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PostPosted: Sat Jul 27, 2013 12:31 am


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名前は KITSUMANI, KIEL です !
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              【 F U L L N A M E 】全名前 Hey- my name is Kiel Kitsumani
              【 N I C K N A M E 】渾名 But people call me just about anything honestly
              【 A L I A S or T I T L E 】偽名 Have you heard of "Blond Assassin"- Yeah, that's me. 。
              【 G E N D E R 】 I'm pretty sure I'm a Male
              【 S E X U A L I T Y 】性別 Sorry, I'm bisexual
              【 H E I G H T 】 I'm about 5'7'' tall 。
              W E I G H T 】体重 And I'm also 154 pounds 。
              【 E Y E S 】 Are you in love yet? Left eye is blue, right eye is dark green in hue 。
              【 H A I R 】 What about now? Blonde and strawberry pink locks 。
              【 A G E 】 Let's see- I just turned 21 this year in April
              【 L I K E S 】好もの I can't live without feeling something
                  - Warm days
                  - Strawberries.

              【 D I S L I K E S 】嫌もの I definitely can live without being alone
                  - Not being able to talk.
                  - Loud people.

              【 P R E C I O U S大事な人 Someone precious? There is nothing left to cherish. ... I cherished them 。
              【 V I L L A G E 】 I'm from Iwagakure, Village Hidden in the Rock
              O T H E R 】~等 Oh! I almost forgot! I can't speak

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              始 め か ら 終 わ り ま で
              f r o m b e g i n n i n g t o e n d


              xxxAND SO... It came to pass that a pair of Jounin from the Village Hidden in the Rock gave birth to their first child. A male with ivory colored skin, soft blond hair, and mismatched eyes. As the child grew, it became apparent that he was... different, in more ways than one. His body, while retaining what a male would normally have, had a feminine quality to it, that his parents noticed at a rather early age. At first, this bothered them slightly. Was there something wrong with their son? However, the doctors assured them that he was quite normal, and indeed, the boy seemed to grow just as any other boy would. His parents began his lessons early on, they expected nothing but excellence from him, they after all, were exceptional ninja. His father was a member of the village's Anbu, and his mother was a Jounin that had led and trained many successful teams. He learned quickly, easily picking up on the jutsu that they taught him before he went to the academy. There, he was easily able to rise to the top of his class, the skills and classes there seeming all too easy for him. His success over his students made the young boy cokcy and arrogant, he would often tease the other students when they were unable to learn something that he considered simple. One day, after becoming a little too sure of himself, he made the mistake of acting that way to his father, who quickly showed him that he still had much to learn.

              He humbled himself some after that, but not to the point that it made much difference around his peers. As he got older, and passed from the Academy to Genin and was placed in a squad, he began to even out, his attitude more playful teasing and good natured than before. He realized that he would have to work together with those on his team, and it was best to have a good relationship with them. It was some years later, a few months before he took his Chunin exams, that he realized just how well of a relationship he could have with one of his team mates. Mikari, a dark haired, dark eyed male that had been part of his team since he was a Genin. It took a bit of teasing and flirting, but he managed to get the other male to finally admit that he was indeed attracted to him. For some reason, this made the young man extremely happy, and as the weeks progressed, he was more than content spending his free time with the other. The pair took their Chunin exams together, watching out for one another during the tests and passing easily enough with the others help. After the graduation ceremony, the pair decided to celebrate together. That was the first night the blond learned just how very deeply he was in love with the other. After that, the pair spent as much free time together as they could, even toying with the idea of moving in together. They were going to become Anbu, continue with their training, and become the greatest ninja that the Rock Village had ever seen together.

              Their plans came to a screeching halt though. A few weeks after the Chunin exams, his parents left on a mission. For weeks he heard nothing from or about them. That didn't bother him much, he was used to being left alone for long periods of time, even though he wasn't fond of it. During those times, he would have Mikari come over and stay with him. It was on one of those nights that a member of the Anbu came by with a slip of paper. The ninja was solemn as he handed Kiel the paper, standing in the doorway with a bowed head as the blond read it with shaking hands, already knowing what was inside. His parents had died. The male was grief stricken, crumbling to the floor there in front of the Anbu as he sobbed. Mikari came and tried to console him, but for several days the blond was beyond it, he fell into a depression where he did nothing but cry and stay in his house. Mikari staid with him, helped him and comforted him in any way he could. Slowly, the male began to pull out of it, and with Mikari's help, he once more started to act his old self.

              By now, Mikari had already become a member of the Anbu, and the blond next tried for it, easily passing, even after having not been training for a few months due to his loss. As they worked together, it became apparent that Kiel's looks began to play a large part in his roles in missions, where he would often play as a woman looking to get 'closer' to their target before they would bring them down, that or he would use his looks and body to gather information from surrounding members of the target's company. This caused a few fights between Mikari and Kiel, Mikari wanting the other to stop, while Kiel being as stubborn as ever and insisting that there was nothing he should be upset about, and that it wasn't fair for him to ask him to quit when he wouldn't himself. It was after one particular fight that the pair had their last mission. Somehow something went wrong, and the entire team was found out. Kiel, as was normal, had been sent in first ahead of the rest of the team, and by the time they reached him, the plan had fallen apart, and Kiel had been beaten by sheer numbers and force. His team watched as the enemy ninja slit Kiel's throat before they could get to him, then they engaged against them.

              Kiel doesn't know how he survived, he had watched his life blood spill out around him, had felt the razor edge of the blade as it sliced through him, felt himself grow cold as death came for him. Then he woke up in the infirmary at the village. He couldn't speak, his throat had been badly damaged and they had done what they could to repair it. The entire time he was in the infirmary Mikari did not visit, which was very unlike him, and had the blond worried. Akashi, another team mate, had came in one day, after having waited nearly a week. He sat down, a slip of paper in his hand, and Kiel's heart sunk. He shook his head and gave strangled sobs and cries as Akashi began to tell him what had happened. Mikari had tried to get to him, had tried to save him, and in doing so, had opened himself to attack. Mikari died trying to save him. Now the Kiel was truly inconsolable, his heart broken, his soul shattered. He tried several times to claw his throat back open, to try to end his miserable existence. He was left with nothing, his parents were gone, and now the one thing precious to him was gone it was too much for him to bear, too much for him to handle. He wished himself dead, wanted to die, and had to be tied down and his jutsu sealed to keep from hurting himself. It took him nearly a year to stop, nearly a year of medical nin watching him around the clock, giving him drugs to keep him calm and even, and working with him to try to get him over his loss. He would never get over it, he understood that now. But he couldn't die, what would that do? Slowly he began to pick up the shattered pieces of his life. He left the Anbu after that, his personality shifting. No longer was he happy, no more did he smile and laugh, if he could even make that sound anymore. He was listless, distant, and cold. A shell of what he had been, he began to work solely for the sake of the Kage, for the sake of the Village. He could no longer seem to bring himself to feel. He tried to find solace in the arms of others; men, women... They all only lasted as long as the ecstasy of their brief pleasures of the flesh. The only time he could actually feel, that he could let go and forget about what he was. Relationships had no more meaning, life had nothing left to offer him. Yet still, he cannot die... Mikari wouldn't have wanted him to...


              悔 い 改 め る
              t u r n i n g o v e r a n e w l e a f


              xxxIF ONLY... Tell me, what dreams or hopes can a man have when he has watched everything that was ever precious to him ripped from this world? I no longer have dreams... Only nightmares.

              新 章
              a n e w c h a p t e r


              xxxBUT NOW... The present day. Add onto it later when your character interacts with people and goes through evens. Bullet point, put it into a sumary/short story type of form- whatever pleases your face.


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              【 Shinobi Rank 】 Jounin
              【 Kekkei Genkai 】Shōton: Crystal Release
              【 Bijuu 】None

              【 Shinobi Profession 】 Bloodline
                  Prodigy
                  - o Mastery - Able to learn jutsu outside rank limits (genin learning b rank jutsu)
                  - o All or nothing - Recovering chakra takes twice as long.
              【 Shinobi Speciality】 Chakra Control
              【 Chakra Pool 】 225 (+40)

              【 Equipment 】
                  Equipment here.


              【 Strengths 】Ninjutsu
              【 Weaknesses 】Close Range hand to hand combat


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              Base SP ► 75

              Ninjutsu | 30
              Strength | 23
              Bloodline | 25
              Speed | 22

              Total SP ► 100

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              Total MP ► 4500

              Mission Record

              E-Rank |
              D-Rank |
              C-Rank |
              B-Rank |
              A-Rank |
              S-Rank |
              Storyline |
              Special |


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              【 CHAKRA ELEMENT(S)】This speaks for itself

              Shōton: Crystal Release
              xxxxx- Passive: Crystal Creation [400 word training post]
              Through intense training, the user of the bloodline learns how to create an ever expanding variety of different artefacts that can come in many shapes and sizes. The chakra it takes to create these crystal objects vary from E-S Rank depending on the size of the creation. Below is the size comparison for the different ranked crystal creations:

              E Rank: Very small accessories, usually no bigger than a golf ball.
              D Rank: Accessories and items that can be equipped, such as a sword or helmet.
              C Rank: A large table or sofa.
              B Rank: A small car.
              A Rank: A small home, bus or train.
              S Rank: A large house or mansion.


              xxxxx- Passive: Crystal Immunity [100 word training post]
              The user of this bloodline is unable to be harmed by any of their jutsus... Mind you, another member with the bloodline can hurt another.


              xxxxx- D Rank: Shōton: Kesshō no Yoroi (Crystal Armor)
              This jutsu allows the user to become encased in a thin sheet of crystal to protect them from blunt force trauma. This armor can also aid the user in performing stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it, although it tends to be heavy and slows down the user by one rank while worn.


              xxxxx- D Rank: Kesshō: Rokkaku Shuriken (Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken)
              The user focuses their chakra into their hands and crystallizes the air around them. The crystal particles form into several six-sided shuriken, which resemble snowflakes in appearance.


              xxxxx- C Rank: Shōton: Suishō Tō (Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade)
              The user focuses chakra around their arm and crystallizes the air around their arm. The form a blade made of crystal that is attached to their arm. The blade is similar in sharpness, durability, and shape to a tantō. If the user pays two more chakra they can create a blade on both arms.


              xxxxx- C Rank: Shōton: Shuriken Ranbu (Crystal Release: Shuriken Wild Dance)
              The user will focus their chakra into the air around them, and crystallize the air creating hundreds of crystal particles. The particles will form together creating a dozen of crystal shurikens that will launch at the target.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Kesshō Purizumu (Crystal Prism)
              A jutsu that has a variety of uses. This technique allows the user to focus chakra under their position and shoot several crystal walls that form a triangular prism around the user at sharp speeds, it can be used as a method of defense against assault from any angle. The user could also focus their chakra under a enemies position and attempt to use the crystal walls to seal and trap any enemies inside the prism, making it a handy trick to trap any escaping ninja. Despite the red walls appearing glass thin, this jutsu is very resilient against ninjutsu attacks, and it takes a lot of physical force to break through. This is a upgrade from the Crimson Fruit jutsu.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Shōton: Kesshō Jin'ya Kabe (Crystal Release: Crystal Encampment Wall)
              The user releases their chakra into the air in waves and creates a large wall of crystal. This wall can also be more like a spire, and seal the user within. The wall is highly durable to most single point attacks, and is capable of mending itself for 3 chakra per mending. Requires 2 chakra per post to maintain.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Shōton: Sodachizakari Kesshō Bara (Crystal Release: Growing Crystal Thorns)
              The user places a hand on the ground and focuses their chakra into it. A large crystal spike rises up under the target. This jutsu is performed with the idea that the target will dodge the spike. As the target avoids the spike it will branch off into more spikes that chase the target. This is similar in appearance to a large thorn bush.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Shōton: Hashō Kōryū (Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon)
              The user will focus their chakra into the air, and crystallize any material substance around them. The crystallized material will form together creating a large crystal dragon. The dragon will charge at the opponent with its mouth open ready to rend them to pieces. The user can ride upon the dragon to cover large distances in a short time. This jutsu can crystallize an opponent's attack as long as it is not higher rank than 'B', composed of material that can be crystallized, and produces enough material to form the dragon. Jutsus that contain fire, water, wind, and lighting cannot be crystalized, but jutsus that contain earth or any other solid mass can be. The user can create multiple dragons for 4 extra chakra per dragon for a maximum of three.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Kesshō: Kyodai Rokkaku Shuriken (Crystal: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken)
              The user focuses their chakra into their hand and projects it into the air. The air crystallizes and forms into a giant crystal shuriken, which resembles a snowflake. The shuriken is capable of slicing through solid iron. This shuriken is also able to break into several smaller shuriken snowflakes. The shuriken is usually around the size of the user when it is created.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Shōton: Omiwatari (Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings)
              The user will place a hand on the ground and focus their chakra into it. A large trail of crystal spikes will rise up out of the ground racing towards the target. The spikes will grow in size the further they trail from the user.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Suishō Bunshin (Jade Crystal Clone)
              The user focuses their chakra into the ground and crystallizes enough material to create a clone of themselves. The clone is sturdy capable of taking some damage, but lightweight enough to perform the same as the user. The clone is equip with enough built in crystal to create several Kesshō: Rokkaku Shuriken, or create two Shōton: Suishō Tō. When the clone takes enough damage or the jutsu is dispelled it will turn into a crystal statue of the user and crumble into a pile of crystal. The user can create more clones for an extra 3 chakra for each going up to six clones total.


              xxxxx- B Rank: Bāningu Kōsoku (Burning Restraints)
              A jutsu where the chakra is directed underground, and right below a enemy location, once the chakra reaches the enemy location, it will crystallize, and shoot out from the ground in the form of chains, attempting to wrap around the enemy and bind them on the spot. The user can make the chains tighter or loser at will.


              SHOTON (CRYSTAL)
              xxxxx- N/A

              DOTON (EARTH)
              xxxxx- D Rank - Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu [Earth Clone Technique]
              This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes earth to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Tsuchi Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user. When this clone disperses, it reverts into a pile of dirt.


              xxxxx- C Rank - Doton: Doruki Gaeshi [Earth Release: Earth-Land Deflection]
              A Doton (earth element) ninjutsu technique where the ninja digs into the ground beneath them and tears up a solid wall of dirt and rock. The shield of earth is held together by the ninja's chakra and is meant to take the driving force of a physical attack.


              xxxxx- C Rank - Doton: Nameogusoku [Earth Release: Armor of Earth]
              After performing the handseals, the user is engulfed with a layer of earth which then hardens to a very high density and is used as armor; each piece of the armor can endure at least one hit, and can endure more depending on the hit force, and the level of the user. The armor itself is very heavy, creating a drain on the user's stamina as well as their chakra, and also greatly decreasing both their speed and strength no matter the rank of the user.


              xxxxx- A Rank - Nameoryuu no Jutsu [Earth Dragon Technique]
              The user initiates with a long sequence of handseals. Afterward, a vortex of mud appears near the user within the ground, and from that port-like gap emerges a grayish brown dragon made of very solid rocks. The dragon assaults the target with force enough to rupture the ground in a large area around where it struck, causing any buildings, trees, of parts of mountains/hills nearby to crumble. It consumes a large amount of chakra in exchange for the high degree of destructive power.


              OTHER JUTSU
              xxxxx- Passive: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking [250 words of training]
              This training method is used to gain better chakra control. To do this, the user has to be emitting a constant stream of chakra from the bottom of the their feet and using the repellent force to walk across the water's surface. This technique is more difficult to master than the Tree Climbing Practice, because the amount of chakra that needs to be emitted changes constantly.
              It has also been shown that one can use their chakra to "skate" across the water surface, like an ice skater, instead of just walking or running. And, as noted by Jiraiya, the more one trains this technique the more they reach a state where they stand on water without even noticing it or basically even trying. [Once the user successfully learns this, they can use the technique passively all the time without even knowing sometimes]


              xxxxx- E Rank - Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
              A simple ninjutsu technique where the user performs a single hand sign and then transforms into a desired visual appearance other than their own. Example: Transforming into a friend or an animal.



              xxxxx- C Rank - Chakra Concentration: Muscles
              The user focuses chakra to their muscles making them strong enough to lift heavy objects or giving them one rank higher strength for one block or attack.


              xxxxx- C Rank - Chakra Concentration: Legs
              The user focuses their chakra into their legs, giving them one rank greater speed and dexterity for their next move or physical attack.


              xxxxx- C Rank - Jigyakkou no Jutsu [Time Regression Technique]
              Jigyakkou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used by the ANBU to pull out forgotten memories. After forming the needed hand seals, the ANBU will put the target into a trance. After counting back to the day they wish to learn about, they will ask the target to remember incidents they have since forgotten. This allows the ANBU to gather intel that would other be inaccessible.


              xxxxx- B Rank - Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique]
              Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.


              xxxxx- B Rank - Shoushagan no Jutsu - Vanishing Facial Copy Technique
              Shoushagan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique used for spying. A dark technique, the jutsu involves the removal of the face of the person to be impersonated. By wearing their face and clothing, the ninja can impersonate the original without others being aware.


              xxxxx- A Rank - Rasengan [Spiraling Sphere Technique]
              The Rasengan does not require any hand seals to use, relying only on the chakra control of the user. Once it is complete, it becomes self-sustaining, which does not give the Rasengan a definite limit like the Chidori. The compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the Rasengan to grind into whatever it comes in contact with to inflict major damage. This tends to launch the target backward after being hit or, if the target is lying on the ground or being launched to the ground, the destructive force is enough to form a crater.


              xxxxx- S Rank - Kekkaimon Gofuu Jutsu • Hachimon Heijou [Barrier Gate Five Seal Technique • Eight Gate Lock-up]
              Kekkaimon Gofuu Jutsu • Hachimon Heijou is a Ninjutsu barrier technique. First Fuen will draw out the designs of the village the barrier will surround to correctly place the barrier gates. Fuen will then perform the needed hand seals and then summon the four gates which will arise in each of the cardinal directions. A barrier will then extend between each gate, encasing the village within a defensive wall. If anything tries to pass through the barrier, it will be destroyed by a strong fire. The only way to pass through the barrier is with the usage of a special entrance charm. When the ninja who cast the jutsu is taken out, the gates will return to the earth and the barrier will end.


              ACADEMY JUTSU
              xxxxx- E Rank - Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
              Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.


              xxxxx- E Rank - Passive: Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
              This is one of the most basic shinobi skills. By focusing their chakra into one's feet, and keeping a steady flow, the user can walk straight up completely vertical surfaces. Training to learn this technique can be frustrating; if you focus too little chakra into your feet, you will fall off and most likely hit your head, whereas if you focus too much, the surface will crack and the user will be forced to jump off before it collapses. [Once it is learnt once, it can be passively used all the time]


              xxxxx- E Rank - Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Replacement Technique]





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PostPosted: Mon Jul 29, 2013 8:27 pm


II Blow Meh II

Profile is ready to be judged please. Thank you.

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Janet23
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 29, 2013 10:13 pm


Battle Ram


Might I ask if this is an RPC or an NPC? If it is an RPC then you are missing the rest of the profile layout.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 2:05 am


II Blow Meh II

Janet23

Metal Trsu

ox Kaze xo


Okay... Okay. It's been fixed... And is now ready to be judged.
-sighs-
But, on the bright side, I think his bio turned out even better the second time!
<3

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Metal Trsu
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 4:37 am


Battle Ram


- Approved -

What's up with all those spoilers? You don't really need them.
 
PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 4:41 am


Metal Trsu

-leaping fist pump and happy dance-
YES!!
Oh, and its so when I fight I can look back and make sure that I am doing a technique correctly and don't have to hunt for what the technique is through their designated threads. Keeps me from having to have more than my normal 6-8 tabs open at once. Lol~

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