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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 8:20 am
Name: Daniel Fernando Alvarez-Garcia
Nickname: Danny, Dan
Age: 10
Birthday: September 21
Sign: Virgo
Gemstone: Sapphire
Blood Type: O+
Fav. Food: It's a toss up between Flan, Chili Rellenos, and Habaneros.
Hated Food: mushrooms, duck, and Peanut Mazapan (He finds Mazapan a bit dry)
School: Knightside Elementary
Hobbies: Cooking Daniel began cooking two years ago on New Years by helping his father prepare masa for tamales and began helping to cook since. While he's not allowed near the stove yet, he is allowed to help, usually by rolling our tortillas, mixing and seasoning tamale masa, shredding cooked beef and chicken, and similar. Cooking is a common tradition and his family will usually make cooking a family affair, though he particularly enjoys it and sometimes assembles his school lunches himself, using leftovers or by asking for help in the morning from his parents or older siblings.
Soccer Daniel enjoys soccer, and signs up for the sport team as much as possible and allowed. He enjoys playing offense on the team, and honestly has a good time playing it. He tries to watch international soccer on television, but it's often frustrating for him to find any good channels when his family is around.
Virtues:
Dependable When Daniel says he'll do something, he does it. While for a ten year old this is quite a bit, Daniel has it ingrained to try to do what he says he will or to show up when he says he will. He values keeping his word, even when it bugs him to no end-- especially when he fails. Being the second youngest in a family with three boys and a girl, he gets shuffled around a lot, and has trouble keeping up sometimes, making keeping his word extraordinarily difficult. He does, however, keep it often enough to be a dependable person, and usually people trust him when he says he'll do something.
Resourceful Daniel knows how to get things done with what's on hand. While he's still young, he's used to patching up his brother's hand me downs with things on hand and sometimes he'll fix their things too. This extends to lunch at school as well. When he doesn't have lunch money or he loses it, he often manages to come up with something. While he can't always get himself out of a pinch, he typically comes up with ideas of how to get out of things and how to get things done.
Respects Adults Daniel may have issues with peers or his siblings, but by goodness his parents drilled respect into his head from day one, and so long as he's speaking to an adult, he's polite, soft-spoken, and minds his pleases and thankyous. He dares not to be rude to an adult, and adult-like figures in any way, even when he politely declines them. It's in so deep he doesn't understand why other children may bite the hand that feeds them any. Really, what's with the other kids? That's where the flan comes from!
Flaws:
Ill Tempered Daniel is dependable, resourceful, and polite... He's also a foul-tempered little monster when things don't quite go his way, or someone gets on his nerves. He doesn't play well with others once he's picked on, and his temper can get him in trouble for fighting. He commonly stomps around, yelling in English and/or Spanish, and he'll use all manner of rude names, including his favorite, calling people a stubborn burro or donkey.
Resentful Daniel resents a lot of things. He resents being the youngest son in the family, he resents getting only hand me downs, he resents being held to his brothers... He's a brat really. If someone wrongs him, he quickly resents them for it, and where many people find it off-putting, he finds himself resenting people who scold him for it. Because of his resentment, he's often in a sour mood and doesn't really cope well when things don't go HIS way.
Disrespectful to Peers Daniel is rather nice and polite to adults. His peers, however, do not get this boon from him at all. Coupled with his temer, he's a very grouchy, rude little boy and while he can make friends, it isn't easy-- he will not hesitate to call people names if he doesn't like them, and might not be as dependable or willing to be nice. And he's a name caller with attitude. He won't ask nicely, he just demands or expects things from people, making people think he's a bit snobby.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Brown-lighter brown, round and usually surly looking.
Hair: Short, with longer hair in front. He's not trying to impress, so he's usually fluffy.
Face: A mix between heart-shaped and angular-- has average ears and he's usually in some sort of mood. He's pleasant, honest!
Clothes: Knightside Elementary.
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 8:27 am
Senshi: Sailor Chibi Massalia, Senshi of Coyotes Challenge: I'll be the last one laughing! Fuku Colour: Main Color: Won in Contest, pls see ref Secondary Color: Won in Contest, pls see ref Fuku: Chibi 3! Won in the RP contest! Collar -- Bow -- Bodice -- Sleeves -- Brooch -- Bottoms -- Tiara -- Choker -- Shoes -- Gloves -- Accessories --Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming. Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word. Please keep in mind Chibi senshi attacks are weaker then regular senshi. Sailor Scout Attack: Coyote Cry When Massalia uses this attack, he is aiming to disorient. After saying or mouthing the attack name, he looks up and howls. The howl will carry and bounce off anything, disorienting enemies, believing a coyote is coming. He will disorient an opponent for 30 seconds, although it can also disorient allies, and the attack consists of his howling once. Super Sailor Scout Attack: Call of the Trickster A Souped up version of Coyote Cry, this attack doesn't need objects to bounce off of. It instead will create an illusion of a second Coyote when Massalia howls, and after his howl echos, the illusion will howl back, like a second coyote joining another. This attack disorients enemies and nearby allies for 30 seconds, and may make weaker willed folks a little nervous. Eternal Sailor Attack: Hunt of the Coyote This attack is different from the first two; instead of howling, Massalia will instead summon a small illusory coyote that attacks anyone on the ground for minor damage, typically cuts and bruises. It may knock lighter opponents off their feet. It lasts 10 seconds as an immediate attack.
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 8:49 am
Bits not in the Form
Family, essentially.
Father: Ruben Samuel Alvarez-Garcia Jr. Daniel's father was born in Mexico City and immigrated to the United States after college, where he studied for a Culinary degree. Currently he works at a small Mexican bistro downtown. Thus far, Daniel has a good relationship with his father-- whom Daniel will insist makes the best tortillas.
Mother: Maria Frances Ramirez-Garcia Daniel's mother Maria is a second-generation Mexican-American lady. She's kind and welcoming and good at baking. She currently stays at home with her youngest child and only daughter and always has a kind word or advice for anyone coming home with her boys.
Brother: Ruben Samuel Alvarez-Garcia III Daniel does NOT like his eldest brother by any stretch. Ruben is the eldest, and works with his father... And because of Ruben, Daniel's always getting Hand-Me-Downs, in his mind. Ruben himself is rather a nice boy, age 18, but Daniel.... Thinks he's the favorite and gets a little jealous sometimes, which leads to a few creative confessions during Confession at church.
Brother: Thomas Robert Alvarez-Garcia Daniel's other brother is still not Daniel's favorite person. There's four years between them-- four LONG years -- and he's always teasing his little brother, getting into his stuff... There's a reason he goes to Hillworth. It involves his pranks and general brattiness. Daniel also really dislikes getting his hand-me-downs, because Rgomas is NEVER giving them up without a fight.
Sister Rosario Adriana Alvarez-Gonzalez Rosario is still a baby, only one year old, and Danial ADORES THIS KID. He's always happy to help take care of and play with her, and when he's out if allowed he'll happily show her off. It's his secret favorite past-time, besides soccer-- taking Rosario out in her stroller. Daniel adores tending to his sister to no end, and she's his favorite sibling.
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 3:42 pm
Hey Nova! Congrats on winning your chibi in the contest! I have a few notes before he’s ready to trail stamp, so here it goes!
First off, in his soccer hobby, I think there’s a bit of a typo? Should it read “Signs up for teams?” Because if I doesn't…then it must say something I don’t understand!
The rest of his civilian profile looks good, and I just have one small note on the powered portion of the profile!
If you could convert the attacks to a time limit rather than how many turns it lasts for, that would be very helpful. We don’t have a turn based battle system, so trying to find the parameters of the attacks would be difficult with the way you have it now!
Also for his eternal attack, since he is a chibi, what are the drawbacks to it? Would the illusory coyote attack allies? Like would it just pick a set of ankles and start chomping away, not knowing one from another? Or would it be easy to control? Since Chibi attacks normally have at least a little of drawback to them, I was just wondering what the con of this attack was.
Quote me with your changes and I’ll give him one last look over! Can’t wait to see him in action!
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 3:49 pm
I think I should have things adjusted! Also got the typo, I caught it after the fact. *Deeerp* Let me know if he needs any more adjustments! :>
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:41 pm
 It all looks good to me! A GM should be over to look at this ASAP!
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:51 pm
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Posted: Mon Jun 03, 2013 5:45 pm
Hey, Nova! This looks good to me! I think the civ side will be a lot of fun, and I love his powered side! The one thing I would like to touch on is his eternal attack; for his summons I just want to make sure the coyote doesn't ever do a lot of damage! I think the way you've got it written sounds pretty minor but because he is a chibi, his attacks shouldn't cause too much physical damage. As long as they are minor cuts or scrapes or bruises, the attack looks good to me!
Enjoy playing him!
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