Hey there, guildies. I'm working on an Anders song and I was wondering if any of you would be willing to help me. I'll post what I have so far.
I found him lying there
Cold, on the ground
He spoke softly to me
My personal demon, I’d found
I am Justice, he said
And it is for Justice I stand
I was left here to die
But take my hand
And we’ll correct the world
Together
We’ll correct the world
Though a man,
I had the heart of a child
Because I was accosted, hated
From the time I was born
I wanted to change the world
The desire burned in my heart
But that fire burned me
And tore me apart
How can I sit by?
Can no one else see it?
How can I sit by?
Can no one else feel it?
I can feel
The itch on the back of my neck
The pain in the back of my head
I can hear
The cries when silence reigns
The voice tells me of their pain
I can see
The invisible chains, their words like whips
To keep them in place
I can taste
The words lost on closed lips
And the blood that spills with every hit
I can feel
The itch on the back of my neck
The pain in the back of my head
I can hear
The cries when silence reigns
The voice tells me of their pain
I can see
The invisible chains, their words like whips
To keep them in place
I can taste
The words lost on closed lips
The blood that spills with every hit
I feel like if I just added one more verse/bridge at the end, about him ultimately becoming one with Vengeance, it would be complete. Anyone care to help, or give their thoughts?
I like hearing compliments. smile
The Dragon Age : A Real Fans Guild
A dragon age guild. Game focused. A rp forum is available though.
