Welcome to Gaia! ::

Reply Profile Approvals
Fleur's approval

Quick Reply

Enter both words below, separated by a space:

Can't read the text? Click here

Submit

Veijari Starling

Benevolent Scarface

PostPosted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 7:55 pm


User Image

Name: Fluer (flure)
Orientation: Straight
Gender: Female.
Parents: Unknown.
Siblings: None.
Mate: None.
Offspring: None at the moment
Friends: None at the moment
Enemies: None at the moment

Background: Carousel's have been dated to ages long past including the Byzantine and Ottoman Empires. The idea was spread throughout the world as it enchanted and captured a feeling of awe. As time progressed many relationships were had on such rides. The Carousel would go 'round and 'round for all eternity, just as love has in it's own way; lasting a lifetime into eternity. Each carousel acted in the same way, however each and every one was unique. Unique in it's own way, just as the story that's about to unfold about Fluer, an equally unique hind on a journey that will last a lifetime. Fluer resides within the ruins of an old carnival along with other hinds that belong to her herd. The uniqueness of their home that is left there over the years intrigues their curiously as they want to gain more knowledge. The more knowledge they know, the more they see a bit of their own selves within these roles of characters that would be along these "circus folks".


Personality: Never being refused really fluffs up one's ego, along with them thinking they can get whatever their heart desires. Fluer feels this exactly applies to herself. Being the beauty she is, she knows for a fact within her mind that she is better than any other hind & should be placed on a pedestal. Some may construe it as her being "Super Prissy". Fluer just see it as knowing what she wants & expects more from anyone who wishes for her attention.


Likes:
♞ Compliments.
♞ Other's doing things for her.
♞ Being Pampered.


Dislikes:
♞ Not getting what she wants.
♞ Getting dirty.
♞ Not looking her best.


Powers: None
PostPosted: Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:04 pm


This is just me being picky, but the background is a bit odd, because when I think background I think history xD But I like how you're incorporating this into your herla. So this isn't even something you actually have to change. Like at all. I'm just sayin' it.

But yeah, APPROVED

Poisin Ivy Josephine
Vice Captain

Shameless Gawker


Thy Reaper
Vice Captain

Unforgiving Phantom

PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 4:10 pm


Veijari Starling


I know that Poi said that you don't need to change it since we see what you were trying to do, but if you could maybe add a little bit about where she's come from, that would be great. :'3

Just so we can make sure she's good and not coming from somewhere she shouldn't be.
Other than that, I approve.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 8:09 pm


Thy Reaper


I added a little bit so it wouldn't take away from what I had in the start. Is this alright?

Veijari Starling

Benevolent Scarface


Poisin Ivy Josephine
Vice Captain

Shameless Gawker

PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 8:24 am


That's a lot better. Thank you starling. As for where her carnival is. That would put where she comes from (where I see it in my mind at least) closer to the north, but not so far north that a forest herla would freeze.

I like her tassels. Btdubs.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 1:57 pm


Yep~ That is quite a bit better. :'3 Thank you.


User Image

Thy Reaper
Vice Captain

Unforgiving Phantom


Veijari Starling

Benevolent Scarface

PostPosted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 2:56 pm


Thanks you two!
Reply
Profile Approvals

 
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
Get GCash
Offers
Get Items
More Items
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum