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[Q] Anelie Lutgard / Sailor Aludra, Chibi Senshi of Pathways

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Ruriska

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:32 pm


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Name: Anneliese Lutgard

Nickname: Anelie

Age: 12

Birthday: June 29

Sign: Cancer

Gemstone: Ruby

Blood Type: O+

Fav. Food: Bread

Hated Food: Marzipan

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:

Baking: It's easy to lose yourself in a world of flour, sugar and rigid measurements. Anelie loves to bake. At the moment her specialty is cookies, but she's proud to say, that with her mother's help, she even made a carrot cake. For Anelie, there’s nothing better than getting your hands dirty, the smell of baked treats in the kitchen and being able to share all your goodies once they are made.

Watching Animal Documentaries: Like a lot of kids her age, Anelie loves animals. The first store she wants to go to when she goes shopping is the 'Pet Store'. Every Christmas all she asks for from Santa is a puppy or a kitten (though to this date she only has a goldfish). To fill her cravings she spends most afternoons after school watching one of her many animal documentaries; crying where she's cried a hundred times over and cheering for the deer that is just about to escape the jaws of death. She currently owns 32 different titles and will force you to watch one of them with her when you stay over.

School Relay Team: Despite first appearances (totally girl), Anelie is surprisingly athletic and is a force to be reckoned with on the girls relay team. She enjoys the challenge and the camaraderie and also just really likes to win. While she doesn’t care to run outside of school, Sport is her favourite class.


Virtues:

Confident – If there is one things this girl is, is self-assured. She doesn’t doubt her ability to take on anything and moves through life with an innate confidence. This is an effect of her sheltered lifestyle. Anelie has never had any reason to doubt herself and so simply doesn’t. All her life, her mother has told her she can do anything, and Anelie believes it with her whole being.

Generous – Always ready to give time and energy to anyone in need, Anelie is full of generosity. She’s the first one in the playground to tear her sandwich is half because you don’t have anything to eat, she’ll meet up with you at the slightest notice if you need a shoulder to cry on and she’ll lend you her pocket money without expecting it back.

Hopeful – There is a bright future ahead. If things seem bad, they’ll get better. Anelie knows this as her truth. At the end of her path is only light and happiness. Or so she hopes. In the face of darkness, she refuses to acknowledge it and she thinks that every person is really good inside.

Flaws:

Naive – She doesn’t understand the real world. She doesn’t realise the extent of the cruelty and harm that goes on day to day. Anelie has yet to experience heartbreak. She doesn’t understand that things can go wrong and never be made right again. Because of this she often trusts where she shouldn’t. Where other kids might become suspicious over someone’s motives, she refuses. No matter how blatantly dangerous they appear to others. Her mother is quite aware of this and often repeats the warning of ‘don’t talk to strangers’. But Anelie will talk to strangers, even the ones that don’t approach her first.

Quick-tempered – She’s a charming girl but she often expects to get her own way and when things go wrong, she’s quick to anger. She’ll throw quite the tantrum until things are set right and then she’s all smiles again. Anelie gets over her anger quickly, apologizes and expects everything to be fine. She hardly realises someone’s feelings might have been really hurt.

One Track Mind – When Anelie is focused on something, she finds it difficult to shift that focus. If she has something on her mind or something she’s doing, she’ll remain focused on it. Oh, she just watched a new lion documentary last night? You’re going to hear about it, multiple times a day. The conversation might shift, but she’ll bring it up again without fail. When doing a task, she is intent upon it. She won’t allow herself to be distracted. When Anelie is chooses a path, she will walk down it and refuse to deviate from it. This makes her quite predictable and closed to new ideas.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: See artwork

Hair: See artwork

Face: See artwork

Clothes: Knightside Elementary girl's uniform at school. Outside of school she favours cute dresses, ribbons
PostPosted: Wed Jun 05, 2013 6:46 pm


Senshi: Sailor Aludra, Chibi Senshi of Pathways

Challenge: "I will lead you to the right path!"

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Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: White

Fuku:

Collar -- See artwork.
Bow -- See artwork.
Bodice -- See artwork.
Sleeves -- See artwork.
Brooch -- See artwork.
Bottoms -- See artwork.
Tiara -- See artwork.
Choker -- See artwork.
Shoes -- See artwork.
Gloves -- See artwork.
Accessories -- See artwork.

Attacks:

Sailor Scout Attack: The One Path
Aludra runs ahead, following a path that is appearing beneath her feet. You are compelled to follow her and ignore everything else. [Time limit: 10 seconds]

Super Sailor Scout Attack: The True Path
Aludra runs ahead and the compulsion to follow is stronger. It’s hard to focus on anything but what is on the pathway she has made. You glimpse trees in the corner of your eyes. A forest? [Time Limit: 15 seconds].

Eternal Sailor Attack: The Forgotten Path
Aludra runs ahead. You can only follow the path she has made, but there are wolves all around. Voices of those you are trying to forget call to you from the shadows. [Time Limit: 20 seconds]

Power Notes: Aludra's power is a mixture of compulsion and illusion. The first two levels of her power could be used just to compel her enemies to follow a certain line. They are indeed walking and following her. This could be used to lure somebody into a trap! As her powers grow, the stronger the illusion around it is. A weaker person will hear voices in the Eternal stage, voices their mind creates from unhappy memories. A strong mind, however, can easily break free. Aludra's powers are good at distraction and redirection. Aludra is also running head throughout the attacks, so smacking her down will also break the compulsion. All levels of powers work on only one enemy. In a brawl with multiple enemies and without some element of surprise, she's virtually useless.

Ruriska

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Ruriska

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 28, 2013 5:06 pm


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:02 pm


Ruriska

Hi Ruribby! Congrats on your win! <3 Let’s get her all stamped up so you can play!

ON THE CIVILIAN SIDE:

Hobbies: I’d really like to see a social hobby for her! Does she watch documentaries or bake with friends? Do her parents let her go to baking classes (probably supervised ones)? Things like that! :3

Virtues look great!

Flaws – I’d like to see a little more detail about how her “Naïve” flaw affects her on a day-to-day basis! You mention her trusting where she shouldn’t, but how else? Does she ignore signs that someone or something might be dangerous? Does she tend to get herself into bad situations because she’s not aware they might be bad? Just something else here!

ON THE POWERED SIDE:

Her powers overall look really good, but those times are way too long! Battles take place, in-character, over about five minutes barring ORPs. I’d prefer to see them measured in seconds, capped at about 30-35?

Quote me once you’ve made changes <3

Noir Songbird
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Ruriska

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:21 am


Songstress Kitsune


Awaaa, I finally had time to get on this. ;o; <3 Thankyou hun!

I added a small bit to her animal documentary hobby and added another one that's a little more social! Also added a little bit to 'naive' and fixed the attack times.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:29 pm



Alright, looks good to me! Have a trial stamp~

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 13, 2013 12:31 pm


Ruriska


She looks good to me! Just dropping in to give you a stamp and to say she is adorable and I hope you have fun playing her!

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