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Fiction1119

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:02 pm


Name: Abigail MillerUser Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

Nickname: Abby

Age: 10

Birthday: February 4

Sign: Aquarius

Gemstone: Amethyst

Blood Type: O

Fav. Food: Rice... any kind really

Hated Food: Sausage... one bad experience with Blood Sausage and she can't eat any kinda sausage now. Even hot dogs are iffy

School: Knightside Elementary

Hobbies:

Dancing - Abby loves to dance. She is learning everything from tap to ballroom, from ballet to tango, and from interpretive to tribal. Every Sunday she is in class learning something new. Her mom danced ballroom and passed the love of dance down to Abby although Abby has yet to find a particular genre that she loves more then the others. She frequently participates in recitals, competitions, and demonstrations. She doesn't need to be in the spot light she just needs to do her best.

Cooking - Abby sees it as a form of magic, being able to take raw ingredients and make them into something edible. Although she is only 10 she is an accomplished cook in the sense that she makes great cookies and cakes, her spaghetti is fantastic, and you have not likely had a grilled cheese sandwich this good before. Abby enjoys cooking and sharing the results with others. It is also a great way to spend some quality time with her dad

Bird Watching - When her mom was in the hospital Abby and her would spend hours watching the birds in the garden from the window. For Abby watching birds is a way to remember those last few months with her mom with a smile. She can be found just siting in a park watching as the birds flit from branch to branch, listening to the chirps and calls.

Virtues:

Dedicated - When Abby commits to something she sticks with it, whether its a friendship or a school project. She does not give up on it but works at it. Its like dance... it takes dedication, practice, and hard work to make something as simple as a waltz look effortless and she takes this same dedication in dance and uses it in other parts of her life. Are you working on a hard project with Abby? Don't worry she wont give up until its done right. Did you and Abby have a really big fall out? Given a few days Abby will do her best to patch it up... friendships are hard to handle sometimes but she is dedicated to keeping you as a friend. Is Abby bad at something she really wants to do? She will work at it and practice at it until she is at least not as bad as she once was. She might not be a A student but she wont put up with a F if she can help it.

Helpful - Abby is the girl you go to if you have a project and need a person who is going to pull their weight. She is always helping around the house and in the community. The little old lady down the road is struggling to weed her garden, Abby will help. That kid in the corner failed his last math test, Abby will help him study. She might not be terribly outgoing but she is more then willing to help most anyone with most anything and once she starts it she will finish it... that is a promise.

Organized - A place for everything and everything in its place. Abby nearly lives by this motto and she has no problem helping others live by it too. She can tell you where anything is in a space she organized; her homework? In the front section of the binder for that subject, those cute blue flats that you saw her wearing last week? In her closet with the other flats, next to the white ones with the bow. Because she is so organized she rarely looses things, if she does its normally because someone else put it where it doesn't belong, and things that require a timely fashion like homework is always done neatly, comprehensibly, and turned in on time. And she loves helping other's get their lives together too... let her help organize your room, your school binder, your closet.... she lives to set things right after all she has little control over things like where she lives but she, by god, will know where everything is at least.

Flaws:

Possessive - While Abby will help you by letting you borrow a pencil she does want it back and will hound you until you give it back. She will ask about it nearly constantly... 'are you done yet', ' you didn't chew on it did you', or 'how did you snap it in half'. If you borrow something of hers give it back in the same if not better condition or she will remind you about it for... the.... rest.... of..... your.... life, I kid you not. And those things that she considers only hers? She wont share... her room, her mother's necklace, her teddy bear, her father... you haven't seen a polite fit till you see Abby have one

Set In Her Ways - Abby likes doing things her way and is not happy to be told differently. Tea should always be served right after school and include light sandwiches and fruit... if it is not she goes quiet and fixes it her damn self... and wont share, don't bother asking. Cars are meant to be driven on the left side of the road but since America is backwards she refuses to ever learn to drive. Her science papers will always be turned in using metric not 'standard'... bahhh Fahrenheit. She isn't in your face about it but she will quietly go about doing it her way or wont do it at all, when it comes to things like games.

Underhandedly Bossy - Abby likes to be in charge but she isn't pushy about it... much. Delegation is a good thing and Abby is good at it. She 'suggest' things like person A doing the chopping while person B does the grating while she does the mixing, but in reality its more of a order then a suggestion, just phrased nicely. She pulls her weight but she still likes to be in charge and when she isn't she still suggests things and pushes for her suggestions to be used. She will argue for the suggestions and will sulk if they are not used... after all she is the boss of everything.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Rich, chocolate brown, almond eyes.

Hair: Black, wavy, and curly when wet. Relatively short, the longest Abby has ever had it was shoulder length.

Face: High cheekbones, pointed chin... what would likely be called a pixie face.

Clothes: Abby normally dresses very properly and nicely. Her shirts are clean and not wrinkled, her pants are not raggedy and fit properly, and her shoes will match her outfit someway, even if its just the accessories. The only thing that might not match is her mom's locket that Abby always wears and never takes off, except in the tub or the pool ^^'

-linkage to hopefully come soon-
PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:10 pm


Senshi: Sailor Ellicott, Chibi Senshi of Dance

Challenge: I will dance circles around you!

Fuku Colour: N/A Won In Contest... see next post

Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Dancing To Battle

Ellicott does a strong, driving, war dance and as her feet pound out the steps on the ground the members of order around her feel a upsurge of strength, courage, determination, and power. Only the order members in a 5 foot diameter feel the affects of her dance and the affects last only as long as the dance does or 20 seconds, which ever comes first. This can only be used three times in battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Dancing To War

Ellicott does a strong, driving, war dance and as her feet pound out the steps on the ground the members of order around her feel a practical well of strength, courage, determination, and power surge up from the ground. Only the order members in a 10 foot diameter feel the affects of her dance and the affects last only as long as the dance does or 30 seconds, which ever comes first. The affect of the dance is actually stronger then the first attack. This can only be used twice in battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Dance With Me

Ellicott does a quick spin, much like a pirouette, and when she makes a full circle her arm is flung out. A ribbon of power the same color as her skirt flies out of her hand and when it touches an opponent it adheres to them and compels them to mimic Ellicott when she begins to dance. This makes it hard for her to aim and easier for an opponent to dodge the ribbon but even if the ribbon brushes their hand it will adhere to them, it does not need to be a direct hit for the attack to take effect.

As long as she is dancing her opponent must follow along but they have the ablility to move closer or farther away as they desire, they still have to dance but if they plan it right they could in theory come right up next to her for when the attack ends. Ellicott's ribbon will break at roughly 10 foot diameter, breaking the spell. Any interference with Ellicott's dance or the ribbon will end the spell. The ribbon can be dodged and the spell only lasts 30 seconds. This attack can only be used once in battle

Fiction1119

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Fiction1119

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:34 pm


Won her on page 6 of the SOS contest V is the entry image will be added later

Hey I've Got an Idea!
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Senshi name: Ellicott
Sphere: Dance
Powers:
Sailor Dancing To Battle
Ellicott does a strong, driving, war dance and as her feet pound out the steps on the ground the members of order around her feel a upsurge of strength, courage, determination, and power. Only the order members in a 5 foot radius feel the affects of her dance and the affects last only as long as the dance does or 30 seconds, which ever comes first. This can only be used three times in battle.
Super Dancing To War
Ellicott does a strong, driving, war dance and as her feet pound out the steps on the ground the members of order around her feel a upsurge of strength, courage, determination, and power. Only the order members in a 10 foot radius feel the affects of her dance and the affects last only as long as the dance does or 20 seconds, which ever comes first. This can only be used twice in battle.
Eternal Dance With Me
Ellicott does a quick spin, much like a pirouette, and when she makes a full circle her arm is flung out. A ribbon of power the same color as her skirt flies out of her hand and when it touches an opponent it adheres to them and compels them to mimic Ellicott when she begins to dance. As long as she is dancing her opponent must follow along but they can range closer or farther away. Ellicott's ribbon will break at roughly 10 feet, breaking the spell. Any interference with Ellicott's dance or the ribbon will end the spell. The ribbon can be dodged and the spell only lasts 30 seconds. This attack can only be used once in battle
Please give us a little more information about the character:
Her name is Abigail, nicknamed Abby, and she is British. Her father moved to DC after her mother's death. Abby loves to dance, not only for the fun of it but because her mother use to dance as well. Abby is a all around dancer and hasn't found a genre she loves but her mother was a ball room dancer so she does lean a bit more towards that. She is very good in school but she has a hard time sitting still. She is sort of possessive in the sense that if you borrow something from her she will keep asking about it and wondering when you will give it back... and when her father starts dating again? Forget it all those women are trying to take away her daddy.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 5:08 pm


Meet The Family


Sanaa - Abby's mom. Deceased via aggressive terminal cancer in England. She was a Dance Teacher and danced Ballroom in local contests. She was a only child and a first generation Brit... her parents immigrated from Africa.

David - Abby's Dad. Originally from DC moved to England permanently when he met Sanaa in college. He teaches theater and writes screenplays for movies and plays... and is damn good at it. He was heart broken when his wife got sick and died. He moved back to DC to be with his family and enlist their help in raising his daughter

Maternal Grandparents - Both Deceased... immigrated to England and ran a successful B&B until they retired and sold the place. They both passed away shortly after David and Sanaa got married

Paternal Grandparents - unknown.... rich as sin and Granddad is related to Rosalie's Mom.

First Cousin Once Removed - Rosalie LaCosta. Will likely be a BIG help in raising Abby ^^

History


Ok so here is the basic family history... David went to college at Cambridge in England. There he met Sanaa, fell madly in love, married, and applied for citizenship. During this time he had heard about Rosalie's pregnancy but due to complications with His wife and life he never learned of the estrangement between Rosalie and her parents. Abby was born a few months after their first year wedding anniversary.

When Abby was 8, Sanaa was really sick and went to the doctors and was informed that she had cancer.... it was terminal. After months of chemo and radiation Sanaa succumbed to the cancer and died shortly after Abby's 9th birthday. To keep things as stable as possible David remained in England and Abby attended her private, all girls school... where she became withdrawn and overly quiet. When school was over, David announced that they would be moving back to the states to stay with his Aunt and Uncle until they could buy their own place. Abby would be attending Knightside in the fall and he had a job at the university teaching Theater... and that is where we are now ^^

Fiction1119

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Fiction1119

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 04, 2013 5:59 pm


Ok so that is everything.... there are issue, this i know so toss those questions and suggestions at me so we can get her in tip top shape ^^
PostPosted: Mon Jun 10, 2013 11:16 pm


Fiction1119


Hey Fiction, Kao here. Read over your girl. Let's see if when can get her stamped shall we.

Civilian Side:

Her hobbies look great I love them and they seems social enough. Only question I have is for dance. Does she do recitals and competitions?

Virtues:

Dedicated reads well. The flaw benefits Abby and it's easy to see how, but how does this virtue make other's like her. Just give an example or two.

Helpful looks fine to me.

Organized is reading half resourceful and half organized. Since you have organized listed as her virtue, I'm assuming this is what you want to go with that, so the bit about the pencil, maps and knowing where things are, doesn't quite flow. Here are some questions that might help. Is she the type to not loose things? Always turn her homework in on time? Can tell you where everything is in a place she organized without really having to look?

Flaws:

Possessive reads well and I can see how it would make someone dislike her or at the very least never want to borrow something, anything from her. Small thing, you say whole her's, do you mean all hers? I was slightly confused by that.

Hard Headed doesnt read like hard headed fully, so much as set in her ways or resistant to change. It sounds like she is not a child who adapts easily and it possible takes her a while to except any change, if she accepts its at all.

Self sufficient doesn't read like self sufficient, nor does it really read like a flaw. I'm having a hard time picking out the flaw from what you've written. If you wanting to go with self sufficient to make it more a flaw maybe she could be overly so. Possibly she the type to deny help even when she knows she needs it. Maybe it's a fight to get her to accept help and she's not very appreciate of the help she doesn't want? Any exceptions?

Keep in mind its a flaw and should be something a person most likely wouldn't like about her.


Powered:

Her powers for sailor and super read well to me, seem fine and decent strenght for a chibi senshi. I would suggest flip floping the time length for them though. So 20 secs for sailor, 30 seconds for super.

OR

Possibly making the effect/magic felt more strongly at super stage in addition to the larger radius.

For her eternal attack, does the spin effect her aim? I imagine it would. When you say they can range closer or farther away, do you mean they can move toward or away from Elli even while they dance .... basically she can't control where they go, just make them dance? It reads well to me and works I think, those things just need a bit of clarification.

Aim me if you need help.

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Fiction1119

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 10:26 pm


Kaori_luv

ok everything has been tweaked, and chose a different flaw ^.^' makes much more sense now. went with a stronger feeling rather then a switch of timing, however not sure if it reads as such so check that out please

oh and totally using elli as her powered nickname XD
PostPosted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 8:49 pm


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Looking good to me, here's a trail stamp dearie <3

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 9:42 am


Hey Fiction! Congratulations on the win, this character looks super cute.

This looks almost ready to go, just one small tweak required before I can officially approve it. A 20 foot diameter is a little bigger then we tend to allow for even regular senshi attacks. Perhaps something more like 7 foot radius (14 foot diameter) for her super attack?.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 9:50 am


O.O oh dear lord i meant diameter not radius >.> ill fix that now

Fiction1119

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 10:22 am


Iris_virus
Hey Fiction! Congratulations on the win, this character looks super cute.

This looks almost ready to go, just one small tweak required before I can officially approve it. A 20 foot diameter is a little bigger then we tend to allow for even regular senshi attacks. Perhaps something more like 7 foot radius (14 foot diameter) for her super attack?.


terribly sorry about that iris... i meant diameter and didn't realize i had typed radius. i have changed this so its 5, 10, and 10 diameter not radius >.>
PostPosted: Wed Jun 26, 2013 11:28 am


No worries at all, it's an easy and frequent mistake ;3

APPROVED! Can't wait to see her in action.

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