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 Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 10:04 am
xx A D V E N T ҉ C H R O N I C L E S__________________________________________________________ .. " "The only way to claim the sky is if you jump off the ground "╔═══════ x ═══════╗ -- Teddy --╚═══════ x ═══════╝ 
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 10:49 am
xx Teddy
You can never hope to achieve anything properly if you don't have the guts to not take the easy way out
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Basic Criteria
Name | Teddy
Alias|
T-Sama
T-Pain
Gender | Male
Race | Shinigami
Affiliations | Rogue
Rank Held | Ex Vice-Captain of Squad 10
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Numerical Files
Birth Date July 31
Astronomical Sign | Leo
Age 612
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Physical Attributes
Blood Type O-
Height|6'2
Weight 185
Ethnicity Black
Eye Color Hazel
Physical Description| Has a lip piercing and is very fit. He is more agile and physical with his regular self instead of using hoho techniques. When it comes to non HOho technique movements like running, he is one of the fastests. He has a 4 pack and has above average size muscles and a muscular build.
Wardrobe |
[[cross out the section that don't apply.]]
Captain Haori style » Soifon's style in the color of Black with the Squad Symbol on the back in the color Red
Haori Underside Color » Red
http://www.hellocosplay.com/bleach-cosplay-soi-fong-costume-p-195.html
[*]Lieutenant Badge Location »
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Personal Attributes
Quirks
-Independent
-Funny
-perverted
-single minded
-Determined
-Persistent and hard headed at times
Favors |
*Women. Any woman, but likes the playful but fierce type
*Sitting in trees
*Dancing
*Being the unseen one
*practicing hand to hand combat
*Hanging out with others
*Watching his squad mates grow
*Chilling with his zanpakutou spirit
*Banging that music
*The motorcycles of the World of the Living
Disdains |
*Friends getting hurt
*Loud friend gatherings
*Women with no backbone
*Getting hurt
*slow dancing (If he dating someone he will o it even though he dislikes it)
*Captains Meetings
Preference of Food |
*Strawberries
*Noodles
*Chocolate
*Anything not salty
Disliked Foods |
*Only dislikes really salty foods. Such as Over seasoned meat. Besides that, he'll eat anything
Preference of Drink |
*Sake
*Tea
*Hot cocoa
*Manzana fanta
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Something Unknown
Fears
*Being too weak to save a life
*Getting completely wasted at a giant party
Aspirations |
*To have the closest thing to peace
*Find that special someone
*Get over his fear of getting wasted at giant party
*Beat the Kenpachi
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 12:24 pm
[[Bios will be written in 'chapters' if you will. This method allows a cohesive plot line for fellow RPers to understand. Photos can be added to tell a better story, as well as songs! Go all out if you want. I read all of these. Repeat the given format every chapter. ]] xxDOUBLE, Blades, Double Styles, Double Trouble.]
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Using a monster as a tool? Interesting Chapter One The monster's Heart: The SOul enters
HIis last livingYears [[: 592 years ago]]
Sadly, my luck, just like everyone' else, has to run out
Teddy was born and raised in a bad neighborhood coming up and having only music as his escape route. His mother was always working and his dad abandoned his family soon after he was born causing Teddy to always wanted and search for that father figure. To fill this void, he looked to music. At first he wanted to be a percussionist, but Tuba was his trade and e did the best he could on it. Making honor bands and all states. His life wasn't too bad.When he got the letter to go to a school, he decided why not. He didn't have to be a burden anymore plus he cold continue tuba playing. And that's where he is today. However, during this point in his life, he knew he couldn't beat the ways in which he lived. Meeting up with his friend Kamicha, they ended up saying forget studying and started to take over the school. One by one, the elite of the school fell thanks to their fighting school . With this, the trend continued until reaching the skulls base. A school located in the North. It appeared normal. The two took over the school with ease and all was well until that night. March 14. The skulls went after and hunted the two down. Kamicha was left paralyzed for life, but Teddy. Lets say that Sadly, just like everyone else, he has to run out. His luck in getting away with his actions when taking over schools led him to his grave.
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Don't judge this. Not done, but this is first chapter. More to come which involves how he became captain and such.
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 1:29 pm
xxCreativo Ciencias Naturales
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Destroy with the power of Science
Zanpakutō Name | Creativo Ciencias Naturuales
English Translation | Natural Science Creativity
Zanpakutō Element | Natural Earth Elements
Zanpakutō Spirit | The two spirits that reside in the blades are like the name implies. Natural Science takes on the alies of Alchemy. Alchemy has Red hair, and usually has on black cloak. Alchemy is the boy twin that usually is calm and collective. Creativity takes the alies of Samus. Samus is the girl twin that has Blue hair, blue eyes, and wears a traditional Japanese Kimono and when battling, her other outfit underneath the Kimono is revealed which is a solid black shirt with a Red tank top.
Zanpakutō Inner World | pirit world is very conflicting. In the entrance, it looks as if it is a colliseum from the roman days built with material made of black. THen there's a big statue of a greek mythology godof Hades that stands on the ouside of the doorway acting as if it was a guard that is piercing through your soul. Then whe you step through the door way and finally makes it inside, it's like a dark realm that is filled with thunderstorms. THe lightning literally strikes everywhere, Then in the middle of it all is one patch of grass with a ray of sunlight beaming on it.
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Spirit Files
Zanpakutō Blade Type | Daisho
Zanpakutō Accessories Chains that are connected to bottom of them both where a clip can connect the two blades
Zanpakutō Sealed Appearance |
Blade Color » Black
Sheath Color » Black
Hilt Color »Red
Tsuba Shape » Shape of a circle with thick metal outline
Length » 2 1/4 feet and 1 1/2 feet
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Shikai Files
Zanpakutō Activation Statement | Natural Creation
Zanpakutō Blade Changes | Dagger Knives and Pistols
The Daisho combo transforms into two dagger knives and pistols in which the pistols are kept in holsters on his back and the dagger knives are double wielded by yours truly
Shikai Abilities
Ability One
Shoot .38 bullets made out of chemicals from his gun towards the enemy. Bullets can reach about 50 meters before dispelling into thin air.
Ability Two
Can coat his blades or knives with one specific chemical that he chooses. If the chemical causes an explosion, then the explosion occurs on impact with the blade. This can hurt Teddy as well if hits himself with blade. The explosion has a radius of 5 meters. Explosion more like an energy burst than a destructive blast. Has a cool down of 1 post.
Ability Three
Can charge up and shoot large lazer beams (one at a time) that carries the effects of the chemical that he chooses. (Only one chemical/chemcal compound at a time) It's like a cero type blast which shoots from the guns. It can shoot up to 10 meters. It's the size of the barrel of the guns and is able to destroy a small building. The cool down for this is 1 post.
Shikai Control Level | Captain
Shikai Duration Until physically tired. |
Shikai Note: The chemicals that Rey can use are Batrachotoxin, VX, Sodium cyanide. Strychnine, Nicotine, Hydrogen peroxide,Chlorine trifluoride, Amonia, and Hydrofluoric acid. When he uses any ability, he mist first select a chemical. When the chemical is selected, his abilities are used with that chemical; and he can not switch chemicals till 5 posts later. If h e choses VX, he can't have a Nicotine powered ability until after 5 posts.
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Bankai Files
Zanpakutō Name Ciencias Diablo
English Translation |Devil Science
Bankai Appearance The Daisho combo transforms into two twin blade katanas in which are hosted and rests on Teddy's back in a holster.
Bankai Limitations |
*Selectivity
*Switching time
*not ally friendly
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Bankai Strengths |
*Adaptability
*Range
*Selectivity
Bankai Abilities
Ability One
manipulation of chemicals in order to make clones made out of any chemical he chooses (element compounds make up chemicals. BUT THEY ALL ARE MADE OF THE SAME CHOSEN CHEMICAL. Chemical must be solid. Can't be a chemical gas) . The maximum number of clones he can make is 5 and they only last a total of 3 posts at a time. None of the clones however can use any of his bankai OR Shikai abilities.However if only one clone i s made that clone can use Shikia abilities The cool down for this is 5 posts X number of times uses. So if use it two times, it would be 10 posts before can use it again.
Ability Two
Ability to make any type of item made out pure chemical make up of one chemical that he choices, but takes the physical form of lightning without the chemicals hurting him. To further explain, the chemical is in its pure form but the shape of it is in lightning. The lightning acts like a case compacting it in in which he can shoot from his hands. Shooting poor chemicals at his opponent but in shape of a lightning bolt. ( However, chemical gasses aren't usable for this ability )
Ability Three
Is able to produce chemicals through his blade and expel them through his blade. When the chemical gas is expelled from the blade, one of the two blades must be stabbed into the ground and the gas covers a 150 ft area. If the chemical has a gas chemical property than the chemical covers the area like a smoke grenade exploded. If the chemical has the make up like a liquid then the chemical is expelled through the blade and starts to flood the area similar to rain or snow being inches from the game. (If that makes sense),
Ability Four
The ability to breath and withstand chemicals of HIS OWN creation. This allows for his bankai to not be able to hurt him. However, if he seals his bankai while a chemical of his own creation is around and it touches him, he succumbs to the same effects as an enemy would to the gas do to his bankai being inactive. Unlike other blades, when his blade is sealed, the effects of the blade are still in effect unless healed. .
Bankai DurationUntill low on stamina or exhausted
Bankai Note VX, Cyanogen Chloride, Phosgene oxime, Novichok agent and Hydrofluoric acid. When he uses any ability, he mist first select a chemical. When the chemical is selected, his abilities are used with that chemical; and he can not switch chemicals till 5 posts later. If he choses VX, he can't have a Nicotine powered ability until after 5 posts
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Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 3:30 pm
xxARCANE REAPER TALENTS
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Kido Background Knowledge He knows no kido as he only focused on fighting and never tried to even attempt to learn it.
Kido Expertise |
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Kido Known
Bakudō Known |
N/A
Hadō Known |
N/A
Kaidō Known
N/A
Forbidden Spells Known |
[[Must seek permission.]]
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Shinigami Abilities
Zanjutsu Kendo and double Kendo. His expertise are more heavily embedded into double bladed Zanjutsu. He also has his own style which involves the swinging of the chain with his zanpakutou.
Hakuda Rookie as he knows none
Hohō | Efficient. His abilities with Hoho is above average of nay other captain, but he isn't the fastest one when it comes these abilities however. It can be said actually he is one of the slowest combat captains that uses Hoho techniques.
[~Dashing~ A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's attributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.
~Senkaimon~ (穿界門, World Penetration Gate) is the dimensional gateway which Shinigami use to enter and leave Soul Society by unlocking it. When guided by a Jigokuchō, the Senkaimon takes the form of a waiting room entered through a sliding door. Humans can also use such a gate through the use of Reishihenkanki (霊子変換 機, Spirit Exchangers), which convert solid matter into spirit particles.
~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~ A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range.
~Air Walk~ Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual.
~Utsusemi~ This technique is one of the most difficult speed abilities of them all. Furthermore, this is also one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability.]
DurabilitY: iS More durable than expected. Has stamina to last and can last one the longest times out of most of the captains in the Seretie
Reiryoku Expert as he has an Immense spiritual pressure, often hard to conceal at times but he handles disguising it well.
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Posted: Sat Jan 04, 2014 11:06 pm
Hello, my name is Rain and I will be reviewing your profile ^^ If you have any questions about things I specify, feel free to quote me here or PM me.xxxxxxPERSONAL INFORMATION▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
First off, if your character is a rogue, please change the "Affiliations" and "Rank" section according.
Second, the "Quirks" section is intended to be a list of personality quirks to summarize the character's personality.
Other than that, the personal information looks good.xxxxxxZANPAKUTO DETAILS▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
**I'll be reviewing the Shikai and Bankai separately
SHIKAI
Please specify what chemicals the Zanpakuto can use; essentially every chemical has a different effect, so please be more specific in these descriptions. For example, is there one chemical that's an acid, or one that's volatile? etc. There are a lot of chemicals in the world.
Finally, your third ability is over-powered for a Shikai ability; as it is, the ability is like more than half a football field of a laser beam essentially made of pure destructive energy. Please reduce the range, and also increase the cool accordingly (grater range = greater cool down; i.e. for the current range a cool down of about five posts would probably be minimal, 10 meters, one post cool down might make sense).
BANKAI
Just to clarify, you had the additional ability approved by Onin? Since the base number of Bankai abilities for a Captain-level character is three. Also, as with the Shikai, please specify which chemicals the character can use.
With Ability One, make the clones weaker than just not being able to use the Bankai abilities, i.e. they cannot use Shikai techniques, either. In general, though, ten is a lot of clones and even if made not over-powered it might just end up being clutter-y in a fight. Maybe reduce the number of clones and reduce the cool-down a bit more as well? Like five clones who can't use shikai and a cool down of three x the number of times used. Or like three clones who can use Shikai with a cool down of three x the number of times used, or something along those lines.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean in Ability Two. He can make any ability out of chemicals but it turns into lightning? Please elaborate.
I think I understand what you mean with ability three, thought a "wet grown effect" doesn't quite make sense in terms of wording. Other than that this ability looks good.
xxxxxxSHINIGAMI ABILITIES▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
There isn't really a need to list Hoho abilities, but it doesn't really hurt. Other than that, just a few nitpicky things: For the sake of filling everything in, if you want you can put "N/A" under Kido Expertise. Then, put a at the end of "Durability:" so that that whole section isn't in bold. Not super necessary, will just make everything look neater. Looks pretty good here, though.
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:54 pm
Rain Water Resonance Hello, my name is Rain and I will be reviewing your profile ^^ If you have any questions about things I specify, feel free to quote me here or PM me.xxxxxxPERSONAL INFORMATION▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
First off, if your character is a rogue, please change the "Affiliations" and "Rank" section according.
Second, the "Quirks" section is intended to be a list of personality quirks to summarize the character's personality.
Other than that, the personal information looks good.xxxxxxZANPAKUTO DETAILS▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
**I'll be reviewing the Shikai and Bankai separately
SHIKAI
Please specify what chemicals the Zanpakuto can use; essentially every chemical has a different effect, so please be more specific in these descriptions. For example, is there one chemical that's an acid, or one that's volatile? etc. There are a lot of chemicals in the world.
Finally, your third ability is over-powered for a Shikai ability; as it is, the ability is like more than half a football field of a laser beam essentially made of pure destructive energy. Please reduce the range, and also increase the cool accordingly (grater range = greater cool down; i.e. for the current range a cool down of about five posts would probably be minimal, 10 meters, one post cool down might make sense).
BANKAI
Just to clarify, you had the additional ability approved by Onin? Since the base number of Bankai abilities for a Captain-level character is three. Also, as with the Shikai, please specify which chemicals the character can use.
With Ability One, make the clones weaker than just not being able to use the Bankai abilities, i.e. they cannot use Shikai techniques, either. In general, though, ten is a lot of clones and even if made not over-powered it might just end up being clutter-y in a fight. Maybe reduce the number of clones and reduce the cool-down a bit more as well? Like five clones who can't use shikai and a cool down of three x the number of times used. Or like three clones who can use Shikai with a cool down of three x the number of times used, or something along those lines.
I'm not entirely sure what you mean in Ability Two. He can make any ability out of chemicals but it turns into lightning? Please elaborate.
I think I understand what you mean with ability three, thought a "wet grown effect" doesn't quite make sense in terms of wording. Other than that this ability looks good.
xxxxxxSHINIGAMI ABILITIES▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ ▃▃▃ ▃▃▃▃
There isn't really a need to list Hoho abilities, but it doesn't really hurt. Other than that, just a few nitpicky things: For the sake of filling everything in, if you want you can put "N/A" under Kido Expertise. Then, put a at the end of "Durability:" so that that whole section isn't in bold. Not super necessary, will just make everything look neater. Looks pretty good here, though.
All edits made and yes yes she knows. and apprpoval
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:49 pm
Everything looks good, I just have one last question about the second bankai ability: as clarification, the chemical takes the form of lightning, like a lightning bolt? Just want to make sure everything is clear ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:05 pm
Rain Water Resonance Everything looks good, I just have one last question about the second bankai ability: as clarification, the chemical takes the form of lightning, like a lightning bolt? Just want to make sure everything is clear ^^ yes like a lightning bolt *nods* ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 06, 2014 7:07 pm
Then everything looks good! Approved ^^
I'll move it into the approved profiles forum.
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Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2014 10:26 am
As said in the previous thread, illegals are to have only a shikai that is unmastered. No Bankai, however it can be trained for through the rp and gained if a mentor is seeked. wink
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