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PostPosted: Wed May 29, 2013 8:12 pm


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Link to Profile: Akihiro Tsukino
How long have you been in the guild? A few days

How active are you in the guild? Haven't been around long enough to know lol

Why do you want to hold the rank of Lieutenant? So that I may have my Shikai.

Why do you think you will do well as a Lieutenant? I have been known for my good leadership, and also love being a part of Crews and such in guilds, because I can contribute my ideas and keep people in line very easily.

Your Sample: Your captain is gone and things got a little out of control when a party started after the alcohol was brought out. Suddenly there is an attack on the barracks by hollows.

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Full Name: Akihiro Tsukino
Nicknames: The Black Specter

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Akihiro looked around at all the fools of his Squad getting drunk and being idiots, sighing as he held his head in the palm of his right hand, leaning upon the table he was sitting at and looking extremely bored. 'Everyone here is lucky I don't drink, the Vice thought to himself, adjusting the Squad 6 Lieutenant armband he always wore, regardless of occasion. 'They'd all be blubbering idiots without direction if I wasn't here....' He was away from the main group, at a table in the far corner. The Captain was away on business, and that of course meant Akihiro was in charge of affairs of Squad 6. Someone had decided that it was a good idea to throw a party while the Captain was gone, and thus the alcohol flowed freely, and more than half of the Shinigami that had attended were drunk beyond capacity. It would be a fun party for any other person in Soul Society, as the Gotei 13 were notorious for throwing big and crazy parties. Unfortunately, today it would seem that the infamous parties had attracted the worst kind of attention. While Akihiro sulked, a large spiritual pressure could be felt suddenly, and out of nowhere, a tear above Seireitei appears, and countless Hollows of varying sizes and strengths began pouring out of the tear. Instantly drawing his Zanpakuto, Akihiro called out to everyone, "Any who can still wield a blade without falling, to my side!" To get such a long sentence out of the man was a rarity, so many Shinigami who weren't intoxicated instantly leaped to him, drawing their own Zanpakuto. Even some who were drunk managed a few slurred words of astonishment. So the battle commenced, with Akihiro being the only commanding officer on duty at the time and so had to lead the entire force against the invading Hollow Army. He issued commands with a voice that could be heard even over all the fighting, and with short, quick instructions, easy to follow. Soon, the entire Hollow wave was destroyed, with the Shinigami side not having lost a single man, thanks to Akihiro's leadership. The party that had been interrupted recommenced soon, and if one looked carefully, Akihiro could be seen dancing the night away, a reluctant smile upon his face. The victory was well earned.



But to protect.

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Zanpakuto Name: Inazuma (Lightning Strike)
Sealed Description: A standard Shinigami sealed Zanpakuto, resembling a katana.
Shikai Released Appearance: Double-sided Scythe
Bankai Released Appearance: Kuro Hakai Inazuma
Your Song: Requiem for a Dream Remix
Rank: Squad 6 Lieutenant
Relationship Status: Single
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PostPosted: Wed May 29, 2013 9:10 pm


Is this finished? If so I say denied, because it lack detail as in how did you defeat the hollows with a squadron of drunken men?


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PostPosted: Wed May 29, 2013 9:50 pm


I agree with the vice captain, but I will say you don't need to just explain how you got from point a to point b. Add some details of the combat really, primarily about what your own character did, with sparadic details about how your squad fought as well. The more detail you add the larger bonus you will see in the long run, more detailed posters tend to gain things faster then others due to the fact we can trust them with more power.
PostPosted: Thu May 30, 2013 10:02 am


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So it seems that I can't bullshit my way out of this one..... I'll fix it ASAP. Sorry about that.

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