|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 9:56 pm
Name: Autumn Rose Bennet
Nickname: Rosie, by her parents
Age: 13
Birthday: February 22
Sign: Pisces
Gemstone: Aquamarine
Blood Type: A
Fav. Food: Candied violets
Hated Food: Cake - most varieties are too thick and chunky for her! She does, however, like angelfood and ice cream cakes, and loves cake batter...
School: Knightside Elementary
Hobbies:
Floriography || Autumn finds the language of flowers fascinating and interesting. It's such a delicate and elegant way to send messages, and it makes her sad that more people don't know what it is. She considers bouquets her form of love notes (be it friend-love or actual love), and finds it a more fun way to communicate than any other. For instance, she would confess her feelings to a crush by giving him or her acacia (secret love), arbutus ("you are the only one I love") and jonquil ("return my affections") rather than simply sending a love letter or the like.
Gardening || While most of her parents' backyard is carefully maintained by a team of professional gardeners, there is one corner that is reserved just for the flowers Autumn grows herself. Her parents aren't always pleased about their daughter getting into the dirt on her hands and knees, but her flowers are always elegant and well-cared-for, and she loves to give them to friends as small presents when she can.
Drawing || Autumn loves to draw, and has been taking art classes since she was five. At first, it was just sloppy finger-painting, but now she is reasonably talented, especially for a thirteen-year-old. She doodles on everything, from notes to the backside of tests, and she receives sets of drawing pencils, pens, and colored pencils for her birthday and Christmas most years from friends and family.
Girl Scouts || Autumn absolutely loves Scouting. She is close friends with most of her troop, and very much enjoys all of their arts and crafts activities. She has even gone through scouting sleepaway camp every summer! She is currently a Cadette, and intends to stick with it all the way through.
Virtues:
Generous || Autumn loves to give people things, no matter what they are. She doesn't really have as good a concept as she should of the value of money, which means she finds buying expensive gifts for her friends a simple thing. She would do it with inexpensive ones too, but generally she's getting things her friends say they want but can't afford - unless they expressly say it's something they want to save for. It doesn't generally extend beyond her circle of friends, simply because of her lack of wider concept of the world - she doesn't necessarily think to donate to charities or anything unless they're shoved in her face. (Hello, emotionally manipulative television ads!)
Compassionate || Autumn cares. About everyone. She really, truly does. However, her withdrawn nature means that she tends to avoid overt gestures, and so instead she shares her compassion in smaller ways that are often not quite traceable back to her. For instance, if she heard someone mention feeling down, she would send them a small, anonymous note or drawing meant to make them feel better.
Devoted || If given a cause, a friend, a family member, Autumn is by their side until the end, and any time she says she's going to do something, she gets it done. She hates the idea of having to break a commitment, even if it's to something she might not have given herself to freely, because, well - she made a promise and promises are absolutely sacred!
Flaws:
Naiive || Autumn really doesn't have a good concept of the world around her. It absolutely bypasses her that there are problems that a hug and a few kind words can't fix, or that there are people who are genuinely unkind and do not have her best interests at heart.
Sensitive || It is very easy to hurt Autumn's feelings and make her cry. She takes things very personally and deeply to heart. While she tries not to cry in front of others, she often cannot help it, and it sometimes makes her look far younger than her thirteen years.
Unassertive || Autumn absolutely chokes on disagreement. She cannot raise her voice or assert herself, and it often means that she ends up in situations in which she is unhappy or uncomfortable simply because she couldn't say no. If it were something important - for instance, trying to push her into something she considers truly bad or wrong, like criminal activity -she could speak up, but in most cases she simply shrinks into herself and goes along with what the group or another person wants.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Green, round, wide
Hair: Long, bright green
Face: Round, rather delicate
Clothes: Cute and feminine!
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2013 10:00 pm
Senshi: Sailor Asteria, Senshi of Hibiscus
Challenge:
Fuku Colour: Main Color: Green Secondary Color: Pink
Fuku:
Please see art~ Tweaks: addition of a sailor collar, also change the flowers to hibiscuses
Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Hibiscus Gentle Touch!
Sailor Asteria holds out her hands and speaks the name of her attack, and a hibiscus blossom appears in her hands. She offers it to one person, and if they take it, it "explodes" into a shower of petals that rains down around them. Any bruises, minor cuts, or scratches on the target are healed. Sailor Asteria can use this attack three times per battle, but cannot heal herself, and cannot use it on the same person twice in the same battle.
Super Sailor Scout Attack: Hibiscus Tender Caress!
Sailor Asteria holds out her hands and speaks the name of her attack, and a hibiscus blossom appears in her hands. She offers it to one person, and if they take it, it "explodes" into a shower of petals that rains down around them. Any bruises, moderate cuts, or scratches on the target are healed, and the attack now also heals Asteria herself. Sailor Asteria can use this attack twice per battle, but cannot use it on the same person twice in the same battle.
Eternal Sailor Attack: Hibiscus Delicate Beauty!
Sailor Asteria holds out her hands and speaks the name of her attack, and a hibiscus blossom appears in her hands. She throws the flower in the air, and it "explodes" into a shower of petals that rain down over a five-foot radius for ten seconds. Anyone within the radius is healed of mild to moderate injuries - essentially most things short of broken bones or anything life-threatening, though the pain of injuries like those would be lessened. Sailor Asteria can use this attack once per battle.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 8:59 pm
Hey Song,
Autumns really cute her hobbies are adorable. Love the flower language one. For her virtues, does generous just apply to expensive gifts, what about inexpensive gift. Also is it just friends, or does she put money in the salvation army santas place, want to do adopt a family, have a penpal in a third world country, give to a random homeless person on the street, feeding stray cats and what not. The virtue just needs to be broadened a bit.
Compassionate and Devoted, seem like two side of the same coin, like one is just an extension of the other and not fully differentiated.
Her flaws look good to me.
For her powered side, her first two attack look good, but her eternal attack is to powerful for a chibi. Keep in mind with her attack that when she becomes a full fledged senshi her attacks would become stronger.
Her being able to heal everyone in a 10ft radius of non life threatening injuries as well partially of life threatening ones is two much. It would be better if it was just one person. And could you specify what injuries go in what category. Not sure if I'm fully comfortable with a chibi being able to fully heal broken bones.
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2014 10:32 pm
Made some alterations based on your crit~
(Totally wrote her as a full senshi initially, aged her down, and forgot to change her attacks, oops!)
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2014 5:13 pm
Looks good to me dearie! Have a stamp!
|
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|