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 Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2013 10:32 am
 Name:
Satomi Keiko
Nicknames:
The Lightning Phantom
Gender:
Female
Age:
Human years-18
Actual age-58 (Entered the Soul Society via death and has been there for 40 years)
Hair Color:
Black
Eye Color:
Ice Blue
Height:
5 ft 7
Weight:
115 Lbs
Blood Type:
A+
Reiatsu Color:
Shikai-Blue
Bankai-Red
Appearance:
Long black waist length hair. Slender yet fit, with an olive skin tone and icy blue eyes. No physical markings such as scars, tattoos or birthmarks.
Affiliation:
Gotei 13
Squad:
Eleven
Rank:
Lieutenant/Vice Captain
Family:
No living relatives to her knowledge
Personality:
A quiet, timid girl who very rarely speaks even when spoken too. Slightly anti-social seen as she tries her best to avoid it when possible. Prefers to be alone and keeps to herself. Has major trust issues, and extremely reluctant to rely on anyone else. However, if you manage to be-friend her, you have found a friend to the end.
Likes:
-Tea
-Reading
-Candy/Baked Goods...Anything sweet and sugary.
-Classical and Rock music
Dislikes:
-Unnecessary violence
-Flirtatious or Arrogant men
-Coffee
-Over excessive drinkers
-Large crowds/Crowded areas.
Biography:
Satomi's parents were married..But not to each other. Their affair had lasted three years, but ended the day her father found out her mother was pregnant with her. Her mother was devastated and tried many times to rid herself of the child on the chance he might take her back. All her attempts failed however. From the day she was born it was clear to her that she wasn't wanted. She would be neglected by her mother often left locked in her room for several hours a day, only being let out for a meal and a clean then back to bed. Her mother blew all their money on alcohol and would often inflict cruel beatings upon Satomi. Due to the lack of human contact, she struggled to talk and starting school was extremely difficult. She couldn't communicate therefore she couldn't socialize and was often bullied by older children. Her life was hell, but she couldn't get help from anyone. So she ran away, or tried to, she barely made it two blocks before she was picked up by the police. Fortunately, the police didn't return her home. It was clear she was physically abused, so she was finally taken away from her monster of a mother and sent to a foster home. The family was nice, and Satomi soon warmed to them, and became a part of a loving family. But her happiness was short lived, on her eighteenth birthday she was given a car, and took it out for a ride with a couple of her friends. She got a little reckless, as most teens do, and was unfortunately involved in a horrific car accident. She was put on life support, but the doctors were doubtful she would survive. It took three days for the doctors to persuade the family into making the heart breaking decision of turning it off.
Zanpakuto Name:
Kaminari Asashin/Lightning Assassin
Sealed Description:
In sealed form it is a simple blue katana with gold trim. (See her pic)
Zanpakuto Spirit Appearance:
Kaminari Asashin
Zanpakuto Spirit Personality:
Her Zanpakuto Spirit's personality is very similar to her own. However despite how much her master may trust someone, Kaminari Asashin is loyal only to Satomi.
Inner World:
The World In Which Her Zanpakuto Spirit Resides.
Shikai Status:
Achieved. Her Zanpakuto is Lightning based, and all attacks, inflict a powerful electric shock with every successful hit, in both Bankai and Shikai.
Release Command: "Strike fast, Kaminari Asashin"
Shikai Released Appearance:
It keeps the shape size and color as in the sealed form, but it takes on a blue electrical aura. The aura looks like this
Shikai Abilities:
Lightning Flash (Passive Ability)-An ability which allows the wielder to travel at speeds similar to the sonido, as well as doubling their agility, attack speed, and reaction speed.
Lightning Shield (Passive Ability)-An electrical energy is released from the sword an can be used to surround the wielder OR one ally creating a shield, which will destroy an on coming attack with an electrical blast. (Lasts two posts)
Leech-With each successful hit the opponent suffers an electric shock which sucks out a small percentage of their spiritual energy and transfers it to the wielder which can be used to empower an ability. It can either increase the abilities effect time by 1 post, or the abilities speed.
Lethal Aura-The wielder and the weapon are surrounded by an electrical aura. It isn't capable of physically blocking attacks but anyone or anything that comes into contact with the aura suffers a powerful electric shock. The aura can grow out 12 cm from the wielder.
Bankai Status:
Achieved.
Bankai Description:
The sword changes completely in appearance from a katana to a Rapier, and the electrical aura is red instead of blue.
Bankai Abilities:
Lightning Blast-The blade gathers reiatsu from the air and converts it into an electrical energy, which is then released in a large electric blast towards the enemy.
Lightning Strike-The blade releases an electrical energy in the form of hundreds of lightning bolts which take on a shape similar to the blade. The bolts are released with every swiping motion of the sword.
Thunder Storm-A lightning storm is summoned in an area. All allies in this area gain an attack and movement speed boost. While all enemies have a chance of being shocked by a lightning bolt, and their movement speed is slowed as long as they stay in that area. The AOE (area of effect) for the thunder storm is 20 meters wide and 30 meters high. (Lasts for 5 posts, cool time is 2 posts)
Hado:
1-50
Bakudo:
1-50
Hakuda:
Current Level: Expert
Hoho:
Achieved, not yet mastered.
Abilities and Special Training:
Trained in Ninjutsu and Kung Fu. Capable of Shunpo. Has experience in gymnastics.
Motto:
"The strokes of the pen need deliberation as much as the sword needs swiftness."
Quote(s): N/A
Theme Song(s):
Main-It's Not Me, It's You
-Open Wounds
Battle-Sealed
-Shikai
-Bankai
Trivia: N/A
Other:If there is anything, I will let you know.
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 3:22 pm
1. Shikai Abilities 1 I will need you to remove the electrical blast bit when your charter stops its a bit over powered.
2. Shikai Abilities 3 Needs to have a reasonable radius for the vortex.
3. Shikai Abilities 4 It doesn't follow the element of the blade and it also seems like a Bankai ability.
I'm afraid at your charter age she would not have been able to lean Bankai just yet, however if you wish you can up your age a bit, unfortunately my self and Dalaga went over your Bankai and there is so much that needs to be fixed that he doesn't think it can be done so if you where to have Bankai you may have to start over from scratch.
Optopins
Hado and Bakudo
1-50 of each
or
1-25 of one and 1-75 of the other
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Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2013 9:05 pm
Rin Helios 1. Shikai Abilities 1 I will need you to remove the electrical blast bit when your charter stops its a bit over powered.
2. Shikai Abilities 3 Needs to have a reasonable radius for the vortex.
3. Shikai Abilities 4 It doesn't follow the element of the blade and it also seems like a Bankai ability.
I'm afraid at your charter age she would not have been able to lean Bankai just yet, however if you wish you can up your age a bit, unfortunately my self and Dalaga went over your Bankai and there is so much that needs to be fixed that he doesn't think it can be done so if you where to have Bankai you may have to start over from scratch.
Optopins
Hado and Bakudo
1-50 of each
or
1-25 of one and 1-75 of the other Ahh yes, I see what you mean. I shall fix it right away. Thank you for pointing that out. (: Edit. I was wondering, what, in your opinion is a fair radius for the vortex? Am I able to add the fourth shikai ability as a bankai ability? I will take away the other's of course. Also is 21 alright or do I need to raise it a little higher?
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:38 am
You will have to realize that spirits do not age the same way mortals do, they may grow at the same rate if born in soul society (RE: Byakuya Kuchikii) but they slow down to an almost inperceptibal level after reaching maturity (it took 1000 years for Genryusi mayamoto to actually look old from looking middle aged). On the other end of that, I notice that souls that come to soul society stay the same age they died with no change seemingly indefinantly. (RE: Toshiro Hitsugaya)
Your age would have to be quite a bit higher to have learned bankai past a rudamentary level. Which would mean base use of skills at an uncomplicated level for short spans of time, meaning the abilitys you would have in bankai at 21 for example would not nearly resemble the moveset if you practiced your bankai for 100 years after obtaining it.
As for the radius of your vortex, I would say give it a radius of 20 feet across and 30 feet high. Though that move won't serve well anyway, since by default it has to be dodgeable, meaning they have a chance to dodge it as it comes toward them, or if it is forming around them the chance to escape it.
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 12:38 pm
Okay here is what I am going to do. I will save the abilities that are acceptable. (I am assuming the abilities that haven't been mentioned are acceptable) And start the majority of the character again (This may not be needed but I am not completely satisfied with how she is/was). I will make sure to keep it one element based. All the new abilities I will add in red, if they are accepted I will remove the red color, if they are not accepted I will remove them from the profile. (Edit. Changed it from bold to red because for some reason, having the writing in bold makes no difference on my computer, and I would need to know the difference between the approved and non approved abilities)
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 9:01 pm
iMelsie Okay here is what I am going to do. I will save the abilities that are acceptable. (I am assuming the abilities that haven't been mentioned are acceptable) And start the majority of the character again (This may not be needed but I am not completely satisfied with how she is/was). I will make sure to keep it one element based. All the new abilities I will add in bold, if they are accepted I will remove the bold, if they are not accepted I will remove them from the profile. I was notified by Dalaga to tell you to change squads, he had forgotten about a recent profile that was already assigned as squad 6 vice captain. Granted that profile was somehow mistakenly accepted but none the less, it would be unfair to take that away from him when very few things needed changed.
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:08 pm
Xander Hallows iMelsie Okay here is what I am going to do. I will save the abilities that are acceptable. (I am assuming the abilities that haven't been mentioned are acceptable) And start the majority of the character again (This may not be needed but I am not completely satisfied with how she is/was). I will make sure to keep it one element based. All the new abilities I will add in bold, if they are accepted I will remove the bold, if they are not accepted I will remove them from the profile. I was notified by Dalaga to tell you to change squads, he had forgotten about a recent profile that was already assigned as squad 6 vice captain. Granted that profile was somehow mistakenly accepted but none the less, it would be unfair to take that away from him when very few things needed changed. Thank you for letting me know (:
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2013 10:15 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2013 7:40 am
Squad 5 vice captain is also taken lol. I checked around all the accepted vice captains profiles so here are the ones that aren't filled. Vice captains for squads 1, 2, 3, 4, 11 and 13 are for certain available.
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Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2013 1:02 pm
Xander Hallows Squad 5 vice captain is also taken lol. I checked around all the accepted vice captains profiles so here are the ones that aren't filled. Vice captains for squads 1, 2, 3, 4, 11 and 13 are for certain available. Oh haha, could I have 11 then please?
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Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2013 9:49 pm
iMelsie Xander Hallows Squad 5 vice captain is also taken lol. I checked around all the accepted vice captains profiles so here are the ones that aren't filled. Vice captains for squads 1, 2, 3, 4, 11 and 13 are for certain available. Oh haha, could I have 11 then please? You can pick which ever one you want, you were already accepted as a vice captain so I can't stop you from choosing 11 since its available razz
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Posted: Sat Jul 06, 2013 10:56 pm
Since no one else is here to say it
ACCEPTED
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Posted: Sun Jul 07, 2013 6:13 am
Tesei Utakata Since no one else is here to say it ACCEPTEDThank you.
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