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----Basic Information----


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Name: Hakudoshi Nenekirimaru Gitsune
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Personality:
Hakudoshi obsessively proud of his mother Rengyoku Shironami Gitsune, and his family history of whom all the worlds are in awe. Because he respects his bloodline so much, he despises anyone who would dare insult it. Hakudoshi embodies the allure and a cool demeanor of Ren Gitsunes with touches of of her pride as a kitsune. He has the appearance and expression of one who is extremely crafty and confident. Hakudoshi is frequently described as the type who ruminates over things much like a cow ruminates its meal. He is a careful and meticulous planner, and his plans always have the those involved best interests at heart. He is generally a quiet and calm person who listens to all the facts before passing judgment, and his opinion is regarded highly. Once he reaches a conclusion, he will see it through to the end.

In contrast to his twin sister Hasuko's boisterous, outgoing, and extroverted personality, Haku is calm, cool, collected, and introverted, constantly maintaining an aura of fearlessness. In spite of his cold and ruthlessness demeanor, he is an honorable warrior, who maintains his own set of morals and disciplines, he despises fighting dirty and cheap tactics, and refuses using firearms, deeming them unworthy of a "true warrior", staying true to only his blades and natural weapons. Unlike his brothers and sisters, Haku is willing to embrace other aspects of his Kitsune heritage, and seeks to deviate from his mothers power and cold persona.


Although Hakudoshi enjoys the concept of battle, often showing up wherever there is potential for one, he usually stays out of it, preferring to observe the fight instead of directly taking part in it. However, when provoked, he quickly puts his opponent in his place. Anyone in his way is an enemy whom he will exterminate without hesitation. He does not hold back his power, even against women. He rationalizes that all his prey is the same and defeats them accordingly. Once he judges someone as an obstacle, he is quick to kill without hesitation. When he was crated Ren instilled a powerful Mantra in Haku's mind "If they stand behind you, give them protection. If they stand beside you, give them respect. If they stand against you, show no mercy."

History:

White Child:
Hakudoshi,along with several others is a Shinentai; a "physical thought" or conscious given physical form created by Ren Gitsune's soul. Among his brothers and sisters Hakudoshi is the living manifestation of Rens pride and convictions. Out of all the remnants Seireitou is tasked with the protection of the others and the territory should Ren perish. His primary concern being Hasuko: the youngest,and the one filled with the most potential,as well as the sprits that help stabilize the land. Unlike the others Seireitou does not normally travel outside of the territory he and his "siblings" inhabit, nor does he command any of his mothers signature abilities.

Sage of the Illuminating Fang :
Hakudoshi holds the duty to protect the Realm and everything that resides in it. He states that it is synonymous with the name Gitsune, being the lord of the realm that it is his responsibility to protect all the living being in its boarders. Hakudoshi shows a strong determination to play his role despite not inheriting most of his mothers power. He is willing to go to any lengths to uphold his duty, even if it means risking his very life to accomplish this. Having trained countless years with the kitsune masters, Hakudoshi has had little human contact. His knowledge of the world stems from what he has observed from afar, leading him to have many odd mannerisms.


Zenko "Virtuous Fox"):
While Hasuko was born in a sea of chaos, Hakudoshi raised himself to be pure. Dissatisfied with the power of chaos, Hakudoshi decided to search his family history in the Konton no Houten, lit. (Codex of Chaos) for another power. Since ancient times kitsune have been tied to aspect of the elements. The elements are broken down into 13 categories and the kitsune are divided into each type: Kaze (Wind), Chikyu (Earth), Kasai (Fire), Kawa (River), Tengoku (Heaven), Sanda (Thunder), Yama (Mountain), Kukan (Void), Seishin (Spirit), Jikan (Time), Mori (Forest), Umi (Ocean), and Ongaku (Music). Each kitsune has its own strength and weaknesses, based on the element it is assigned to. The element reflects where the kitsune's power originates, what affinities it has in the elements. The Gitsune Clan over the years mastered Jikan,Kukan, Seishin and Tengoku;the most difficult elements. The First Gitsune, Kumiho, was a Kitsune of the Sage Realm that trained for countless years and finally became the first Daigitsune Sennin (Great Fox Sage). After becoming a divine he was allowed to live in the Heavenly Realm and even served in the royal court of the divine as a guardian to the spirits. However, the other divines began to fear the power that he, a mere creation they made, had and tried to killed him. In retaliation he ravaged the lands of heavens and escaped below.

He was too deeply wounded and his soul separated from his body, his body remained in the Neatherworld while his soul ventured to the Unseen Realm looking for a vessel to hold it until his body recovered. Kumiho Hanullim (Supreme Nine-Tailed Fox Being) , the peerless hero celebrated in Kitsune legend, was a Guardian, appointed to serve and protect. Yet he had been unjustly cast out, such a story awakened something deep within Hakudoshi. This inner voice would speak to him,whisper things to him. For some time, Hakudoshi was able to resist its prodding solicitation, but with each passing night the voice grew louder, or perhaps deeper, until he could withstand the call no more.


----General Information----


Race: 6 Tailed Kitsune
Family:
Ren Gitsune-"Mother"
Hasuko-little sister
Azar-older brother
Yakumo-little brother
Shiranui-little sister
Egil-Little brother
Members of Rantō-close friends


----Abilities and Techniques Information----

Natural Abilities
Seishin Sekai
- An innate skill possessed by all the member of the Gitsune family, which allows them to communicate mentally. Using this telepathy, the Hakudoshi can can create a dimension within the subconscious of their mind. This is referred to as the Mental World (Seishin Sekai) where they can communicate without outside influences. There are two levels of this subconscious and with training Haku has achieved the second level. This secondary level is not penetrable by others, even if the user is being controlled unless the opponent has an immense mental power. This can amplify thought waves and broadcasts them to a specific location through illusionary bodies as well.

Elemental Abilities
Yōkokūen Reien(Demon Fox Seeking Flames; Soul Inflammation)
- As a Kitsune Hakudoshi has the ability to create and manipulate spiritual flames at will that burn the soul and magic based techniques. His unique spiritual energy allows him to generate substantial quantities of fire then subsequently manipulate this heated substance into seemingly whatever form he chooses, almost immediately after the flame's initial production. In this manner he is able to quickly form a great variety of fiery structures that are suitable for a diverse range of purposes, no matter if the nature of these circumstances demand offensive or defensive uses. He often summons foxes made out of flames that are controlled verbally or with hand signals. When Haku unleashes these creatures, they pan out and attack whatever opponents are before them. When they are close enough to their target, the foxes erupt in fiery explosions of varying size and power. The constructs are fairly weak , as they can be dispersed with a simple strike, yet thier strength is in thier numbers and how Haku uses them. The foxes are extremely reactive to water;on contact the steam released can easily blow an opponent away or allow Hakudoshi cover to attack.

Raiōken Byakunagare (Thunder King Fist; "White Current")
- Due to his spiritual training he is capable of highly difficult technique of creating and guiding white lightning a sub-skill of his fox fire. As a child he exhibited fine control of this skill, able to generate,gather and manipulate plasma and/or any form of nearby to a limited degree, as well as electromagnetic feats . This tends to be called the "Unlimited Charge Effect", which is only accessible to the upper echelon of lightning Masters and high-grade lightning-based magic & magical items respectively. Byakunagare is similar if not the same as regular Lightning Manipulation, except that the lightning generated has spiritual properties, and as such, allows Hakudoshi to inflict substantial damage both evil and madness beings alike with each successful attack. Raiōken relies on Hakudoshi's mastery of pressure-point-striking martial arts. With his extensive knowledge of the body, he can strike sequences of pressure points with his soul wavelength enhanced lightning, immobilizing his enemies to various degrees. This technique allows him to block certain energy paths in opponents to temporarily compromise their abilities. This makes him especially dangerous to people who relied solely on their abilities and posses no form of shielding or armor, but Haku requires direct physical contact to strike the pressure points. The effect of his lightning can be blocked or reduced by wearing non-conductive armor, shielding oneself with a strong aura or somehow matching wavelengths with Hakudoshi cancelling out the attack. [Takes 4 hits to stun one limb for 4 post]




Kyūtōbi no Zanun Kyūtōryū(Cloud-Cutting Fox Sword Style)
- Due to his intense training Haku's power and skill with the sword has evolved to a level where slashes can sever space, and crack apart the air around him. Streaks of white light fade into the space where he has struck, almost as if the air was glass and that it was shattered apart, sending devastating shock waves through the air in the direction it is facing. Enough of these slashes can then create a deadly, trap that could cause severe harm to anything that becomes caught inside. The space at and around where the strike was delivered cracks and causes a temporary disturbance that essentially freezes everything within that shattered range as if it were some sort of spatial spider web. The air bends and snaps to accommodate this distortion of space, creating a temporary vacuum effect as well. (1-2 posts) Whatever comes recklessly into contact with the slashes could potentially become ripped apart or sucked up by the vacuum.


Shishi-ō no mai (Dance of the Beast King)
- It is the staple fighting style taught by the first Gitsune that Haku falls back upon in most situations as it is the one he is most fond of and feels the most connection to. This style is focused around acrobatic kicking combos, powerful punches, elbows and beastial clawing to create a style that appears highly animalistic and destructive in combat. The form also uses a great deal of footwork letting the Haku dart in and out of combat with ease. Due to it's quick attack and rapid retreat tactic it is quite difficult to keep up with,and exhausts most opponents stamina very quickly . It involves controlling the soul wavelength and killing intent within one's body, coating oneself in an invisible armor to be used for offence and defense. It can be used to momentarily augment the Haku's own physical attacks, projected ahead of the him as pure brute force, or imbued into weapons to increase their effectiveness last ( 1-3 post with a 2 post cool down). The coating of energy around his hands also can serve as a barrier to defend against projectile attacks, but this can be broken with enough force;usually multiple attacks make it easier to brake this defense.

Transformation Techniques

Kitsune no Ōgi : Dai Kakusei( Secret Technique: Kitsune Race Great Atavism) Hakudoshi's appearance changes drastically to something more feline and predatory. His teeth become jagged and sharp, his hands turn into black claws and his feet become black clawed paws, similar to that of a cat, along with a slender whip-like tail that's longer than his body. His hair becomes very long and flowing, and the markings around his eyes enlarge and extend to the tips of his ears, which become swept back and cat-like. He gains a sort of a headgear upon his brow covering his forehead. His clothing changes to become form-fitting white segmented armor, and he gains blades protruding from his forearms and his calves. Complimenting his already impressive speed and power, this state increases his speed drastically, giving him animalistic agility and movement to match his feline form. In hand to hand combat Haku allows bloodlust and instinct to guide his strikes, making his strikes highly animalistic with little signs of self control; utilizing his claws and strong punches. This style, comprised of sheer unpredictable movements, can easily catch his opponents off-guard. Even those who wield exceptional senses have shown to have had trouble keeping up with Haku's movements in this form. [last 7-8 post, 5 post cool down]


Shin Tentai no ; Muyobū (True Heavenly Body: Celestial Fox )

- After intensive training in Hellscream Hakudoshi has learned how to fuse with his ancestors ' power thru his Tamashī no Nenju (Rosary of the Soul"). It allows Hakudoshi to channel vast spiritual energies and the knowledge of previous Gitsune, granting him superhuman strength,enhanced senses and the ability to perform especially powerful and extraordinary feats of elemental mastery. Hakudoshi may unconsciously enter this state in response to perception of mortal danger, utilizing it as a defense mechanism, or emotional distress. It is possible for Hakudoshi to channel a specific previous incarnation; briefly allowing him to take on the appearance and voice of that previous incarnation. [last 8-9 post, 6 post cool down]
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Seisei no Shinka Reisatsushobun(Sacred Fire of Purification ; Soul Culling)

- Combining his elemental energies in his Shin Tentai form, Hakudhoshi can utilize thier attributes it a much more powerful way. By combining his Yōkokūen's "burning " effect and his Byakunagare's purification Haku can create a golden flame that doesn't necessarily kill his target, but is more of a form atonement/punishment to prevent them from evil. These spiritual flames are unable to be taken control of by a secondary-source, and upon contact become alive, so to speak, and latch onto the target, draining evil energy which allows the fire to intensify until it can no longer sustain itself. In addition to the extreme pain from the literal burning of ones being from the inside out a target usually ends up drastically weakened by the energy loss. While such a technique could be fatal for most evil beings , Hakudoshi doesn't possess enough strength for the purification aspect to effect particularly powerful,Kishen,witchs,and demons in this way. Haku can fire this ability in an large shockwave that can easily slay a multitude of evil creatures or enhance his body or weapons with it severely damaging his enemies. However, hybrids or other such creatures would have reduced damage or in certain circumstances lose thier powers temporarily(1-3 post) or completely(with permission only) due to the purification.

----Miscellaneous----


Hobbies:
- Training
- Relaxing Walks
- Painting
- Swimming
- Reading
- Studying ancient culture
- Treasure hunting

Likes:
- A good fight
- puzzles
- music
- cooking
Dislikes:
- Shinigami
- Werewolves
- Tyrants
- Traitors
- Those without honor

Dreams & Aspirations:
- To succeed his mothers legacy
- To maintain and protect his Realm.
- To continue the Gitsune Bloodline

Other:

Reizen (Cold-Heartedness):
- When employing his assassination techniques, Hakudoshi enters a state of mind that helps him channel his strength and concentration for the sole purpose of defeating his opponent, increasing his combat strength. In the face of adversity, Hakudoshi has the uncommon ability to shun all emotions and shine a blank slate, thinking three to four steps ahead to clutch, pinch and seize control of the situation. Coupled with his vast intelligence, his detached emotional state is perhaps his greatest asset. In this state Haku is much more cruel, merciless, and animalistic.


Master Swordsmanship:
- His fighting style is mainly based on his mothers Kuzusu ( to destroy; literally "to break down"). Kuzusu was described as the most vicious form of bladed combat, and was said to be filled with both cold fury and "malignant grace." The form is both chaotic,aggressive,and erratic, with a heavy focus on speedy offense. Hakudoshi combines this with smooth flowing slashes, parries and thrusts with agile and amazing foot work. When used Hakudoshi's sword is normally sheathed and the he simply flows around the opponant's attacks. He then counters with just enough force to break his opponant's rhythm evenutally allowing for a lightning fast draw & slash technique.



Master Hand to Hand Combatant:
- Hakudoshi fighting style features of a wide variety of kicks aimed at the upper parts of the body using rotation of the body combined with highly acrobatic break-dancing like kicks, along with the softness/hardness concept of Kitsune martial arts. The "bobbing and weaving" concepts of boxing are also utilized. Hakudoshi was also taught a wide array of defensive and escape tactics, a trait that was exacerbated while Ren was conditioning him. Even without resorting to enhancing himself, Haku is able to move at supersonic speeds,and takes full advantage of his agility and dexterity to fall back quickly, dodge the enemy's attacks and react immediately after being hit. The kicks used by Hakudoshi range from body blows to full on take downs and often result in very damaging attacks to the opponent's body. Hakudoshi's movements are fast and the rotational spinning of his limbs adds power to his strike. These movements coupled with his natural agility allow  Haku  to attack his opponents from different angles and allows for constant motion, never allowing the opponent to locate a weakspot for too long. He is constantly moving from one foot to the other keeps his center of gravity in one place, allowing him to attack from any spot. This constant bobbing and moving keeps his opponent guessing as to where the first strike will come from. The powerful swinging kicks he employs come from multiple angles and can be done while doing handstands, or by jumping in a rotation, with the trick being to disguise the attacks within the dance-like movements. This evasive style of defense gives Hakudoshi an advantage when fighting against a non-martial artist because they he does not have to waste time trying to recover from the block; and he can easily jump back into the fight with a counter-attack at a different angle.

Dreams & Aspirations:
To honor his family name
To protect those closest to him
To continue his bloodline
To become a Kitsune Elder
PostPosted: Sat Nov 23, 2013 2:26 am


Weapons

Tengoku no kiba(Heavenly Fang)
- This blades appearance is quite unique as its sheath and blade are completely made out of a rare translucent material. It takes the form of a katana that is somewhat longer than most blades of its family; being forged from the fang and of a Myobu (Celestial fox), the blade posses a powerful purification flame.


Shirafune no-Murakumo(White Sword of the Gathering Clouds of Heaven)
- is a unique sword which belongs to Hakudoshi and it has helped him to earn the name "White Swordsman" this is because Shirafune is pure white in color from the cross guard,handle to the blade and it has ability to channel and store Hakudoshi's lightning and other electrical based attacks. Hakudoshi only uses this weapon on those he deems unworthy of his other weapons.

Byakuren no Senkūga (White Lotus Sky-piercing Fang).
- Hakudoshi's most versatile weapon,and the one of his powerful only used in his heavenly fusion form. It ancient weapon that once belong to Hakudoshi's most distant ancestor,created by turning his other blades into pure lightning and flame and fusing them together. In its initial sealed state the sword is comprised of single-bladed limiting Hakudoshi two powerful one and two-handed attacks. In its unsealed state it takes the form of two medium sized, heavily curved,scimitars with dual edges. Hakudoshi can swing his weapon,and toss it at opponents for mid-range combat by creating chains from his lightning and flames. The blades move very quickly when thrown,and with Haku's strength have a great impact on anything they hit. If the target dodges the attack, Hakudoshi' can use the chains to change the sword's direction and try to hit the target once more thru simple elemental manipulation reducing the need for specific aiming and enabling the blades to travel at odd angles and directions rather easily.


Armor

Zanma: Ōkami

- A semi-heavy white armor and a muscular body suit with a large collar and the traditional hakama present, ballooning pants common in samurai. His silver hair grows longer and is tied at the mane. All armored sections feature fully-functional crimson eyes with slit pupils. These eyes are not as much of an intimidation as much as the mask he wears; a completely white, two horned helmet with no features or visor, appearing to have no face at all. Normal armor usually protects the fighter from his opponent's attacks, but Hakudoshi's also serves as an inhibitor for his true power, and thus protects his opponent from Hakudoshi excess power. Usually summoned by "ripping" his hand from his face. It's incredibly resistant to dark forces and forms of magic. The sword use with the armor has the shape of a nodachi and is made of a metal that can withstand his abilities to a certain degree.

Gyakusetsu Nagori Yerusakusorisu("Paradox Relic: Inverted Paradox Armor of Entwined Karma")

- The secound armor in his arsenal, it's the only one that doesn't have a recognizable form. Being ethereal in its true appearance; it lulls an enemy into carelessly attacking. As stated before, there's no physical form of this armor something that makes it an oddity of its kind; however, when it appears on Hakudoshi's being, it takes the form of gray pants, golden bangles with fox motifs adorning his arms and legs, as well as six white/golden fox tails which are made of pure flame. This armor is only used with his heavenly fusion form.


Miscellaneous Items


Sōhaku no Tamashī (Wisdom of the Heavens;Rosary ")
- The Sōhaku no Tamashī were created by a Gitsune of great power. Imprisoned by the very ones he once served, the first Gitsune bound a piece of his soul to the sacred rosary; each bead sealed with a specific virtue of the Clan and passed down to the next in line. The Rosary consists are eight purple beads tied together on a rosary with charm ornaments in between. The Sōhaku no Tamashī are one of the Gitsune's greatest treasure,given to a chosen few. Masters of the Sōhaku no Tamashī form a spiritual bond to the souls of past Gitsune; able to fully converse and interact with them, going unseen and unheard to all except those blessed with his blood. This can be done directly through deliberate meditation in order to connect with a specific past Gitsune, or Haku can call forth a spirit-like apparition of a past life, or even his current self, in order to communicate with them. Recalling a past memory can also be done subconsciously when in the presence of people or objects important in a past life, or other certain triggers which can force the recollection of a memory.


Fragment of the Blue Sentinel
- This mysterious fragment is infected with the golem's Blue core. Use it to add a deep slow motion effect on a target for 2 posts. Then it goes back into a 4 post cool down.
Conceal it on blessed soil to unleash it's hidden power. Granted in [Future Arc] by Nebbia d Argento

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 27, 2013 1:01 am


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Story/Significant events

The Fox Sage and The Phoenix Monk
- Hakudoshi takes his training to new heights by challenging Illo the Iron Phoenix. Although he held his own the diffrence in power was too great,but he harbors no resentment for the monk. On the contrary he now strives to push himself further than ever.

The White Child and The Tree of Kitsune
- To recover from his fight with Illo Hakudoshi travels to the Tree of Kitsune. During his time thier he witnesses the trail of the hybrid Lily Trieanna.

Weapon of The Immortal Soul: Trienna Curse Release
The Chaos sends Ren and Haku investigate the creation of an Immortal soul weapon.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2016 9:53 pm


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Since this is a Kitsune, King will have to approve it.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 2:28 pm


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Story/Significant events

The Fox Sage and The Phoenix Monk
- Hakudoshi takes his training to new heights by challenging Illo the Iron Phoenix. Although he held his own the diffrence in power was too great,but he harbors no resentment for the monk. On the contrary he now strives to push himself further than ever.

The White Child and The Tree of Kitsune
- To recover from his fight with Illo Hakudoshi travels to the Tree of Kitsune. During his time thier he witnesses the trail of the hybrid Lily Trieanna.

Weapon of The Immortal Soul: Trienna Curse Release
The Chaos sends Ren and Haku investigate the creation of an Immortal soul weapon.


i changed the last one in red since its not a gift to ahyone, its more of taking the immortal soul that was attached to lily and make it into a weapon so that no one in the future tied to the family would get the possibility of being controlled by it, but its up to you but if this is all thats updated Accepted

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Story/Significant events

The Fox Sage and The Phoenix Monk
- Hakudoshi takes his training to new heights by challenging Illo the Iron Phoenix. Although he held his own the diffrence in power was too great,but he harbors no resentment for the monk. On the contrary he now strives to push himself further than ever.

The White Child and The Tree of Kitsune
- To recover from his fight with Illo Hakudoshi travels to the Tree of Kitsune. During his time thier he witnesses the trail of the hybrid Lily Trieanna.

Weapon of The Immortal Soul: Trienna Curse Release
The Chaos sends Ren and Haku investigate the creation of an Immortal soul weapon.


i changed the last one in red since its not a gift to ahyone, its more of taking the immortal soul that was attached to lily and make it into a weapon so that no one in the future tied to the family would get the possibility of being controlled by it, but its up to you but if this is all thats updated Accepted


Lol I changed the whole profile above. This story section is just so I can keep track.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2016 4:31 pm


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Story/Significant events

The Fox Sage and The Phoenix Monk
- Hakudoshi takes his training to new heights by challenging Illo the Iron Phoenix. Although he held his own the diffrence in power was too great,but he harbors no resentment for the monk. On the contrary he now strives to push himself further than ever.

The White Child and The Tree of Kitsune
- To recover from his fight with Illo Hakudoshi travels to the Tree of Kitsune. During his time thier he witnesses the trail of the hybrid Lily Trieanna.

Weapon of The Immortal Soul: Trienna Curse Release
The Chaos sends Ren and Haku investigate the creation of an Immortal soul weapon.


i changed the last one in red since its not a gift to ahyone, its more of taking the immortal soul that was attached to lily and make it into a weapon so that no one in the future tied to the family would get the possibility of being controlled by it, but its up to you but if this is all thats updated Accepted


Lol I changed the whole profile above. This story section is just so I can keep track.


ah then let me look at it then XD give me a minute

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one: need to put how many tails he has and note he cant be 9 tailed since only one 9 tail per RPer so far
two: Raiōken Byakunagare (Thunder King Fist; "White Current"), i think you should mention if theres anyway that it can possibly be overcome like via, for example some people do have purification or healing/antistatus(doubt the status but ive seen people have em in guilds before) if that is possible to lessen the effects or null it its just a suggestion.

three: Kyūtōbi no Zanun Kyūtōryū, im not sure about the over-lapping flashes that disregard the concept of time and space since manipulation of time in any form is...kinda OP and is in terms shouldnt be used for attacks Defense and evastion maybe since its usually limited how often its used but when its attacks it makes it seem OP and almost impossible to even block/dodge, so i think if you remove that and even say its extremely fast swings...and as a state of mention there are only two people whom can control time(Well three if u include Atlas[whom is meant to be an OP Boss in future] and the only one that attacks during that is of course the elder whom is an NPC which can be monitered on how much Time manipulation for attacks are used)

four: Shishi-ō no mai: needs a limit some how, all it gives is how it betters the user, and has no weakness even visible, so i recommend adding something along the lines of how long he can keep it up, since he is focusing, and it can be used as defensive maybe enough damage or enough pressure via attacking enough to make him exsert this enough for it to go away, or even if the focus can be broken meaning a instantaious way to stop it, and not making it impossible to do so...so id recommend the limit as the choice.

five: injuring an immortal, is kinda a weird statement, as most immortals are either one of two things: one, cant die even if mortally injured, or heal so quickly that even fatal wounds can be healed fast enough...so ioono about that immortal part,

six: Seisei no Shinka Reisatsushobun: as for this, I understand the purification but you must understand that there actually is a type of madness and strength of some madness that actually resist types of purification, so even if it spread to some of these powerful madness tyopes it wouldn't spread or affect them too much probably would hurt the ******** out of them but ioono about it being 'infected' to those specific ones but other than that its fine.

now...i believe you understand the rule we have on Weapons that have abilities/powers, and that if they do they need to be in the power list unless given from a mission/other character(not ones own unless approved by the captain)

so heres some of my concerns with the weapons
1. Byakuren no Senkūga (White Lotus Sky-piercing Fang). "The use of the spirit energy enables for telekinetic control of the blade's direction" thats pretty much a power, since Telenetic control in itself is an ability and i dont see any telekinetic ability's listed....sooo thats gonna be a no...(telepathy is just speaking so it wouldnt count)
2. more of a personal statement "why do you need so many Items"
3. You do realize, that if he doesn't have an ability that allows him to summon Armor...or even create armor/weapons, all that armors pretty much got to be carried...and for the armors
A) Zanma: Ōkami : The sword use with the armor has the shape of a nodachi and is made of a metal that negates both magic and opposing soul wavelengths in a certain distance...(that just seems unfair as its a Metal that has properties to do things and its never been mass produced)
B) Gyakusetsu Nagori Yerusakusorisu("Paradox Relic: Inverted Paradox Armor of Entwined Karma") : as well as nine white/golden fox tails which are flame like in appearance. (you pretty much made him a 9 tails...and you can only have one per RPer so thats a no even if its an appearance)
4. Hoshi no Tama (sphere of stars) : BAsically an item with a power...meaning its an ability



as for the other items....really the memory thing im fine with that since really, that doesn't grant a boost in means of fighting or an advantage, its simply something personal

and the fragment, Mission item thus approved..


overall i would litterally not add weapons or armor, because that means he has to carry everything on him unless he has an abiloty to either summon or create them...so i recommend having only whats needed and not having it grant a boost in fighting/defense or something that can be seen as an abilty.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 3:51 pm


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accepted just remember about the armors and the carrying issue when u plan to use them

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 4:07 pm


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accepted just remember about the armors and the carrying issue when u plan to use them


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