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Name: Faith MacKenna

Nickname: None (unless you count the names of her characters in D&D)

Age: 17

Birthday: August 10

Sign: Leo

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: B

Fav. Food: Shepherd's pie

Hated Food: Black pudding

School: St. Magdalena's Seminary

Hobbies:

D&D || Faith absolutely adores playing D&D. Her primary character is a Tiefling Warlock who goes by the name Whisper, and her group has been involved in a rather long-running campaign. She gets very, very into character when she's playing, which can be a little disconcerting for her fellow players, especially since everything about her shifts into the character she's portraying. It's her absolute favorite way to spend an evening! (Or, if the opportunity arises, sometimes a whole day...)

Lolita Fashion || Faith loves the aesthetic of lolita. She herself runs towards the goth loli end of the spectrum, favoring dark colors and elegance over cute prints and teddy bears. She's very proud of her closet, and employs a shopping service in Japan as well as a personal shopper on Taobao in China in order to purchase them. She often wears lolita out to game sessions, to dates, to restaurants, or just to go for a walk. It makes her feel confident and pretty - and there couldn't be anything wrong with that, right?

Jujutsu || Faith is small and not particularly physically strong, so when she decided to take up a martial art, she settled on jujutsu, with its emphasis on using an opponent's own momentum against them. She has been studying for years and is an accomplished practitioner, and she finds it very useful in an environment where she is around potentially dangerous delinquent girls and might find herself in a hell of a lot of trouble.

Virtues:

Confident || Faith has a lot of self-confidence. It is really, really hard to get her down on herself. Why should she be? Sure, she's not perfect, but who is? She gets things done, she doesn't take anybody's s**t, and she's surviving a school for delinquents on sass and being able to flip people over her shoulder. Faith has a lot going for her, and she's well aware of it.

Determined || Faith absolutely does not let anything get in her way when she has a goal. Nothing will shake her from accomplishing what she sets out to do, because she refuses to allow it. If she's got a project that needs doing, or a place that needs getting to, or anything of the sort, it will be gone, or gotten to, even if it's far more difficult than she expects it to be.

Moral Compass || Faith has a set of convictions, and she will stick by them to the very end. She's not the type of person that will waver or quiet down or not speak her mind for fear of disapproval - if something makes her angry, she will speak up, and she will let the whole world know that she is not happy if that's what it takes to fix whatever she sees that's broken. Being tormented by a bully? Faith will happily show them what-for. In trouble for something you didn't do? Faith will take the rap instead, because she can handle it. Acting like a d**k? Faith will call you out and make you regret it. People admire her for her strength of convictions, and for her willigness to speak out.

Flaws:

Prideful || If Faith has a fatal flaw, it's her pride. She can certainly be blinded by it, and get into situations far bigger than what she can handle. She'll take on opponents in jiujitsu she shouldn't, dive straight into complex projects, or put herself in dangerous situations because she thinks that she's bloody Faith MacKenna and she's invincible. Obviously she's wrong, and she ends up in a lot of trouble - and she sometimes accidentally drags other people down with her.

Disrespectful || Faith doesn't give a rat's behind what authority someone put you in. You'd better win her respect or you're not gonna get it. She mouths off to teachers, administrators, her parents...anyone she sees as not worth respecting. Demonstrate that she should treat you well and she will, but until then you're a weak fool. Obviously this doesn't quite fly well with the people she's snarking at.

Flawed Moral Compass || Faith's moral compass may be pretty strong, but it's pointing slightly north-by-northeast instead of true proper north. She's a very "ends justify the means" person, and if that means occasionally lying, cheating, or stealing for what she considers good ends - well, that's what it takes. However, regardless of her ends, she has still lied and cheated and stolen - and that's not exactly going to win her friends and admiration.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Burgindy

Hair: Nearly waist-length, red-violet

Face: Round, pale skin

Clothes: St. Mag's uniform

Hey Song~ Civ side looks great!

In regards to her powered side since I need to stamp her outfit and I don't think she follows very many of the DMC guidelines ;;

- Must have black detached bodice that is in either of these two styles: flowing (ie: babydoll, tunic, dress) that does not hug the body or a structured (corset, traditional) that does. Detached means that the sleeves and collar do not attach to it in any way: Obviously her collar is attached as-is so that needs to change. In regards to the rest, I think her skirt needs to potentially change to fit more DMC-like uniformity if you're going to go with the corset/traditional version, since that should look more Senshi-like (think Leto's Eternal stage) since it needs to be "loose and flowing" or alter it so it's more babydoll-ish!
- Must have black choker with ribbons that can be short and lengthen with stage growth. Just needs to be added!
- Must have black buttbow, tails can be short lengthen with stage growth. Also needs to be added!

^ I know your image is just a reference, but I figured I'd drop that all there so when you eventually get her powered you know what changes to make!

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My actual crit~

Powered Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: I think that this might be too much for a first stage Senshi. I think that if she causes a first degree burn, she shouldn't be able to cause a secondary burn pain afterwards. It should either be that she calls the attack and if someone hits her they experience a burn, or just stick with the first hit as-is.

Super Attack: Second verse, same as the first. If you want to increase to second-degree burn, I don't think she should be able to hit twice since this is just an upgrade to her initial attack. I'd drop it to a first-degree burn initially and then add in the second hit to increase it that way.

Eternal Attack: Love this as-is~ <3

Edit to add: I think you can probably add on a residual burn-pain that lingers in her first two stages!

Changes look great and I looooove her concept art! Attacks and outfit changes are perf<3



Good luck getting her, and when you do I most definitely will want RP! wink