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PostPosted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 11:24 am


Captain Application


Link to Profile: Mei-fang Li

How long have you been in the guild? I'm new and joined Wednesday night I believe

How active are you in the guild? I just joined...but I'm on most of the time when I'm not in class or working.

Why do you want to hold the rank of Captain? Aside from the obvious (we need captains), the position of captain requires a lot of responsibility and I believe only those who are literally skilled , grammar wise and can role play in such a manner which holds a position of power; if you can play the part then you should play the character. In this case, captain and I would like to hold said rank rather than hone my role playing skills to that of mere unseated member.

Why do you think you will do well as a Captain? My response ties into the one above, I'm semi lit to lit and I really enjoy a good action role play; depending on my mood or who I'm role playing with sets the question of whether or not I'll be semi lit or lit, it depends on the place and person. I'm a fan of good stories and if you supply with a good platform to work with, I'll give it my all.

Your Sample:
☾ The air grew cold as a slender figure appeared at the top of one of the buildings a few yards away; her rose locks flickering with the breeze that accompanied the freezing air. Her turquoise eyes scanned the area all around, taking in her surroundings as she took notice of what was going on. From where she stood, she sensed strong Spiritual Pressure among the area. Some a combination of hollow while another was faint, perhaps masked by that of a gigai. Unless she was closer, she couldn't tell. All she knew was that there was trouble in the Rukongai District and needed to gather information as to what where the ulterior motives behind the attack. Not to mention there was the question if more assistance would be needed. With two captains and unseated members present, the Captain was sure it wasn't something to worry about but if things got out of hand then more serious matters would be taken into action.

“What really are they planning..."

The captain pondered as she prepared to move,speculating where she'd take off to and collect data for further investigation. Her train of thought was quickly interrupted when the sounds of three explosions caught her attention. Focusing on the particular sounds as she drowned out everything else, she quickly realized they were none other than hollows. Wasn't very surprising either to be honest, but three? That was odd, most didn't travel in groups unless they were purposely released or it was a whole mess of menos. This had to be looked into and with the captain only a few yards away from the explosions, it was a good time to take a look. Without a sound, she shunpoed her way to the site of the explosion, stopping in mid air as she looked down and scanned the area with her aqua colored eyes. Analyzing the potential danger as to who was injured or at risk so she could take the necessary measures. If anyone else showed up then they would have to go by a plan. That was IF they decided to go by a plan and not jump into battle like idiots. Yuki hoped it wasn't one of the incompetent shinigami or this wouldn't turn out as well as she hoped.
PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 6:23 pm


Not enough detail in the sample, to be approved and all that jazz I am going to have to see more out of the sample. Don't get me wrong its a great start just not enough.

Add more onto it go into more depth into the situation then I will return to this and let you know... For now Declined

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 7:01 pm


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Not enough detail in the sample, to be approved and all that jazz I am going to have to see more out of the sample. Don't get me wrong its a great start just not enough.

Add more onto it go into more depth into the situation then I will return to this and let you know... For now Declined

The profile had been approved by Rin Helios. So then I guess it doesn't count?
PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:44 pm


Your profile may have been approved but your application was not so I believe what I have said still stands.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 8:56 pm


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Your profile may have been approved but your application was not so I believe what I have said still stands.

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 1:36 am


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Your profile may have been approved but your application was not so I believe what I have said still stands.

edited sample


slightly better, I like the improvement. Approved smile

did exactly like I asked and I greatly appreciate you doing so. Nicely done

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