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PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 7:01 pm


Dark Mirror Sailor Hekate, Senshi of Jinxes//Sage Tyler

Hello! I just wanted to make a quick note to anyone critiquing Sage. I definitely need all the help I can get fleshing out her profile, so don't hold back! :3 Thank you so much in advance!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 7:02 pm


Name: Sage Tyler.

Nickname: Brat playfully by her father and from time to time her mother. (Since her father's passing, she's rarely been called that.)

Age: 18.

Birthday: December 9, 1995.

Sign: Sagittarius.

Gemstone: Turquoise.

Blood Type: A positive.

Fav. Food: Strawberries.

Hated Food: Seafood.

School: Meadowview High School, with plans to attending Destiny City University majoring in Veterinary Technology after graduation.

Hobbies:

Animal Care - Ever since she was a little girl, Sage knew that one day she wanted to work with animals. Her first encounter with an injured animal was a young bird who had fallen from its nest. Of course, after she'd run to her mother and told about the situation, she was told that its mother would reject it. After crying and pleading, her mother allowed her to keep the bird until it was healthy and could fend for its own. She has volunteered at a few animal shelters since then, but hasn't been with one consistently due to her father's Naval career requiring the family to move every three to four years. Since moving to Destiny City, she's begun volunteering at the local animal shelter and even offers her services as a part-time pet sitter. She's ecstatic about starting her veterinary technology program after graduating.

Learning - Sage has a strong desire to expand her knowledge about any and everything. She's read books about gluten's effects on the body one week, taken classes in playing the piano the next, and watched travel videos to find out more about the world around her. Anything that sparks Sage's attention, she's liable to delve into and explore.

Thrift Shopping - Sage's favorite and most frequented places to shop tend to be ones where people have donated to. You just never know what you'll stumble upon and usually for a near fraction of the cost of it brand new! Some of her most prized purchases have been from thrift shops, including her crystal unicorn figurine.

Yoga - Physical fitness wasn't a large concern of Sage's until her father's passing. She tried taking up a few different sports, but ultimately her lack of coordination frustrated her to the point where she didn't enjoy what she was doing, until her mother introduced her to yoga. Yoga on the Wii Fit, that is. It quickly became a great bonding activity for the two grieving women after the loss of Sage's father as well as a great way to tone and strengthen their bodies. Sage uses yoga to also release her stress and anger.

Virtues:

Devoted - When Sage makes something or someone a part of her life, she will do everything she can to protect it/them. As long as a person doesn't try to cause physical harm to herself, Sage will always put this person before her own well-being.

Honest - "Nobody likes a liar." That bit of advice was a reminder to keep Sage's younger self on the straight and narrow - that and the bitter taste of hand soap she'd still have to deal with if she was caught in one. As Sage grew older, she no longer had to remind herself to tell the truth; it had become second nature. She isn't afraid to say what she thinks and give her own opinions, while not always what the recipient would like to hear.

Obedient - As the daughter of a Naval officer, strict rules and regulations played a large role in Sage's upbringing. Disobedience was simply not tolerated. It didn't take but a handful of times being practically banished to her room, only stocked with the bare necessities, for Sage to learn to follow her parents' will. As a young adult, she is compliant with most if not all rules. For instance, if the posted speed limit is forty-five, Sage opts to drive no faster than that.

Romantic - Sage is an absolutely hopeless romantic. She loves love, however corny that may sound. Her knight in shining armor can't seem to find her soon enough, but Sage knows one day the two will be together. Until then, she'll fantasize and cry over romantic novels and films.

Flaws:

Boundary Issues - When Sage becomes close to someone, she really wants to be close to them. Many times, too close. If a friend's personal space ranges out to a foot and a half, Sage likes to stand/hover/crowd about closer to half of that. Her boundary issues don't stop there, though. She doesn't seem to understand that it isn't okay for her to read someone's diary or go through their trash. This has definitely caused a few broken friendships.

Clumsy - With a thousand things on her mind, Sage's mind drifts and she might as well literally have two left feet because she sure as hell doesn't know how to work the ones she has! Unless she's focused on one thing, she's bumping into people, furniture, walls... You name it, Sage has stubbed a toe on it. Yet when she is focused on ONE thing, she is able to combat this clumsiness and focus her whole mind on body on the act, allowing her to be something like a veterinarian.

Jealous - It's hard for Sage to share someone that she becomes close to. When she latches on to someone, she hates to be away from them and not involved in certain aspects of their lives. Once noticing someone intruding on her friend and her's relationship, she starts hogging them away from others. She'd feel strongly compelled to tell that special someone she didn't want them hanging out with another person because she missed them and was jealous.

Overly Formal - With manners being strictly enforced in her childhood home, Sage quickly caught on a little too well. She now calls most everyone "sir" or "ma'am" from the moment she meets them, including those around her age or possibly even younger. She never seems to grow out of formality with close friends and family.

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Eyes: Sexy, small, and narrow █████ #7FFF00 - "Chartreuse" colored eyes. Usually coated in thick mascara.

Hair: Long █████ #30D5C8 - "Turquoise" hair, split down the backside of her head, evenly pulled in front of her shoulders, and curled at the ends with medium length bangs.

Face: Inverted triangle face shape with █████ #FFDEB3 - "Frangipani" skin tone and primarily pink lip gloss.

Clothes: When not in her Meadowview uniform, Sage's style is primarily dressy and vintage.


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 01, 2013 9:09 pm


Senshi: Sailor Hekate, Dark Mirror Senshi of Jinxes.

Challenge: "Get jinxed!"

Symbol: [X]

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: █████ #228B22 - "Forest Green".
Secondary Color: █████ #4E2A5A - "Bossanova".

Fuku:
Collar - Long embroidered velvet hood and short caplet, no longer than this. Not attached to the bodice or sleeves.
Bow - Sash inspired by this.
Bodice - Inspired by this. Transparent overlay of "cloak".
Sleeves - Three quarter length kimono-styled sleeves, similar to this, with silver bracers underneath but not connected to the dress or collar.
Brooch - Eyeball brooch with Hekate's symbol included.
Bottoms - Dress bottom. Inspired by this.
Tiara - Inspired by this but with the DMS eye and Hekate's symbol included.
Choker - Black ribbon choker.
Shoes - Thigh-high leather boots.
Gloves - None.
Accessories - Makeup similar to this. Otherwise, cc? :3

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Hekate Jinx.
Execution - Hekate extends her right arm, holds her hand up, and says the name of her attack. A three-inch-wide, whispy, purple trail (Think the Evil Queen's Curse from Once Upon a Time in appearance, but to a much smaller scale.) snakes its way from Hekate's palm to her victim, absorbed through the nose, ears, and mouth.
Effect - The affected party will experience effects of bad luck in terms of battle, including less effective attacks and difficulty accurately attacking targets.
Use Limits - This attack may be used three times per battle and affects one person.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for twenty-five seconds.
Weaknesses - Hekate's attack is slow and can be dodged. Her attack can reach up to four feet away.

Super Sailor Scout Attack:
Name - Hekate Hex.
Execution - Hekate extends her both of her arms, holds her hands up, and says the name of her attack. A three-inch-wide, whispy, purple trail (Think the Evil Queen's Curse from Once Upon a Time in appearance, but to a much smaller scale.) snakes its way from Hekate's palms to her victims, absorbed through the nose, ears, and mouth.
Effect - The affected party will experience effects of bad luck in terms of battle, including less effective attacks and difficulty accurately attacking targets.
Use Limits - This attack may be used three times per battle and affects two people.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for thirty seconds.
Weaknesses - Hekate's attack is slow and can be dodged. Her attack can reach up to five feet away.

Eternal Sailor Attack:
Name - Hekate Mayhem.
Execution - Hekate sweeps her arms outwards and says her attack's name. A three-foot-wide, dense, rolling, purple fog (Think the Evil Queen's Curse from Once Upon a Time in appearance, but to a smaller scale.) rises from the ground and is absorbed by allies and enemies.
Effect - The affected parties will experience effects of bad luck in terms of battle, including less effective attacks, difficulty accurately attacking targets, and greater susceptibility to incoming attacks. (Attacks would effect victims as if they were in their third stage if they are fourth stage, second if third, first if second, and first stages would receive double the effects of the attack.)
Use Limits - This attack may be used one time per battle and affects allies and enemies within the AOE, Hekate excluded.
Power Limits - The effects of this attack last for forty seconds.
Weaknesses - Hekate's attack affects both allies and enemies alike. Her fog can only reach persons within a ten foot radius from her attacking position.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:26 am


Hi Xevra!! Just thought I’d give you some crit for your cool cool character!

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Animal Care: I was wondering although Sage will eventually start a veterinary programme does she do any volunteer work at local shelters in the meantime. Does she help walk dogs? House-sit for people with animals? With her being so enthusiastic about animals it would be nice to see her adopted a positive role in animal lives before starting her future training. I love animals too but I do not go and help shelters, I feel Sage would be a person willing to use her spare time for the good of the animals before she gets the skills to really help. Just an extension of this hobby will really show how much she loves them and offer great RP opportunity’s in the future (Characters wanting to adopt kittens? Run-away dog? Negaverse trashes the local pet shop!)

Learning: Is her learning hobby about everything and anything from music to geography or does she specialise in one area? Has she gained any useful skills while taking this approach to life or does she just dabble a bit and then move on to something else or can she be stuck on one subject for months and months until she has perfected it?


Virtues:

Devoted: You mention “9 times out of 10 a person will come before her”, I think it would read better as “as long as a person doesn’t try to cause physical harm to herself Sage will always put this person before her own well-being.” Just because the 9/10 bit sounds like it could encompass a lot of things while not really explaining what would be the reason for her to not put them before herself…like if they stole the last chocolate bar, then Sage would go medieval on them and tear their arms off.


Flaws:

Clumsy: Does her clumsiness ever worry her with regards to her future job possibilities? Carefully stitching animals back together or even keeping her balance when walking animal etc, etc? How does this affect her motivation to becoming a vet if she is so clumsy? Or is it that when she is thinking of a thousand things at once (because she learns so much) her mind drifts and she becomes clumsy because she is daydreaming or thinking about things too much? Yet when she is focused on ONE thing she is able to combat this clumsiness and focus her whole mind on body on the act allowing her to be something like a veterinarian? It would be good to add little extra bits in like that.

Jealous: How far does this jealousy extend? Does she start hogging them away from others? Will she try and keep them to herself? Would she go out of her way to jeopardise another friendship if they are getting too close to her friend and she feels threatened? I think the boundary flaw works really well with this but would this infringe on her honesty as well? Would she tell someone she didn’t want them hanging out with another person because she missed them and was jealous of their blooming friendship?

Overly Formal: Does she ever grow out of formality with close friends? Does this take a while to gain from her?

Senshi

Symbol: Sadly your symbol link is broken & I am unable to see it!

Attacks: Hekate Hex - Other than this attack lasting an extra thirty seconds and encompassing a larger AOE, I think you could add on something extra if you wanted? Like it effecting 2 people instead of one?

I like that your eternal attack can effect allies as well, the only “winners” when using this attack would be anyone outside the AOE or Hekate herself as the attack will, although lowering everyone's power/accuracy etc, still keep people on the same playing level just down by one step....if you get what I mean XD! The only person to benefit would be Hekate & people fast on their feet which means she has to make a decision to use such a powerful attack - either risk the benefit for yourself to become more powerful but know that you curse your friends to become weaker! Its has the chance to create very cool anguishy RP where someone might get beaten up worse if they stepped into her fog! I think its great!

I hope this helped somewhat <33 ]

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Xevra


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 11, 2014 2:27 pm


Matisha
Hey, Tish! biggrin Thanks for looking over Sage. I've made changes to her profile, except the Boundary Issues section, since I'm not sure what I needed to change to that one. I think the link should be fixed now for her symbol and added to her super attack. Thank you about her eternal attack. biggrin Hopefully she looks better now, but let me know if she still needs changes. <3
PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 3:09 am


Xevra


Haha totally ignore the devoted part, I copy and past peoples quest to work on them and i must have forgotten to erase that bit!! Good updates, I will throw you one of these

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and throw you to the wolves GM's!! ]

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:34 am


Matisha
xD Okay! Thank you! *snugs*
PostPosted: Sun Feb 16, 2014 5:21 pm


Xevra

Hekate looks good to me, so I'm going to drop a stamp! Good luck winning her!

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