Full Name: Sho Ren Nicknames: Really anything you wanna call him. Age: 13 Birth date: 12/17 Gender: Male Relationship Status: Single Clan: Ren Family: Brother (Dead), Mother, Father, Grandma Ninja Type: Stealth Rank: Genin Village: Konohagakure Likes: Eating, sleeping, spending time with those he considers friends, and practicing his weapon skills. Dislike: His friend's enemies, displeasing people, and those who aren't honest. Nindo: I shall protect those around me, no matter the cost.
Summoning/s: N/A Bloodline: Chakra Elements: Earth/Fire Strength: Speed and Weapon Skills Weakness: Genjutsu Weapon of Choice:Ninjato (X2) Special Ability: Speed
Non-Elemental Body Replacement Technique: With this technique, users replace their own body with some other object, generally with a block of wood, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations.
A ninjutsu that creates an intangible copy of one's own body, without any substance. Since the clone itself doesn't have the ability to attack, and thus can only be used to confuse the enemy, it is mainly used in combination with other ninjutsu. It's a basic technique, but depending on one's ingenuity, it can be used effectively. The clones may not dissipate when they come into contact with something.
Clone Technique: These clones can be easily distinguished by persons with dōjutsu. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones do not have shadows and will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (i.e. won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Elemental Nature
Earth (Doton)
Doton: Iwa Tounyuu no Jutsu (Earth Release: Rock Throw Technique) Rank: E Description: This jutsu allows a small rock, about the size of a fist, to be lifted and hurled at someone or something.
Doton: Ishi Yoroi no Ude (Earth Release: Stone Bracers) Rank: E Description: By taking dirt and rubbing it on their arms or legs, after performing the necessary hand seals, a shinobi is able to create very durable defensive bracers that add extra protection when using the arms to block. The chakra that is infused in them help to soften the blows of any physical attacks. These are very useful for taijutsu users or to defend against an onslaught of upper body blows. These bracers block physical attacks.
Doton: Doroku Gaeshi (Earth Release: Rock Shield) Rank: D Description: In the jutsu, the user lifts up a giant piece of earth and uses it as a shield. For every rank, the shield grows 5 feet by 5 feet, and thickens by 3 inches
Doton: Shuriken no Jutsu (Earth Release: Stone Shuriken Skill) Rank: D Description: Widely used in situations where the user runs out of projectiles. By picking up dirt from the ground and infusing it with chakra, it molds together and takes the form of a shuriken.
Fire (Katon)
Katon: Ichi (Fire Release: One) Rank: E Description: The basic building block of a great many techniques down the line, this is presumably the very same skill that began the study of Katons. Molding their chakra through a simple seal of any choice, the user is able to focus it onto the tip of their index finger in the form of heat. With this, they can cut through things such as glass and rope with some difficulty. However, at this stage, control of one’s chakra is so minimal that this technique can only be used by one finger and essentially has no combat use.
Headband: Konohagakure Headband Location: Forehead Personality: Sho is very calm, laid back, and patient. However, this all changes when you attack someone who he cares about, be it friend or otherwise, and he becomes very serious and intent on protecting that person. He is very loyal and you can be confident his trust won't falter. Height: 5'1" Weight: 110 lbs Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Brown
Background Information Sho was born into a very difficult life. His father had always been displeased with his own achievements and considered him self laughable compared to the other clans. He hated that he held no Kekkai Genkai that he could pass along to his children and despised his ancestors for it. Because of this, he worked his children incredibly hard to make up for his own feeling of failure. This was focused on Sho's older brother, Maka. All day, almost everyday, their father would drill Maka with training, being relentless and teaching him everything he could. Maka despised his father for this but became an excellent shinobi. However, on a routine mission, Maka's group was ambushed and murdered by unknown assailants. Sho was only 7. This lead his father to grieve the loss of his "only true son" for a long time. Sho fell into depression from this abandonment by his father but hid it from the other children.
Finally, once Sho was ready for training, his father again peaked up. This time he drilled Sho twice as hard as he had Maka, saying he needed a more powerful son who could defend himself. Sho too now resented his father but came out of his depression. Despite being overworked by his father he continues to try and maintain a positive aura and be there for his friends, the only family he feels he has.
Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:15 pm
I'm not an official judge, but I thought I'd come help you smile Just some things I noticed: - Firstly, not many genin have two chakra elements. It may be better if you bring it down to earth or fire, and simply have your genin learn to use the other element later. - Secondly, Konohagakure is under a cap. You might be better off going for another village? - Your stats are a bit high, for a genin. But if you adjusted the speed down one or two, it could be acceptable. - Any genin would know a couple of non- elemental jutsu, such as shadow clone or henge (transformation jutsu) Why not fill out that area a bit more? Anyway, that's just my little bit of help. If I'm wrong, I apologize in advance... sweatdrop
Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:17 pm
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I'm not an official judge, but I thought I'd come help you smile Just some things I noticed: - Firstly, not many genin have two chakra elements. It may be better if you bring it down to earth or fire, and simply have your genin learn to use the other element later. - Secondly, Konohagakure is under a cap. You might be better off going for another village? - Your stats are a bit high, for a genin. But if you adjusted the speed down one or two, it could be acceptable. - Any genin would know a couple of non- elemental jutsu, such as shadow clone or henge (transformation jutsu) Why not fill out that area a bit more? Anyway, that's just my little bit of help. If I'm wrong, I apologize in advance... sweatdrop
Thanks! Been awhile since I watched the show so I am a bit fuzzy on some stuff and am thankful for any help. As far a being in Konohagakure, the only reason I joined was a friend asked me to be his genin so I don't think I can change that sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:18 pm
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I'm not an official judge, but I thought I'd come help you smile Just some things I noticed: - Firstly, not many genin have two chakra elements. It may be better if you bring it down to earth or fire, and simply have your genin learn to use the other element later. - Secondly, Konohagakure is under a cap. You might be better off going for another village? - Your stats are a bit high, for a genin. But if you adjusted the speed down one or two, it could be acceptable. - Any genin would know a couple of non- elemental jutsu, such as shadow clone or henge (transformation jutsu) Why not fill out that area a bit more? Anyway, that's just my little bit of help. If I'm wrong, I apologize in advance... sweatdrop
Thanks! Been awhile since I watched the show so I am a bit fuzzy on some stuff and am thankful for any help. As far a being in Konohagakure, the only reason I joined was a friend asked me to be his genin so I don't think I can change that sweatdrop
I'm not the expert here, but there may be a population limit, which is why I said it. But you'd have to check with Ayperos or Crasher.
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Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2013 7:33 pm
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I already told Crasher and Ayperos my friend Fave_Perv was joining as a genin for the leaf
The two element thing, Thats acceptable as long as its not like BLASTED WITH High ranking moves and a whole bunch of them, since he has four earth and they are E-D ranked, that is fine
Fire is E and D ranked move so thats fine, I think you could properly add maybe 2 more moves to fire, specially since you have no Non-elemental moves.
I don't think your stats are two high I think maybe Speed may be like a little high, we will let Ayperos or Crasher decided that though.
Also like Anna said, I would put some Non-elemental jutsu because you need some to pass like the Academy.
Other that then your pretty much good, the only thing I don't know about is the Equipment to me it seems you have a lot of stuff on you but in all honesty I have no Idea We will let Ayperos decide on that one to. smile
Yeah, it's not under caps anymore... It's not as active as we want it, so we want to work on it.
Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:46 pm
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So was that me being accepted or... Sorry, just want to clear confusion.
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Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 5:30 pm
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So was that me being accepted or... Sorry, just want to clear confusion.
I like it, what about you Ayperos darling?
Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2013 7:28 pm
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Though he does have two natures he only knows 1 jutsu in the other, so that's ok I guess. He also doesn't have a kekkei genkai or advanced nature so me likey... it annoys me how everyone wants an advanced nature!
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