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PostPosted: Tue Dec 10, 2013 7:40 pm


Basic Character Information

Full Name: Noel Chambers

Nicknames: The golden blur

Age: 14

Birth date: December 16th

Gender: Male

Relationship Status: Taken

Clan: Chambers

Family: Is presumed to be the last of his clan.

Ninja Type: Ninjutsu, and weapon skill but can hold his own in tijutsu

Rank: Chunin

Village: Kumogakure

Likes: Training, and playing his mom's harp.

Dislike: Anyone who stands in his way of his dream to be the best ninja.

Nindo: These eyes...see darkness clearly. No matter how much you beat me down, with Sky by my side nothing can scare me!

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Character Data

Summoning/s: A husky.

Bloodline: Shekegan.

Chakra Elements: Fire, lightning.

Strength: Speed and ninjutsu.

Weakness: His fear of water, and losing Sky.

Weapon of Choice: Bow-sword.

Special Ability: Shekegan eye found only in the chambers clan it allows the user to see, and sense a persons aura. The user could also manipulate there aura to become visible and be used as a defense and even an offence the shekegan can also be used to see the true nature of an opponent by reading the color of there aura. But there is a flaw in the shekegan. if the user uses there shekegan to long it could drain chakra rapidly and will need a 1 hour cool down. Thanks to this ability the chambers clan is gifted aura based attacks such as aura sphere aura dash and aura palm, these are the most common for young members of the chambers clan. The shekegan's aura ability's are also increased by the amount of damage done to the user, in other words the more damage done the stronger there attacks become. But the chambers clan also has a dark side once they obtain the final stage of the shekegan they have full aura manipulation giving them the ability to drain and control an opponents aura.


Equipment:
- Arrows
- Chakra pills
- Wire/string


Statistics
¤ Ninjutsu:■■■□□
¤ Taijutsu: ■■■■□
¤ Genjutsu: □□□□□
¤ Intelligence: ■■■□□
¤ Force: ■■■□□
¤ Speed: ■■■■□
¤ Stamina: ■■■□□
¤ Seal Knowledge: □□□□□
¤ Weapon Skill: ■■■□□

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Jutsu List

Non-Elemental

¤ Summoning jutsu: summons a husky to his side.

¤Substitution: The user substitutes him/herself with a random object.

¤Shadow clone jutsu: Summons clones of yourself

Aura

¤ Aura style aura sphere jutsu: User channels there aura into there palms and forms a sphere doing minimal damage to the opponent. (B rank)

¤Aura style aura dash jutsu: An ability only know by the Chambers clan. This ability boosts speed and agility boosting the user 2x his average speed. (B rank)

¤Aura style aura palm jutsu: Channels the users aura into there hand and once placed on an opponent the user then fire out aura, knocking off the opponents aura balance doing minimum damage but can cause paralysis. (B rank)

Aura style aura manipulation:Activates Noel's ability to manipulate his chakra (B rank)

Elemental Nature

Lightning

¤ Chidori: This technique channels a large amount of lightning chakra to the user's hand. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible. The high concentration of electricity produces a sound reminiscent of many birds chirping, hence the name. Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and thrusts the Chidori into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces. (A rank)

¤ Chidori blade: This technique allows the user to channel the Chidori through his blade. This makes it nearly unblock able as the radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, if an opponent is stabbed, their body goes numb due to an electrical current which causes the muscles to contract, making it impossible for the opponent to move. However, it can be countered by other weapons that also utilize Lightning Release chakra flow. (A rank)

¤ Chidori current: By releasing the Chidori in every direction, an electrical discharge flows from the user's entire body allowing him to affect multiple enemies. When using this attack on a great number of enemies at once, it can effectively double as an instant defense. The body of the person touched by the Chidori will misinterpret the lightning nature as "electrical signals from the nerves", making its muscles contract. This causes the body to involuntarily go stiff, while at the same time receives damage. This attack can also be channeled through the ground to increase the range of the attack.(A rank)

¤ Crying Chidori: This jutsu is known as a final move, this jutsu is preformed by summoning all the user's remaining chakra to form a very strong chidori the user then dashes at the opponent with tremendous speed then jabs there hand into the opponent, causing lightning to rain down from the sky doing heavy damage to the opponent and minimum damage to the user.(S rank)

Fire

¤ Fire style fire ball jutsu : User shoots a fire ball at the opponent.(B)

¤ Fire style Phoenix flower jutsu: User fires multiple mini fire balls at the opponent.(D rank)

¤ Fire style blaze punch jutsu: User covers their hand in fire then attempts to punch the opponent but like all jutsu's it has a flaw for instance, this jutsu can be dodged and if held to long can burn the users hand.(B rank)






Kekkei Genkai: Shekegan

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Character Description

Looks:User Image

Headband: Kumogakure

Headband Location: hangs loosely around neck

Personality: Smart trust worthy and lovable, but can get a little serious when it comes to fighting.

Height: 5ft 4inch

Weight: 132 lbs

Eye Color: Blue

Hair Color: Chestnut

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Missions Done

S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 3
C Rank: 7
D Rank: 10

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Background Information

Noel was a young boy born into the chambers clan his clan has not much history and wasn't to big but they were all still a proud clan. Noel was born in the village of Kumogakure where he spent most of his life training to become a ninja. Now Noel like his clan is born with a bloodline trait called the shekegan that allows the user to see and sense peoples aura. Noel can also manipulate his aura to protect him and attack his opponent using his aura manipulating only known to his clan. After Noel's mom had passed he was presumed to be the last of his clan but he is determined to make his clan well known by becoming one of the best ninja. It's Noel's drive to become one of the best that helped push him through the ninja academy and down the road to becoming the worlds greatest ninja.

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Noel Chambers

Shekegan: [not active]
Health: 100/100
Chakra: 100/100
PostPosted: Wed Dec 11, 2013 3:09 am


STARZ member Noel

Hey, so I took a look at your profile :
Quote:

Stastistics
¤ Ninjutsu: ■■■■□
¤ Taijutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Genjutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Intelligence: ■■□□□
¤ Force: ■■■■□
¤ Speed: ■■■□□
¤ Stamina: ■■■■□
¤ Seal Knowledge: ■□□□□
¤ Weapon Skill: ■■■■□

For a genin, maybe try lowering ninjutsu and weapon skill? or at least one of those two.

Quote:

¤ Sky scrapper: Runs at full speed around the opponent slashing and cutting the opponent then jumps above them and comes down with a heavy slash.

You'll need to get this approved in the custom jutsu are of the guild. In fact, all of your jutsu need to be approved, as non of them are listed in the jutsu dictionary.

Lightning jutsu & Fire Jutsu

keep in mind, as a genin, you will probably be able to use only one chakra nature and only e and d ranked jutsu.
Quote:

Kekkei Genkai: His ability to manipulate the flames on his jacket

If this is a valid kekkei genkei, you need to get it approved.
kekkei genkei approval

you can't be able to have your flames on your jacket move as your kekkei genkei, as you have the sharigan as your kekkei genkei.

you will also need to fill in personality, and the measurements of height and weight. your character's height is 5.0. 5.0 what? 5 doritos? 5 feet ( which is tiny) 5 cm?

Quote:

Noel is a member of the uchiha clan he lives in the village hidden in the clouds with his mother and father or at least he use to before he stole some bread to feed his sick family. But once Noel was caught stealing the loaf of bread some people from the village disided to teach Noel a leason by breathing his will by killing his father. Soon after the death of his father his mother passed away from her sickness...after the death of his parents he crafted two items. His jacket named after his mother called mothers hold and a blade named after his father he called it fathers will. Two years passed and Noel traveled to the land hidden in the leafs were he began his training to become a ninja.

Also, the uchiha clan is exclusive to Konohagakure, so you cannot have been from Kumogakure originally.
That's all I can see for now, quote me after you've made changes.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 12, 2013 3:59 am


anna1234141
STARZ member Noel

Hey, so I took a look at your profile :
Quote:

Stastistics
¤ Ninjutsu: ■■■■□
¤ Taijutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Genjutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Intelligence: ■■□□□
¤ Force: ■■■■□
¤ Speed: ■■■□□
¤ Stamina: ■■■■□
¤ Seal Knowledge: ■□□□□
¤ Weapon Skill: ■■■■□

For a genin, maybe try lowering ninjutsu and weapon skill? or at least one of those two.

Quote:

¤ Sky scrapper: Runs at full speed around the opponent slashing and cutting the opponent then jumps above them and comes down with a heavy slash.

You'll need to get this approved in the custom jutsu are of the guild. In fact, all of your jutsu need to be approved, as non of them are listed in the jutsu dictionary.

Lightning jutsu & Fire Jutsu

keep in mind, as a genin, you will probably be able to use only one chakra nature and only e and d ranked jutsu.
Quote:

Kekkei Genkai: His ability to manipulate the flames on his jacket

If this is a valid kekkei genkei, you need to get it approved.
kekkei genkei approval

you can't be able to have your flames on your jacket move as your kekkei genkei, as you have the sharigan as your kekkei genkei.

you will also need to fill in personality, and the measurements of height and weight. your character's height is 5.0. 5.0 what? 5 doritos? 5 feet ( which is tiny) 5 cm?

Quote:

Noel is a member of the uchiha clan he lives in the village hidden in the clouds with his mother and father or at least he use to before he stole some bread to feed his sick family. But once Noel was caught stealing the loaf of bread some people from the village disided to teach Noel a leason by breathing his will by killing his father. Soon after the death of his father his mother passed away from her sickness...after the death of his parents he crafted two items. His jacket named after his mother called mothers hold and a blade named after his father he called it fathers will. Two years passed and Noel traveled to the land hidden in the leafs were he began his training to become a ninja.

Also, the uchiha clan is exclusive to Konohagakure, so you cannot have been from Kumogakure originally.
That's all I can see for now, quote me after you've made changes.
I finished changing stuff and they are all real moves exsept for cry chidori
PostPosted: Thu Dec 12, 2013 4:41 am


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anna1234141
STARZ member Noel

Hey, so I took a look at your profile :
Quote:

Stastistics
¤ Ninjutsu: ■■■■□
¤ Taijutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Genjutsu: ■■■□□
¤ Intelligence: ■■□□□
¤ Force: ■■■■□
¤ Speed: ■■■□□
¤ Stamina: ■■■■□
¤ Seal Knowledge: ■□□□□
¤ Weapon Skill: ■■■■□

For a genin, maybe try lowering ninjutsu and weapon skill? or at least one of those two.

Quote:

¤ Sky scrapper: Runs at full speed around the opponent slashing and cutting the opponent then jumps above them and comes down with a heavy slash.

You'll need to get this approved in the custom jutsu are of the guild. In fact, all of your jutsu need to be approved, as non of them are listed in the jutsu dictionary.

Lightning jutsu & Fire Jutsu

keep in mind, as a genin, you will probably be able to use only one chakra nature and only e and d ranked jutsu.
Quote:

Kekkei Genkai: His ability to manipulate the flames on his jacket

If this is a valid kekkei genkei, you need to get it approved.
kekkei genkei approval

you can't be able to have your flames on your jacket move as your kekkei genkei, as you have the sharigan as your kekkei genkei.

you will also need to fill in personality, and the measurements of height and weight. your character's height is 5.0. 5.0 what? 5 doritos? 5 feet ( which is tiny) 5 cm?

Quote:

Noel is a member of the uchiha clan he lives in the village hidden in the clouds with his mother and father or at least he use to before he stole some bread to feed his sick family. But once Noel was caught stealing the loaf of bread some people from the village disided to teach Noel a leason by breathing his will by killing his father. Soon after the death of his father his mother passed away from her sickness...after the death of his parents he crafted two items. His jacket named after his mother called mothers hold and a blade named after his father he called it fathers will. Two years passed and Noel traveled to the land hidden in the leafs were he began his training to become a ninja.

Also, the uchiha clan is exclusive to Konohagakure, so you cannot have been from Kumogakure originally.
That's all I can see for now, quote me after you've made changes.
I finished changing stuff and they are all real moves exsept for cry chidori

Yes they are all real moves in the manga, but they need to be in the jutsu dictionary. I linked you the dictionary, please use it for your jutsu. And also sky scrapper needs to be approved, as it'a a custom jutsu. Please change what I have asked you to change.
You also still have not put in units of measurement in.. please actually read my comments and make the changes.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 13, 2013 10:52 pm


anna1234141

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We have too many uchiha right now, and we're going to be undergoing something that will probably get allot more people to start posting again... This said, the Uchiha clan will have even more members roleplaying so we need to limit the new profiles from being uchiha.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 10:56 pm


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anna1234141

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We have too many uchiha right now, and we're going to be undergoing something that will probably get allot more people to start posting again... This said, the Uchiha clan will have even more members roleplaying so we need to limit the new profiles from being uchiha.

i worked really hard on him and made changes and corrections im here for inspection. :3

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:08 pm


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Okay let's see here...Kumogakure...that place is cool I guess. I just happen to have become the leader of Kirigakure and I could have used some novice shinobi for my nation. Maybe made you apprentice when I'm not busy with pretend documents. >-> That's alright though. xD Jk seriously don't listen to a word I said lol.

You need to add ranks on your jutsu and if you can go more in depth of his kekkei genkai and if you intend to make techniques for it I suggest you do. I'm a little confused with it at the moment. 3nodding
PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:12 pm


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Okay let's see here...Kumogakure...that place is cool I guess. I just happen to have become the leader of Kirigakure and I could have used some novice shinobi for my nation. Maybe made you apprentice when I'm not busy with pretend documents. >-> That's alright though. xD Jk seriously don't listen to a word I said lol.

You need to add ranks on your jutsu and if you can go more in depth of his kekkei genkai and if you intend to make techniques for it I suggest you do. I'm a little confused with it at the moment. 3nodding

I can do that lol and what do you mean by technique

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:17 pm


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I meant make jutsu for your kekkei genkai and explain it a bit more is all. ^-^ As well as add rankings on your existing techniques so I know how powerful they are. whee
PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:29 pm


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I meant make jutsu for your kekkei genkai and explain it a bit more is all. ^-^ As well as add rankings on your existing techniques so I know how powerful they are. whee


I shall btw how does my character lol

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:36 pm


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I like your character a lot. The aura thing is pretty cool as well. It reminds me of the byakugan. ^-^
PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:38 pm


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I like your character a lot. The aura thing is pretty cool as well. It reminds me of the byakugan. ^-^

Thanks and yeah because the byakugan can see chakra and the shekegan can see aura. I like the way he looks too

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:40 pm


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You mean he looks like Roxas! Yeah I noticed that right away but that's fine. 3nodding Unless you were to have done some other things but you didn't so it's fine. 3nodding And Roxas is the best after all. ^_^
PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:45 pm


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You mean he looks like Roxas! Yeah I noticed that right away but that's fine. 3nodding Unless you were to have done some other things but you didn't so it's fine. 3nodding And Roxas is the best after all. ^_^

Yes finnaly someone gets it lol and ill post my changes tomorrow and quote you after its finished btw haooy new years and good night hope we can be friends one day

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:46 pm


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Anyone who knows kingdom hearts is already a good friend of mine. ^-^ Happy new year!
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