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Full Name: Eveleen Cody-Luighseach (pron. Lee-shock)

Alias/Title: “The Old Lady”

Nickname: Eve (Pron. Evv)

Gender: Female

Date of Birth: August 31st

Actual Age: 4358

Appearance Age: seventy-five give or take

Height: 5’ 4”

Weight: 140lb all muscle

Eye Color: Emerald Green

Hair Color: Silver white, but at one point used to be flaming ginger red

Nationality: Irish

Reiatsu Color: Green

Occupation: 9th Division Captain

Affiliation: The Gotei Thirteen

Former Occupation:
11th Division 5th Seat
11th Division 3rd Seat
9th Division 3rd Seat
9th Division Lieutenant

Former Affiliation: N/A

Hobbies:
Reading
Lounging
Playing Deaf, yes she pulls the age card and plays it well

Likes:
Banana Split Sundaes
Having absolutely nothing to do
Reminding Youngsters they are still inexperienced

Dislikes:
Cockiness
Having practical jokes played on her
Annoying bratty youngin’s

Personality: Eve is rather laid back and kind almost like a mother (or grandmother), but her temper regarding anything related to age or the lack thereof is notoriously short and violent. She does, however, have an odd and quirky sense of humor that at times might be mistaken for just being senile. Face it, what batty old woman doesn’t? Her sense of humor might seem rather off, but as she’s quick to remind you, “Can’t an old lady just have a good laugh?” She is a little stubborn at times. Well, more than a little and more often than just at times. And in all honesty, she’s exceedingly stubborn all the time about pretty much everything.

Sexual Preference: I’m too old to be rolling around in the sack. But that doesn’t mean I can’t still enjoy the sight of a well-turned male backside.

Family: I don’t remember, most died in action

Background:
While alive in the human world Eve was the wife of a blacksmith who died in childbirth, sad but common in her time. Upon arriving in the soul society she appeared the poor part of Rukongai, she allowed the children who lacked shelter into the shack she occupied for shelter during the night. Although the fact that she had a higher than average reiryoku did raise a few eyebrow with the local shinigami, they allowed her to operate unharassed. However, after some time, a local gang of thugs decided to try and cause trouble in her house. In a brief moment of fury, she released an enormous amount of reiatsu and almost killed them. She’s never quite calmed down about how the younger generations are too immature for their own good after that.

This sudden burst of power, coupled with the fact that three men were left near death immediately earned her a choice to be made. Either join the Academy to become a shinigami so she can better control herself, or be charged with attempted murder. Not a hard decision, but it certainly didn’t help her new outlook regarding “damned immature whelps.” She graduated from the Academy with some good honors, but her temper has since gotten her into a good many sticky situations…not that all of those situations ended badly. After all, that same temper “won” her her position as 9th Division Captain, when the previous one made a disparaging remark about her age; the last mistake that Captain made in her life.

Zanpakutō Name: Dorīmingubatafurai (“Dreaming Butterfly”)

Zanpakutō Type: Melee/wind ((kinda a bit of both))

Sealed Zanpakutō:add a small bit of chain at the end of the handle

Zanpakutō Spirit: Dreaming Butterfly

Shikai Incantation: Bring Forth the Hurricane Dorīmingubatafurai

Release Appearance: While the incantation is being called out the katana forms into a scimitar. Eve would then pull forth a second scimitar from the first one ((think Zuko from Avatar: Last Air Bender and his two swords)).

Description: Connecting these two scimitars is a chain at the base of the handles that can extend and retract from a few inches to 30 feet. She may retract and extend the chain at anytime during or between abilities/attacks. However, rapid succession cannot be done. She can only change the length every other post, so long as shikai is active.


Abilities:
Whirlwind of Torment -- Eve takes a hold of the chain usually with both hands and then proceeds to move in a dance like way spinning and swinging the blades and chain into enemies. After two posts of constant use, razor sharp wind forms around the scimitars, extending the range of their damage 6 inches from the tips of either blade. The ability can last for up to 3 posts, and has a cooldown of one full post between uses.

Hurricane of Agony -- Eve, with a jerking wrist motion, sets one or both of the scimitars to spinning like an airborne top. She then uses the other sword (or the chain, if it’s both) to move the spinning sword(s) around herself not unlike the b*****d child of a whip-sword and a dancer’s baton. This ability only lasts for one post but can be used each post.

Bankai Name: Dorīmingubatafurai kōka

Bankai Incantation: Bankai

Bankai Spirit Form: Dreaming Butterfly Effect

Release Appearance: Eve throws one of her scimitars and the chain wraps around her torso fro m hips to under her arms, at which point she releases the bankai. The wind swirls around her and lightning flashes from the chain and the swords. During the lightning flash, the change occurs and after said flash of lighting, the wind drops and the change is already finished.


Description: Dark colored chains are wrapped around Eve’s arms from wrists to just past the elbows. Extending 35 feet from her arms, by those same chains, are now four different swords: a scimitar, a wakizashi, a falchion, and a chincese dao; two connected to each arm. These swords float near Eve as if supported by cushions of wind, their chains can not extend or retract, and their freedom of movement is limited by the chains themselves, however the chains have small spikes ((think barbed wire if it were a chain)) covering them entirely. These spikes are more meant for pain and discomfort. While Eve can’t control them telekinetically, all she must do is move her arm(s) and the appropriate blades will respond in kind. Her arm movement is not hindered by the chains. Eve’s bankai lasts until she loses consciousness.


Abilities:
Snakes of Anguish-- Eve throws at least one sword at the ground or floor, whereby it disappears. Any enemy within 30 feet is now a potential target. The intended target, assuming they are unable to get out of the way fast enough, will have their ankle wrapped in the chain of the sword throw into the ground. If Eve is using more than one, she can use them to grab up to however many swords she’s using. The activation takes one post, the hold lasts for up to 2 posts per sword, and the return of the sword(s) to Eve is one more post. Once in the ground, Eve has no more than 2 posts to make a grab attempt. Eve herself is unable to move from her location for the entire duration of the ability, making her extremely vulnerable to attack. Once the ability ends, Eve must wait 3 posts before she can use it again.

Hurricane of Oblivion -- Eve thrashes her arms wildly about, her body swaying as if lost in an exceptionally complex dance. The blades move around her at incredible speeds, creating what looks like a small orb of swirling winds around her (in fact this is a naturally occurring optical illusion caused by the speed of the swinging swords and chains). The swords also lash out randomly in no discernible order as if like whips. This lasts only 3 posts, as all the movement throws Eve’s equilibrium out of whack by then. Afterwards, she must wait another 2 posts before she is able to do it again. During those two posts, her balance and coordination are significantly reduced.

Hadō:
1. Sho (衝 lit. Thrust)
4. Byakurai (白雷 lit. Pale Lightning)
31. Shakkahō (赤火砲 lit. Red Fire Cannon)
33. Sōkatsui (蒼火墜 lit. Blue Fire, Crash Down)

Bakudō:
1. Sai (塞 lit. Restrain)
4. Hainawa (這縄 lit. Crawling Rope)
8. Seki (斥 lit. Repulse)
9. Hōrin (崩輪 lit. Disintegrating Circle)
21. Sekienton (赤煙遁 lit. Red Smoke Escape)
39. Enkōsen (円閘扇 lit. Round Lock Fan)
52. Sentan Hakuja (千反白蛇 lit. Thousand-Coil White Snake)
61. Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢 lit. Six Rods Prison of Light)




Other: Parts of this profile made with the gentle assistance and idea-bouncing off of Yuri Valentine - Sifu.

Hello hello again, I know I said I would pm you, but after thinking about it, I slapped myself because this would be easier. That being said, I'm going to be covering the general stuff first. Although I'm sure you've noticed, or will soon, this is third person rp and quotations will be used. As such, action markers such as "- -" or "* *" will not only be unnecessary, but will not be tolerated. Secondly, your grammar and sentence structure seems fair enough, so a Captain position is certainly within reach. That being said, onto the actual profile business.

Age: Need a definite age madam, no ifs, ands, or buts. Same for your date of birth.

Personality and Background: Please elongate both of these. The background isn't so bad and doesn't need too much more, but your personality does need to be a bit longer. A short, concise paragraph at the very least to illuminate most of the facets or her personality, even if they aren't actively shown.

Sexual Preference: Still need a gender or genders to go here, though you can keep the comment.

Shikai description: All post counts are user post based, so five posts is five of the user's posts. That being said, if you need to alter anything involving that, you may want to do so. All of the following will be judged as such.

Now then, onto the abilities.


Shikai One: This needs a cool down limit, in posts, as well as for how long she can maintain this.

All members are allowed up to five Shikai abilities. As such, you can add more before you are approved, otherwise, you'll be stuck with just the one.

Bankai One: I find this technique to be a tad overpowered. I actually dealt with something of similar calibre earlier, and I have the same problem with this technique that I did with the other one. Because injuries are replicated, the captive can kill themselves, and consequently, your own rpc simply because she shares their fate of injury, and any injury that beckons death near immediately, is assuredly going to kill her. As such, I'm asking this technique be reworked in its entirety. And don't forget to add a cool down.

Last note, you can have one more Bankai technique. That being said, quote me when you're ready for a new review.

Well everything looks good. That being said, would you like to add any other Shikai or Bankai techniques? You still have the ability to add three more Shikai and one more Bankai ability, and once it's approved, you won't be able to change it without halting any of the other rp's you're in. So just quote me with your decision and I'll go ahead and stamp on the approval.

In that case, approved.

Please be mindful that at any time Mochii Iced Tea may counter review me and overrule my decision. That being said, welcome to the guild, have fun, and first and foremost don't forget to set up your Division.

Helpful side note, if you need a posting format (or character code, depending upon who's talking), I'm sure several people in the guild wouldn't mind tossing out a helping hand.