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 Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 4:59 pm
What Do You Look Like: 
What Were You Known As: Sephir Chimaera
Do You Have Another Name: The Black Chimaera
How Old Are You: 19
What Are You: Chimera
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What Is The Color Of Your Eyes: Black
How Tall Are You: 5’8
How Much Do You Weigh: 170
What Is Your Job: Mercenary
Where Did You Live: The Deserted Isle
Do You Have Any Family: Mother- Chimera Deceased. Father- Unknown, Brother-deceased, Sister-deceased, Grandmother-Whereabouts unknown, Grandfather-Whereabouts unknown, Grandparents on father’s side-Unknown.
Do You Have Any Pets: None
What Are Your Favorite Things: Snakes, Lions, and Goats. Swordsmanship, Darkness, Loneliness, Poison and fire.
What Are Your Least Favorite Things: Those who abuse their power. Light. Everyone who opposes him.
What Type of Weapon(s) Do You Use: Longsword.
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What Do You Like: Heterosexual
What Of Your Past: Sephir, the son of Chimera and an unknown father suffers from an unusual condition. Since he was born, whenever he assumes human form he becomes deaf, blind, and mute. However, because of this he has inherited a sixth sense. This sixth sense, he calls it the Instinct. Even without seeing, Hearing, or speaking he can instantly feel everything around him. Sephir never knew where he was born. He has often felt he was a creation of sorts. His Mother often taught him useful hits on how to control his powers. Who also taught him how to shapeshift into a human for future purpose. Normal Chimeras and Chimera Knights must discover his abilities on his own. Sephir being very young has not perfectly mastered all of his abilities. He then left his home in search of something he lost, something very dark. He wished to find his sense of nobility. He is often full of bloodlust.Sephir then traveled the world. Once he realized he killed his mentor, he was stricken with grief. He tries his best to not succumb to this power, but it tends to go very badly. One day he will conquer his bloodlust. When that day comes, his mother told him that his true powers will be unlocked "Happiness". After a few years of traveling, he returned back to his mother to find out that she had died. He no longer wishes to grieve and destroyed that emotion. He can no longer feel sadness, happiness, or any other type of emotions.
What Are You Able To Do: He can morph his body into the parts of a Chimera. IE: Snake Tail, Lion Head, and Goat Horns. His tail of snake has poisonous fangs. This poison is not some run of the mill poison, it can be very deadly. He can breathe fire at will, as given to him by his Goat head. Sephir can jump very high. He has powerful horns given by the goat. He has sharp claws given by the Lion.
What Is Your Song: None
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Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 8:33 pm
Can you turn into a Chimera. Or do you gain certain body parts of a Chimera. Also if your basing your abilities on Chimera's Their main head is a dragon head. Just throwing that out there.
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Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 4:07 am
godofwar1337 Can you turn into a Chimera. Or do you gain certain body parts of a Chimera. Also if your basing your abilities on Chimera's Their main head is a dragon head. Just throwing that out there.
I'm actually a Chimera desguised as a human. And Greek Mythology states that a Chimera is represented as a Lion, Goat, Snakes.The Lion would be the main head.
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Just thought I'd share some research. I'm a writer and wanted to get the details of a Chimera right. biggrin
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Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 9:22 am
Just explain how your able to shapeshift into a human. And these 'true powers'. Also I am curious to why he would enter a form where he loses 2 senses and can't talk. Your sixth sense sounds like a sonar or something.
I would also would like to mention that when using real sources, that your going to have funny results. Like how Chimera can't actually give other offspring because their was only one of its kind. Their father being Typhon and Echidna. The Father and Mother of All monsters.
However that would take most of your character and scrap it into oblivion. So taking real world sources and sending them to the 9 hells. Were going to just look at our universe. If that is ok.
Assuming that your character is who he is. I find that it would be unlikely for him to have any mentors. Considering the bloodlust of Chimera was unimaginable. Again throwing out greek myth... I would imagine that they would be relatively solitary creatures. So you probably don't care to much about family. On that note he probably won't have to many mentors either. Though the past is the past. So lets keep going.
Your Mentor was a Psion... I would have loved that you delved into Psionics for me. Though you didn't and that is kind of a bugger. Though let's get to the point. A Psion is a character capable of Psionics. If your not a Psion, then you are not capable of Psionics. You cannot 'learn' Psionics. Just as much as you can't learn 'Sorcery'. It isn't something you can teach, your born with it. Now if you do in fact have Psionics, he would be over powered. (Though would explain his sixth sense if that is what he was getting at.) You also bring up another problem later on that conflicts with Psionics and being a character in general...
You later point out that you have no emotions. You destroyed them from your body. Meaning your character can't feel them. This conflicts with Psionics because telepathy is the ability to transmit your thought and emotion to other people. Not only that, but as a character without emotion. You essentially become a monster... Why RP when all your going to do is kill people for food? Not a huge one. So you might want to fix that one up a bit.
I would love to see this character advance in our story. However as he is. You'd be pretty much running around a fighting people. We already have enough people that do that. (Not like I am helping...)
Stick with the chimera bit. Just find away around the whole emotion bit. (As a solitary creature... I doubt you'd feel to much of a loss for your mother and father. Maybe that is an easy out for that.)
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Though on a good note. I appreciate that you located you put your sources. I hate doing this to you, but to many people have slipped by with OP characters. sorry.
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Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 3:34 pm
Okay, I actually appreciate you giving me this input. It'll help me to make the character more believable. He is a test dummy, if it were. I will be using him in a story I am writing. This way I am given more of a challenge. I only used real world sources for the depictions. I knew that this was a different world so I knew that Typhon and Echnida would be thrown out xD
His mother taught him to shapeshift. She was an idealist and was always prepared for the future. The 'True Powers' She talked about, wasn't some strange power or something like it. It was simply Happiness. His mother had lived long enough to control her lust for powerful. She compared the two and decided Happiness was the better way to go.
I deleted the Psion Mentor part. He never cared about finding his father or that side of his family. He only slightly cared for his mother, even if someone is solitary there is always at least one person that the solitude opens up to. That would be his mother. I gave him Psionics to help him deal with lost of speech. I made him have blood lust and no emotions not to make him into a killing monster. I made him this way so that he can figure a way to become a creature who can live side by side with others. This is the main plot of his life if I were. Even though he craves the lust of blood, it will not make him running around killing people. This will show him trying to convince himself out of it. Showing that he has two sides of him and is a complex creature. Eventually, I figure that he will be able to no longer have blood lust. I feel in most rps, people make their characters everything they want. They have no idea of the future. Nothing to look forward to. They try to make an overpowered character. As of last year, I try not to make an overpower character. I make a character that will show a good result in adding to a plot, showing a character that sometimes people can relate to (in this case, probably mentally insane) This is my first character ever like this and I want to try to get the details right. I want to see how he would fit in a world like this.
And if you do think this is overpowered, I can scrap the character. I have many others that are buzzing around in my head.
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Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 3:41 pm
I would like to see what else you come up with to be honest.
To be honest I didn't think he would have Psionics just to make up his inability to talk. If he does have other Psionics, I would love to see them.
Thanks for showing your thought process. I can see what your doing clearly now. With all of that answered. I can easily say...
Approved and ready to go
Also I'd like to say good luck with your ambitions.
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