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Aukai Oceansoul

Springtime Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Mon Sep 16, 2013 12:48 pm


Sauron
Pure Blood Shifter
Male
Lives in Ast
Hopes to become a Rider
Personality Traits:
Zeal for Life
Persuasive
Clever

Personality:
Sauron loves nature and learning. He adores long forays into the wilder parts of the forest where he observes the interactions between the animals and the other two legs. He is often cheerful but does not like to be interupted when he is in the bush. If he brings someone along with him interuptions are mostly excused unless they talk the whole time. The real problem is when someone manages to sneak up on him he has this tendancy to fall out of the tree. These surprises even when he doesnt fall put him in a rather sour mood.

He is also a bit of a romantic and likes to be complimentary and charming. He likes to have company when he is in the village and will go to great lengths to get it. Its more fun with someone else to talk to and he has found you get more friends by being yourself and being friendly.

He can be possesive over little items he collects from the forest, wether they be small bones, pieces of bark, plants, or rocks. Each piece has a story for him, a momento of some adventure or observation. As such he will not easily forgive thievery, leading to days or weeks of the cold shoulder for those who dare to steal from him. He will no longer show them any hidey holes or his in home collection. He gets very hurt when people break his trust like that.

His charm and intelligence combined often come together to help him get what he wants. Hes good at solving problems be they creating new tools when he forgets one or getting extra sweets for himself and his friends. He dislikes tedious work like preparing food, he would much rather be out gathering it or training for combat with a few friends he delights in the physical excersize.

He loves mornings in the cool and wet. He dispises squishy slimey things on principle. And he gets really bored with long lectures.

Description: He has very dark skin and long hair, tall but muscular. He has a few beads in his hair helping to keep it back from his face along with a leather strip that prevents the majority of it from getting in the way when he is fighting

Clothing: sky blue pants and a left leg bracer.

Accessories: He wears a necklace made from the teeth of his great grandmother's mount, who had died of old age. He also wears a feathered armlet on his upper arm.

History:
He has grown up hearing stories about his great grandparents who were both riders, that and his love of animals inspire him to strive to be a Rider. He is an only child but his parents are close to him and accompanied him on his first forays into the forest. He remembers when his father gave him the necklace of teeth, it was his proudest moment because it meant his father thought he was growing up. His parents had beamed at him through his squeals of glee, he wants to make them proud. But is still young and prone to some immature behaviour at times. Eventually he will grow our of this after a few lessons learned. His parents had left the oldest settlement for the more volatile and exciting climate of Ast. Sauron was still a baby when they moved and as such does not remember much at all of his former home. So in his opinion he feels Ast is where he belongs. Soon however he may wish to see the other places to find new animals and plants.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 11:25 am


I really can't find much wrong with him and he sounds delightful :]

The only thing I need to know is when it comes time for art, do you have a specific style for his hair? Because the description you have is pretty vague. (like when you say leather strip, do you mean like this or like a headband across the top? And beads holding his hair back like this?)

Suhuba
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Aukai Oceansoul

Springtime Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 1:06 pm


Suhuba
I really can't find much wrong with him and he sounds delightful :]

The only thing I need to know is when it comes time for art, do you have a specific style for his hair? Because the description you have is pretty vague. (like when you say leather strip, do you mean like this or like a headband across the top? And beads holding his hair back like this?)


the beads yes and as for the other part not the head band but the feather thing in the back its still in the image (like a ponytail) maybe with a strand of hair falling over his eye for interests sake smile

this is the first time i havent had much for critiques on a character its very heartening.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 2:38 pm


Duke Edward Drake
Suhuba
I really can't find much wrong with him and he sounds delightful :]

The only thing I need to know is when it comes time for art, do you have a specific style for his hair? Because the description you have is pretty vague. (like when you say leather strip, do you mean like this or like a headband across the top? And beads holding his hair back like this?)


the beads yes and as for the other part not the head band but the feather thing in the back its still in the image (like a ponytail) maybe with a strand of hair falling over his eye for interests sake smile

this is the first time i havent had much for critiques on a character its very heartening.


Ooooohhh ok. A ponytail. Makes more sense now. :]

And I'm glad it's heartening lol It's pretty easy to get your first few characters here, so as far as I'm concerned, he's almost good to go.

I'm gonna leave this up here for another day so that I can look at it and see if there's anything I missed, but besides that, you're good to go :]

Suhuba
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Aukai Oceansoul

Springtime Shapeshifter

PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2013 3:17 pm


Suhuba


Awesome! Thank you so much
PostPosted: Wed Sep 18, 2013 6:49 am


Duke Edward Drake


I've slept on it, and I don't see anything wrong with him still lol, so he's all set and ready for Tendaji heart

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