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PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 8:08 pm


The name's Axel...
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I feel like I need advice but at the same time I don't think i need it right now. So I am going to write a new story. I want to do a simple story, just to dip my fott back in the writing waters.

So last night I was looking up spice names for girls randomly and I saw this name Cassia and thought it was so cute! Then I thought of a middle name LaRose. Cassia LaRose and I thought DAMN! I wanna write a story with the main character having that name! Though the more I say it the more it sounds like one whole name. Ugh! I love it so much! sounds like something my sister would like too. I should text her and get her opinion.

But anyways I want to do something new yet simple as far as my writing style and the....plot, setting and what not goes. Because I normally write pathetic high school love stories and all of them are unfinished. I need to write something more adult I mean I'm twenty one dammit! Ugh!

And I have been reading some books and I would like to try a new point of view. I normally write in first person, but I want to write this one in third person......past tense. Yeah present tense sucks! I read a book online that was first person present tense and it was just........you would want to throw that book on the ground and set it on fire. Thank goodness it is getting professionally edited ebcause it was self published too. But I'll save that for another topic.

Anyways so let me see......all I know is that I do want it to be a romance, but an adult romance. She is going to be.......twenty three living with a roommate. That is all i have so far. I don't know if I want her family to be living, want her to have a family issues or what. I'm still trying to figure that out. Or maybe she'll have a dark past but it sounds boring just because of the books I have been reading, the parents are always dead. Car crash. Out of the six books I have, three of them the parents died in a car accident.

I think maybe her family will be alive and she will be estranged from. Actually that works.....yeah I'll go with that.....

I'll work out the rest of the details later and then come up with a tittle.


...got it memorized?
PostPosted: Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:06 am


sounds good to me ^^ if you need any advice, just pm me or something biggrin

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 29, 2013 7:01 pm


The name's Axel...
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Thank you.

Lets see, okay I'm back to thinking about it and I think I got some of the rest. This name my sister named a character on a online game we were playing on is stuck in my head. so i think I am going to name her roommate after this character. The name is Akaydah. I think i spelled it right.....she had a Y in it but when I Googled it, there wasn't one.

Uh okay so lets see. With most of the stories I have written the second main character was always someone new. But I want to change that.

So lets see with the plot.....she's twenty three living on her own with a roommate. she is close to only one of her siblings as the rest of the family does not care for her that much. Okay so she works........at....hmmmm.....an office would be too overrated.....well she works somewhere, I'll figure it out.

So she has this other friend who has a crush on her but he is dating someone else who does not like their close friendship. Um yeah.

Okay. I think for the most part i got something pretty good to start a first chapter.

Hmmmmm. I'll title it......title it.....something....I'm thinking Healing Pains.....hm....


...got it memorized?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 4:29 am


looks like you're putting some serious thought into this, wonderful! is there anything I can help with?

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 12:44 pm


The name's Axel...
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No not right now. But thanks for offering. smile


...got it memorized?
PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:46 pm


no problem biggrin

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