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PostPosted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 10:14 am


Name: Melissa Dowd

Nickname: Mel, Liss, Lissa

Age: 15

Birthday: March 17

Sign: Pisces

Gemstone: Her Zodiac says Bloodstone, but she prefers the color of the Aquamarine

Blood Type: A+

Fav. Food: Ritz crackers

Hated Food: Chocolate—she’s allergic

School: Meadoview High School

Hobbies:
Astrology: The stars know everything, and Melissa isn’t going to take the chance of ignoring them. She judges her relationships based on what sign the other people are, and always carries a book with daily updates on her star sign. She loves studying about this ‘science’ and will jump into hour long lectures for those who try and tell her she’s crazy. Melissa won’t let you ditch the subject once it is breached either, so if you mention anything about it, be prepared.

Seeing Eye Puppies: Melissa has always had a dog in her home, in fact, since she was three years old, she’s had over twelve different puppies, none of which stayed much longer than one year. Her family has been raising seeing eye puppies ever since she was a young girl, and while it is extremely hard to give up the puppy at the end of the year, Melissa loves the fact that she’s doing such a big part to help the lives of others. She always makes sure to take her current dog into the city for walks and makes sure he or she gets to see as many people as possible. Besides, it just makes her feel so important to walk that dog with the ‘in training’ cape on. And she just loves to answer any questions that people may have. She really is a pro at this after all!

Singing: She doesn’t think she has the best voice in the world, but what girl doesn’t cherish the ambition to one day become a famous pop star, complete with limo, and all the delicious crackers one could eat? Melissa loves to sing, and does it wherever possible. She’s a part of her church choir, and of the Meadowview Chorus, she loves going out with friends and singing Karaoke, or entering different singing competitions throughout the city, and she’s working on affording singing lessons so maybe, just maybe one day she can try for one of those big name singing competitions on the television.



Virtues:
Outgoing: Melissa loves to be noticed; she loves to be seen and heard, and always makes sure her mood reflects that. She loves talking to people and almost always has a smile on her face as she does so. She enjoys nothing more than chatting you up, and will go out of her way to do so, making sure that you remember all of the fun things that you had planned with her…or even to invite you to things that you hadn’t had planned!

Loyal: One of Melissa’s biggest sources of pride is the fact that she is the most loyal friend that you can have. Once you have befriended this girl, she will be there for you no matter what is going on, through thick or thin, she will be there to help you out. She loves each and every one of her friends so much, and would never do anything to betray them at all. She will keep every secret, hold them when they cry and laugh when they are happy. Come hell or high water, Melissa will never stop being the best, most loyal friend that she can be.


Flaws:
Overly Dependent: Saying goodbye to animals has gotten a lot easier with time, but saying goodbye to people is still one of the most difficult things in Melissa’s life. She doesn’t like losing the people important to her and it bothers her more than she wants to admit to anyone. Her insecurities make her double or even triple her efforts to make and keep friendships, making her verge on the point of being an annoying menace. She doesn’t mean to be…it just sort of happens. But she’ll do whatever it takes to make sure you hang out with her, even if you don’t want to. Because she really wants to, and she needs to, she really does.

Envious: Melissa doesn’t like seeing people who have more than she does. She gets jealous and envious very easily and it can put her into a very bad mood very quickly. Even with something as small as seeing a friend get an invitation to a party from someone that Melissa doesn’t know can set her off. It’s a stupid thing, and she knows it…but she can’t help wondering why she wasn’t invited to that party, and that will almost always lead to her confronting this stranger and demanding an invitation, or at least trying to befriend the stranger and hoping for an invite. She wants to be included with everything going on, and gets very hurt when she isn’t.



PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Dark olive green roundish

Hair: Black with streaks of purple and teal in it, style is up to you, but she likes interesting styles please!
Face: Heart shaped face, and a retarded amount of freckles all over


Clothes: School uniform
PostPosted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:00 pm


Senshi: Sailor Claudia, senshi of almonds

Challenge: Bitter or sweet, trick or a treat!

Fuku Colour: ONLY IF SENSHI OR KNIGHT. Main and secondary. Give us a hex if you'd like. The bodices of senshi will always be white, except for in the case of parallel senshi -- those will be black.
Main Color: Light brown (Almond color?)
Secondary Color: Light Pink

Fuku: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR SENSHI, FEMALE AND MALE -- YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE THESE, JUST THINK ABOUT THEM

I’m terrible at designs if I could make this a colorist choice type of thing that would be wonderful! heart I would be happy with whatever anyone came up with! I like flowing outfits? And high heels are always wonderful!
I really like the almond flowers, if those could be used in the artwork that would be amazing!

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Sweet Almond Rush
Sailor Claudia holds up her hand towards her opponent, calling out her attack and a torrent of sweet almonds and things made from almonds all made from solidified energy come flying out at the one her hand is pointing at. The almonds can go a maximum of six feet outward. The almond rush lasts for twenty seconds and can cause minor bumps and discomfort from the small projectiles. When the projectiles hit the ground, they disappear after five seconds. This can be used twice per battle and can be intercepted if someone comes between her hand and the opponent.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Bittersweet Almond rush
Sailor Claudia holds up both of her hands towards an opponent, and a torrent of sweet and bitter almonds come flying out, made from solidified energy. The almonds can go a maximum of twelve feet. When they hit the opponent, the sweet almonds do much like they did in the last attack and simply cause mild discomfort when they hit the opponent, though when the bitter almonds come in contact with bare skin, they cause it to burn and hurt quite a bit. This attack lasts for thirty seconds. Note: The cause of the burning is due to the fact that the bitter type of almonds, normally wild ones produce cyanide when crushed, and I wanted to reflect that in the attack, though not make it deadly. This attack can be used twice.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Wild Almond Ailments
Sailor Claudia holds up her hand, producing a handful of wild bitter almonds, as she holds them they crush into a paste which she throws at an opponent. If the paste lands, it causes symptoms of cyanide poisoning. It only causes symptoms of a very weak poisoning, (according to Wikipedia could include: At lower doses, loss of consciousness may be preceded by general weakness, giddiness, headaches, vertigo, confusion, and perceived difficulty in breathing.) For this attack though, I think only weakness and confusion and headache will be used. This feeling will last for thirty seconds, then it will be as if nothing happened. This attack can be used twice.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 7:03 pm


Okay I think that is everything! heart I tried to add as much information as I could about almonds and I linked the Wikipedia page that I got all of my information from! I never realized that almonds could be so deadly it's kind of a scary thought

Critiques are appreciated and I'm so excited to have made this quest! biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Aug 24, 2013 11:56 am


Elite Sushi


Hi Elite~ Let's get this lady stamped! c:

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

I think Melissa looks great! Her virtues and flaws play well off each other to create a balanced personality (and her hobbies are great and social!)

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

First, how many times per battle can she use these attacks?

Second, I'm not sure that the aftereffects (i.e. burning sensation) of the attack can last longer than the attack itself at Super; since it's part of the magic, it should only last for 30 seconds along with the barrage.

Also, is it possible to dodge these attacks? Does her target have to be within a specific range? What happens if someone else gets in the way of the almond storm/thrown paste?

I'd really just like some more specific details on that stuff!<3

Quote me once you've made changes or if you have any questions!


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 3:19 pm


Songstress Kitsune


I have made some changes and I hope it reads better now, and I took out the two minute burning sensation part. biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 3:34 pm


Elite Sushi


Okay! Quick pick on wording (and something I was advised of in the past when doing poisonous plant spheres): if you'd like, you can list all the effects of poisoning and say "the target experiences two of these symptoms: -list-, up to player discretion"

That way, all of them could potentially be reflected if you wanted, just not all at once so it's not totally OP~ <3


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 3:37 pm


Songstress Kitsune
Elite Sushi


Okay! Quick pick on wording (and something I was advised of in the past when doing poisonous plant spheres): if you'd like, you can list all the effects of poisoning and say "the target experiences two of these symptoms: -list-, up to player discretion"

That way, all of them could potentially be reflected if you wanted, just not all at once so it's not totally OP~ <3


Can I just leave it how it is? sweatdrop Those seemed to be the easiest to play and I didn't really want to be difficult.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 3:40 pm


Elite Sushi

Totally! Just letting you know of a possibility that existed, if you wanted to take it.

But if you're happy with everything as it is...

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 5:33 pm


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Hey, Sushi! This profile looks cute and everything checks out to me, so I'm going to drop off a stamp for her! Good luck in your quest!

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