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Name: Dorianus Dimir

Nickname: Dori(really hates this)

Age: 19

Birthday: October 31

Sign: Scorpio

Gemstone: Topaz

Blood Type: O-

Fav. Food: Sarmale, a Romanian dish his mother makes for Christmas and Easter which is cabbage stuffed with pork, sauerkraut and tomatoes.

Hated Food: Hamburgers, they are too greasy for his liking.

School: Destiny City University, Majoring in Medicine, wants to be a Medical Examiner

Hobbies:
Listening to Music: Dorianus loves to listen to music as well and he surprisingly can be seen at classical recitals as well as dive bars where underground bands tend to play. He has a wide variety of musical interest for what he likes to listen to.

Reading: Dorianus spends the majority of his time in the library of the college or his own home. It has caused his younger brother to call him names that are ignored by the elder sibling. He is normally seen with a book wherever he is and at the moment he is choosing to read through medical anatomy tomes.

Walking at night: While many people decide to spend their days wandering around and talking to one another Dorianus likes to stay inside until night falls. He never took a liking to large crowds and too many talkative people which makes walking around the city at night easier for him. When he walks at night Dorianus likes to observe anyone who is out at this time, he is even more open to talking to people with the night draped around them.

Virtues:
Logical: Dorianus is a very logical and scientific mind. He does not believe, or like to believe, in anything that cannot be proven. He has studied science, especially anatomy, since middle school and he tries to utilize it more in his daily life. Because of this he is level headed and doesn’t act upon impulse or instinct. He really isn’t the kind to jump before he looks, he prefers to know just what he is going to get into and the best course of action that will serve him to get what he wants.

Passionate: A very passionate being when it comes to the things he is interested in. He is passionate about learning and gaining knowledge as well as any action that can help him with that. He has been known to start talking nonstop if something he cares about comes up in conversation and he enjoys spreading his knowledge whether people want to listen or not.

Confident: Dorianus is fully confident of all of his abilities. He doesn't believe that there is something he cannot do. If he sets his mind to something he will be able to finish it with great results. Some could say that he is overconfident by Dorianus actually tried to get people to try their hardest and be confident in their own abilities, when he is feeling nice that is.

Flaws:
Stuck-Up: Dorianus does not believe that there is anyone who knows more than he does, he also doesn’t believe that there is anyone who is better than him. Whether this is earned or just a thought that is in his own head is unknown. He will actually look down on people who make mistakes or ask stupid questions, giving them a look out of the corner of his eyes before rolling them.

Distant: Dorianus was never very good at connecting with other people. He doesn’t understand why people need to be around one another all the time and he really doesn’t understand why some people care about others so much. He has always been on the outside looking in to the groups all throughout his school years.

Morbid: Dorianus has a very morbid view on life. This is mostly because of his chosen profession since he is very aware that things die and life continues to move on. He doesn’t seem to be a very happy individual, especially if you are just looking at him when he doesn’t think that you are.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Almond shaped narrowed eyes and a tantalizing light green/dark yellow

Hair: Long straight black hair down to his shoulders normally tied back.

Face: He has a very angular oval face with prominent cheekbones. His skin is pale since he doesn’t spend a lot of time outside in the sun but inside studying. His lips are thin and normally pursed together.

Clothes: A simple high collar black shirt with gold colored buttons, black blacks and black loafers.

Hi! This isn't an official crit; I just wanted to let you know that Scorzalite is already taken! :c Powered names can't repeat, so you'll have to choose something else; sorry!

HI AGAIN turns out I'm your official critter too<3

So let's get going on getting this boy approved~

ON THE CIVILAIN SIDE:

Hobbies look mostly good, just a few questions about his "walking at night" hobby - does he tend to walk with headphones on, or such, and ignore people, or would he be willing to chat?

Also, while his current flaws and virtues look good, we like to see an equal number of virtues and flaws, so in this case 3 and 3. All of his flaws are very strong, so I wouldn't,t recommend dropping one - however, you could potentially fold "Morbid" into "Distant"; alternately, a "Confident" virtue could be a goodsde to his "Stuck-Up" flaw?

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

While blunted knives definitely fall under the "useless" category of Lieutenant weapons, I'm not sure they quite match the spirit of being really silly! Other Lt. "weapons" have been a dodgeball, paper fans, a paintbrush, jelly bracelets, a roll of duct tape....They're generally something not very weapon-y at all! Of course there are some simple replacements - butter knives, plastic cutlery, stuff like that.

Quote me when you've made corrections or if you have questions, and I'll give him another look <3

Okay! I think with those edits he's ready for a trial stamp~



A GM will be by soon to take another look :3