces. You'd also be fun to play word games with... like take for instance, pick an item in the room and use it for inspiration. The way you describe specific items in detail is extraordinary. That's something I enjoy doing in my spare time. wink

Anywho, keep up the good work! heart

Ciora

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