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Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:33 pm
Name: Adler
Nicknames: Scythe
Gender: Male
Age: * 1237 years old, Appears 32.
Hair Colour: His hair is composed of white spines.
Eye Colour: Purple
Height: 6'3
Weight: **170
Blood Type: B
Reiatsu Color: Emerald Green
Mask Fragment: A small plate at the back of his neck.
Appearance: Adler is clad in complete Hollow armor, of his own original make. Claw like gauntlets, greaves, Pointed war boots, a thick chest plate, with tiny spines going from the front of his collar bone upward over his should and ending on his back, and thick plates covering his arms. The armor flows together almost like an exoskeleton but appears worn with scars of past battles and the weathering of sand. His helmet has two small eye holes, and covers his entire face, and extends down his neck to meet his chest plate, there is no covering in the back, allowing his spine like hair to protrude as the only visable organic part of himself. This helmet acts like a mask and can be removed at will.
Affiliation: Las Noches
Number: 11
Rank: Numeros
Aspect of Death: *Espada Only
Family: The Only family of his was turned to dust a millennium ago.
Personality: Adler is straight to the point, and apathetic at most times. Adler has extreme explosive anger, but with an extraordinary fuse attached to it.
Likes: Solidarity.
Dislikes: Those who cannot wield their weapons properly.
Biography: Adler was once a hollow that created beautiful weapons for the ancient armies of Hueco Mundo. The only forger among hollow kind, he helped even the odds between the Hollows and shinigami with his masterworks, cruel blades that matched the strength of zanpakuto, the closest weapon to an Asuchi that a hollow ever wielded. After grueling years of war, Adler found himself on the battlefield, carving through Shinigami lines, using his greatest works as his tools for warfare. What emotion Adler has was outraged at the destruction of his works by the hollows. They wielded the weapons in horrid manner, leading to their quick destruction at their untrained hands. As the hollows lost ground, Adler found himself trapped inside his own armory. A lone shinigami captain beset the Forgemaster. Adler held him off using his myriad of weapons, but even in his hands they crumbled before the might of a captain. As the battle drew on, the captain cornered Adler, and sealed Adler within a crystalline coffin.
Almost a 1000 years later, the seal cracked, and Adler found himself in a newer hueco mundo. The Queen and her guard long since dead, and his forges barley dust, he took his first steps out into the desert, pulled by an unknown hand to Las Noches.
Zanpakuto Name: Grievance
Sealed Description: A bladeless hilt. A guard made of ivory, with the hilt lined with ebon metals. A gold design of flames runs down the sides of the hilt.
Resurreccion Status: Unachieved
Release Command: Burn all who oppose your will, Grievance.
Resurreccion Released Appearance: Adler grows 4 spiderlike appendages from his back. These complete Ivory arms end with a hard and malicious point. His hands become viscous claws, outgrowing his gauntlets and shattering them.
Resurreccion Abilities:
Infinite edge:Adler spins silk from his hands and sending tremendous reietsu through them, casting the silk out to grab and slice at his enemies.
Duo Cero: Adler uses his appendages to focus his reietsu and use Cero with both arms. While doubling the cost, this technique creates a singular destructive beam that far exceeds what his cero can accomplish on its own, leaving a trail of emerald flames to burn after impact.
Eight Eyes born in darkness razz assive: While in resurreccion, Adler grows small sensory organs that allow him to take in his surroundings though detecting reietsu. After a few moments, the overload of sensory information settles, and Adlers speed and reflexes increase because of the new perception.
Segunda Etapa Status: * Only Available to Espada 0-2
Segunda Etapa Description: *How Does The Appearance Alter Upon Release?
Segunda Etapa Abilities: * Up to 2
Bala: Has an emerald reietsu color.
Cero: Adler prefers to cast Cero with his left hand, it flickers with dark crimson, and his reietsu's emerald.
Gran Rey Cero: ** Espada Only
Hierro: Adlers hierro varies in its power, at base, its slightly above average of hierros. Adler extends his Hierro into the armor he wears, by pulsing his reietsu through it as if it were his own skin. Making his physical forms defense much more like that of a shinigami than an arrancars. While Adler can reverse this, it will leave his armor incredibly brittle and destructible, and leaving him at an overall weaker defense without his armor.
Soindo: Adler possess a very basic understanding of sonido, and can use it to move a good distance, but cannot fully control it mid combat, or use it continuously.
Abilities and Special Training: The Deserts ForgeMaster: Adler has the ability to create weapons, by finding metal and bone and tempering them with his unique reietsu he can create weapons that can rival the strength of Zanpakuto.(This means in sheer hitting power and durability, these are not infinite shikais or bankais tho few will have some special attributes to them.)
Soul Armory: Adler can store the weapons he creates by turning them into reietsu and hiding them within his own body.
Weapons: Cursing:The greatest weapon Adler created. A massive Zweihander with an ebony blade and crimson marking that breath reietsu. Cursing Strike with a destructive impact, allowing it to destroy structures and defenses easier than an ordinary blade.
Artol:A Long bladed Katana. Adlers primary weapon. The blade of 6 feet, Ebony, is incredibly swift for its size. Its hilt similar build to that of his zanpakuto. Artol can create mirror images of its host and itself, allowing it to be deceptively lethal in fights. The images are slightly see through, and are only meant to distract someone for a split second.
Mourning: A spear of pure ivory bone. It has a jagged cruel tip, with many spines for gouging flesh. Mourning can be speed up based on how much reietsu Adler places within it, making it not only his only ranged weapon, but a lethal one.
Motto: A weapon must be an extension of ones self, for me that comes a bit more literally.
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Trivia: Adler once created a tuning fork trident.
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Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2013 10:52 pm
While some of the skills here are unique, it is the way it is worded that has me seeing some issues. You may not have Resurreccion yet, but the Infinite Edge would likely need to only be able to slice through those who are weaker than yourself and only those who cannot bring a strong defense like a Zanpakuto. Another issue I see is the weapon creation having seemingly no limit nor a cost in ability for the next little while. From the description given, it would appear that you could simply write posts to kill hollows and create a massive armada's worth of weaponry and then continue on to fight with it without any consequence.
These are minor concerns since one is likely intended to be implied and the other would take ludicrous inattention from the mods, but jsut keep them in mind. IN other news, I call this profile
ACCEPTED
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Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2013 10:57 pm
Tesei Utakata While some of the skills here are unique, it is the way it is worded that has me seeing some issues. You may not have Resurreccion yet, but the Infinite Edge would likely need to only be able to slice through those who are weaker than yourself and only those who cannot bring a strong defense like a Zanpakuto. Another issue I see is the weapon creation having seemingly no limit nor a cost in ability for the next little while. From the description given, it would appear that you could simply write posts to kill hollows and create a massive armada's worth of weaponry and then continue on to fight with it without any consequence. These are minor concerns since one is likely intended to be implied and the other would take ludicrous inattention from the mods, but jsut keep them in mind. IN other news, I call this profile ACCEPTEDHe is the forgemaster after all, if i Inteded the weapons to be spontaneously generated i wouldn't have made him such. one of the main reasons my Resurrection is inactive is because I intend to work on it, and the forging of new weapons is supposed to be a longer timed process, seeing as how i don't intend to think of new weapons every 5 seconds and such, and is supposed to be a larger rp element, adding in a character that can repair weapons. Thank you for your time biggrin
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Posted: Fri Sep 27, 2013 8:20 pm
I'm making some alterations to be approved. At your leisure of course.
Name: Adler
Nicknames: Scythe
Gender: Male
Age: * 1237 years old, Appears 32.
Hair Colour: His hair is composed of white spines.
Eye Colour: Purple
Height: 6'3
Weight: **170
Blood Type: B
Reiatsu Color: Emerald Green
Mask Fragment: A small plate at the back of his neck.
Appearance: Adler is clad in complete Hollow armor, of his own original make. Claw like gauntlets, greaves, Pointed war boots, a thick chest plate, with tiny spines going from the front of his collar bone upward over his should and ending on his back, and thick plates covering his arms. The armor flows together almost like an exoskeleton but appears worn with scars of past battles and the weathering of sand. His helmet has two small eye holes, and covers his entire face, and extends down his neck to meet his chest plate, there is no covering in the back, allowing his spine like hair to protrude as the only visable organic part of himself. This helmet acts like a mask and can be removed at will.
Affiliation: Las Noches
Number: 11
Rank: Numeros
Aspect of Death: *Espada Only
Family: The Only family of his was turned to dust a millennium ago.
Personality: Adler is straight to the point, and apathetic at most times. Adler has extreme explosive anger, but with an extraordinary fuse attached to it.
Likes: Solidarity.
Dislikes: Those who cannot wield their weapons properly.
Biography: Adler was once a Vastolordes that created beautiful weapons for the ancient armies of Hueco Mundo. The only forger among hollow kind, he helped even the odds between the Hollows and shinigami with his masterworks, cruel blades that matched the strength of zanpakuto, the closest weapon to an Asuchi that a hollow ever wielded. After grueling years of war, Adler found himself on the battlefield, carving through Shinigami lines, using his greatest works as his tools for warfare. What emotion Adler has was outraged at the destruction of his works by the hollows. They wielded the weapons in horrid manner, leading to their quick destruction at their untrained hands. As the hollows lost ground, Adler found himself trapped inside his own armory. A soon to be Captain Commander beset Adler. For hours, Adler held off his attacker using a myriad of weapons. Some cruel, some masterful, but even in the forge masters hands, they shattered against the force of his opponent. As the battle drew on, the captain cornered Adler, and sealed Adler within a crystalline coffin. There Adler, a proud Vastolordes, found himself trapped unable to help his Matron.
Almost a 1000 years later, the seal cracked, and Adler found himself in a newer hueco mundo. The Queen and her guard long since dead, and his forges barley dust, he took his first steps out into the desert, pulled by an unknown hand to Las Noches.
Zanpakuto Name: Grievance
Sealed Description: A bladeless hilt. A guard made of ivory, with the hilt lined with ebon metals. A gold design of flames runs down the sides of the hilt.
Resurreccion Status: Unachieved
Release Command: Burn all who oppose your will, Grievance.
Resurreccion Released Appearance: Adler grows 4 spiderlike appendages from his back. These complete Ivory arms end with a hard and malicious point. His hands become viscous claws, outgrowing his gauntlets and shattering them.
Resurreccion Abilities:
Infinite edge:Adler spins silk from his hands and sending tremendous reietsu through them, casting the silk out to grab and slice at his enemies.
Duo Cero: Adler uses his appendages to focus his reietsu and use Cero with both arms. While doubling the cost, this technique creates a singular destructive beam that far exceeds what his cero can accomplish on its own, leaving a trail of emerald flames to burn after impact.
Eight Eyes born in darkness razz assive: While in resurreccion, Adler grows small sensory organs that allow him to take in his surroundings though detecting reietsu. After a few moments, the overload of sensory information settles, and Adlers speed and reflexes increase because of the new perception.
Segunda Etapa Status: * Only Available to Espada 0-2
Segunda Etapa Description: *How Does The Appearance Alter Upon Release?
Segunda Etapa Abilities: * Up to 2
Bala: Has an emerald reietsu color.
Cero: Adler prefers to cast Cero with his left hand, it flickers with dark crimson, and his reietsu's emerald.
Gran Rey Cero: ** Espada Only
Hierro: Adlers hierro varies in its power, at base, its slightly above average of hierros. Adler extends his Hierro into the armor he wears, by pulsing his reietsu through it as if it were his own skin. Making his physical forms defense much more like that of a shinigami than an arrancars. While Adler can reverse this, it will leave his armor incredibly brittle and destructible, and leaving him at an overall weaker defense without his armor.
Soindo: Adler possess a very basic understanding of sonido, and can use it to move a good distance, but cannot fully control it mid combat, or use it continuously.
Abilities and Special Training:
Crystalline Curse: After being trapped within Crystal for thousands of years, many of Adler's reietsu pathways have become crystallized, dampening his power severely. As Adler draws upon his Vastolordes power, crystals grow around him, slowing him and hindering his movements. Because of this Adler can only draw half of his power out for a few minutes. If Adler were to unleash his full power in this condition, the crystal would devour him. -Adler can only store 3 weapons due to the crystalline reietsu.
The Deserts ForgeMaster: Adler has the ability to create weapons, by finding metal and bone and tempering them with his unique reietsu he can create weapons that can rival the strength of Zanpakuto.(This means in sheer hitting power and durability, these are not infinite shikais or bankais tho few will have some special attributes to them.) -Adler has tremendous skill with the weapons he creates.
Soul Armory: Adler can store the weapons he creates by turning them into reietsu and hiding them within his own body.
Weapons: Cursing:The greatest weapon Adler created. A massive Zweihander with an ebony blade and crimson marking that breath reietsu. Cursing Strike with a destructive impact, allowing it to destroy structures and defenses easier than an ordinary blade. This can only be drawn when Adler is at half power.
Artol:A Long bladed Katana. Adlers primary weapon. The blade of 6 feet, Ebony, is incredibly swift for its size. Its hilt similar build to that of his zanpakuto. Artol can create mirror images of its host and itself, allowing it to be deceptively lethal in fights. The images are slightly see through, and are only meant to distract someone for a split second.
Mourning: A spear of pure ivory bone. It has a jagged cruel tip, with many spines for gouging flesh. Mourning can be speed up based on how much reietsu Adler places within it, making it not only his only ranged weapon, but a lethal one.
Motto: A weapon must be an extension of ones self, for me that comes a bit more literally.
Quote(s):
Theme Song(s):
Trivia: Adler once created a tuning fork trident.
Other:
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