Hello... Great profile for Thanatos but I didn't see a weakness. You did however spell everything correctly. Lastly if you could clean it up in your spare time that would be appreciated, I found the (Add more if you want to...) In the likes/Dislikes and Extra Info unnecessary if your Thanatos profile is Finished. Anyway The only MAJOR change is the weakness everything else can be put on lay-away.
Hello... Great profile for Thanatos but I didn't see a weakness. You did however spell everything correctly. Lastly if you could clean it up in your spare time that would be appreciated, I found the (Add more if you want to...) In the likes/Dislikes and Extra Info unnecessary if your Thanatos profile is Finished. Anyway The only MAJOR change is the weakness everything else can be put on lay-away.
Did you see the decreaseed Intelligence Power?
Posted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:05 pm
xXxThe Black HeartlessxXx
Aster McClain
Hello... Great profile for Thanatos but I didn't see a weakness. You did however spell everything correctly. Lastly if you could clean it up in your spare time that would be appreciated, I found the (Add more if you want to...) In the likes/Dislikes and Extra Info unnecessary if your Thanatos profile is Finished. Anyway The only MAJOR change is the weakness everything else can be put on lay-away.
Did you see the decreaseed Intelligence Power?
Yes but that's not really a weakness, it's more of an attribute. A weakness would be something like needing to reload if he use a gun or something that could make him vulnirable, Maybe someone could get the blue hair boy away like maybe into another room and he'd lose focus on the fight or something, From what you made, it seems that his only weakness is if the boy isn't around.
Well my attention was That was its weakness Not a Attrubute,Beside I did not see that I have to make a Weakness for my character and I do not see weakness on any other characters either Why is that?If you say its because he's too OP then don't because I did not see a rule that no OP characters,I Really don't like being tricked and I'm already mad beyond all belief because of SOPA so please tell me Why I should put a weakness when It's not part of the rule nor Profile Layout.
Posted: Mon Aug 26, 2013 5:53 pm
xXxThe Black HeartlessxXx
Aster McClain
Time for me to intervene. Both of you hold points. Aster, I don't actually think there's anything about adding a weakness; Go ahead and recommend it in the Crew Room or add it if you feel it's necessary, but the closest to adding a weakness is GMing. Heartless, your character does seem OP because he has regenerative abilities and increased strength and speed, and decreased intelligence is more of an attribute than a weakness, here. Add to it to describe it as more of a weakness. Also, the character seems to be neutral or on the side of the blue haired boy currently, but the profile suggests it's Undertaker, so keep it in mind as you work on the boy.
Time for me to intervene. Both of you hold points. Aster, I don't actually think there's anything about adding a weakness; Go ahead and recommend it in the Crew Room or add it if you feel it's necessary, but the closest to adding a weakness is GMing. Heartless, your character does seem OP because he has regenerative abilities and increased strength and speed, and decreased intelligence is more of an attribute than a weakness, here. Add to it to describe it as more of a weakness. Also, the character seems to be neutral or on the side of the blue haired boy currently, but the profile suggests it's Undertaker, so keep it in mind as you work on the boy.
Alright,Thank you for intervening I shall get started with edit for it and then continue with the Profile with the boy.
Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 5:28 pm
AsasinChaos
xXxThe Black HeartlessxXx
Aster McClain
Time for me to intervene. Both of you hold points. Aster, I don't actually think there's anything about adding a weakness; Go ahead and recommend it in the Crew Room or add it if you feel it's necessary, but the closest to adding a weakness is GMing. Heartless, your character does seem OP because he has regenerative abilities and increased strength and speed, and decreased intelligence is more of an attribute than a weakness, here. Add to it to describe it as more of a weakness. Also, the character seems to be neutral or on the side of the blue haired boy currently, but the profile suggests it's Undertaker, so keep it in mind as you work on the boy.
Time for me to intervene. Both of you hold points. Aster, I don't actually think there's anything about adding a weakness; Go ahead and recommend it in the Crew Room or add it if you feel it's necessary, but the closest to adding a weakness is GMing. Heartless, your character does seem OP because he has regenerative abilities and increased strength and speed, and decreased intelligence is more of an attribute than a weakness, here. Add to it to describe it as more of a weakness. Also, the character seems to be neutral or on the side of the blue haired boy currently, but the profile suggests it's Undertaker, so keep it in mind as you work on the boy.
Yeah thanks for coming! :3
Aren't I a saviour. xP And Heartless, a slight improvement but really all you've done was kinda separate it, to me. I'll leave the judgement up to Aster for now, seeing as I delegated the task to him for a reason, and hope we are all happy here. =D
Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:40 pm
Okay I'll meet you half way, get rid of one of any following things and I'll okay it: Enhanced Speed, Enhanced Strength, or Regeneration. You may keep the other two since you want to (From what I understand) make a undertaker, but one must go. Frankly I'd make it so he only regenerates outside of battle... like if he won (or lost) a fight, that might help make it more acceptable.
To be frank, the flight thing wouldn't work unless the chains had the tubular shape which would occur to go through the other chains, which would make it rigid. The air would just circulate through the chains and back, eventually breaking the chains explosively. =D Besides, with enhanced strength and speed, he can just run, swim and jump long distances anyway. xP I noticed the post with the ... so this is a compromise within a compromise. Remove the flight and I'll allow it, or make it more logical and, if Thanatos becomes more inclined to be like the... pet/slave/bodyguard of the boy, I'll allow it.
To be frank, the flight thing wouldn't work unless the chains had the tubular shape which would occur to go through the other chains, which would make it rigid. The air would just circulate through the chains and back, eventually breaking the chains explosively. =D Besides, with enhanced strength and speed, he can just run, swim and jump long distances anyway. xP I noticed the post with the ... so this is a compromise within a compromise. Remove the flight and I'll allow it, or make it more logical and, if Thanatos becomes more inclined to be like the... pet/slave/bodyguard of the boy, I'll allow it.
Deal,And I think he's more of a Bodyguard if anything.
Posted: Fri Aug 30, 2013 9:46 am
xXxThe Black HeartlessxXx
AsasinChaos
To be frank, the flight thing wouldn't work unless the chains had the tubular shape which would occur to go through the other chains, which would make it rigid. The air would just circulate through the chains and back, eventually breaking the chains explosively. =D Besides, with enhanced strength and speed, he can just run, swim and jump long distances anyway. xP I noticed the post with the ... so this is a compromise within a compromise. Remove the flight and I'll allow it, or make it more logical and, if Thanatos becomes more inclined to be like the... pet/slave/bodyguard of the boy, I'll allow it.
Deal,And I think he's more of a Bodyguard if anything.
Mmm. Just make sure not to use as an assassin much, 'kay?
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