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rate avi please o(´^`)o

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Vertigo Kaiju

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:59 pm


I suppose, use the 1-10 system if that isn't too much trouble and include a comment as to why you rated it the way you did. Rating is for my current avatar.

I don't have a lot of funds so I'm usually stuck with cheaper items and I just threw this together. I'm not very good at avi design so I just use color schemes and this happened to be well under my price range.
I'd greatly appreciate any constructive criticism and ideas.

I'll also include an image of my default avi if you think there's anything I could do with that instead. It usually has a cigarette and is holding either ramen or Alruna's Rose. I don't want to focus too much on this one but I prefer to keep it simple as I like the minimalistic look (even if it looks broke/poor)
"Default Avi": User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Thank you.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 12:42 am


7/10

Colors are nice, but it's a bit dim and dark. Also, I feel like there's a lot of excitement missing. Or not enough mystery. It's not exactly an avatar people would take a second look at.

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Vertigo Kaiju

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 12:08 pm


hmmm...that makes sense. Thank you. The background sort of hides the one item I think makes up the whole thing but without it it gets too bright and doesn't look good to me.
I didn't want to say this but I thought it started looking like a rather gaudy yakuza member so I added a sword and kept the alleyway.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 12:46 pm


I give it an 8 out of 10.
I like the overall look. The alleyway is good, and the Yakuza feel is definitely there, really more like a kitsune yakuza member from the demon world.
I would change the hair though. You need a dark red version of your hair with that mask on.You also need some black gloves. Your hands should not be showing.

Change those 2 things and you can get a 10

mamarita

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Vertigo Kaiju

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 9:23 pm


Thank you. Yeah, the gloves help but the hair is a little tricky. The red version looks too bright to me. If it were just a bit darker so the darkest parts were borderline black that would be lovely but unfortunately I don't have any power over that.
I feel red hair though might throw the head out of balance in being too red at that point though wouldn't it?
PostPosted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:01 pm


SgtSpecial
Thank you. Yeah, the gloves help but the hair is a little tricky. The red version looks too bright to me. If it were just a bit darker so the darkest parts were borderline black that would be lovely but unfortunately I don't have any power over that.
I feel red hair though might throw the head out of balance in being too red at that point though wouldn't it?
There are dark red hairs, do you have to have that exact style and have you tried the marketplace for red hair?

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paddockscrewdriver

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 6:51 pm


mask doesn't match the shades of red and for the other one there's really nothing to look at.
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