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 Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:48 pm
This is an old one, I don't expect it to be wonderful, I just felt the need to post. Annabelle is my OC, Erin Carter is my friend Krystal's... ~*~*~*~*~ Day one.
Nightwing scowled. He was having a meeting with the head of S.H.I.E.L.D. And had been waiting for an hour for the man to show up. He sighed a little and waited somewhat patiently and paced back and forth in Nick's office. Hearing the door slide open he looked to it, hoping to see the tall man with the eye-patch, but was disappointed to see a small woman with strange hair and a cat's tail. Frowning deeply, he stepped forward. "Where's Fury?" He demanded, stepping up to and looming over the tiny female. She just put a hand on her hip, stuck out her jaw and poked his chest to make him step back. "He'll be here. Just wait." and turned to bring the tray of refreshments in for him. She set the tray down and poured him some koolaid, having made it herself. Handing him the glass she smiled a sunny smile and tilted her head to the side. "I bet you're hot without the mask." She stated, then slipped out of the room with a soft chuckle. He blinked a little and shook his head, smirking. This reaction was...a little often with women. He was getting used to it, ever since dating Starfire.
"Kory...wonder what she's doing...I hope she's on monitor duty like I asked her to be." He drank the koolaid, cringing at how sweet it was and muttered under his breath. "Damn woman."
Resuming pacing, he quietly planned how he was going to handle this situation. "I know Nick's going to demand we register, now that the Superhero Registration Act has passed and the civil war is long since over, but maybe I can persuade him to keep our base and identities secret from all those who don't really need to know." He nodded to himself and relaxed, sitting down and plotting the different routes he'd take to get these results. Planning always came easy to Richard, smiling and closing his eyes. The door opened again and he stood up to see Nick Fury, director of S.H.I.E.L.D.
Fury crossed his arms over his chest and scowled as usual. "Well?" He said, expecting something that Nightwing didn't deduce. He stepped closer to the young man and poked his shoulder. "Get on with it, make your pitch about me not getting you Outsiders registered."
d**k just scowled a little, himself, and shook his head. "I don't mind us being registered, I just don't want everyone and their mother knowing our identities and our base location. We can be a black ops team for you if you keep the secret. Only certain people can know." Nick rose an eyebrow at the lack of resistance and nodded. "I can make do with that." then walked out. d**k blinked at the sudden departure and smiled a little, then headed out to head back to the base.
Outside the room where the meeting occurred, Annabelle Blake just smirked a bit and leaned on the wall, watching the men head off. She stepped away from the wall and headed to her post as guard for the forensic sketch artist they have in her department. As she approached the tiny girl, she sneaked up behind her and put her hands over her eyes. "Guess who~" She chimed, grinning.
Erin Carter simply put her hands over the hands on her face and moved them, smiling. "Hello, Anna." She stood up and turned to face the slightly taller girl and smiled more, putting her hands on her hips. "I need supplies." She stated, then nodded matter-of-factly and sat down, relaxing as she knew the agent would get her some pencils and a new eraser. Off Anna trotted, heading to the supply room for the sketch artists of S.H.I.E.L.D. When she got there she just cheerfully got a new pad as well as the required pencils and eraser. As she walked back she saw Red Robin and Robin walking along behind Batman. She rose an eyebrow and moved to stand in front of Batman, getting apprehensive looks from the other two. She crossed her arms and tilted her head to the side, much like a curious cat. "Now why would you three be on this ship un-escorted?" Anna asked of them, looking mildly peeved as she stared the Batman down. The rather tall man just smirked a little and patted her head, earning him a swat and getting a glare. "We were left by our escort, so he could get to a mission involving Doctor Doom." The small woman sighed a bit and shook her head. "Ok...then I'll get you a new escort." and she dragged Batman along behind her, making the other two follow her to the room where Erin was. Handing her little friend the supplies, she smiled and nodded firmly, then patted her buddy's head and dragged the Caped Crusader off to Nick Fury's command post for a new assignment. Robin kept up easily and Red Robin wasn't far behind, both grumbling at her treatment of their father. He just let her for now, plotting punishment for if she took it too far. He could be tolerant of a young person's exuberance, as he had been with Tim and Damien. When they entered Nick's office, ignoring his secretary. "They need a new escort, Cap had a mission." She stated, and left them with Fury. As she walked away she heard him yell, "This is what Hawkeye's for, woman!" and laughed a little at his irritation. She turned her brisk walk into a skip and made her way back to her post. As she approached her friend she jumped over the back of the couch and sat down next to her tiny friend and cuddled her. Erin made a slight annoyed sound and worked her arms free, then got back to drawing in her spare time. "I love you too, I guess." she muttered, smiling and relaxing. Anna just yawned and went to sleep like that, curling up on the couch and muttering foul things to people who woke her that weren't Erin. At one point Arsenal came over and made a bad joke about the two of them and Anna punched him. He just laughed a little, as she isn't very strong and was only half-heartedly punching him, and walked off. Erin simply chuckled and patted the couch. "Come on, don't let him get you mad." Anna returned to her spot and yawned, going back to sleep. She muttered about idiots and such as she drifted off.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:48 pm
Day two.
The next day Anna headed to the cafeteria first thing, yawning and stretching as she went. Much like a cat she moved in a predatory manner when it came to food and people tended to stay out of her way, lest they get attacked. As she entered the large room, she moaned at the line and sighed heavily. Taking her place at the back, she hummed along with her music and bounced a little. Always being a morning person, which is a little unlike her cat-like nature, she smiled at anyone who caught her eye. She noted that there weren't many Supers in the room, wondering where they were. She smiled a little at the only Super near her, Green Arrow. She waved cheerfully and nodded when he waved back. He resumed eating with his friend, an agent, and got back to his conversation. As she advanced in the line, she waved and smiled and tried to keep up the appearance of being friendly. Erin had fussed at her a little about being anti-social the first time they went to the cafeteria together. She sighed inwardly and continued the cheerful greetings, earning strange looks from some people she'd ignored before. When she made it to the front, she got herself some food and splurged a little and got a desert. She smiled brightly at the cheesecake slice on her tray, setting it down at an empty table. No sooner had she sat down then she was joined by a few agents she didn't even really know. She blinked a little and stared at them all around her. "Uh...who are you people and why are you surrounding me?" She asked, feeling a little defensive. One of them laughed a little and patted her back, earning a glare. "We're your new friends!" He said, smirking a bit before starting chatting with the woman across from her. She scowled. "I HAVE friends." She stated, "and I like to eat alone."
Getting up, she started to leave only to have them get up and follow her. She made an inhuman growling sound and turned to them. "What part of alone don't you get?" She demanded, glaring up at the taller people. She set her tray down and put her hands on her hips, glaring daggers at them and sticking her jaw out stubbornly. "Go. Away. Now." She hissed, unnerved at the never-ending smiles on their faces.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:50 pm
John is my friend Jon's OC. And then the attack started.
The one in front used lasers in his eyes and the only reason she wasn't burned was she could take even the hottest flames and not be burned. She yelled and stumbled back, surprised and off-guard. Suddenly an arrow sprouted up in the robot's shoulder and ice covered the thing. Then another arrow popped up at it's head and exploded. She looked over and Hawkeye and Green Arrow were rapid-firing at the robot and his companions. All of which were attacking random scientists and agents in the room. Anna growled again and got to her feet, extending her claws a little and slashing at the still operating robot, tearing the head off and subsequently shutting it down. She charged another one of the group and tackled them down, hissing as a knife sliced her abdomen before she rolled away and dodged. She got up and stood in a battle stance, softly growling and getting more and more angry. She snapped her fingers and the man who cut her lit on fire, screaming and rolling to try and put it out. She smirked a little as it only partially worked, the idiot knocking himself out on a table before he could properly put it out. She moved her hand and the flames died down, hissing and popping as it went away. She turned and saw that Miss Marvel and Superman had gotten the others in the group, binding them with special handcuffs supplied by an agent.
As Nick came in and took control of the chaos, he started leading the agents in charge of the attackers to the interrogation rooms. Anna just grumbled and stared at the cut on her tummy, shaking her head as she headed to get it checked out in the med wing. They put a basic bandage around her abdomen and sent her on her way, making her happy. She smiled brightly as she went to find Erin or someone else she was actually friends with. She was feeling mildly worried about them after that attack and was wanting to make sure none of them had been in the cafeteria. She walked along and found Erin talking quietly with a slightly short man. Well...he was short for a man, anyway. Being used to people six foot or over, it surprised her to see someone five foot eight inches. She loomed over them as they were sitting and took a deep breath, only to have her fun spoiled by Erin smirking and looking up at her. "Damn, thought I was quiet enough." She grinned a fanged grin and nodded to the stranger. "Who's shorty?" She asked, smirking. He rose an eyebrow and smiled a friendly smile, which gave her pause. She was feeling very un-trusting at the moment. "Name's John." He said, extending a hand to shake. "Nice to meet you, miss...?" She backed away.
"I'm Annabelle." She muttered, and looked to Erin. "Why are you talking to strangers? You know that's dangerous." Crossing her arms and staring Erin down, irritated. "He's not a stranger." She smiled and said, then stood up. "I've worked with him one time when the Air Force in Eglin worked on a case with Shield." She smiled a calm smile and put her hand on Anna's arm. "Calm down. He's safe." Anna just rose an eyebrow and frowned more, shaking her head. "Alright. Just trying to take care of you." Smiling now, she shook John's hand and nodded. "Nice to meet you. Be nice to Erin or I swear to God above I'll hurt you." She smiled a fanged smile as she said that, earning a slight chuckle from the man and Erin sat back down.
Curling up in a chair close to Erin and John on the couch, she closed her eyes and drifted off to sleep. Being like a cat she sleeps quite a lot and tends to be vain about her appearance, fussing over her odd hair and nails. John was calm and friendly with her little buddy and stayed polite, taking Annabelle's threat quite seriously. As they chatted and Erin drew, John gave her stories of his time in the air force and all the different people he'd met and helped. Anna smiled at the fact that he seemed like a genuinely nice person, liking people like that to be around Erin, and opened one eye as footsteps came over to her. Looking up at Superboy, she smiled a big sisterly smile and sat up. "Yes, Conner?" She asked, looking up at the tall boy. He sighed a little, looking mildly depressed. "I can't find a gift for Cassie's birthday." He stated, shaking his head and sitting on the floor. "I don't know what she wants or needs, and she's being very secretive." Anna just sighed softly and got up. "Where is she?" She asked him, rolling her head on her neck. "I'll interrogate her gently." She smirked a bit at his reaction of shock and standing up. "I don't want you to hurt her." He muttered, which earned a laugh out of the small mutant. She patted his head, standing on tip-toes. "I'm not gonna hurt her, silly boy!"
He smiled a little, looking nervous. "She's in Banner's lab." And away She went.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:56 pm
Vittoria belongs to my beloved friend vic. Day two continued.
As she entered the lab, she smiled and pounced her cousin. Her cousin was tall, Italian and pale. She had pale skin, dark red hair and hazel eyes. She was wearing an elegant dress and some high heels. She laughed as her tiny but older cousin hugged her. Turning to hug back, she lifted and twirled the tiny cat girl around. "Hello Vic!" Anna chimed, grinning. "I need to talk to Cassie, is she here?" Vittoria Guadiello frowned a moment, pretty even when she did that, and looked to the small blond teenager and nodded to her. Annabelle detached from her cousin and smiled. "Cassie I need to know what to get ya for your birthday. Whatcha want and or need?" She asked, getting right to the point. The small blond blushed. "I need nothing but a teddy bear would be nice...Or maybe a CD?"
Nodding and turning to leave, she dragged Vic along behind her. Vic laughed as she walked with her cousin and smiled brightly. "I need to talk to Doc Banner, though!" Blinking and letting go, Anna pouted a bit. "OK Viccy." She hugged her again and gave her directions to the rec room and skipped away. Vic laughed again and waved, then headed back into the lab.
Anna made her way in and found Conner and Eli Bradley arm wrestling. Both had super strength so it could go either way, but it seemed for now that Conner had the upper hand. Breaking the wooden table and Eli's arm, Superboy won the match and the others freaked out. Erin got up and tried to sooth the stress in the boy and led him out of the room to the med wing. Shaking her head and smiling a little. "Third time this week he's broken that thing." She muttered. "Ok Cassie wants a teddy bear or a CD for her b-day, ok Conner?" Smiling brightly, she walked over and patted his head again. Conner nodded and thanked her, then headed off to be a good boyfriend. It had been a week since the had become official and he was doing his best to treat her right. Annabelle whole-heartedly approved of how he was doing and sat down, snuggling up to a throw pillow and closing her eyes. John smiled a little at the younger girl and went out of the room for some reason, only to return with a small fleece blanket and putting it over her. "Rest up, Erin's a handful." He stated cheerfully, and sat in the chair next to the couch. Soon Erin and Vittoria came in, chatting quietly about different things. Annabelle smiled a little, glad she'd introduced them to each other last week, and closed her eyes tight, taking a cat nap.
In came Nick Fury, Dum Dum Dugan and Captain America, sitting at the card table and pulling out the beer for their weekly poker game. Smiling gently, she got up and stretched like a cat then crawled off the couch over to Erin, draping herself across her and Vic's laps. Purring like a cat, she curled up and went back to her cat-nap. Erin just smiled and put little braids in Annabelle's hair as she chatted with Vic, not noticing the cut on Anna's belly. Vic DID though and frowned. "What happened, Belle?" She asked, crossing her arms. Sighing heavily and muttering under her breath, she sat up and explained the attack and her carelessness. "I wasn't fast enough to move out of his knife's way. It's nothing serious, ok? Don't worry. Either of you." She ordered them, giving them the 'you damn well better listen to me' look. They both shook their heads and sighed a little, then got back to what they'd been doing as she laid back down.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:57 pm
Later on, the three of them went to the food room. Sitting together with 'yummy' sustenance and chatting, they ate together and relaxed. Then Anna noticed it; there were more Supers in the room than usual and they all looked tense. "Don't look now, but I think there's some sort of thing going on. Let's get you two to safety." Vic just rose an eyebrow and started probing minds to see what was up.
"Oh, darling, don't worry so much. They're just still tense from the previous attack." Erin put her hand on Anna's arm, gently patting it and smiling up at her. Annabelle took a deep breath and let it out slowly.
"I guess I am, too..." She smiled nervously to them and nodded. "I'll be ok, we all will." Resuming what they were doing, the trio of trouble makers went to the special gym. Inside was a lot of shirtless men crowded together around a boxing slash wrestling ring. Inside it stood Luke Cage and the Ever Loving Thing. Erin rose an eyebrow as to why Anna would bring them here and asked Anna as much. Anna just smirked evilly and led them to sit by the Silver Surfer and Superman. She poked Superman and smiled sweetly at him. "Will you help us? We wanna go shopping." Vic's eyes lit up at the mention of shopping and she looked excited to go. Clark just chuckled a little and nodded, getting up and leading the girls to Nick and the others in the rec room. Nick sighed in an annoyed manner and gave them permission to go to New York City below them and gave them his credit card.
"There's a limit on that, don't splurge. I mean it." He warned them, then shooed them away.
Getting in a transport, the three girls chattered hyperly and smiled big time. As they landed at the pad on the NYC base, they got ready and headed to the shopping district. Inside Vic's favorite store was Janet Van Dyne and Hank Pym. Hugging Erin and Vic, Janet frowned. "Who's this, girls?" She asked them, tilting her head to the side. Erin and Vic said in unison, "This is Annabelle~" and hugged their beloved kitty. "Anna's my cousin, older than me by one year." Vic smiled and said, then stepped away. Anna just smiled at the slightly taller woman and nodded to her companion. "I'm also known as Fire-cat. I know you're Wasp and Ant-man. Wanna shop with us, miss Van Dyne?"
Janet grinned. "Sure!" She said, shaking hands with Anna and looking to Hank. "I'll be with them, ok?" Nodding and heading off, the man left the quartet of women to shop in peace, not wanting to be made to carry things.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 12:59 pm
Day two and three.
After shopping all day, the girls said goodbye to the Wasp and returned to the Helicarrier with bags of clothes. Each went to their rooms and got changed into something nice. Annabelle put on a lovely blue dress that fades from deep blue at the top to lighter blue, light blue then white at the bottom hem. It went to above her knees and was incredibly silky and soft. She put on blue ballet slippers with straps that went up her legs she put on blue wrist bands and a blue necklace and feather earrings.
Erin put on a pair of dark blue skinny jeans and a blue hoodie. She put on her red Vans and put the hood up, stretching her wings.
Vittoria put on a lovely dress. It was short skirted, red and velvety soft. There were sparkles on it and she wore strapped red heels with it, putting on gold bangles and gold dangling earrings. She smirked a little as she walked to the special dance area on the Helicarrier for the party, meeting with Erin and Anna as she got there. Anna chuckled a little at the sight of her friend and cousin, shaking her head at their choices and smiling brightly. She nodded as they went in and partied all night.
The next day Annabelle got breakfast with her friend, Hawkeye, and cheerfully chatted with the man as they ate. Soon enough she was sent on a mission with the Avengers, acting as the Shield escort to do diplomatic things in Atlantis. As she walked along and kept up with Black Widow and Thor, she looked around and noted things about the facility. Smiling a calm smile, she inwardly freaked out about being near water. Both her fire element and cat-like nature made her adverse to water. Shaking herself a little, she continued on til they got into the water itself. She shook violently at first, getting used to the freezing temperature and warming up slowly. Swimming along and being escorted by Atlantians, they made their way to the undersea palace. When they arrived, Annabelle stood strong and confident in the presence of the Kings of Atlantis, Arthur Curry and Namor. Holding out a treaty to the men, she smiled a relaxed smile and watched them read it. Soon they signed it and handed it back to her. "Thank you, Your Highnesses." She bowed and turned to leave, wanting to get away from all this water. Cap just chuckled a little and patted her head, earning a dangerous hiss and growl. He smirked a bit at the anger and walked out alongside her.
Finally reaching the Helicarrier after such a stressful mission, Annabelle went straight for Nick's command post and handed him the treaty, letting him handle things from there and going to find Erin or Vic. As she entered the first rec room, she smiled and nodded to John and Erin. Vic was in the room as well, at the bar and sipping a chocolate milkshake. She grinned a bit as she noticed that Spider man was in the room as well, playing video games with Robin. She nodded to herself and curled up in the corner, behind the couch and in the sunlight. She just closed her eyes and went to sleep, exhausted from the stress of her latest mission. Erin came over and poked her friend. "What's wrong?" She asked, concerned.
"Oh, it's nothing sweetie. Just had a bothersome time on my last mission. I hate water and had to go to Atlantis. Namor's pretty hot, for an older guy...." She muttered that last part and Erin laughed, shaking her head. "That's my girl." She said, then returned to chatting with John.
As Annabelle drifted off, Erin and John continued talking about the air force and what it's like. In came Cap and Iron Man, both in a cheerful mood. Cap heard the stories and smiled so happily. He walked over and patted the younger man's back.
"Well, well, well!" He said, grinning. "Another military man, eh? Good for you, son!" He sat at the bar next to Vittoria, getting a small whiskey. Iron Man sat on the other side of her and smirked a bit, though she couldn't see it. He opened his mask and sipped a bit of wine, trying to seem cool. He was a tad bit older than her, but flirted none-the-less, and was cheerful with such a pretty young lady. He gave her one of his charming smiles and said, "So, come here often?" This earned a laugh and she raised her glass.
"Often as I can, my cousin lives here on the Carrier. She's taking a nap on the floor now, but she'll prolly bug you later." Tony Stark smiled a little, glancing at the tiny young lady on the floor. "Seems a shame to leave her there, but she'd kick my a** if I moved her." He said to his companion, shaking his head and sipping his wine.
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Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 6:06 pm
You said this was old so I'm not going to give you too much of a critique.
I like how you've kept original characters the way they've always been known and loved. Some fanfiction writers can't manage this.
Notes:
-Watch your sentences. You have incomplete sentences everywhere.
-Use proper punctuation
-Don't center format
-Break portions into proper paragraphs
-Don't describe things that don't really need describing. Example: I don't need to know EXACTLY what someone is wearing. Their shoes and what not are irrelevant.
Happy writing!
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2013 7:47 am
Thanks much! I'll try to remember those tips next time I'm writing!
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